My Take for Monday episode updated LAst Part

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Posted: 2012-03-09T01:29:47Z
heyy guyzz this is my first attempt to right any thing so plzz Bear it  and sorry in advance for my mistakes

It start from the kiss aftr the kiss Ram hugPriya tightly priya also hugd him back suddenly she realize wht she is doing she backsof and says Mr. kapoor  I knw ki aap mjhe kaisi aurat samjhte hian aurr main aapke layak nahi hun and she moved to her couch . Ram was stunned he knws priya was really hurt by him but he nvr thaught his 1 mistake will make him loose his most precious gift of life . Ram also sleeps with heavy hurt .

Next morning whn ram wakes up he dsn't found priya he calls Bansi kaka And ask him Abt Priya

Bansi kaka  tel him tht priya has left fr her classes and gives a letter to ram.

Ram reads a letter

Mr. kapoor   mjhe nahi pata ki mere apko infrm karne ya na karne se apko koi farq padta hain ya nahi lekin apki tarah main bhi apna farz pura karoongi  main apne ghar jaa rahi hun kuch dino k liye kynki meri  behen  ko meri jarurat hain aurr aap sayad mjhe apni behen aurr apne Family matters me invlv nab hi karna chate ho  .

Ram was hurt he didn't knw  what to do or what nt to do he calls vikaram and tell him to meet him at his office .

Edited by vinan2050 - 2012-03-11T11:15:05Z
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Posted: 2012-03-09T02:23:12Z
heyy plz let me knw whether i shld cntinue or not
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Posted: 2012-03-09T02:27:33Z
its good. u can continue
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Posted: 2012-03-09T02:42:11Z
gr8 start... continue... :D
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Posted: 2012-03-09T02:54:27Z
u shd continue gud  weekends are a torture and certain members are our saviours join the brigade of loitta and veena  our beloved writers.
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Posted: 2012-03-09T03:06:40Z

Ram's Office:

Ram lost in his thought's  vikram came to meet him

Vikram  : Kya hua ram tu itna paresan kyn hain main samjh sakta hunk al se jo bhi hua hain  un sab se tu upset hoga but  to aise Devdas ki tarah kyn baitha hut u Ram Kapor hian jo sab kuch thik kar sakta hian

Ram : Vikram mjhe Natasha aurr Ayesha ki ladai sejyada tnsn Priya ki hain yarr Natasha aurr Ayesha ki prblm solve karne k liye to maine media walo se baat kar li ahin unhe job hi paise chaiye wo pay kark sare telecast ban karwa diye hain .

Vikram   : Ram tu priya k bare mein itna mat soch use apne dil ki baat bata de aurr wo tere pass aa jayegi .

Ram :  Yarr wo mjhse baat tak nahi akr rahi mjhe kuch bhi nahi bolne de rahi yarr mjhe samjh nahi a raha main kya karu  main use khona nahi chata .

Vikram : Ram tu yaha mat baith jaa uski classes mein jaa use mil aurr use apne dil ki baat bata

Ram : Thanxx vikram  main abhi jata hu

Ram reaches Classes :

Ram  searches for priya and came to know that priya has left for  home  ram is upset and came back to KM

KM:

Ram reaches His room  and find out that room has again changed  there is no photo frame of Ram & priya and his old frame was back ram call Bansi kaka

Ram : BAnsi kaka kisne mera room me changes karne ko bola

Bansi kaka: sir priya mam ne Jane se pahle bola tha ki iss room ko fir se waisa hi bana diya jaise pahle thaw o bhi aaj k aaj unhone hi sabhi workers ko bheja tha

Ram : aap jaiye and thinks ye priya bhi na Mjhse bhi jyada gusse wali hain Chal Ram abb pahle usse mana par usse is room me lane se pahle ye room fir se waisa kar jaisa usne kiya tha  

Niharika see that room was again changed and priya was not their in KM and  nw make a plan to use all this for her favour

Niharika : Ram kya hua Priyaa aaj ghar nahi Ayi ?? aurr ye room tumne fir se pahle jaisa kyn kar dia ?

Ram : wo Priya aaj apne ghar rookna chati thi kal itn akuch hua to wo apni family k sath rahna chati thi

Niharika : Hmm ram Ye Ayesha ne bhi na Nutzz  ehsaan ka is tarah se thanx Bola hain aurr abb ye priya bhi uska sath de rahi hain jabki usse tumhra sath dena chaiye tha  sorry Ram maine tumhari shadi galat ladki se karwa di .

Ram : Maa aisa kuch nahi hain Priya ek achi ladki hain  aurr wo apni family ki care kar rahi hain to isme galat kya hain aurr jaha tak rahi NUtz aurr Ayesha ki baat to main sach ka pata jaldi laga lunga  plzz maa abb agar aap bur na mane to maa aram kar sakta hu

Niharika : yaa baby why not main  chalti hu tumhare liye kahana Lagwa du

Ram nahi maa mjhe bhook nahi hain aap jaiye aram kijiye

 

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Posted: 2012-03-09T03:10:11Z

sollypnj,  ravichitra, , JAINEHA,BALHFAN


Thanxx guyzz 

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Posted: 2012-03-09T03:12:20Z
this was too cool loved ram's answer to niharikaROFLplz update soon u are becoming one of my fav wriers Big smile
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