SS-You brought the colours! Xmas update CH11-pg76 - Page 4

hema

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Posted: 12 years ago

#31

nice start ,cntinue nd plz pm me whn u update

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Posted: 12 years ago

#32

wow great story plz update soon
I'm looking forward to your next part of the story

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Nikvi29

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Posted: 12 years ago

#33

interesting please do me next time.

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Divya6696

@Divya6696

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Posted: 12 years ago

#34

Its really nice..!😳

Waiting for the further updates...

Update soon..!

Do PM me Please...

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Posted: 12 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: visufansona
HEY MERRA---ITS NICE,
WILL SHURLY-DEVIL ABHY HI HAI NA??

MAZA AYEGA-WORK DEVIL & PIA!
DO ADD ME TOO & PM TOO!

thank u!!!

Originally posted by: pkyekfanclub
great start dont ask opinion just keep writing 😆 its gud 😊d devil must b Abhay right n they had a past right abhi itne se kaam chalao for big comment update next part soon 😆

thanks anky!!ok but next time i want big😉

Originally posted by: abhiya_pkyek
awesum...loved it...i guess d devil is abhay...loved misha n madhu...waiting 4 d next updt..thnx 4 starting a new ss n continue soon n thnx 4 d pm

thanks...yup mish n madhu r imp in a way!!

Originally posted by: flora212
Ooh awsome. Devil must be abhay! Waiting fr abhiya luv story. Pm me and update soon.

thank u... i was so eager to write this story!!😆

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Posted: 12 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: luckdiya
hiii meera.luvly starting yaar...
i really lik d name of d ss..."u brought d colours."
sooo swt
continue soon & pm me... i ll b waiting dear

thank u diya😳aaww!i took a lot of time n dimaag to choose this title..

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Posted: 12 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: cccppp
meera is this story supernatural?..😕😕

well then i love the story concept...i know the devil is abhay... no one is big devil then him..😈
continue soon meera...waiting for your update...😃😃

i hope u make story dark,mastry and very good love story of abhiya..and choa-chi-cho...😆😆😆
😃

oh!i m sorry this isn't a supernatural story...yeah abhay is gonna b rude but he's not vampire!

anyways thanks and sorry if i disappointed u!not dark but yes as u say a good love story it will be😳keep reading i'm sure u r gonna love it😳

Edited by ilove99 - 12 years ago

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Posted: 12 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: anjali.K
Lol, Meera you gave chotu sa chapter as a punishment for our small comments😆. Koi baat nahi, next time will give long comments, pakka!
love the beginning of the story Meera. Its already enthralled me.

Continue the story soon

and do PM me for this ss

yeah its a punishment😆okeee😃

thank u thank u!!2 time isliye coz u gave helped me for title!!koi nai unme se pasand nahi aya par apan dona ne kitne dimaag lagaya nai😆

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Posted: 12 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: abc123chiti
awsome...👏
but a little too confusing i guess...😕
continue soon...😊
n plz pm me...😊

thank u...i'll clear everythng slowly!

Originally posted by: zoozoo123
Beautiful start dear...Lovely...Even Iam waiting 4 the devil...Im waiting eagerly 2 read the next update...Pls pm me from next time...Continue soon...

thanks...i'll pm u offcourse!

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Posted: 12 years ago

#40

Originally posted by: anjali0111
nice start!!!! 👏

tell me r u inspired by holi...i mean lots of dialogue abt the colours🤣

jokes apart.😳...i really liked it.👍🏼 so as u mentioned 'beast' that means abhay is a vampire here also n pia a normal girl...n who was the MD of the co. is he imp. in the story???? n who is this 'work devil'?❓ is he abhay or sum other man is coming in pia's life????😕 u said in the last line that- -colours brought by one in other's life though itself remain colourless...does that mean it has a sad ending???😔 if so then plz make it happy ending.😍

so i will not bore u wid any more questions😳...i knw u cant answer all of them right now as u hv to maintain suspense to bind ur readers wid ss...so continue soon plz.😉

aah!itna bada comment i'm impressed😉Thank u!!

whoa!itne saare questions😲

oh no😆i had this story in my mind from a long time but holi's the best occasion for starting it!😉

sorry to disappoint u dear but here it's not supernatural story

well,i am writing in a flow so can't say abt M.D...about the work devil u'll know soon!

i guess u didn't notice it had a question mark at the end😆so wait for the ending...can't disclose it now ,it may be or maybe not😆

i guess i told everything i can rite now...keep reading to know abt next..

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