Sindoor-YDTMH-Part 38!! (page 40)

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hydrogurl001

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Posted: 19 years ago

Hey! I decided to start my first fan-fic on Sinndoor. Its my first so i'm sure it won't be too good but here it goes.

Sinndoor Fan-Fic (YDTMH)

Characters:

Raizada Family

Dhruv- youngest, in touch with today's generation, a guy who loves to be with friends but also loyal to family

Rudra- one of the oldest, is loyal to everyone, loves having fun and being with the ones he loves

Antariksh- one of the oldest, loves partying, not as loyal as other 2 brothers

Khanna Family

Uma- Mother of Vedika & Niharika

Vedika- simple, loves hanging out with friends

Niharika- loyal, talkative, loves to be with others

Others
Suraj- cool-guy in college, a friend of the "crowd"
Alisha- girl at college who secretly loves Suraj

well, i just started out with the characters for now. ill post the first part soon.😉

Edited by zhasan2 - 18 years ago

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hydrogurl001

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Posted: 19 years ago

Thanks for your posts. heres the first part

Part 1
Scene opens with Vedika and Niharika shown at college. They're having fun talking with a group of friends when Suraj pops up.

Suraj: "Hey Girls! What's up? Tho thum loggo ku hairani hoygi ki mai, popular, one and only, Suraj Malhotra thumse baath karra hui. Laikin kya karu, majbur hui."

He has a big smile while he says it.
Vedika: "Ha ha. Very funny Suraj. Tho bolo, famous Suraj yaapar kyu ayaa?"
Suraj: "Well, you know, tomorrow's the dance and all, so just wondering, if any of you would…well….like to come…I mean, I do have a line waiting but just asking.
They all start laughing.
Niharika: "So, you don't have a date yet? Lagtha hai ki thumai yaasai koi nai milayga. "

Just then, Alisha walks up behind them and asks what they all are laughing about. They're like, "Arey Tara! Thum kal kai dance ko free ho kya? Humara cool-dude ko abthak aik date nai milla."
Alisha smiles as they say this. Suraj asks her to come to the dance with him (he's not very happy as he wanted Vedika to come to the dance with him but he goes with it since he doesn't have anyone else.)

They all go walk home after that. As they go across the street Niharika sees a sari shop.
Niharika: "Vedika! Mai thumai kar par milthi hui. I want to go to those shops."
Vedika says fine but to come home soon. She leaves home and Niharika goes into the store.
She finds a bunch of sari's and chooses to buy a green one. She pays for it and leaves the store. The street is VERY busy. When she crosses, a car comes up full speed ahead and crashes into Niharika. She falls down onto the street right there. The man in the car, in fear, leaves from there in a hurry.
Niharika is still lying there when a white car suddenly pulls up near her. The man in it gets out and its none other than Rudra!

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Kritika

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Posted: 19 years ago

OMG, AWESOME!! Im SURE URE FF GONNA BE FANTASTIC!!! CANT WAIT FOR THE NEXT PART!!! 👏 👏 👏

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Meera

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Posted: 19 years ago

YAY!!! U started a ff!!!! The 1st part was really really good......continue asap!!!!!

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hydrogurl001

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Posted: 19 years ago

PART 2

Rudra gets out of his car quickly. Then he goes to see what happened to Niharika.
Rudra: "Oh my gosh. Lagta hai aik accident hoygai. Koi is ladki ku hospital nai laigaiya."

So then he takes Niharika in his arms and puts her in his car. 😳He drives to the hospital very quickly.

UMA'S HOUSE

Vedika's thinking why Niharika hasn't come yet. She tries her cell but its not working. She is really worried.

HOSPITAL

Rudra brings Niharika into the hospital. He does all the papers and Niharika is taken into the emergency room. He waits there thinking what to do about the girl and who her family members are. The doctor comes out and tells him that Niharika is in critical condition and she will need an operation.

Uma's House

Vedika is really getting worried now. She decides to file Niharika as missing in the police. The police tell her that a man called earlier stating an accident near the store. He tells her the hospital and room number. Just them Uma comes and asks Vedika what the problem is. Vedika doesn't want to worry her mom so she makes an excuse and leaves.

Hospital

Rudra is still sitting there waiting for the operation to be done and see how Niharika is. The doctor comes out and says the operation was successful and that he can see her now. Rudra goes in carefully as he does not know who Niharika is & doesn't know what to tell her. Niharika sees him.

Niharika: "Doctor nai bathaaya ki thum mujhe yaa lai. Thank you very much. Agar thum nai hothai, tho phir mai aaj zinda nai hothi."

Rudra: "Nai. Aisi koi baath nai hai. Mai tho sirf vaasai guzaraa tha aur thumai daikha. Anyway, I don't know your family. And so I couldn't tell them about you. So can I have their number to tell them?"

As he says that, Vedika walks in and starts going toward Rudra.

She starts yelling at him (thinking that he caused the accident.)

He just stands there watching and trying to say stuff but Vedika's not giving him a chance.

Hope it was okay. And for all those Dhruv-Vedika fans: I know im doing too much on Rudra and Niharika, but Im just building up for Dhruv & Vedika to meet. So please don't think that ill just be doing it on Rudra-Niharika😛

Edited by zhasan2 - 19 years ago

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Meera

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Posted: 19 years ago

AWWWW don't worry...I'm sure most DhruVed fans like me are also Rudra Niks fans.... 😃 So we'll be happy with anything u write!!!! But con't soon!!!

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Kritika

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Posted: 19 years ago

FANTASTIC HUN 👏 !!! No worries..its just as much fun to read RudraNih scenes as it is to read DhruVed scenes!! 😛 CONT SOON!! 😊

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hydrogurl001

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Posted: 19 years ago

PART 3

Vedika's still yelling at Rudra and Niharika's trying to get Vedika to stop. But she wont. Finally Niharika gets her to calm down and tells her that Rudra was the one who saved her. She tell her the whole story.

Vedika's feeling guilty and apologizes to Rudra. He says its okay and that she was just worried for her sister.
Vedika turns to Niharika and says: "Aur thum Niharika, thum tho apni khayaal ich nai rakthi ho. Agar mama ku patha laga ki thumari accident hui… (she just leaves it end there.) Now that you're alright, I guess we can tell mom once your discharged. Niharika says OK.

Niharika again says Thanks to Rudra for saving her and Rudra smiles saying its no big deal. Vedika also thanks him.

Rudra leaves and Vedika stays talking to Niharika. She asks her if she know who the person was who hurt her and Niharika says no. Just then the police appear and tell her that they will try to find the man who hurt her. They ask her if she has any clues who it is. And Niharika again says No, she wasn't paying any attention to who was there. The police leave.

A few days later

Niharika is discharged and shes feeling better. Uma now knows about the accident and was really worried but is now over it. She's being a little TOO over-protective, though. Niharika says she wants to go take a walk in the park. Uma says fine but to make sure to keep her cell on at ALL times because shell be calling

(wonder how many times.😕) She tells her not to talk to strangers (& not to go to the candy & toy store🤔.) Niharika's like OK, fine, whatever. She FINALLY leaves and goes to the park. While she's walking she bumps into Rudra.

Rudra: "Hey! Ran into you again, but this time its no car, and no hospital needed."

Niharika: "Arre, aap? Sorry, mai phirse thumari raastai mai aagai.

Rudra: "No. don't worry, its no problem. So, what're u doing here anyway?

Niharika: Just taking a walk.

So they start talking and having fun at it when Uma calls & tells Niharika to come home soon. So Niharika puts down the phone and tells Rudra that she has to go, but she'd like for him to come also, to meet her mom. She says her mom would also like to thank him.

Rudra: "NO, its OK. I don't need a thanks.

Niharika: "Fine. If not a thanks, you can atleast come for dinner. PLEASE…or else ill go in the middle of the road and get hit by a car again.

Rudra says Fine, alright. But ill need to call my brother to cancel my plans with him.

Niharika says no! u don't need to do that. Bring him along with you. Itll be fun. Just come to my house at 7. She gives him her address and leaves. He smiles and also leaves.

Hope it was okay.

Edited by zhasan2 - 19 years ago