New VIRIKA OS- Little bundle of Joy!

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hello guys, I am back with another FF; again something I thought of as you can tell by now that I am totally crazy and have become Karan & Krystle fanatic.  Just an idea that came to my mind and I wrote this at 4 AM (yes crazy)!! Thanks for wonderful comments for my other OS- Night to be cherished. I hope you all enjoy this OS as well- its slightly lengthy as opposed to the last OS so I hope you don't find it boring. Please, please, DO comment, makes my effort worthwhile. I will await your feedback. Enjoy!


Its been three years since Jeevika and Viren's marriage; time just flew by. "It seems just like yesterday when I came into this house along with the sadness of leaving Manvi behind in Rishikesh", thought Jeevika to herself laying on her bed but now she had no reason to be sad as Manvi became part of Vadera household after marrying Virat. Who had thought that those who used to fight 24/7 would one day become a romantic couple; she was happy that Manvi would forever be with her and especially with somone like Virat who loves her so much. She recalls the night when Manvi came into the house after marrying Virat and a smile automatically forms on her face.

FLASHBACK:

After the wedding, the couple was welcomed by everyone in the house and after doing all the rituals, Jeevika and Viren were talking to them.

Jeevika: Mannu, main khush hoon aaj sirf isliye nahi ki tu abh hamesha mere saath yahan rahegi balki isliye ki tujhe Virat jaisa humsafar mila jo tumse itna pyar karta hai. Virat, mujhe poora yakeen hai ki tum Manvi ke liye ek bahut ache humsafar sabit hoge aur Mannu abh teri bhi Virat aur is ghar ke liye zimedari hai, samji.
Manvi: Haan didi samaj gayi
Virat: Bhabhi main Manvi ka pati baad main hoon, pehle aapka dewar to us haq se aap abhi mujhe daant sakti hain; main apko koi shikayat ka mauka nahi doonga, promise
Viren: Jeevika ka to pata nahi par haan agar tune meri saali ko zara sa bhi tang kiya na to main to tujhe nahi chodunga
Virat: Bhai mujhe apni jaan bahut pyaari hai isliye main koi risk lene hi nahi wala; acha abh hum log jaayein ke aur class lagne wali hai, kyun kya hai na aap to shaadi wali raat bhabhi ko akela chod kar chale gaye the, par mera aisa koi irada nahi hai
Viren: Udaale beta mazak, chal tu bhi kya aish karega...jaa goodnight!
Jeevika: Goodnight Virat, Goodnight Mannu!

Jeevika hugged Manvi and both couples retired to their respective rooms.

PRESENT:

Remembering such moments brings happy tears to Jeevika's face; she thanks god for giving her such good luck to have such household and moreover, a life partner like Viren. There couldn't be a better choice for her, she thought. And thinking about Viren, she remembers its his birthday today and she gets up to plan a small surprise for him at midnight. Today she was planning to gift something very precious to Viren, she thought to herself. It was 11:30 when Jeevika slowly got up from the bed to sneak into the kitchen and bring the special cake that she had prepared earlier. She came inside the room and waited till the clock struck 12 AM and she went and sat close to Viren. She bent and whispered "Happy Birthday Viren" and placed a small kiss on his cheek and blushed. Viren's face lit up with a smile and he slowly opened his eyes to see Jeevika so close to him; he was just lost in her eyes. He engulfed her in his arms and brought her close to himself and whispered, "Thank you"! Jeevika smiled back getting up and Viren also got up by now. She held his hands and made him follow her to the sofa to cut the cake. Viren was indeed surprised at her planning and he couldn't stop smiling and cherishing this moment.

Jeevika: Viren, aapne har saal mera janamdin bahut hi special banaya hai par is saal jo tohfa main apko dene ja rahi hoon voh apke liye bahut hi special hoga.
Viren (holding her hands): Acha aisa kaunsa gift hai, main bhi to dekhoon

Jeevika took off the cover from cake's plate and held cake in her hands. Viren sat there little confused as to what is so special in the cake. Jeevika smiled sensing his queries and to end his queries, she placed the cake in front of him and sat there to see his reaction.

Viren: Birthday Cake?
Jeevika: Hmm birthday cake, aap padhiye to sahi

Viren looked closely to read what was written on the cake and was dumbfounded; Jeevika was smiling to herself that him being a such a reputated lawyer could not understand this simple hint. Viren stared at the cake again and then it suddenly hit him and he looked towards Jeevika who blushed and nodded saying yes to confirm what he saw is true.

Viren (reading the cake): Happy Birthdayyy, PAPA!!!

His loud happy voice suddenly became teary and he choked on his words; Jeevika held his hands understanding his emotions. He could not believe it and was unable to talk. He slowly got up from his chair and Jeevika did too; she held his hands and came close to him.

Jeevika: Happy Birthday Viren, soon to be a Papa!

Viren, due to lack of words, simply just engulfed her in a hug and they stood there enjoying the moment to themselves. He broke the hug and kissed Jeevika's forehead.

Viren: Jeevika...main...papa!!! Tumhe kab pata chala?
Jeevika: Bas kuch hi dino pehle
Viren: Kuch dino pehle? To bataya kyun nahi?
Jeevika: Us waqt bata deti to yeh apka birthday itna special kaise banta aur waise bhi main confirm karna chahti thi pehle
Viren: Jeevika...main bata nahi sakta ki aaj tumne mujhe tohfe ke roop main kitni badi khushi di hai aur yeh janamdin main kabhi nahi bhooloonga. Aisa gift na kabhi kisi ne diya hai aur naahi de sakta hai, thank you Jeevika...for such special gift aur meri zindagi main aane ke liye. Congratulations to you too, Mrs. Vadhera.

He pulled her close to herself and placed a kiss on her lips; deepening it and Jeevika just held onto him tightly totally lost in the moment. They broke the kiss to breathe and Jeevika blushed; she signalled him to cut the cake. He held her hand and they both cut the cake together. Jeevika fed him the cake 'Happy Birthday' and Viren smiled back and fed her cake as well saying 'Thank You, love'. The night had been definetely became special; both laid next to each other engulfed in a hug to never part and welcome the new guest; symbol of their love.

8 MONTHS LATER

8 months have passed and Viren and Jeevika were becoming eager day by day to welcome their little bundle of joy. Viren had become even more caring; paying attention to even the smallest thing and needs of Jeevika. It was not easy to handle a pregnant women going through hormonal change every now and then but Viren did not complain even once. It was almost 6:30 in the evening when Viren left his office when he got call from Jeevika. He smiled picking up knowing that his pregnant wife must be craving something now.

Viren: Hello Jeevika
Jeevika: Viren aap kahan hai is waqt?
Viren: Bas abhi office se nikla, raaste main hoon
Jeevika: Very good to aap ek kaam kijiye, aap please aate waqt mere liye chocolate pastry le aayenge?
Viren (smiled): Jee bilkul jaisa apka hukam. Main lekar aata hoon.
Jeevika: Ok thank you, I will wait.

He hung up and quickly drove to the nearest bakery and ordered pastries just when Jeevika called again.

Viren: Haan Jeevika bas maine pastries le li hain, ghar aanewala hoon
Jeevika: Nahi main yeh kehne ke liye phone kiya ki mera abh pastry ka mood nahi hai

Viren stood there shocked.

Viren: Abhh...umm...acha to phir kya lekar aaun?
Jeevika: Mera na ice cream khane ka man kar raha...mango flavour
Viren: Acha lekin please abh mere aane tak dubara mood mat change kar lena
Jeevika: Nahi bilkul nahi, aap bas jayiye jaldi.
Viren: Ok theek hai

He cancelled the pastries and ordered an ice cream instead; he drove home before Jeevika could change her mind again. He reached home to find Jeevika taking a nap, he smiled to himself thinking that she made him go all the way down to other end to get an ice-cream and fell asleep. Jeevika woke up around dinner time and after dinner, Viren brought ice-cream to the room and sat there seeing her enjoying ice-cream like a little kid. Jeevika offered him some but he smiled and nodded saying no that she can enjoy her ice-cream. They slept shortly after 10 PM and around midnight, Viren felt a move to see Jeevika up and wide awake. He quickly sat up.

Viren: Jeevika, tum uth kyun gayi? Tabiyat to theek hai? Kuch chahiye?

Jeevika nodded yes and Viren became attentive all of a sudden to prepare himself for her next demand.

Viren: Umm...kya chahiye?
Jeevika (pouting like a kid): Umm Viren mera na golgappe khane ka man kar raha hai

Viren slammed his head hearing her demand and he knows if he says no, she would just kill him.

Viren: Umm darling, is waqt raat ke 12 baje tumhara bichara pati kahan se golgappe layega? Market band ho gayi hongi, lekin I promise kal office se aate waqt pakka le aaonga
Jeevika: Viren aap bhi kamaal karte hain, mera mann abhi kar raha hai, kal tak to mera mood badal jayega.
Viren sat there thinking what to do at this hour and he knew Jeevika would not rest till she gets what she wants. He thought to call Virat as he knows places around that are open late etc; he did not want to disturb him but he had no choice.

Virat (sleepy): Hello Bhai
Viren: Sorry yaar tujhe disturb kar raha hoon par ek favour chahiye thi; yaar Jeevika ko abhi golgappe chahiye.

Virat's eyes shot up and he quickly got up along with waking up Manvi.

Virat: Lekin bhai is waqt?
Viren: Haan bhai bas pooch mat, mujhe to koi jagah bhi nahi maloom socha tujhe shayad pata hoga aur waise bhi Jeevika ko akela chod kar nahi ja sakta
Virat (rubbing his eyes): Bhai main kuch karta hoon, aap tension mat lo
Viren: Thanks Yaar

Manvi sitting next to him was wondering what's happening.

Manvi: Kya hua Virat, didi to theek haina?
Virat: Haan lekin bhabhi ki is waqt golgappe khane ki farmaish hai, to vohi poori karne ja raha hoon, chalo aao mere saath.

They both went to Virika's room and Jeevika was surprised to see them there.

Viren: Voh Virat abhi jayega golgappe lene
Jeevika: Viren aapne khamaka unhe disturb kar diya
Virat: Koi baat nahi bhabhi, bas aap wait kijiye main dhoond kar aata hoon ki is waqt kaunsi market khuli hogi
Manvi: Virat, suno na...abh agar ja hi rahe ho to please mere liye bhi lete aana
Virat (sarcastically): Hanji kyun nahi, apka bhi hukam sar ankhon par

Jeevika high-fived Manvi and both brothers just looked at each other; both in miserable conditions while their wives were busy chit-chatting and laughing. It took Virat more than 40 mins to find a stall and he finally found one to whom he begged to open up his stall promising him to pay the triple amount. Finally, slowly walking inside the house, he grabbed plates and spoons from the kitchen and made his way to the room. Viren breathed a sigh of relief and the girls just became ecstatic. Virat and Viren sat there with their hands under their chins staring at their wives enjoying golgappe and eating them at such fast speed.

Jeevika: Maza aa gaya, thank you Virat!
Virat: No problem bhabhi, shukar kijiye mujhe yahan kisine dekh nahi liya ghar se jaate huye warna mera to court marshall ho jata
Manvi: Kitna darte ho tum yaar abhi bhi; waise abhi se practice karlo...kal ko jab main pregnant hoongi na tab yeh sabh kaam aayega

Soon she realized what she had said and she blushed making everyone else smile.

Viren: Tab main launga apni saali ke liye golgappe
Manvi (shying): Kya Jiju aap bhi

She quickly raced out of the room and Virat followed her wishing Jeevika & Viren goodnight. Few more weeks passed by and it was the 9th month now; Jeevika could deliever anyday and everyone was just on their toes to welcome the new guest. It was the final week of the 9th month and Jeevika was experiencing pain since morning but by the evening, she went into labour pain. Manvi ran to the living room to annouce that Jeevika needs to go to the hospital; Virat picked her up and took her to the car and everyone else rushed to the hospital as well. Manvi called Viren who was in a meeting that they had taken Jeevika to hospital. Viren immediately left the office and reached hospital within half an hour.

He saw everyone in the hallway and Jeevika had been taken to the operation theatre. After few minutes, doctor came out with worried face making everyone else worried as well.

Vanshika: Doctor, kya baat sabh theek to haina? Jeevika aur bacha?
Doctor: Dekhiye, delievery main thoda risk hai; humari koshish hai maa aur bache dono ko bachane ki par is waqt lag raha hai ke hum sirf ek ko hi bacha sakte hain

This news just shattered Viren who was speechless; Vanshika held him consoling and supporting him. Everyone became tensed; Virat was consoling Manvi.

Viren (crying): Doctor, mera bacha mere liye meri jaan hai par Jeevika bhi meri zindagi hai; main bache ke begair jee loonga lekin Jeevika ke begair nahi; uske bina ek pal bhi main soch nahi sakta, main mar jaaonga. Doctor, aap please Jeevika ko bacha lijiye
Doctor: Viren, I am making every effort to keep Jeevika and baby safe

Doctor left and Viren sat down crying on the chair and everyone became tensed seeing his condition. Vanshika and Manvi prayed to keep both Jeevika and the baby safe. Hours passed and with each minute, Viren was dying to see his wife and kid. Finally around 10 PM at night, doctor came out with a smile on her face.

Doctor: Viren, bhagwan ne apki sunli aur apne ashirwad ke roop main ek beta diya hai, congratulations!

Everyone became elated hearing this news; Manvi hugged Virat who wiped away her tears. Vanshika hugged Viren who was still in shock.

Viren: Doctor...meri Jeevika...kaisi hai?
Doctor: Maa aur bacha dono theek hain; humne Jeevika ko doosre room main shift kar diya, aap log mil sakte hain.

Hearing this, everyone rushed to the room whereas Viren sat back to compose himself and to come out of the shock. He knew what he went through for these few hours. In the room, everyone congratulated Jeevika and held the baby. However; Jeevika's eyes was only searching for Viren. Just then, her eyes glittered up seeing Viren entering the room; everyone turned around to see him. He walked around the bed and grabbed his angel from Manvi and held him in his arms. His tiny body, hands, fingers, head, he felt everything. He broke down hugging the baby close to his heart; it was probably the first time when Jeevika or anyone else had seen Viren cry like this but they all understood what he went through and how it feels like to hold a baby for first time. Virat carassed his back consoling him and Viren wiped his eyes and placed baby back in his crib. He then looked at Jeevika who was crying too and sat next to her on bed facing her. Everyone else slowly left the room to give them privacy. Viren held Jeevika's hand and kissed it; he kissed her forehead and felt her to see she is really ok; then they both hugged each other crying for a while. Viren broke the hug slowly and carassed Jeevika's face.

Viren (crying): Jeevika tum nahi janti yeh kuch hi ghanto main maine kya kuch nahi mehsoos kiya, doctor ne mujhe apne bache aur tum main se kisi ek ko chunne ke liye kaha; agar bache ke liye sochta hoon to tumhe khota hoon aur agar tumhe chunnta hoon to apne bache ko khota hoon. Tum yeh sunkar naraz hogi lekin maine tumhe chuna, Jeevika... tum meri zindagi ho, tumhare begair mujhe jeena manzoor nahi hai Jeevika. Par dekho na bhagwan ne meri sunli aur mujhe tum dono mil gaye. Thank you, Jeevika...I love you!

Jeevika (crying): Viren, main samaj sakti hoon aap par kya beeti hogi; bhale hi maine is bache ko 9 mahine apne pet main paala hai par mera sara dard aapne uthaya hai; is 9 mahino ke safar main apne ek pal bhi mera saath nahi choda, meri har ajeeb se ajeeb farmaish aadhi raat ko aapne poori ki, mere saath jaagte rahe, itna sabh kuch dekhkar bhagwan kaise na apko Papa banne ki khushi deta; aap mere liye meri duniya ho, sabhse ache humsafar aur mujhe poora yakeen hai ki aap world ke best papa honge. I love you too, Viren!

They engulfed each other in a tight hug crying their fears out and also having happy tears seeing their love now blossomed into a living being. They sat there slept in each other's arms and holding each other to never let go. Next morning, Virat and Manvi came and brought food for them. Manvi hugged Jeevika and played around with her nephew.

Manvi: Are Are dekho, Maasi ko hello bolo!
Virat: Hello madam, main iska Chacha hoon aur tum meri beeewi to tum uski Chachi huyi
Manvi: Zayada smart banne ki koshish mat kiya karo, main tumse shaadi karne se pehle didi ki behan thi aur aaj bhi hoon to is naate main iski Maasi huyi aur yeh mujhe Maasi hi kahega

Viren and Jeevika sat there smiling to each other at their silly fights.

Virat: Chachi!
Manvi: Maasi!
Virat: Chachi Chachi Chachi!
Manvi: Maasi Maasi Maasi!!!
Jeevika: Are bas!
Viren: Yeh voh bada hokar khud decide karega ki kisko kya bulana hai
Manvi: Acha didi, Jiju iska naam kya socha apne?
Virat: Mere paas ek perfect naam hai iska, bhabhi?
Jeevika: Kya?
Virat: Gol-gappa!

Everyone laughed and Jeevika remembered Virat going at middle of the night to get golgappe for her! Viren held the baby and looked at Jeevika. They smiled and said his name will be " Jeevan"; incorporating both J & V as alphabets and symbolozing their gift from god; a life for lifetime "Jeevan Vadera".


Okay, it turned out to little more than slightly lol, but I am sure you guys won't mind. PLZ COMMENT, Thank You :)


Edited by Amit90 - 12 years ago

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Posted: 12 years ago
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there're hardly any ff's on viren and jeevika on this forum. the os's you wrote were a actually a treat today. this one was especially very sweet. and one day, if they have a son, i would love him to be named jeevan :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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simple beautiful!!! amazingly written...i luvd every part of the os...πŸ‘
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Very nice... njoyed reading it and jeevan name is perfect
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Good one!!!!πŸ‘
Loved it😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Oh my GOSh...this was just soo beautiful...would luv to see sumthng like this in the show...especially the gol-gappa scene...of the four...!!!

Ur prev OS too was mindblowing...Do write more...!!!!

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Posted: 12 years ago
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beautiful...i hope even in the episode we et to hear the gud news during viren's b'day as a suprise gift for him
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Posted: 12 years ago
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It was really joyful to read this OS, I really loved it. The way Jeevika told Viren that he will be papa, her craves, and the list can go on... It was really nice... Hope you can PM me whenever you write in IF😊

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Beautiful and amazingly written!!! 
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Posted: 12 years ago
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aww its awesum.!!<3<3 plzz keep writingg.!! and i want anoder part soon!! thank you!!