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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow very nice update loved it waiting for the next one
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Posted: 13 years ago
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beautiful part,update next part soon,will be waiting,even if NO MORE CB i will alwys visit this page n be reading u ff.thanks
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Part 10

Shastriji : Damaad babu aap iss samay par ghar par sab teek hain asks Dev with tense look

Dev : Jee Babuji ghar par sab teek hain kya main andar aakar baat kar saktha hoon

Shastriji : Jee Damad Babu Radhika beta Dev babu ko andar aane do aur uske liye paani lekar aao Radhika goes to get water Dev enters in to home looks at Radhika while she looks back at him Shastriji and Dev both settle down in Sofa and they both are busy in talks Vrinda comes running in hurry to talk with Shastriji

Vrinda: Jee suniye achanak Ammaji ki tabiyat karaab ho gayi hain who kuch bol nahi hain aur uski poora shareer Pasine se bara hua hai mujhe toh bahut Darr lag rahi hai Radhika holding some snacks for Dev comes out of kitchen hearing their Convo she leaves the Plate and rushes to see Ammaji, Radhika totally in tears and she is trying to call Doctor, Shastriji and Dev goes to see Ammaji they are shocked to see her like that Dev goes near Radhika keeps his hand on her shoulder and says

Dev: Babuji mein Ghaadi lekar aatha hoon aap Ammaji ko lekar aao humein ammaji ko Hospital le chalthe hain Radhika keep calling doctor saying he leaves to get Car

After some time they reach Hospital, Ammaji is in ICU Shastriji, Vrinda, Radhika and Dev are Outside Radhika goes near the Kanha Idol and starts Praying Silently she is in tears, Dev follows Radhika and Puts his hand to Console her Radhika Hugs him and says

Radhika : Amma Teek ho jayigi naa aisa pehle kabhi nahi hua tha she's so strong and healthy achanak aise kaise Radhika totally Broke down she clutching Dev's Shirts Dev feels Radhika tears on his chest he tightens his hand to give her more safe and says

Dev : Radhika Please control urself agar tum itni kamjoor ho jaogi toh babuji aur Maa ko kaun Sambhalega Ammaji ko Kuch nahi hoga woh haste haste wapas aayegi Please Don't Cry he kisses her on her fore head Shastriji and Vrinda seeing all this from far away and feels to be proud having Dev as their Son in law. Doctor Comes out from ICU and asks for Dev, Dev and Radhika Overhears Doctor Calling they both realize in what position they are Radhika weeping her tears goes back from Dev's arms Dev shows his had towards the way to meet Doctor they both Rush to meet Doctor

Doctor : Mr. Purohit Don't worry Now she fine

Radhika says thanks to Kanha by doing namaste and asks : Lekin Doctor kya hua tha ammaji ko aise pehle kabhi nahi hua tha

Doctor : Ghabrane wali koi baat nahin BP, Sugar levels down hua tha isiliye aise hua nothing to worry ab woh bilkul theek hain aap unhe kal ghar le jaasakthe

Dev : Thank you Doctor Thank you so much Doctor leaves saying Thanks

Shastriji, Vrinda, Radhika and Dev all sees ammaji through glass door and all says thanks to Kanha

Its early morning nearly 05.30 Dev offers some tea to shastriji and Vrinda and says

Dev : Babuji aap chai lijiye mein ghar par baat kiya Dadima aur baaki sab log pahuchthehonge Shastriji pleased with Dev's behaviour he's happy for Radhika Vrinda goes near Radhika and offers tea saying

Vrinda : Betiya lo tum bhi chai peelo Raat bar soya nahi hai thu Dev looking at Radhika sadly Radhika rejects tea

Radhika : Nahi maa mujhe nahi chahiye mein theek hoon Radhika notices Dev looking at her

Dev: Maa aap chai lijiye main aur Radhika ghar jaakar fresh ho kar aajayenge baad mein hum sab saath mein ammaji ko lekar ghar chalenge Shastriji just smiles and nods his head Radhika thinking in her mind " Isi bahane mujhe unse akele mein baath karne ke mouka bhi milega dhanyawad kanha "

Radhika and Dev starts leaving the Place they going through the corridor both are very silent Dev looks at Radhika once and Radhika looks at Dev once atlast Dev slowly hesitatingly touches her fingers Radhika jerks and looks at Dev,Both stare in to each other eyes Dev looking in to Radhika eyes slowly takes her palm in to his they are still walking atlast they are out of the hospital walking lonely in the streets they leaved the car at Hospital , Radhika suddenly remembers the words Dev said with her in their First night while he leaving the home that he don't know her name and stops walking and runs from there crying Dev calls her name shouting Dev follows her , Radhika reaches home , Following her Dev also comes to shastri house Dev bangs at the door and asks Radhika to open the door

Dev : Radhika please open the door I want to talk to you Please Radhika for god sake Dev kneels down crying after while Radhika didn't hear Dev's voice Radhika become suspicious and opens door there Dev sits lifeless Radhika goes near him concerndly puts her hand over his face she is in tears she cleaning his face with her Saree pallu Dev holds her hand and asks

Dev : Radhika please meri baat suno just once give me one chance to explain please Radhika leaves silently to the garden which is back side to their house Dev follows her Radhika stands near a tree she is in tears Dev swallows lump in his throat and says

Dev : Radhika please don't cry tumhari aason mujhe chupthi hain radhika please meri baat suno Radhika interuupts saying

Radhika : Mujhe aapse kuch nahi jaanan bus itna kahiye ki agar aap mujhse nafrat karthe hain, meri naam sunna nahi haina aapko toh phir aap mujhse shaadi kyun ki she's leaving the place crying uncontrollably

Dev can't tolerate her crying he shouts : Radhika mujhe nahi patha ki meri shaadi tumse ho rahi hain Radhika stops walking hearing what dev said dev notices that Radhika stopped Dev goes near Radhika holds her shoulder and asks

Dev: Radhika meri taraf dekho Radhika meri aankhon mein Dekhe kaho ki mein tumse nafrat kartha hoon tumhari naam nahi pasand hain dekho radhika dekho meri aankhen kisse doondhthe hain har waqt radhika slowly lifts her head looks at dev whose eyes are filled with tears

Radhika hesitatingly says: aap ke bina mein itni saal kaise bitayi ye mein hi jaanthi hoon dev puts his finger on her lips and weeps the tears rolling from her cheeks with his finger and says

Dev : Radhika jo hua so hua aaj mein jo kuch bhi kehne jaa raha hoon tum woh suno agar mein meri zindagi mein kisise pyaar kiya hain woh tum , Tum hi pehla pyaar aur akhri bhi mein iss pyaar ko kisi aur ke saath nahi baant saktha Saying he hugs her " I Love you I Love you so much radhika" Radhika slowly puts her arms over him and hugs him return saying

Radhika : " Iam Sorry mein aap ko bahut pareshaan kiya Iam Very sorry " they stand there interwined for long time Dev thinks to do some sharaarat and says

Dev : Radhika ab toh keh do Radhika slowly opens her eyes and looks at Dev and turns back she tries to escape from his hold but Dev holds her hand tightly and pulls her towards him Radhika back facing to Dev's body, Radhika shyly struggling to free herself from his arms Dev enjoying teasing her Dev slowly nears to her ears and says

Dev: Keh do Radhika mujhe sunna hai Radhika shyly replies

Radhika : Kya.. Kya.. She swallows lump in her throat and says Mujhe kya kehna hai aur aap ko kya sunna hain Dev surprised hereing those teasing words from Radhika mouth, Radhika slowly nears her hand towards his Waist and starts chuckling Dev suddenly looses Radhika from his hold Radhika runs from there laughingly Dev stands there looking at Radhika Dev runs his fingers through his hair

Precap : Dev asking for a kiss from Radhika

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Posted: 13 years ago
#64
Wow! Lovely update. Loved Dev teasing Radhika & she teasing him back. waiting for the next part.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#65
nice part loved radev teasing each other
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Posted: 13 years ago
#66
thanks for the update...very nice...now the misunderstanding is cleared...waiting for next
Edited by chymanju7 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#67
sweet and loving update ...waiting for the next...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Part 11

Dev looking around the whole shastriji's house one by one room,Radhika in her room, she changing in to saree after her bath,Dev casually opens the door without knowing radhika in the room Radhika surprise seeing Dev She looses her saree Pallu actually she's not wrapped saree properly Dev just adoring her beauty Radhika just wearing her blouse and Petty coat, Radhika looks her state how she stand before Dev she takes her hands over her shoulder Dev slowly forwarding towards Radhika looking in to her eyes, Radhika slowly taking back steps atlast she bumps to the wall , Radhika swallowed lump in her throat and says
Radhika : Woh, mein.. Saree pehni hain Dev enjoying teasing her he still moving towards her, Jee ye aap kya kar rahe hain mujhe saree pehni hai Dev takes the Saree from the ground and starts folding looking in to Radhika eyes, distance between them slowly decreasing Radhika just closed her eyes and bangs her head towards wall, Dev finished saree foldings and fix them Radhika tummy, Radhika jerks at once she's mesmerized by Dev's touch, Dev noticed radhika expressions he's started playing with his fingers on Radhika's tummy he slowly moving his hand over her waist side, Dev slowly moving towards her lips,he's looking althrough her body shamelessly, he stops at her lips a little distance between eachother lips Radhika breathing unevenly,her heart beat rising she feeling butterflies on her tummy,Dev notices Radhika intentions and how she feeling he moves back and clutches Radhika towards himself holding Radhika from her Waist he slowly bents towards Radhika ears and says
Dev : Radhika open your eyes, Radhika aankhein kholo please look in to my eyes Radhika slowly opens her eyes and looks in to Dev's eyes then Dev says I Love you in a husky Voice, Radhika eyes shimmers in tears in happy she feels shy and bents her head down she wants to move back but Dev again holds her tightly towards himself, Radhika questions him with her eyes Dev just nods his head and says
Dev : Ab tum batao na Radhika Please mein taras gaya hoon ki tumhari mooh se ye sunne ke liye Please Jab tak tum nahi kahogi mein tumhe nahi chodunga hum aise hi khade rahenge
Radhika hesitatingly asks : Please chodiya na phir kabhi kehdoongi abhi humein jaana hain please Dev just nods his head saying no Radhika pleads him with her eyes Dev melts down after looking at Radhika eyes and says
Dev : Accha teek hain lekin ek sharat par
Radhika frowns her eyes Dev understands and says
Dev : Jo kaam abhi abhi aadhoora hua usko Poora karne do mujhe
Radhika : Kya and after while she remembers what happened few minutes before she feels shy and her cheeks turn in to rosy, she just nods her head saying no Dev naughtily looking at her beautiful, Innocent face , he thinks he can tease her more Dev acts normally and says
Dev : Hey hello jo tum soch rahi ho usko baremein nahi pooch raha hoon main main saaree ki baath kar raha hoon Radhika surprised hearing this and stammers saying
Radhika : Saaree.. Matlab mein samjhi nahi Dev moves towards Radhika and fixes her pallu and says
Dev : mein iski baath kar raha tha kyonki aadha sarree mein aadha saaree tum pehno gi toh accha nahi dikhega isliye Radhika gets anger she frustrated with this behaviour of Dev she adjusts her pallu and starts leaving room in anger Dev pulls her towards him some water droplets in Radhika hair fall on Dev face Radhika pursed her lips feeling sorry Dev slowly cleans his face and says
Dev : Naraaz ho Radhika nods her head Dev bends her head on her nape and starts kissing Radhika suddenly jerks and turns towards Dev's Face Dev laughs at her behaviour they both are looking in to each other eyes , Radhika pleads him again to leave her Dev just nods his head saying no Radhika pleading him Dev tightens his grip he slowly keeps his finger over her lips and takes back to his lips and signals her for kiss Radhika lowers her gaze feeling shy Dev slowly lifts her head holding her chin Radhika closed her eyes Dev slowly bents his head towards her lips their lips are cms away from each other just then they hear knock on the door they both comes out from their world Radhika blushingly runs from the room but stops hearing Dev voice
Dev: Radhika this is not fair tumne mujhe I Love you bhi nahi kahaan aur ye bhi nahi hua please math jao Radhika Please give me what i want Radhika turns her head and looks at Dev and goes to open the door Dev thinks himself " Radhika agar tum jiddi ho toh mein bhi jiddi hoon mein tab tak baat nahi karongi jab tak tum meri baath nahi manogi"
Radhika opens the Door and she surprised seeing whole purohit Family along with ammaji and Shastriji, Vrinda She takes blessings from Dadima and shastriji welcomes them in to the house Radhika feeling little nervous and guilt
Mohini and Barkha asks : Radhika Dev kahaan hain Dev comes out with a disaapointed face , Mohini barkha starts teasing
Mohini: Dadima Lagtha hain hum galath waqt pe agaya Dekho Dev ka chehra kaisa uthra hua hain
Barkha : Kya Bhabhi aap bhi waise bhi Dev itna pareshaan hain aap usko kyun thang kar rahe hoon Sorry Dev Radhika adjusting her Pallu looks at Dev Dev turns her head and goes away Dadima, Padma, Mohini, Barkha all are worried thinking that nothing normal between RaDev
Afterwhile all Purohits leave for Home, Radhika also
Dev and Radhika are travelling Dev's Car Dev silently, Driving the Car not a single word he's talking Radhika heart aching she cant bare his silence She tries to talk but Dev stops the car saying" Lo Ghar aagayi tum jao mein car park karke aatha hoon Radhika just nods her head and comes out from the car and moves towards Home
Its evening time All family members discussing about first rasoi of Radhika but Radhika searching for Dev , shes worried and running here and there in the whole House she bumps to Ranchod and Swasti , swasti sounds Ouch Radhika kneels down and looks at her concerdly
Radhika : Swasti kahi lagi nahin Swasti nods her head and smiles Radhika asks" Aap log tumhari Chachu ko kahin Dekha :"
Ranchod and Swasti runs from there saying no Barkha Overhears her conversation and says
Barkha : Radhika mujhe patha hain Dev kaha honge but let me know kya hua tum dono ke beech
Radhika bents her head down and says innocently: Woh woh mujhse naaraj hain
Barkha : Kyun Dev tumse naraaj aisa ho hi nahi saktha waise kya hua, Jagda hua kya Radhika cant tell her what happened Radhika cheeks turns in to rosy she is feeling shy how to tell what he asked her Barkha silently laughing at her and pats her shoulder and asks : Batao Radhika mujhse kya chupana
Radhika closes her eyes and says : Wo mujhe I Love you kehne ko kahan aur mein kehnahi paayi bas itna hi
Barkha : Radhika agar itni si baat hai tho toh tum itna nahi sharmaogi leave it whatever Tum dono eksaath hain mujhe yehi kaafi hain I can solve your Problem
Radhika : Batao na Barkha mujhe unki Chuppi Bardaash nahi ho rahi hain Please
Barkha : Ok Lets come with me she takes Radhika to the Back side of the House where there is a small Room Which is totally glass Covered and before the Pond Small Pond also and in the middle of the Pond Kanha statue crossing his legs and Flute in his hand Radhika folds her hands and looks at the Room and confusedly looks at Barkha
Radhika : Barkha ye kya hain Iss Room se uski gussa kaisa kam hogi
Barkha : Radhika Ye Dev ka Favourite Room Jab usse tumne pehli baar dekha aur usko pyaar hogaya tha toh usne iss Kamre ko aisa saja diya ki nayi naveli dulhan ki tarah aur usko flute play karna bahut accha lagtha hain jab woh jyada khush hotha hain woh yahin rehtha tha Raat bar waise mujhe patha hain Dev ne kya poocha hoga Radhika hearing this her cheeks turns into crimpson red Barkha hugs Radhika and says " All the Best Radhika aaj ki Raat tum dono keliye khaas hain its going to be very special "
Its Dinner time all family members gathered at the dining table all are waiting for Dev buts its getting late so all started eating, Radhika looking at the doorway for Dev just then Dev enters Dadima
Dadima : Dev kahaan the tum jaldi fresh hokar aao Khana lag gayi hain
Dev looks at Radhika and makes face : nahi Dadima mujhe bhook nahin hain mein bahut thag gaya hoon jaa kar aaram karoon?
Padma : Kya hua Dev tera tabiyat toh teek haina, Radhika looks at him worriedly Dev turns his face and says to Padma
Dev: Nahin Maa mein theek bus kuch thakaan lag rahi hain thoda aaram karo toh I feel better padma instructs Radhika
Padma : Radhika tum Chai lekar jaao Dev ke liye Baaki kaam mein aur mohini sambhalenge but Dev interrupts
Dev: Nahin Mujhe kuch nahi chahiya Radhika tumhe kuch laane ki jaroorat nahin tum apna kaam karo he leaves to his room Radhika stands there looking the way Dev went
Dev waiting for Radhika in the Room he falls asleep in the sofa suddenly his Phone rings its Radhika's call he first looks at Room there's no Radhika in the Room and he Picks the Phone and says
Dev : Hello he hears a voice asking to Come him to the Back side the house
Dev hurriedly goes towards the room which is backside the House he suddenly slows his steps looking at the room decorated with flowers and White curtains and the pathway is decorated with Flowers he looking at the flowers and slowly taking his steps towards the Room but his eyes searching for Radhika he cant see anyone Just then he hears Radhika voice
Radhika : Iam Sorry Mujhe patha mein aapko bahut naaraj kiya, aap aise mooh latkake acchi nahi hain Dev smiles hearing this aap aise hasthe bahut acche lagthe hain bahut pyaara lagthe hain mujhe maaf kijiye mein aap ko woh keh nahi paaya jo aap sunana chahthe hain lekin ab mein kahe bina reh nahi saktha I LOVE YOU Mein aapse bahut pyaar karthi hoon meri kanha se yahi parthana hain ki har janam mein mujhe aap hi ke saath rehna hain hearing this Dev was overjoyed he wants to see radhika He searches for Radhika but he founds soundsystem he understands that whatever he heard was from that Sound system he disappoints he feels two hands closing his eyes he knows its Radhika.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome update. Waiting for RaDev SR.Pls update soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#70
pls pls give a new update soon,waiting for a suprise to dev from radhs,love it.thank you

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