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Posted: 17 years ago

hii guys......this is surbhi.....and this is my story KYA PYAAR KAROGE MUJHSE.......the main characters are SUJAL GREWAL played by RAJEEV KHANDELWAL.........KASHISH RAHEJA played by AAMNA SHARIFF

zindagi zindagiii kya tera roop hai zindagi zindagiii kya tera roop hai
tu kabhi chaavn hai aur kabhi dhoop haiii ii
zindagi zindgai kya tera rooppp hai
kabhi lagti hai tu meri saheli 
kabhi lagti hai tu tanah akeliii  iii
tere hi ashiyaane mein mujhe ab haiii rehnaa aaa  aaaa
zindagiii he haai hae hae  haeee
zindagi zindgai kya tera rooppp hai    
kabhi lagti hai tu meri saheli
a roaring sound of applause came following.........i was standing on the stage and giving flying kisses.....embracing gals who were mad after me and my voice..
hi main hu sujal  sujal grewal yeh hai meri aur mere pyaar ki kahani....hamarii hii zubani......ab tak toh aap samjh hi gaye honge ki main ek singer tha haan ek singer  log kehte the ki gayak andar se bhi utne hi ache hote hain jitni achayii unke gaano mein jhalkti thi.....hmm par mere saath yeh baat bahut hi der baad hui kyonki main ek dual personality mein jiitaa tha mere fans ke liye main ek farishte se kam naa tha aur kyon naa hoon main unke saamne ek aise sujal ko peish karta tha joh main kabhi tha hi nahin ek aisa sujal joh insaano ki kadar karta tha ek aisa sujal joh apne baare mein kabhi nahin socha karta tha ek aisa sujal joh pyaar mein vishwaas karta tha aur mujhe aisa karna bhi padta tha kyonki mujhe ek kamayab singer bane rehna joh tha......abhi abhi joh aapne yeh gaana suna aur yeh situation dekhi yeh 10 saal pehle ki baat hai aur yahin se meri kahani shuru hoti hai chaliye dekhte hain aage kyaa hota hai..
S- thankx guys and gals aap sabki wajah se hi yeh sujal itna kuch ban payaa thank you all i love you byeee......... aur main peeche ke raaste se bahar nikal gaya aur ek sportscar main beith kar apne friends ke place jaa raha hoon....meanwhile us hall mein jahan mera concert hai zara suniye toh sahi
8-9 gals are gossiping
1- wow he is amazing kitna down to earth hai really i love him kitni khush kismat hogi woh ladki joh sujal se shaadi karegi  (mujhe hansi aa rahi hai kyonki main toh yeh maanta hoon ki that girl wud be the unluckiest one jisko mujh jaisa pati milega aur wiase bhi shaadi karni kisko hai )
3-u r rite he is really an angel hamesha koshish karta hai ki apne saare fans ke haathon par autograph kare daale behchara bahut hi cute hai seriously a worthy idol
and then all of them--we love him we love sujal sujal sujal every where
toh dekha aapne puri duniya ke liye main ek farishta tha par joh mujhe achi tarah jaante the woh hi yeh jaante the ki main kitna ziddi arrogant rude gusse wala aur ek emotionless insaan tha newayz apni buraayi toh karni hi padegi kyon meri kahani mein meri zindagi mein main pehle tha hi aisa ok ok now the story
i reached my place a hangout area where i met my other friendz
VROOM (played by iqbal) VIZ (played by rishi) & KRISH (played by tusharrr) yeh hain mere kuch khaas dost jinke saath main ghoomna ladkiyoon ko satana arre baba harmless satana kiya karta tha...the closest was however vroom my buddy...
VRO- hey sujal how was the performance (vroom my besty bahut hi acha ladka as of now yeh samjhli jiye mera opposite tha a gr8 human)
VIZ- hey comon vroom yeh bhi koi puchne ki baat hai he is the best acha hi gaya hoga (sam a very good friend....ek pehli sa tha kabhi toh bahut acha lagta tha par kabhi kuch aisa kar yaa bol deta tha joh mujhe baar baar iske baare mein apni rai change karne pe majboor kar deta tha but i believed in him)
S-waise kya chal raha plz i just dont wanna talk abt songs and music now i am pissed off..
VR-yaar i just dont understand why u sing when u dont like it 
KRI- hey comeonn vroom yaar music ne hi toh use yahan tak pahunchaya it is his life.......( i didnt like this soo i interupted him)
S-no krish u r wrong!!!! music is just a profession i dont think i love it ohh puh-lease krish yaar jab bhi tu muun kholta bomb phodta hai, tum sab toh mujhe jaante ho i wanna live my life king-sized with lots and lots of money and fun and enjoyment and thats it aur yeh sab mujhe music deta gaane gaata hoon log mujhe chahte hain and wat else do i want nothing sooo now understood krish
VR- tere yeh hi raaste ek din tujhe kahin kaa nahin chodegein
S- theek hai theek hai mere baap ab maarega kya mujhe comeon guys lets chill yeh jagah yeh mera sujal point mere liye ek sukoon ki jagah yahan main unhi logon ke saath hota hoon jinke saath main hona chahta no unwanted ppl here rite lets enjoy
(us waqt maine vroom ki baat par bilkul bhi dhyaan nahin diya infact bahut si aisi baatien rahi thi joh usne kahi par main unka real matlab kabhi nahin samjh saka aur bahut galtiyaan karke hi mujhe realize hua ki vroom kitna shai kehta tha
arre maine aapko ek monkey ke baare mein toh batayaa hi nahin jiska naam krish hai haaan meet him hamari gang yani POWER 4 ka dumboo KRISH bahut hi irritating tha kabhi kabhi mujhse pit bhi jaata tha actually woh mere aur vroom ke kuch khaas close kabhi nahin raha woh toh bas sam ka friend tha but still power 5 ka member tha newaya chalo ab dekhte hain aage main kya karta hoon)
main ghar raat ke 2 baje pahuncha woh bhi apne nahin vroom ke pairon par aur mera pura pariwaar mera intezaar kar raha hota hai............
mera pariwaar meri family yeh hi aise log the joh vroom ke baad joh meri galatiyon ko kabhi bhi nazar andaaz nahin karte the par mujhe badal bhi nahin paate the mera pariwaar kaafi bada tha meri mama mrs. prerna grewal maine un jaisa insaan apni puri life mai nahin dekha tha main yeh toh nahin jaanta tha ki mama ka sahi arth kya hota tha but woh mere liye ek problem solver se ek punishment giver se ek sweetheart se ek care taker thi she was just a dream for me maine kabhi bhi apne aap ko akela nahin mahsoos kiya tha kyonki mama hamesha mera saath deti thi par meri galatiyoon ka ehsaas bhi dilati thi mujhe gaane ki prerna bhi unse hi milti thi aur main unhe jab bhi dekhta tha ek bahut bada kaash meri rooh ko chedta tha ki kaash mein apne bachpan mein hostel naa jaata toh main koi aur hi sujal grewal hota but shayad mujhe koi aur kisi aur ne hi bana na tha....hmm mere papa mr anurag grewal inke baare mein kya kahoon inki wajah se main ek paise kamati kat putli ban gaya....mere paas jab bhi aate toh bas business business and business aur kuch nahin isliye main kabhi unke kareeb jaa hi nahin saka aur ek tarah se mama ke hote hue bhi apne pariwaar se dooor hi hota gaya aur barbaadi ke raaste par chalta gaya...mere sibblings mere bhai and behane jinke baare mein main kabhi nahi sochta tha kyonki apne baare mein sochne se fursat hi nahin milti thi mera sabse bada bhai varun grewal aur meri bhabhi mehak grewal.....bhai bussiness mein hi busy rehte the aur mumbai se bahar hi rehete the aur maine bhi unse kabhi baat karne ki nahin sochi bhabhi se kabhi kabhi main friendle ho jaata tha but mere paas time hi nahin hota tha light moments bitane ka becoz my friendz were 1st for me phirr meri choti choti behene kasak and kripa....kripa,, kripa 22 saal ki thi mujh se ek saal choti and kasak se 2  saal badi ...bahut hi sweet and understanding sisters mili thi mujhe i was the closest to kasak jab bhi main yeh bhaiya bhaiya awaz suntaa tha meri saari thakan mit jaati thi aur aur haan ek stupid saa chota bhai bhi tha prem 21 saal ka tha and thank god hamare ghar ka ek hi aisa ladka joh focused tha ki use kya karna hai choti si umar mein hi business mein dhyaan dene laga tha and really bahut hi sweet-hearted tha and....... well this is my familyyy aur ab aage )
whole family esp mama was really furious on me aur kyon naa ho raat ke 2 joh baj rahe the...trembling i entered with vroom
P-sujal yeh hadd hoti hai tumhe aisa kyon lagta hai ki tum akele ho tumare aage peeche koi nahin hai joh tumari chinta ki wajah se yahan marr rahe hain
viz meri galati cover karne ki koshish karta hai
VR-woh aunty ismein sujal.....
P-tum agar chup raho toh hi theek hoga yeh toh haath se hi nikal gaya hai ab kuch nahin ho sakta sujal ka
AN- offo prerna ab bas bhi karo acha beta tera concert sahi toh gaya naa
maine papa ko ek tirchi nazar se dekha aur phir kaha
S-haan theek tha ab kya main upar jaa sakta hoon plzzz
PR-haan kyon nahin 12 baje uthna 2 baje tak naashta paani karna phir 4 baje tak tjodi si practice karna phir 7 baje tak gym chale jaana aur phir raat ke 2-3 baje apni shakal yahin aise hi mujhe dikhanaa      { aur yeh keh kar mama upar chali jaati hain aur viz chala jaata hai .... papa bhi upar chale jaate hain aur main apni sisters aur shravan ke saath bacha rehta hoon kyonki bhai aur bhabhi toh as usual bahar hi the mumbai ke }
main dheere dheere andar aaaya aur phir kripa se aankhen chura ke apne kamre mein jaane laga but kripa ne mujhe rok liyaa
KR-bhai aap aise nahin hain toh phir us sujal ko joh bahut hi ache hain use apne andar kyon chupa rehe ho bhai aise aap apno ko bahut dukh de rahe ho plz try and understand
P-haan bhaiya aap aisa kyon karte ho jabki aap jaante ho ki mama ko isse bahut dukh hoga why???
main chup ho khara tha apne hone ke bawazood mere chote bhai behan hone ke bawazood mujhe unki yeh baatien insult se kam nahin lagi aur main gusse mein jal gaya kyonki pehle hi mera dimaag phira hua tha aur maine gusse mein bol diya
S-i am not answerable to neone......sujal grewal the superstar apne chote bhai baheno ko jawab de hmm kuch theek nahin lagtaa
aur phir main ladkharate kadamon se upar chala jaata hoon aur meri baat sunkar woh teen bhi apne rooms mein chale gaye

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Posted: 17 years ago
KYA PYAAR KAROGE MUJHSE

get up!! comeon get up!! kaishiish maam it is 1 pm now............
hmmm wat is this alex u know that it was such a late party yesternite and still u r after my life plz go close the door and let me sleeeeeeep plzzzz
AL- kaishish maam your dad has called a 100 times from india and i have told him that u r sleeping but he wants to talk to u plz talk to him
K-wattttttt dad alex ok ok me getting up !!!!
AL-fanx for doing soo
K-and alex why u spell my name wrong it is not kaishiish it kashish kashish raheja do u get that buddy ok newayz u goo i will call him..........my cell.....ok i got it bye alex
AL-bye and i will keep that in mind and leaves
K-hello hii dad kashish here
D-beta wahan tu padayi kar rahi hai yaa party
K-arre dad padayi khatam ho gayi soo i was just chilling with my friendz and sorry ki alex ko itni baari phone uthana pada main thi nahin newayz nething imp
D-haan when r u coming back
K-comeon dad abhi abhi toh padayi khatan hui hai and now me not coming back
D-but u shud now join my business with me our contract with the grewals is abt to begin and i want u to handle this project
K-noooooooooooooooo plzz dad ok ok i will come back after a month plzzz
D- ahhh ok i cant say nething to u ok beta byee
K-u r a sweety bye dad
haaan toh yeh hain kashish raheja........... iss kahani ka doosra pehlu.......yaani sujal ki kahani ka doosra pehlu iska iss duniya mein iske dad ke alawa aur koi nahin hai iske dad mr.rishabh raheja...isse is duniya mein sabse zyada pyaar karte the aur yeh bhi yeh darsal londan mein apni padayi karne ke liye aayi thi taki uske baad yeh business sambhal sake but a big no-no kyonki yeh saahibaa apni life padayi ke baad jeena chahti thi soo that is why inhone apne dad ko convince kiya aur haan btw alex iski maid thi joh roz isse uthaati thi lolz newayz zara aage bhadte hain yeh apne college friendz ke saath college ke bahar hain....iske friendz annie scarllet and robby
A-kaish when r u going back
K-i dont know i think i wanna enjoy my life now after all studies are over noww sooo i wanna be a little bad and happening now
R-i dont think that u can be moore hot bad and happening
K-shut up robby and btw why that stupid duffer brad staring me while walking so restlessly
SC-well just becoz......u also know that why he is doing soo
A-ohh comeon kaish dont be a snob he really loves...........
K-but i dont knw i dont love him he is a nice guy but i really dont see a life partner in him i think i shud talk to him
aur yeh wahan jaati hai us brad ke paas
B- ohh hii kaish well i was just seeing u like this only plz dont get me wrong
K-see brad now listen up i want to clearify it....i dont like u nor i love u soo u shudnt waste ur time in me....u r a very nice guy and i know every gal wud love to love u.....but brad sorry dont expect nething from me.....i know i am being very harsh and rude but the truth alwayz remains the truth plzz brad try and understand i dont love u sorrry but hope u understand
B-but kaish i really love u i want u to be mine
K-sorry but u r going in a wrong way...byee
B-butt
ohh god itna gussa aur itni straightforwardness aur kisi mein dikhayi nahin degi jitni ismein dikhayi deti.........lekin joh insaan tumhe pyaar karta hai use aap pyaar se toh yeh nahin samjha sakte ki aap unse pyaar nahin karte aur use bhi toh har ladki ki tarah apne deadman oops i mean apne dream-man ki talash hogi.....hmmmm goood going kashish
A-that wasnt soo good
SC-yeah he was a sweet guy
K-yaar comeon now oops gr8 i am late again
R-where???? who wants to meet u
K-that wasnt funny newayz actually some business clients i dont know why are coming to my house to meet me !!!!!! my dad is after my life i dont want to meet that mr varun grewal.....business is boring and he will discuss a business deal ohh gosh me going to die..............but have to go newayz guys u carry on byee
A SC R -byee and have fun
yeh ghar pahunchti hai aur unhe apne ghar mein hi paati hai well alex the gr8 again she helped her
K- i amm sooo sooo sorry mr grewal actually i forgot that u were coming soo plz....
bhai ki aankhon mein nami thi aur gale se aawaz theek nahin nikal rahi thi......kyonki woh ek aisi khabar laye the jise shayad kashish ne apne khwabon mein bhi nahin socha tha
V-u r kashish naa mr. mr. rishabh ra..reheja's daughter
unki aawaz mein bahut dard tha jab unhone isek dad ka naam liya aur kashish panic mein aa gayi
K-haan i am kashish raheja lekin aaap itna tensed kyon hainn
V-beta tumhe apne aap ko sambhal naa hoga plz
K-kyon kya a ho gaya aap aap bataaate kyon nahin kya hua hai
she literally shouted
V-mr rishabh rahejaa is no no more
use us waqt kuch nahin hua but then after a min or 2 it was an outburst of emotions which she never expressed....uske papa uske liye sab kuch the aur woh hi usse itna root gaye.......use samjh hi nahin aaya ke ek ajnaabe ke saamne kaise react kare.....uski saari khushiyaan saare sapne uski zindagi wahin tham si gayi..
K-nahin wat the hell r u saying nooo noooooooooo it cant be today aaaj hi toh maine unse baat ki and noo
V-this is the truth miss raheja plz control urself
K-papa nahin aisa nahin ho sakta hai yehhh kaise itnee achaanak nahin
V-jab unhone tumse baat ki uske kuch hi ghanton baad job woh mere papa ke saath ek deal discuss kar rahe the unhe ek heartattak aagaya and......and that was the very end of everything........
K-but mr grewal......
V-tumare dad humare sirf business partner hi nahin he was the best friend of my father and tumara unke alwa aur koi nahin hai toh now u will handle that contract aur i think ab tumhe india chalna chahiye....aur dad ne bhi mujhe yehi kaha hai ki tumhe india leaon.......he wants to meet u soo tum packing karlo and main saare arrangements karloo ok take care
kashish us waqt kuch bhi sochne aur samjhne ki halat mein nahin thi and soo jahan varun use le gaya woh wahan chali gayi....he took her to india....cremetion dad ne ki and jab woh pahunchi toh yeh sab ho chuka tha as use wahan se nikalne mein waqt lag gaya....she was completly shattered.......use toh pata hi nahin tha ki uski zindagi aisa roop dikhyegi.....aur itni badal jaayegi.....uske dad ka mansion aagaya and she got out of the car and mehak looked at her and said
M-well kashish yeh hai tumara ghar tum.....tumahare papa ka ghar chalo andar chale
aur woh apne naye ghar mein kadam rakhti hai...............varun and mehak made her a little comfortable but she wasnt comfortable an inch also as was completely blank and hollow from inside.................after 1 hr or so
V-well kashish birju kaka yahan hain hi agar tumhe kisi bhi cheez ki zaroorat ho toh dont hesitate to give us a call
K-mr grewal i want something
V-hey comeon tell me !!!
K-i want my dad...................................aur ek blank expression se usne varun ki taraf dekha joh bolne ke liye shabd dhoond raha tha
V-kashish i fink u shud rest birju kaka plz
BK-haan betaa aap jayiyee
aur woh wahan se chale jaate hain aur kashish apne jawab ka intezaar karte reh jaati hai....................................meanwhile varun and mehak reach the grewal house
    my family was sitting in the hall and i was talking with vroom abt my forthcoming concert and dad was walking restlessly and seeing the door after 2-2 seconds.........and then finally unhe varun aur bhabhi enter hote hue dikhee and dad went staright to them
V-hi dad
M-hii papa
A-varun mehak????????woh rishabh ki daughter kashish kahan hai.........
varun bro mujhe kuch confused se lage
V-dad woh apne ghar mein hai yahan kaise hogi
A-wattttttt
dad bahut hi gussa ho gaye achanak se aur phir varun bro par chillaye
A-varun i cudnt understand woh akeli ladki jisne apna baap kho diya us akele ghar mein kaise saans legi ....
mama joh mere paas beithi thi woh uthkar papa ke paas jaa kar khari ho gayi aur boli
P-anurag kya woh hi mr raheja ki beti................varun beta tumare papa theek keh rahe hai
A-maine rishabh ke antim samay mei yeh vaada kiya tha ki main uski beti ka khayal rakhungaa.............main main abhi use yahan lekar aata hoon yeh uska bhi ghar hai woh wahan akele nahin reh payegi
main us waqt vroom ke saath wahin betha tha jahan is puri vaardaat se mera pura pariwaar hil gaya tha i was steady like a rock and wasnt moving whereas vroom was paying much attention to the thing happening in front of him but was sitting besides me..........................aur jab yeh baat ki papa use yahan lekar aa rahe hain i got very angry and said rubbish in tendom
S-haan kyon nahin yeh ek ghar thodi hai ek dharam shala hai jahan koi bhi aa jaata hai kyon papa
A-sujal will u shut up woh koi nahin hai she is like a daughter for me ok soo plzz and prerna i am going to her place ok soo arrange one room for her ok byee
aur woh wahan se chale gaye aur main aur gusse mein jal gaya aur mama ke paas gaya
S-mama yeh kya hai arre kaun aa raha hai ghar mein papa toh meri baat sunte hi nahin hai who the hell is coming
P-sujal tu koi aisi baat karta hai jis par woh dhyaan de now listen mr rishabh raheja your father's best friend has paased away.........unhi ki ek luati beti kashish yahan aa rahi hai tu itna over react kyon kar raha hai
S-main over react this is hell............................waise bhi meri yaha sunta kaun hai chal vroom lets go yahan rukne se kuch nahin hoga
KR-haan bhai jaao aur 2 baje tak aajaana ok.............lekin ek baat kahun aapka concert aa raha hai practice kar leynaa ek baari basement mein jaakar plzz
S-kripa fanx for the advice aur practice karni hai yaa nahiin karni yeh main decide karunga ok
VR-yaar sujal tu chal aur atmosphere kharab mat kar ok bye aunty bye kripa
aur hum dono wahan se chale gaye seedha ek pub mein.....jahan sam and krish hume mile.........................mujhe waise hi gussa aaraha tha aur phir gaana bhi boring
S-hey dj comeon change the damn track kuch fast lagaoo (when i saw some persons seeing me and some gals approaching me i said) well guys and gals aaj aapka rockstar zara tensed hai soo plzz no auto graphs todayy.
aur phir main bar par jaakar baith gaya
SA-kya hua mr rockstar itne naaraz kyon hain
VR-well sujal ko naaraz hone ke liye koi reason ki zaroorat nahin hai
KR- haa good one vroom
S-krish shut up and btw i have a reason to be angry
VR-arre kuch nahin sujal tu itna heartless kaise ban sakta hai arre she is now completly alone in this world aur agar uncle uski thodi si madad kar rahe hain toh tu itna ro kyon raha hai.............plz grow up
i was abt to say something but again that stupid krish
KR-ooooo ladki sheee waise sujal ko kabse females se problems hone lagi.......
S-krish plzzz and btw theek hai madad karo but why she is coming in the house
SA-well i fink sujal tu overreact kar raha hai just chill
just then mera cell ring hota hai and i pick it up
S-hello
D-hello sir main deepak bol raha hoon ur concert's organiser
S-yes tell me
D-sir aap abhi tak delhi nahin aaye
S-ab mujhe delhi kyon aana..................ohhh omg i just forgot haan mujhe toh wahan ek show room ke inuagaration mein jaana tha damn hey i am off main abhi wahan pahunchta hoon
D-sir kal subhah hai aap raat tak yaha pahunch jaayiye phir inske baad aapko apna concert bhi promote karna hai aapka yeh week bilkul full hai soo plz hurry up
S-yeah yeah i knw i just forgot i am coming byee
S-vroom sam krish yaar i gotta go delhi jaana hai bye kuch clothes rakhne padenge and ticket bhi book karni hai soo bye see yaa take care
KR-hey sujal u go and pack main ticket book kar deta hoon
S-hey thats good bye buddy
aur main wahan se seedha ghar and then seedhe delhi........... jab main ghar pahuncha tha toh sirf prem and kasak the ghar par and i told them where i was going sooooo kashish is baaari bach gayi as i was flying to delhi for a week or soo

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Posted: 17 years ago
princess u and ur story rocks 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
KYA PYAAR KAROGE MUJHSE


main aur viz airport jaate hain and i fly to delhi for a week and uske baad papa jab kashish ke ghar pahunchte hain tabbbbb...............ek min ek min sujal why the hell narrating my part also now i am here??? mera intro kitna acha diya yeh mujhe dikh hi raha hai but ab main aage ki kahani khud sunaungi u wud be confined to your part ok sweeety jao delhi jao...........ok chill jaa raha hoon ok byee
haan toh uncle mere ghar aate hain main wahin hoti hoon jahan varun mujhe chod kar gaya tha woh dheere dheere mere paas aate hain aur main inki taraf dekhti hoon
A-kashish !!!
K-aa.....aap kaunn
A-bete main anurag grewal tumare papa ka dost...unhone zhikr kiya hoga
      main unhe pehchaan gayi thi but didnt know wat to do and wat to say nothingg.......maine apna sir neeche kar liya aur shayad anurag uncle ko aur uljhan mein daal diya......but after a min or 2 he said
A-beta main chahta hoon ki tum mere saaath mere yaani tumare ghar chalo........beta u werent here but tumhe nahin pata ki rishabh mera kitna acha friend tha........aur main tumhe akele is ghar mein nahin chod sakta comeon u have to come with me
     main thodi der chup rahi and phir i got up and said wiping my dry tears
K-buut uncle.....how........
     but i guess uncle bahut determine hokar aaye the
A-no beta tumahre papa bhi yahin chahienge..................plz beta meri baat par inkaar mat karo
     main completly indifferent thi us waqt waise bhi mujhe kuch samajh nahin aa raha tha but in the end anurag uncle won............ maine kuch der socha aur phir karti bhi kya uncle bahut hi zor daal rahe the.................isliye i agreed......mujhe sochte hue dekh mr grewal ne mera haath pakda aur mera saaman joh bilkul packed tha use liya aur gaadi ki taraf le gaye and then to his house
wahan mrs grewal, kasak aur kripa bahut hi tension mein beithi thi main enter karti hooon uncle ke saath by seeeing us they get up and mrs grewal comes to me....and apna haath mere sar par rakhar kehti hain
P-beta !!! chalo ab toh maan hi liya ki anurag ke paas convincing power hai beta tum abhi kasak ke kamre mein jaakar fresh ho jao main phir tumhe tumara room bata dungi kasak beta kashish ko lekar jao
KA-sure mama !! toh chale kashish
      main uske saath uske kamre mein jaane lagti hoon and uska non stop radio shuru ho jaata hai
KA-haan toh where was i..........toh i can call u kashish naa waise zyada diff thodi hai humari ages mein aur i will trouble u jab tak tum mujhe apni baare mein sab kuch detail by detail nahin bataogi and aur hum hall se uske kamre mein chali jaati hoon
     meanwhile in hall
P-anurag ek problem ho gayi hai
A-ab kya ho gaya
P-tum bhool gaye out house ki renovation ho rahi hai kashish wahan kaise rah sakti hai
A-wat !!!!!! oo haan main toh bhool hi gaya tha
A-haan toh yeh toh aur bhi achi baat hai woh ghar mein reh legi
KR-but papa ghar mein kahan
A-hey now dont tell me ki itna bada ghar bhi chota hai
P-nahin baat yeh nahin hai problem is this ki ghar mein rooms khali hain butt sujal ke corridor mein u also know ki use apne corridor mein koi nahin chahiye
A-arre kahin aur nahin hai
P-kaise hoga koi study room......koi relaxing room koi yeh room................koi woh room apke bete prem ne 3-3 rooms le rakhe hain ek mein woh sota hai ek mein padhta hai ek mein bhagwan jaane kya karta hai.........aur apki betiyaan toh........(kripa interupted)
KR-nahinn nahin bas mama papa samjh gaye papa sirf wahin hain rooms kashish sujal ke room ke side waale room mein reh sakti hai
A-now toh we dont have ne alternative lekin prem 3-3 kamre hmmmmmmmmmm sochna padegaa
kasak neeche aayi
P-kasak kashish kahan hai ??
KA-mama she isnt speaking a word juz washed her face.........she is very upset
A-chaloo use uska room dikhadoo...........mujhe kuch kaam hai main raat mein aata hoon
P-theek hai         &am p;nb sp;         &am p;nb sp;         &am p;nb sp;         &am p;nb sp;         &am p;nb sp;         &am p;nb sp;         &am p;nb sp;         &am p;nb sp;         &am p;nb sp; 
      prerna aunty entered the room where i was juz sitting on the bed     
P-kashish !!! beta chalo apna room dekhlo
      soo at last main apne room mein aagayi.........lekin us waqt bhi main bahut udaaas thi.......................woh din nikala.......doosra din aaya fir raaat hui fir din.......aur mera indifferent behaviour grewals ko pareshan karne laga.......aur paanchve din shaam ko hall mein jahan main toh obviously nahin thi becoz main toh apne kamre se hi nahin nikalti thi.............
A-haan toh kaisa chal raha hai sab kuch mera toh kaam itna bad gaya upar se varun bhi yahan nahin hai and sujal delhi mein 1 week ke liye kyon gaya hai use yeh nahin pata ki mumbai ke aas paas ke cities and towns mein zyada publicity chahiye phone bhi nahin uthata seriosuly is ladke ka toh main kya karoon.........
KA-dad fikar kyon kar rahe ho sujal bhai ki popularity bahut zyada hai mere college mein sab log sujal bhai ke concert ka hi intezaar karr rahe hain aur waise bhi aap bhi jaante hain ki sujal bhai sirf teenagers ko nahin har section of the society ko appeal karte hain so why take tension
P-kasak theek keh rahi hai but wat abt kashish !!!!! anurag she isnt getting out of her room...................lock rehta hai door.........naa ke barbar khati hai now is tarah se toh nahin chalega naa
A-kuch samjh nahin aa raha pata nahin kuch galat kaam naa kar bethe !!!!! prerna tum usse baaat kyon nahin karti u have to make her understand that there is a life forth her which she has to live
KR-yeah mama aap unse baat karien ek baari woh normal ho jaaye then we will make sure that ki woh kabhi udaas na ho
PR-newayz kuch bhi karo dad !!! mujhe aap aage ki education ke liye australia kab bhej rahe ho????
A-ohh haan, theek hai!!!! main dekhta hoon lekin prem tum jaa kyon rahe ho australia??? and prerna sujal se agar baat ho toh use keh dena ki plzz shehzada wapas aa jaye
PR-dad this isnt fair i want to have gud education so thats why ??? now plz mujhe australia jaana hai it means jaana hai
A-ok ok main dekhta hoon prem
P-main zara kashish ke pass jaa rahi hoon
     main apne kamre window ke pass khari hui us suraj ko dekh rahi thi joh khud jal jal karr hume roshni de raha thaa aur ab dheere dheere apna kaam karke neeche jaa raha tha....... jab aunty andar aati hain
P-kashish !!!!!
K-aunty aap kya baat hai !!!
P-dhlate hue suraj ko dekh rahi hooo
K-haan aunty main yeh dekh rahi thi ki jal jal kar yeh apna kaam karta hai hume roshni deta hai
P-(smiles) kashish sahi kaha jal jal kar hi sahi but apna kaam apna farz toh nibha hi raha hai kyonki bhagwan ne yehi kaam diya hai toh tum kyon apna farz nahin nibha rahi ho
      is baat par mere chere par ek muskurahat aati hai
K-mera kya farz hai??
P-jeene kaa
K-wat
P-kashish !!!!! jab ishwar hume yahan bhejta hai naa toh humare kuch farz hote hain.............aur aisa hi ek farz hota hai jeene ka.....
P-beta zindagi yuni ek band kamre mein nahin guzaari jaati tume aaye hue 5 din ho gaye and tum is kamre se bahar nahin nikali kyon ??
K-aunty bas yuhi mann nahin karta
P-beta mann lagta nahin hai mann lagaya jaata hai tumhe......tumhe office join karke use sambhalnaa chahiye becoz u r needed
K-aunty main papa ko nahin bhool paa rahi aurr..........
P-kashish tum samjhne ki koshish karo ek kamre mein band ho kar kya tum unhe bhool jaogi u have to indulge yourself in diff works apneaap ko aise khatam mat karo plzz
K-aunty main...........nahin
P-now chup ek dum chup tujhe kya lagta hai ki tujhe apna bhala bura pata hai nahin i know that now joh main kahon tujhe wohi karna hoga understand
K-but.......aunty aap yeh kyon nahin samjhne ki koshish karti ki main...........................
P-kitni ziddi hai!!!!!!!! kashish meri baat sun tere saamne teri puri zindagi padi hai aur tu khud bata tu jis tarah jii rahi hai kya bhaisahab ko acha lag raha hoga unki aatma ko shaanti mil rahi hogi
      i looked upto her with a blank expression
P-beta kuch baatien aisi hoti hain jin parr hamara bass nahin hota and now u have to enjoy your life your age your youth u have to see the world which is waiting for u au rab aage teri marzii
     aur woh wahan se chali jaati hain mujhe aur confusion me daalke........
KR-mama kya hua koi baaat bani
P-well jaisa ki mr bajaj kehte the kaaafi ziddi hai
K-nahin aunty itni ziddi bhi nahin hoon
     yup !! i came down waise bhi aunty ki baat bheje mein ghus hi gayii
P-arre kashish tum neeche
KA-kashishhhhhhh omg !!!! tum neeche aa gayi thats gr888
    mujhe toh kasak se darr lagta tha................non-stop radio thi
K-ahh haan socha ki apne desh 5 saal baad dekh lun and kuch kaam kar lu
P-beta i am glad that u are thinking so anurag kaafi khush hoga !!!!! and kashish yeh prem kasak and kripa hain see inhe handle karna aaasan nahin hai but still u have to........
K-actually aunty i was thinking ki ab mujhe apne ghar jaana chahiye becoz.............
KA-no wayz mere hote hue tum kahin nahin jaa sakti
KR-haan kashish see its simple and clear dad wont allow u yaar pehli baari dad ke rules kaam aa rahe hain..........
P-wiase kashish !!!!!!! dimaag mat chala kyonki woh tera ulte direction mein hi chalega
K-butt main yahan...................
P-shut up !! kashish now seriously dekh tujhe yeh samjhna chahiye ki abhi tujhe idhar hi rahena aur usse bhi badi baat yeh tera hi ghar hai and now main samjha samjha ke pagal ho gayi hoon tu chup chap se yahin rahegi
K-ok ok main yahin hoon
PR- ohh thats cool theek hai toh kaam tum baad mein karna pehle zara mumbai ki kashish yaani mumbai ka attraction toh dekh lo dear sisters take her to HELL
K-wat ..........hell !!!!
KA-well 1st of all bhai am i mistaken tune kaha ki kaam baad mein
PR-wat a PJ !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! kashish hell is a pub and a very very gud pub personally my fav..........
K-ahhh pub well main......
KR-dont tell ki tumhe pubs ache nahin lagte becoz woh toh hum maanne nahin waale
K-well i think i will go

HEREZ THE NEXT PART......DO COMMENT Edited by lklk - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
KYAA PYAAR KAROGE MUJHSE   
    
    the cup of life is juzzz come
now is the time dont never stop
u shud hav known god is the strong
u shud hav gone rite till the top
the feeling in your soul is gonna take control
nothing can hold u bac if u really wantt it
i can see your eyes...........u wanna the cup of life
nothing can hold u bac if u really want it
do u really want................do you really want it
here we go alle alle alle go go go alle alle alleeee
coz nite is still dark.............we gonna celebrate
the cup of life alle alle alle
PR-hainaa cool place kash
K-yes !!!! actually i was habitual to the pubs of london.......but this place also rocks
KA-yeah !!! chalo lets go on the dance floor
     waise sach mein woh place bada hi acha tha and wahan humne itna enjoy kiya ki aate aate 2 baj gaye rite sujal ka fav time ghar aane ka newayz sab so gaye the sooo we 4 entered like thieves and straight went to our respective rooms............so ab main apne kamre mein thi and remember mera rooom sujal ka side waala room the sooooooooooooooooooo janab !!!!! total full i mean complete drink ho kar ghar mein aaye andddd aage sujal do the needful>>>>
    <<<<yes !!! haan soo main bhi delhi se toh aagaya but straight krish ke ghar drink karne chala jaata hoon soo now i am bac with my trembling feet and an unstable mind to home andd
S-wow!!! aaj sab soo gaye chalo acha ab main bhi straight apne kamre mein jaakar soo jaata hooon but quietly and softlyy
   i entered the room and without going newhere seedha jaakar bed par pad gaya and apne haath dono taraf strech kar liye and anddd ek bahut hi pyaari si aawaz sunayi deti hai....jii haaan nashe mein main apne kamre mein nahin balki kash ke kamre mein jaakar uske bed par soo raha tha and us par hi haath rakha hua thaa......and hona kya tha she shouted at the pitch of her voice..........kaunnnnnnnnn haiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii<<<< ;<
    >>>>>acha toh kya karti tumhe gale se laga leti...........ek toh itni achi neend aa rahi thi and tumm bhiii.......jaise hi ek haathi jaise haath ne mere gale ko block kiya meri aakhen khuli aur ek ladke ko maine bad par apne parallel payaa i got up in a second and waise hi andhera tha toh kuch nahin dikh raha tha and sooo i shouteddd
K-kaun haiiiii !!!! whose it abhi bataoo warna security ko bula dungi who the hell u r get up
S- aah sweety autograph baad mein abhi dekho naa main soo raha hoon
K-ohh god shut up and get up nowww.........ok tum aise nahin uthogee
    >>>>>haan aise toh utha nahin soo maine ek pyaara sa dhakka dekar ise neeche gira diya and then he realised ki koi gadbad hai
S-ahhhhhhhhhhhhhh !!!! maar daala oyee kaise ladki ho mere hi ghar mein aakar mere hi bedroom mein mujhe hi bad se neeche gira rahi hoo (pauses) oyeeee wat the hell are u doing in my bedroom out outt
K-ayee !! shut up ek toh chori upar se seena jhori wat the hell are u doing in my bedroom
S-haa haa tera bedroom oye chorni tu hai mere ghar mein aakar mujhe hi.......
K-u rascal scoundral duffer idiot
S-ayye aayee break maar............waise gud !!!!!! padi likhi lagti hai cool
K-tum is kamre se jaaane ka kya logee
S-hmmmm apne kamre se hi nikalne ke liye maiinnnn ek kiss loonga de doo naa
K-uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu kaash kuch mere haathon mein hota main tumhe abhi aur isi waqt maar daalti ek min milgaya
S-haa woh pillow..........ouch oyee aahh ruk ohh
K-bahar nikal abhiii.............nahin toh abhi toh yes pillow waqt aane par kuch bhi ho sakta hai nikal bahar
    >>>>waise toh yeh nikalne hi waala tha but ek problem ho gayi mera paer fisal gaya and main is dumbo ke upar nahin zameen pe gir gayi becoz duffer beech mein se hat gaya.......
    <<<<haan main hat gaya and bechari seedha floor par ekdum flat...........
K-ahhhh meri naak
S-haa haa sujal se uljhogi toh aisa hi hoga now this is high time mere hi kamre mein aakar mujhe hi maar rahi ho..............thats it now get up and out warna mein security ko bulakar tumhe bahar kardungaa..................saala tum girls mein yahi problem hoti hai thodi si lift de do bas na jaane kya kya soch kar beith jaayengi ki................waise bhi i know i hav an appeal in teenagers and young gals but itna nahin ke main unhe ghar mein.................no, gals ko kabhi seriously nahin lena chahiye
    >>>>>>>ab toh mera gussa aasmaan chu raha tha and mujhe is sujal ki shakal se bhi nafrat hone lagii and i got up and tishhhhhhhhhhhhhhh !!!!!!!!! zor zhatka zor se hi laga jii haan ek thapad
    <<<<<<ohh man us waqt it came to me as a shock...........and i was boiling with anger but time par kripa aagayi.......and usne light on kari aur us waqt i was too surprised to say nething when i saw kashish......man!!!! she was sooo beautifull.......omg !!!! shayad se usi waqt usne toh mere dil ke darwaaze par dastak dii thi but i was too unaware of nething and developed a hate-hate relation with her
    >>>>>>>> waise frankly speaking mujhe toh yeh pehli nazar mein ek spoilt brat laga jiski ek well maintained body thi ek mindblowing chehra tha and us chere par ek pyaara sa lal gal tha and i liked that red thing the most........
KR-yeh kya ho raha hai and bhai u came (kripa comes and hugs me)
K-wattttt kripa lagta hai tumne bhi pii lii hai tum ek chor ko apna bhai keh rahi ho
S-is ki toh mainnnn........
KR-bhai bhai !!!!! wait kashsih yeh koi chor nahin hai he is sujal grewal the rockstar arre yeh mere bade bhaiya hain my sweet bro
K-ahhh wait kripa baaki sab kuch samajh aagaya but sweet word ki beizhaddi mat karo plzz
S-kripa mujhe samjh nahin aa raha is ki problem kya hai
K-main batati hoon ki meri problem kya hai agar aap nashe mein mere kamre mein aakar mere hi bed par ek haathi ki tarah pad jaayenge aur apna bhaari bharkam haath mujh par rakh denge toh kya main bhi aap par haath rakh kar so jaaungiiiiiii..........u idiot raat ke 3 baje u woke me up duffer
S-oyeee gaaliyon ke alwa kuch aur bolna aata hai and tera kamraa kaisa kamra ek toh mera jaw terha kar diya iski toh kimat tujhe bharni hi hogi
KR-now will u both shut up bhai yeh aapka kamra nahin hai aapka kamra.......well chaliye main hi dikha deti hoon.......and kash sorry yaar bhai hain hi aise thode se short tempered hain plzz forget it
K-sure kripa ladkiyoon ka hi toh sahara chahiye inhee
S-uuuuuuuuu.......................i wont leave u tumne mujhse dushmani lii hai sujal grewal se bahut hi mahenga padegaa
K-haan woh toh hai mahenga toh padega akhir market jaakar relispray laani padegi meri tooti naak and toote haath ke liyeee uuu juzz get out plzzz
S-i wont leaveee uuuuu...........oye kripa dheere see
   <<<<chalo akhir main apne kamre mein aajaata hoon
KR-bhai i finkk this is the limit aap kisi se bhi is tarah ladayi kar lenge
S-kripa woh mere ghar mein is waqt aur waise bhi yeh hai kuan
KR-yeh ohh godd remember papa rishabh uncle ki daughter ko yahan laane ki soch rahe the yeh kashish hai kashish bajaj
S-omggg !!!!!!! dad lekar aaye hain main toh ise ghar ke bahar feinkne ki soch raha tha kal subhah hote hi
KR-haan feink dena peeche peeche papa aapko feink denge now gud nite plzzzzz byee
S-hmmmmmmmm gud niteeee
    <<<<mujhe toh bahut achi neend aayi us raat apne kamre mein wapas aakar but kash ko shayad se neend nahin aayii kyon kash
   >>>>well yes mujhe neend nahin aayi becoz i was very furious and i was burning like a furnace.......newayz phir subhah hui and as usual sujal had a gud hangover and sar ko pakde yeh seediyoon se neeche aa raha tha and main upar se neeche jaa rahi thi...........ek file ko dekhte hue and we collied
S-ahhhhhhhhhh shit man !!! ab kaunn..........oh noo not u again
K-u !!!!!!!! tum kabhi apna khyal khud nahin rakh sakte koi kya hamesha chahiye raasta dikhane ke liye
S-look juzz shut uppp ok.............mujhe hangover hua hai and i have to 1st set up my head and then i hav to rehearse as my concert is coming
K-watever woh hangover meri wajah se toh hua nahin hai agar kam peete toh nahin hota and plzz now movee pata nahin din kaisa jaayega tumahri shakal dekh li
S-ohhh yeh baat mujh par bhi imply hoti hai.............
    <<<<<seeing the two of us fighting like cats and dogs mama came up and said
P-now yeh ho kya raha sujal kripa ne mujhe sab kuch bataya hai look kashish's anger is justified
S-ahh jesus !!! comeon mama be reasonable koi gunah nahin hua hai mujhse ki is maharani ke kamre mein galati se chala gaya
K-rahene deejiye aunty.....
P-no akhir yeh apne aap ko samjhta kya hai kya hai yeh bhagwan hai kya tameez naam ki cheez nahin hai
S-mama kya subhah subhah bhashan start ho gaya plzzzz
P-sujall
   >>>>ehehe second thapad meri entry iski life mein badi zor dar hui bechare ko doosra thapad par gaya
S-mamaaa............
P-chup ek toh waise hi subhah se mujhe tujh par itna gussa aa raha hai ek kaam hai tere paas reharse kar liya kar but nahin parso hai tera woh concert and tune kya practice ki hai batayega
S-maine practice ki hai
P-acha theek hai bata kaun kaun se gaane hain tere concert mein
S-haan welll aahhh aam main bata raha hoon ek min ahhhh
    >>>>>mujhe us waqt badi hansi aa rahi thi ek bacha sa lag raha tha aur aunty use daant rahi thi and akhir mereko hansi aa hi gayi
    <<<< meri itni beizaddi ho rahi thi ek ladki ke saamne lekin main bhi helpless tha....mama ke saamne meri nahin chalti lekin jab maine ise hanste hue dekha i got uncontralable and had a gud blast
S-bas mama bas bahut hua aapko kya lagta hai ki main kuch nahin kar raha well dekhte hain woh concert agar hit nahin hua naa toh aap mera naam badal dena
P-suree ab jaa mujhe tere papa bula rahe hain move !!
S-haan toh jao naa mere upar se jaogi kya
P-sujal sudhar jaa tera kuch nahin hoga ek din tujhe yeh ehsaas ho jaayega
     <<<<aur yeh kehkar woh wahan se chali jaati hain and kashish mujhe tease karna start kar deti hai............ahhh !!!!
K-waise kujal acha rahega naaa........u know ganda paani eheehe
S-main tujhe nahin chodungaaa uuuuuuu.........nahin isko baad mein dekhunga pehle rehersal karle sujal nahin toh sach kujal......no wayzzz basement mein bhaag
    <<<< main bas jaa hi raha tha but vroom aagaya
S-ohh fank god tu aagaya hii buddy wats up
VR-nothing aur oyee kya koi disease ho gayi hai
S-nahin kyon
VR-toh yeh gaal itna lal kyon hai ??
    <<<< mujhe kuch yaad aagaya tha aur vroom ko bhi yeh hi poochna tha maine jhat se apna haath wahan rakh liyaa
S-kuch nahin tu chal yaar mujhe thoda bahut reherse karne de chal lets go and reherse waise bhi ek baar yehh concert theek chala jaaye phir kisi se revenge lena hai
VR-revenge kisse
S-miss kashish bajaj se newayz tu chod lets go
VR-ok
COMING UP : sujal ka concert and kashish ki meeting kisi se

WELL THATS IT FOR THE 4TH EDITION PLZZZ GUYS COMMENT PLZZ PLZZZ
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Posted: 17 years ago
KYA PYAAR KAROGE MUJHSE
RECAP : sujal and kashish's first meeting......and fight and sujal's red cheek and sujal's anger
     >>sujal and vroom went.....and i am in my room and getting ready to go to my office when kripa prem enters
PR- hii
K- ohh hi prem
PR- soo going to the office
K- yup.......tum kuch kehnaa chahte ho
PR- yeahh actually i wanted to say that tum sujal bhaiya ko galat samjh rahi hai
K- well i fink that main use bilkul theek samjh rahi hoon.....he is egoistic arrogant ill-mannered im-matured indegistable....u know wat he is toooo big for his shoes
KR- rite but tum ek baat miss kar gayi.........and that is he is difficult to understand
K- huh !!! watever listen mujhe koi shok nahin hai usse dosti karne kaa..........wait a min mujhe aisa kyon lag raha hai ki tum dono yeh chahte ho ki main usse maafi maangu ??
PR- well not maafi but a friendship hand plzzzzz
KR- plzzzzz becoz is ghar mein woh tumhe shaanti se toh waise bhi nahin rahene dega soo raai ka pahaad kyon banao juzz chill and dosti kar lo
K- well prem kripa i am getting late byee
     >>and i left......yaar it was unbearable for me even to fink abt that sujallll
PR- oyee hello where she went ise pata bhi hai ki iska office kahan hai
KR- arre yaar both are too big for their shoes gr88....
PR- newayz kripa dont worry joh kuch hoga theek hogaa and lets leave for collage...kasak ko bula lo
KA- i am ready lets go
    >> mujhe neeche aunty milti hain
P- kashish beta going to office gud very gudd
K- yes mama subhah uncle ke saath discussion ke baad i thought ki aaj office chali hi jaaun
P- kashish ek baat woh subhah and raat mein joh sujal ke saath huaa......woh darsal aisa nahin hai but thoda sa nahin infact kaafi kiddish hai ziddi bhi hai sooo dont misunderstand him
K- hmmmmm !!! pata nahin now toh i will give it a thought newayzz aunty byee
P- byeee betaa
   >> juzz then uncle enters the house
A- kashish chalo main tumhe office chod deta hoon aur staff se bhi milwaa deta hoon come
K- ohh thats soo sweet of u uncle thankz chalein
A-sure
   << yahan kashish sweetness ko lekar beithi thi and wahan main rehearsal mein pagaal ho raha tha....vroom toh hotel chala gaya apne andd mujhse rehearsal nahin ho rahii........lekin tab bhi it was going finee.....lekin kashish mere sar par chadi hui thi pata nahin kyon but ek choti si baat ki wajah se i wasnt able to concentrate.......kashish kashish kashish was all overr
   >> i reached the office aur uncle ne intro bhi karwa diyaa every thing was fine but thingz said by prem kripa and aunty were piled up aur mujhe raasta nahin mil raha thaa.......i was juzz thinkingg
K- kyaa main use samjhne mein galati kar rahi hoon....lekin he is suchhhh an egoistic person....mujhe usse maafi maangni chahiye.....ofcourse not main kyu he entered my room......but mera kamra bhi toh uske side waala tha and woh piiya hua tha......theek hai but usne mujhe tang bhi toh kitnaa kiyaa.....main overreact toh nahin kar rahi.......joh bhi saari uski galati hai......phir subhah subhah aunty se bhi use thapad pad gaya mujhe use thapad nahin maarna chahiye tha i think i am overreacting.....ohh rubbish i am bilkul sahi in this case........finee main usse maafi maangugii i think i hav to do this.....wattttttt kabhi nahin main kyu woh bhi toh maafi maang sakta hai......ohh goshhhhh i will go mad like thiss
    << kashish was damn confusedd....lekin i was kaafi clear....i was returning home with all my friendzz..and in the car
VR- sujal tu kuch kashish ki baat kar raha tha naa who is thiss and tu itna gussa kyon thaa
VI- oyee hume bhi toh bata yeh kashish kaun hai
KR- yaar confusing name karish....no ka-sh-ish
S- krish u r a looser ek naam bhi theek tarah se nahin bol sakta newayzz yaar woh mere dad ke dost woh bajaj ki beti hai kashish bajaj.........god !! us ladkii ke paas jitni khoobsurati hai utna hi attitude hai....but seriously i am going madddd
    << then i explained everything to them wat wat happened
VI- interesting !! soo wat next sujal tere chehre par toh mujhe expressions kuch theek nahin lag rahe
VR- sujal i think pure scenario pe galati teri 75% hai sooo kuch karr mat maafi maang
    >> listening that i stopped the car
S- wattttttt hav u gone nuts vroom bhool jaa maafi and me dont match
KR- ismein koi doubt nahin hai but plzz tu car chala ghar jaakar tujhe riaaz karnaa hai
S- ritee krish newayz juz forget it
VI- sujal ek baat toh hai tujhse ulajh gayi....cool i mean i wanna meet that gal
S- mil lega ghar hi toh jaa rahe hain mil jaayegi............but ek baat toh hai that gal has something in her........maza aayegaa ise sabak sikhane mein
VR- shut up will u tu kuch nahin karega arre tu uski side par khara hoke dekh uska aise react karna justified tha but u toh seriously are over-reacting...........
VI- oyee chod naa vroom take it easy acha bata naa sujal how does she looks...and etc etcc
KR- viz yaar achi hi lagti hogi sujal is impressed by herr kyu buddy
S- not impressed but mere dimaag pe kaafi acha khasa impact daala hai....in simple words i am kinda liking to dislike her got it guys
VR-(smiles) tu confused hai...........tujhe khud samjh nahin aa raha hai ki tujhe uske saath karna kya chahiye loosen up the screws of your knees sujal zyada mat soch warna kahin dard naa ho jaaye and u will suffer with joint pain in an early age
S- well vroom thankzz for that lovely advicee chal ghar aagaya lets go to the basement me will practice ok chalo guyss
   >> i also reach the home but after a while....and still that much confused but still i got to a decision that i will apologize....i enter the house and see kasak there
KA- ohhhh !!!! hiiiii kashish soo office kaisa raha
K- hi kasak....arre yaar office acha tha i am kinda realizing my reponsiblites
KA-(laughs) oops kashish bacha bada ho gaya
K- nahin yaar newayz where is your sujal bhayiyaa
KA- ohh bhai yaar woh toh basement mein honge actually concert aa raha hai naa soo he must be practising u can go and meet him
K- fanx tu kya mujhe raasta dikha degii
KA- sure chall
   >> i finally reach the basement and see sujal with 3 other boyzz i 1st think and then enter when kasak leaves
   << i was doingg janaabeaali janaabeaali.......yaar song practice kar raha thaa when kash entered i didnt notice as i was facing the other side but my friendz did
K- aahh (pauses) sujal
   >> i didnt pay attention to his friendz...and juzz kept waiting for sujal to turn around.....
   << my friendz saw her aur dekhte hi rahe.....they were completly stunned by her mere presense....i finally turned
S- kaun hai practice mein beeeeeeeee..........................
   << i saw her.....and vroom also bas ghoor hi raha tha.....woh bhi waise jaise saamne koi insaan nahin alien khara hai.....love angle banne se pehle hi love triangle ban gaya......meri kismat....newayz kash aur paas aayi and then finally she said something
K- ahh...sujal actually i was juz thinking thatt
S- that maine galat kiyaa and mujhe maafi maangni chahiye and vroom stop staring her plzz
VR- maine kya kiyaa
S- tu bina kuch kiye hi bahut kuch kar raha hai stop staring krish se kuch seekh woh neeche dekh raha hai
VI- woh neeche dekh nahin apni chain dhoond raha hai idiot and vroom u continue
   >> mujhe iske dostt kaafi idiotic lage the and laga kahin sujal par sangat ka asar tha yaa un par sujal ki sangat ka asar thaa
S- and u kashish ritee naa yeh hi naam hai naa ohh sorry agar galat hai newayz i dont care tumara naam yaad rakhun bhi kyon
K- break maar theek kaha mera naam kashish hii hai ab tum mujhe woh bolne doge joh main yahan bolne aayi thi
K- (closes eyes and in one breathe) sujal i am sorrry plzz forgive me
S- saans leynaa bhool toh nahin gayi........maafi maangi hai yaa commentory di hai
K- huh wat do u expext me to do waise bhi 75% galati toh tumari hi thi tab bhi i am apolozing....but u r a real snob
KR- hey tum bhi 75% vroom tune bhi toh 75% hi kaha tha naa wow wat a co-incidence
K- wattt
VR- ahh juzz leave him thoda pagal hai aap kuch keh rahi thi
S- nahin main kuch keh raha hoon
K- look mr grewal aap chahte kya hain ki main aapke pair paroon gigigaayon wat the hell do u want
S- yeh hi joh tumne abhi kaha
K- fine i am leaving it was a big mistake joh main yahan aayi damnn
VR- no no juzz hang on wait.......arre sujal aisa hi hai he has forgiven u kyon sujal
S- ab tu keh raha hai toh theek hai i have forgiven u
VI- hey thatz gudd chalo ab hum sab bhi friendship ke clean hands mila lete hain wat say
KR- yeahh ccoool idea
K- well i hav..............
VI- ohh comeon kashish aisa aajtak nahin hua ki sujal ne kisi ko maaf kiya ho badla lekar hi raheta hai thatz news ki he forgave u
K- huh
S- wat huh he said it well
VR- ahh chalo sujal shake hands with kashish chal
K- ahh god knows ki main ek dost se haath mila rahi hoon ya ek galati karr rahi hoon
S- haan abhi aayega woh bhaggu upar se tumhe yeh batane
VR- hii main vroom hoon sujal ka bahut hi close friend
K- vroom kyu i mean aisa naam
VR(smiles)- well haan logic nahin hai but actually me and sujal race on bikes and i alwayz win and i hav a craze for speedy motorbikes soo they call me vroom....and peishe se i am a hotel owner
K- ohh gr88 hi kashish bajaj
VI- hii viz here mere naam ka bada hi simple logic hai mera pura naam hai virendraa roopkumar pratap singh and thatz why i hate my name isliye VIZ soo call me this....i am a property dealer
K-(laughs) omgg kyaa naam tha newayz hiiiiii....
KR- hey u missed out hii i am krish mera naam krish hi hai and i hav a export import company
<< we all shaked hands but krish ke saath kash ko prob thi
>> yeah i had a prob with krish pata nahin kyon but pehli nazar mein hi mujhe ek idiot se kam na laga i was seriously avoiding shaking hands with him but dumbo did it and me
K- huh ab haath dhona padegaa
KR- kuch kaha
K- nothing....ok guys u continue i am going upstairs soo bye take care
S- ek min scores arent leveled
VI- gosh yeh phir se start ho gaya
K- ab kyaa
S- u slapped me ritee i wanna slap u tab hi toh scores leveled honge
KR- yeh dekh ladki pe haath uthayegaa
K- tum pagal...................ok fineee hit me ek baar i wanna juz close this chapter
   << when vroom saw me approaching he backed me
VR- pagal hai kyaa why are u streching thingss
S- chup me wanna hit
K- maine maafi maangi hi kyun
   << well iske saamne aaya toh main seriously maarne hi butt pata nahin kyaa ho gaya mujhe isne toh as usual aankhen band kar li thi and i came close to her cheek and gave a kiss....and isne aakhen kholii
K- watttttt uuuuuuuuuu
   << every1 was surprised except me
   >> tab toh mujhe ise sach mein maarne ka mann kiya tha
S- now thats more painful kyu miss kashish bajaj scores are leveled
K- i wont leave uuuuu
S- kyu ab tumhe scores level karne hain kya u r welcum
K- uuuuuuuuuuuuu rrrrr sickkk
VR- agar nahin hai toh ho jaayega newayz kash u leave warna bharoosa nahin hai iskaa
K- byee
   << when she left i asked vroom
S- oyee mujhe kya hone waala hai
VR- loveriaaa i am dead sure
S- shuttt upp
VI- pooor kashish
S- hav u guys gone madd aisa kuch nahin hai i knew ki yeh kiss zyada chubegi use i knew newayzz yaaar mujhe riyaaz karne doo........janaabeaallii janaabeaalii nahin yeh sur theek nahin tha dekha mera concentration khatam kar diyaa.......
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there is just one change in my story and that is the narration wud be singal not double......i am extremly sorry abt that but plzz bear with me.....the narration wud be simple......as i have to devote a lot of time for the double narration

RECAP: sujal and kashish's friendship with the power 4 plus kashish's anger istead of cooling down rises to a diff level.
    kashish leaves and sujal again tries to concentrate......kashish apne kamre mein pahunchti hai and......uska dimaaag ek pressure cooker ki tarah ho chuka hai.....
K-wat the hell does he thinks of himself......maine bahut badi galti di usse dosti karke....aur uske dost uski tarah and woh krishh....(pauses)omggg i shaked hands with him......maine haath nahin dhoye.....(and goes to the washroom)
meanwhile in the basement......sujal was still stuck on jaanebeaali and cant find any sur.......kyonki saara dhyaan and hosh kashish apne saath le gayi thi........but nevertheless he was trying hard......vroom was avoiding eye contact to viz and krishh and finally he said
VR- guyss koi prob hai why the hell r u staring me
S- lo !! main yahan apne sur dhoond raha hoon.......aur waise bhi vroom main tujhe kyuu ghoorrungaa.......main pagal hoon kyaa.....joh ek ladke ko ghoorunga...haaan staring game toh tu khel raha tha jab yahan woh kyaa naaam thaa kashish haan woh yahan thi
vroom ka face ekdum puppy jaisa ho jaata hai
VR- maine kab kaha ki tu ghoor raha hai and plzz kashish ko tum sab apne dimaag se nikaalo and btw sujal maine toh uski koi baat ki hi nahin tu hi hai joh pehli mulakaat bhula nahin paa raha
   now joh viz and krish vroom ko stare kar rahe the woh sujal ki taraf mud jaate hain
S- god !! guyss give me a break........and waise bhi use maaf bhi maine teri hi khaatir kiyaa hai ok soo juzz chill
VI- yaar sujal accept karr tujhe use bhulana mushkil ho raha hai......
KR- guyzz plzz use practice karne do and i fink ki late ho gaya soo kal milte hain ok
   all agree and woh baat adhuri reh gayi and sujal ka jawaab bhi adhuraa reh gaya
NEXT TO NEXT DAY (THE CONCERT DAY)
sujal for a change woke up early in the morning....aur sab neeche hall mein beith kar baatien kar rahe the
AN- soo sujal are u all sett ??
S- well........y..yyess daaad
KA- bhai why r u soo restless
S-(thinks) haan agar sirf janaabeali pe concentrate kiyaa hai toh rest kaise loon
S- nahin aisa nahin hai kasak i am fine
AN- u hav to be becoz bahut hi zyada paise lagaye hain
S- yes dad i know ek hi toh baat aati hai aapko karni paison ki thats it
P- sujalllll !!! plzz (pauses) newayz........arre kashish beta......uth gayii
   sujal mud kar dekhta hai kash ko seedhiyoon se neeche aate hue but aankhon mein dono ke sirf nafrat hoti hai but ek doosre ko hi dekh rahe hote hain.......kashish neeche hall mein aati hai.....
K- gud morning everyone
   every1 wish the same to her and sujal uthta hai
S- mama main vroom ke hotel jaa raha hoon wahan se phir mujhe krish ke saath concert ki site par bhi jaana hai toh main nikalta hoon
K- and aunty mujhe bhi aaj jaldi office jaana hai nahin toh phir main late naa ho jaaunu
AN- very gudd beta !!! aise hi focus se u can achieve something gr88 going
S-(thinks) waah main bhi toh focus hi dikha raha hoon itni jaldi 10 baje main ghar se bahar nikal raha hoon concert ke waqt toh main bhi serious hi raha hoon but mujhe kabhi appreciate nahin kiyaa damnit aur ise toh hameshaa hi...........mera toh naseeb hi kharab hai
S- mamaaaa kyaa main jaaun
P- nahin ruko
S- kyaa haii
P- agar tum vroom ke ghar jaa hi rahe ho toh kashish ko bhi apne saath le jao iska office usi raaste mein padta hai........soo both leave the house at once
S- wattttttt
K- butt aunty i.....main khud bhi jaa sakti hoon
KR- nahin kashish think thats a very gudd idea
S- tu chup karr kripa tujhe kuch nahin pata
P- haan toh mujhe bahut kuch pata hai infact maine toh itna bhi suna ki kal aap dono kaa patch up bhi ho gaya soo wats the prob
S- butt patch up ho gaya toh iska matlab yeh nahin hai ki yeh meri car mein
AN- kyu teri car ki front seat pe aajtak koi ladki nahin beithi
S- dad plzz
K- well !! actually hum dono ne patch up kar toh liyaa lekin hamari friendship zara alag dhang ki hai i mean jitna hum dono alag rahenge utna hi acha hogaa.........thats the 1st rule of our friendship
S- well tumhe theek kehte hue main marr raha hoon but i fink u r ritee
P- fine !! ab agar tum dono isi waqt ghar se bahar nahin nikale then tumhe nahin pata ki mera 1st rule of punishment kyaa hai
S- main tayaar hoon chale kashish
kashish was amazingly surprised sujal ek sher se chuhaa kaise ban gayaa
K- auntyy !!
PREM- arre kashish samjha karo jab ek sher ek chuha ban jaaye naa toh samajh lena chahiye ki usne aisa kadam soch samjh ke hi uthaya hoga tum mama ko nahin jaantii
KA- rite kash !!! go at once and byee hav fun.....enjoy each other's company
K- hmmmmmmm !!!!! chaloo
   sooo dono bahar jaate hain.........
AN- prerna tumne itna force kyu kiyaa
P- becozz my dear hubby main chahti hooon ki kashish sujal ke saath rahe becoz kashish hi aisi pehli ladki hai joh sujal ke saame paani nahin hoti warnaa ladkiyaan toh iske saamne behosh ho jaati hain......kashish hi ise sudhar sakti hai
KR- lekin mama kashish khud hi itni sudhari hui hai ki kyaa kehne woh kya bhai ko sudharegi ???
P- juzz see.......wait and watch
   meanwhile.....outside....kashish dabi dabi hansi hans rahi thi and sujal ko daba daba gussa aa raha thaa.....aur woh seedha car ke andar chala jaata hai bina kashish ke liye car ka door khole..........and kashish gussa ho jaati hai but she sits in the carr and......
K- manners aate hi nahin hain yaa dimaag manners ka naam sunte hi dimaag do not distrub ka board bahar laga leta hai taaki kuch andar jaaye hi naa
sujal use gussa bhari nazar se dekhta hai and starts the car with a jerk and speeds it from 0 to 100 in 5 seconds
K- woooooooo !! yeh mumbai hai.......micheal schumi ke ghar ke aage ki road nahin joh tum itni slow chala rahe hoo
   but sujal apne gaane ki practice kar raha tha....aur use avoid karne ki koshish kar raha tha
S-(thinks) paathshala song hai na......thodi si practice kar le......
naa koi padnewaala.....naa koi seekhne waalaa
meanwhile kashish car ke idhar udhar dekh rahi hoti hai and bore ho rahi hoti hai soo finally she switches on the radio.......
S- talli hokar girne se samjhi humne gravity
isse pehle ki humpe hansti raaat...................wattt kassshiiiiissssssh juzz shut down tatt radioooooooooo
K- wattt juzz shut up kitna acha song hai
   sujal stops the car and gets out
S- tumahre song ki aisi ki taisii bahar nikaloo
he pulls kashish outt and starts shouting on the road.....aur woh bhi wahan jahan backward classes ki locality thiii
S- oyee tum subhah se mujhee bada gussa dila rahi ho
K- watt kyaa hai haath chodo mera (and then she realizes the situation and sees ppl around who are looking at them) bachaooo bachaaoo
S- huh !! oyee yeh bachoo...............(he is interupted by a very very well built man....who has a ht of of abt 7 ft.........having very broad sholuders....and very gudd muscles)'
he is holding the hand of sujal noww
S- ohh ahhh !! oyeee haath chodo tumhe pata bhi hai main kaun hoon
THAT MAN- haan badi achi tarah se tu wohi chokraa hai naa joh stage par gala phaadtaa hai....lekin iska matlab yeh nahin hai ki tu ek chokri ke saath aise zabardasti karee
S- zabardastii !!! kaunsii zabardastii maine kuch nahin kiyaa aur waisee bhi tu kaun hota hai yeh hamare aapas ka maamla hai
M- acha toh phir apne ghar mein solve karo naa....khulli sadak pe woh becharii (kashish gives a smile) madad maang rahi hai aur tu keh raha hai yeh aapas ka maamla hai
K- pehle inhone mujhe zabardasti apni car mein bithaa diyaa aur phir bahar kheenchaa pata nahin chahte kyaa hain
S- hey bhaggu !! kitnaa jhoot haii yehh......and bhaisahab aap mera color chodengee plzzz
M- nahin ab toh tu mujhse pitega hi
S- kyaaa dekhooo main nahin ab tum pitoogee mujhse
   kashish thodi si worried ho gayi use pata tha ki sujal ka koi chance nahin thaa....and she wanted to stop the one sided fight
S- aaj main batata hoon ki main kis cheez ka bana hoon
   the man moves forward to hit sujal.....and kashish who was at the left of both of them takes a step ahead and lands in a ditch and looses balance and..................tishhhhhh........kuch khaas nahin lekin woh bhari haath joh sujal ko padne waala tha woh kashish ke pyaare se gaal par pad gayaaa............andd shee shouted her stomach outt
S- omgg (laughs like an insane) main apni life mein bahut hi stupid situations mein pada hoon lekin iska koi match nahin thank you bhaisahab ab yeh bechaari sach mein bechari ho gayi
K- tum aaaaahhhhhhh !! leave it mujhse bola nahin jaa rahaa sujal tum car mein beithogee
S-(still laughing) okk lekin pehle aapko toh beitha dun
after making kash sit he turns on to the guy and says
S- aapki koi galti nahin hai ladkiyaan hoti hi aisi hain byee
M- woh toh shukar hai mera haath kam ghooma tha aur use galat angle se laga warna tohhh.............
S- haaann warnaaa tohhhh (laughs)
   and then besides dropping kashish to her office sujal was soo lost in laughing that he straight away dashes to vroom's hotel
K- yeehh kahan
kashish se bola toh jaa nahin raha tha aur bahut hi low pitch mein bol rahi thi...and sujal full teasing mood mein tha
S- kyaa kashish darling mujhe sunaayi nahin diyaa
kashish looks at him in anger and goes out and enters vroom's hotel and is followed by sujal
   she enters the hotel and vroom who was on the reception sees her and is over joyed.......plus viz and krish also see her who were sitting in the hall
seeeing vroom kash smiles with pain and goes upto him
VR- hiii kashish........omgg yeh kyaa ho gaya yeh gaal godd chalo kuch medicine laga lo lekin itni tezz maara kisnee
KR- ohh ohh ohh yeh toh wohi gaal hai naa jispe sujal ne kiss kiya tha
VI- heyy bhagwann !!! yeh ladkaa hai yaa kasaii.......kashishh krish ke haath lagane se tum haath dhone chali jaati hoo but sujal ke kiss karne par toh skin disease ho gayii u shud hav taken a bath
sujal who juzz joined them again started laughingg.....and then tells all of them the whole story sitting in the barr.......and sujal...viz....and krishh started laughing like mad ppl but vroom looked a little tensed and kashish was burning in anger
S- yeh dekho majnu ko acha nahin laga ki uski laila ko lag gayii
K- shut up
VR- kashish tum mat bolo zyada dard hoga
    meanwhile krish who was sitting in front of kashish looses a little balance and by mistake touches kashish's hand
VI- loo ho gayi problem
kashish gets up at once
S- kash washroom udhar hai wahan haath dholo (again starts laughing)

THE CONCERT'S NITE AND THE CONCERT HAS ALREADY BEGUN
   sujal is dazzling on the stage and ppl are going madd..............meanwhile his friendz and kashish are enjoying it......from the back stagee
janaabeali janaabeali
aa milaa le aa milaa lee
aa milaa le milaa lee tu mila le meri taal se taal se taall
janaabeali janaabeali
bawariyaan joh hai mera haaal wahi hai tera haal
tu milaa le mere haal se haal se haal
janaabeali janaabeali
shayar hai dil shayari mil jaaye toh baat ban jaaye jaaye jaaye jaaye jaaye jaaye
ohhh aashiq hain hum aashiqi mil jaaye toh rang khil jaaye jaaye jaaye jaaye jaaye jaaye
bawaariyaan bitee naa yeh saal aisa hai mera haal....
tu mila le mere saal se taal se taal
janaabeaalii
BACKSTAGE
KR- gr88 this concert is going fantastically well sujal rocks.....practice zyada ki bhi nahin tab bhi he is making ppl go ga ga over him
VR- rite sujal is truly a rockstarr
VI- waise kashish tumara kya kehna hai hamare rockstar ke baare mein
K- main kuch kehne ke layak nahin hoon
AT THE STAGE
finally 3 ghante tak chalta hua concert end huaa logon mein jaan aagayi unkaa sujal ke liyee pyaar ek nayi unchaayii tak pahunch gaya
S- well friendzz aaj kaa concert hamesha ki tarah mere dil ke kareeb raha.....u ppl rock maine har jagah concerts kiye hain but aamchi mumbai ka koi jawab nahin u really rock u r the rockstars of the country nott i............keep loving me and i will never let u down
   he was abt to go backstage and ppl were abt to leave but he again comes on the stagee
S- ek baat maine aap sab ko nahin bolii......woh yeh ki aaj main aapke saamne gaa paa raha hoon woh sirf ek insaan ki wajah se..........my jaw was bound to be broken today but its becoz of that person today not my jaw but her jaw is broken.........(he is laughing from inside) hats off to her
AT THE BACKSTAGE
kashish after listening this smiless a little and mumbles-he is really mad....... Edited by lklk - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
KYA PYAAR KAROGE MUJHSE   

RECAP: sk's fight......and sujal's concert........and now aage
   BACKSTAGE
sujal after that succesful concert was signing his fans' autographs when kashish came...............
K-(thinks) waise wat the hell am i doing here........waise bhi ise autographs sing karne do.......
she turns back........and was abt to leave when sujal came forth her
S- helllo !!! bina autograph ke kahan bhaage jaa rahi thii
K- nahin i am not interested in your autographh
S- haan kyu hogi maharani jii hamare jaise kaneeez ke autograph ke liye interested aap ke liye toh personally tom cruise aayenge autograph dene
K- finee i am goingg
but juzz then sujal holds her hand....very tightlyy
S- autograph toh deke hi rahungaa
   and takes out a pen and signs on her forearm......aur phir ek jhatke se haath chod deta hai leaving a confused kashish......and turns and humss a song
S- zara jhoom jhoom zara jhoom jhoom zara jhoom jhoom zara jhoom.............dekho maine tumhe apna bana liyaa (kashish looks at him)bhaii jis par sign kar diyaa woh cheez apni (smiles) bye kashish see u in the house tommorow yahin mat khari rehna confused banke.............................and leaves
kashish turns to see him go.........uske chehre par ek ajeeb sa sawal tha
K- yeh itnaa sweeet kaise ho gayaa........(but then again like a confused soul............she rethinks)naa sweeet kahan huaa zabardasti sign kar diyee.......and he called me a cheeez
kashish toh wahan se chali jaati hai ghar and sujal apne doston ke saath vroom ke hotel ke bar mein
KR- sujal i saw wat u did in the bacstagee
VI- even i saw that...hmmmmm kyaa baat haii
S- bilkul abhi toh sirf baat hi kyaa hai.........juzz wait and watch (smiles like a devil) btw where is vroom
VI- wohh i dont know....shayad ghar chala gaya ho
S- kyu jahan tum dono the wahan woh nahin tha
KR- naa woh toh show ke baad hi chala gaya tha but he was very happy that the show went well
S- hmmmmmmmmmm challo newayzz lets celebrate guyss CHEERSS !!!
NEXT MORNING..........10 am........BREAKFAST TABLE
P- kasak beta kashish kahan hai
KA- shes sleeping mama..........pata nahin sujal bhai ki bimaari unko lag gayi hai.......woh sone lag gayi hain and yeh uthne lag gaye hain
S- tu kitnaa bolti hai.....radio waale dekhlenge toh sponser kar lengee
P- sujallll.............
AN- acha haan beta prem tumhe austratlia jaana tha further studies ke liye maine saare intezaaam kar diye hain u can leave in 3 days
PR- fantastic dadd u r the gr8est i love youuu fanxxxxx
S- chalo bhai mera khaana ho gayaa mama main nikalta hoon mujhe room mein kuch kaam hai
P- sujal room mein jaa raha hai naa........toh zara kashish ke room ke door par knock kar diyoo atleast uthe toh sahii
S- but mama.......(pauses) ok kar dungaa...nething for my gorgeous ma
he leaves and kashish ke kamre ke saamne hota hai.....he knocks aur uske haath ke dam se door joh unlocked tha woh khul jaata hai......
S(remembers his scool teacher)- sujall kabhi kisi se bina puche uske room mein enter hogee !!!!!!
but he enterss
S(thinks)- hmmmm yaar kyaa faraq hota hai ek boy aur girl ke kamron mein i mean sirf ladke ke jhoote side mein theek tarah se nahin rakhe hote hain idhar udhar pade hota hain.........ladke ki study table par PC........girl-friends' phone list ki dairy hote hain itnee saare papers toh nahin hote naa hi koi personal dairy hoti hoti hai.........ladke ki elmiraa hamsha thodi si disoragansied rehti hai(opens her elmira) itni organised nahin hoti.......ladke ka bed..........(he sees kashish sleeping like a baby in her bed......and cudnt utter a word)
he goes upto her side table and sees a abhishek bachchan's photo derr............he picks it up.........and kashish's eyes open
K- uuuuuuuuuuuuuu !!!!!
S- arrre relaxx mama ne tumhe jagane ko kaha tha isilyie tumhe jagane aaya tha
K- aunty ne kaha tumhee..............toh mere sar par kyu khare ho side ho and keep that dear photo down
S- heyy chill itna bhadak kyu rahi ho.............rakhdii aur haan main jaa raha hoon and neeche aajao kumbh-karan ka female version mama bula rahi hain
K- fineee !!!!
he leaves but again comes bac and asks
S- btw kashish do u like abhishek
K- ofcoursee !!! i love him he is my favourite......he rockss
S- bas bass me understood
K- ayyee kyu poocha
S- milwaaungaa naa usse tumhee
   kashish gets excited
K- watttttt
S(laughs)- tum ladkiyaan bhi naa...........aise hi generally pooocha chill main itna nahin karne waala woh bhi tumahre liyee
K- haan ok i understood now get lost
he leaves............
EVENING.......
kashish office se wapas aake ghar mein ghus rahi thi jab use sujal saamne hi mil gayaa
S- hiiii miss kashish
K- hii mere saamne mat khare raho
S- u like abhishek naa
K- yaar kyaa moti buddi hai samjh nahin aataa
S- ok fine toh chalooo
holds her hand and pulls her out of the housee and to his car........and drivees at his normal speed
K(in an angry tone)- tumhe zabardasti ke alwa kuch aata hai kahan jaa rahe hainn hum
S- aur tumhe bak bak karne ke alawa kuch aata hai chupp aur plzz lemme drivee
K-arrrggg
   sujal stops the car in front of a hugeeee hugee bungloww
S- chalooo andarr
K- yehh kiska ghar hai !!
S- arre pata chal jaayega chalo naa andarr
the security salutes sujal........and he takes kashish's hand and takes her inside the bungloww and then in the hall.............the hall had huge wall hangings.....amazing art work was done....the light work was brilliant.........the hall was shining like a star.......kashish ki aankhen charo taraf ghoom rahi thii..........sujall quitely went outt...........and a heavy deep voice interupted kashish
THE VOICE- hmmm miss kashish
kashish turned around and to her amazement it was none other than abhishek bachchan...............kashish stood still.......without ne movment use samjh nahin aa raha tha woh kaise react kare and finally abhishek shook her
AB- hiii miss kashishh
K- aaa....aaa.......aaappp......aabbh...abhiiiisheeekk......... ......omg !!! i cant believee itt
AB- hmm rite now i cant believe your beauty and grace....u r looking extremly gorgeouss
K- omg........thankzzz a ton aapne mujhe sundar kaha meri toh lifee ban gayiiii.......(pauses to take a deep breath)waise main aapki bahut badi fan hoon
AB- yeahh jaanta hoon sujal ne batayaa.....btw plzz come and sitt
K- sure........lekin sujal ne
AB- haan darsal to tell u the truth u r very lucky aise toh koi bhi nahin mil paate apne favourites se.........sujal mera bahut hi acha dost hai jab usne tumhare baare mein batayaa toh main use naa nahin keh saka and ab sochta hoon acha hi kiyaa warnaa itni khoobsurat ladki ke side mein beithne kaa muaka kahan miltaa
   kashish was blushing........use kuch nahin suj raha thaa ki yeh sach hai yaa sapnaa
K- abhishek i became mad for u after i saw dhoom u rocked in that movie
AB- yeah thats common aapne hi nahin puri india ne yehi kaha hai
   finally kashish came out of the house after 1/2 an hr and saw sujal who was lying on the bonet of the carr stood...........she came running towards himm
K- ohh sujaalll tumhe main bata nahin sakti aaj main kitni khush hoon omggg i am over the mooon u know wat he complimented me 2 timess omggg thankzzz a lot sujalll thankzzzzzz thankzz
sujal was listening and seeing her excitement when suddenly she hugged him...........and he smiled and said
S- hmmm toh isko kehte hain over excitment control warna doc bhi tumhe compliment de dega chaliennn wapass
K- mann toh nahin karr raha but chaloo
S- godd tum ladkiyaan bhi naaa...........lets go
THAT NIGHT (BOTH ARE IN THEIR RESPECTIVE BEDROOMS)
sujal was lying down............and talking to someone on the phonee
S- nahin sweety abhi kahan main yahan bahut tension mein hoon
THE VOCIE- whyyy
S- aise hi yaar tujhe pata hai ki sujal kaisa hai kabhi kabhi faltoo mein tension le leta hai
TV- hmmm waise sahi kaha.......acha haan concert kaisa gayaa
S- arre fantasticc.....bahut hi bhadiyaa......teri wajah se hi yaar tera hi naam lekar toh main har imp kaam karta hoon........
TV- u r suchh flirt but i like u as u r
S- hmmmmm woh toh (stretches himself)
TV- waise aajkal kya chal raha hai tumari life i am sure something interesting is there
S- arre ANJALI............u know mere saath toh hamesha hi kuch interesting hota hai......waise yaar tum australia se wapas kab aa rahi hoo.....ek tum hi toh ho jiske baare mein main sochta hoon......u know that u r special to me aur tum toh ek baar aus gayi aur wapas hi nahin aa rahi
AN- arre jaan i will come bac soon abhi toh nahin but haan kuch 7-8 months mein aajayungiii pakka..........ohh my balance is getting over i will talk to u later byeee take caree
S- byeee jaan love yaa
   sujal puts his cell on his side table and goes to sleeep
and the focus shifts to kashish's room where she is lying on her bed........holding abhishek's photo and looking onto the roof of the room and thinking
K- oh goshh main kitni lucky i literally talked to him for half an hr.............and all thankz to sujal.....(pauses and turns keeping the photo on the table)kyaa maine use galat samjhaa........naa theek hi samjha tha but phir usne mere liye aisa kyu kiyaa.........mujhe usse poochna hoga subhah.........chal kashish kaafi raat ho gayi hai sojaa...........gudd night abhishek
    she swithces the light off and sooon sun wakes up IN THE MORNING
vrooom enters the hall where he meets kripaa.......and kripaa is over-joyed to him and thats why she doesnt notice the look of vroom's eyes as if they wee looking for thier ultimate destination
KR- hiiii vrooom wat a pleasant surprise
VR- ohh hi kripaa surprise kahe kaa mera sujal ke ghar aana and uska mere hotel anaa kabhi surprise nahin ho sakte
KR(smiles)- waise tum yahan kaise
VR- bass zara aise hi sujal aurr kashish se milne aaya tha
KR- kashish !!!! ohh tum bhi uske friend ban gaye kyaa
VR(blushes)- yeahh guess so hum dost ban gayee........
    kripa witnesses the spark on vroom's face as soon as he heard the name kashish........and vroom also noticed that kripa noticed that
VR- btww kripaa ur looking very beautifull
kripaaa's doubting face suddenly changes into a brimming face with happines.........and sujal listens it and comes down
S- ayee vroom stop flirting with my sis.....newayz hii kripaa gudd morning bachaa
KR- kyaa bhai why bachaa sirf 1 saal hi toh choti hoon......
S- toh choti toh hai naa chal collage jaa
VR- hii vroom oyeee aaj main kaafi relaxed hoon toh chal kuch maza masti kar lete hain waise bhi aaj sunday hai
KR- haan thats why aaj collage nahin hai newayz i hav to prepare for examz i am going byee vroom and bye bhaii
VR- byee sweety !! newayz oyee sujal yaar sorry kal raat thoda jaldi hi chala gaya
S- no problems
K- hii guyss !!
S- hii miss talktive
VR- hii kashish and talktive ????
K- huhh !! leave him vroom........
S- yeah leave me newayz vroom kyu chode tum chodo naa oyee vroom lets go naa enjoy karte hain
VR- yeaahh chalte hain ruk naa kashish why not u also join us
S- nowayzzz
K- well vroom main actually.........
VR- no nothing comeon chalo..............................................

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Posted: 17 years ago
KYA PYAAR KAROGE MUJHSE
kasak enters the scenario
KASAK- hiii all chalo me ready
SUJAL- tu kahaan ??
KRISH- sujal ise maine bulaya hai i thought she wud enjoy
VROOM- gud the more the merrier
KASHISH- ok main bhi chal rahi hoon soo lets go
SUJAL-(thinks) ab aayegaa mazaa (and gives a devilish smile)
they all go towards their bikes and then the prob occures
VIZ- damn meri bike ke tyre ka punchar ho gayaa
SUJAL - dont worry chill krish wud go with kasak u come with me
VIZ- no wayzz tu itni fast chalata hai ki nahin bilkul nahin vroom main tere saath beith jaau
VROOM- lekin main kash ke saath jaane waala tha
SUJAL- toh woh mere saath aajaegi ok now chalien theres no time
kashish sits behind sujal soo cautiously that shes trying her level best not to touch him
    on the way.......all the 3 bikes are speeding up......but sujal was trailing behind
SUJAL - agar aap apna balance theek karein toh main apni speed theek karun
KASH- u r driving nicely aise hi chalao
sujal increases the speed.......in a jerk and kashish was abt to fall backwards but grabs sujal's waist
KASH- wat was that
SUJAL- speed kehte hain ise jiska naam bhi tumne nahin suna hoga
KASH- sujal plz dheere chalo road itni achi nahin hai
SUJAL - damn woh dono kitne aage nikal gaye i hav to take a shortcut
KASH- nooooo u mean isse bhi ghatia sadak plzzz
SUJAL - chup (and starts singing a song) u r such a coward
KASH- noo i am not and stop singing
   sujal takes a turn and even more lonely road comes
KASH- yeh kaunsi jagah hai ??
SUJAL - pata nahin lekin we are very far from mumbai now yaar comeon naa enjoy kuch nahin hoga aur dekho naa badal ho rahe chilled hawa chal rahi hai kitna acha mausam hai enjoy life ka doosra naam hi khatra hai
KASH-(smiles) jii main samjh gayi bas aapki bike ko kuch naa ho jaaye
SUJAL- u bet kuch nahin hoooogaa(pauses) gr888 puntar ho gayaa
kashish gets down and speaks angrily
KASH- maine kya kaha thaa aur ab hum kya kareinge stupid
SUJAL- chup kuch sochne do
KASH- is par toh koi aayega hi nahin hum kisse help maangege
meanwhilee
KRISH- kasak zara peeche dekhna sujal dikh raha hai
KASAK- nahin kahin nahin hai
KRISH- oh godd
stops the bikee......seeing krish vroom also stops the bike
KRISH- yaar sujal and kashish nahin dikh rahe
VROOM- watt !!! aise kaise............1 min 1min dont panic arre sujal peeche reh gaya tha duffer ne koi shortcut le liya hoga woh destination pe mil jaayega
VIZ- are u sure vroom kyonki yahan kaisa shortcut....let me try his and kash's no.
KASAK- signal nahin hai kisi ke bhi cell mein
VIZ- chalo chalte hain shayad vroom theek keh raha hai
KASHISH- sujall stop pacing down the road yaha koi nahin milega
SUJAL- toh kya tumari tarah kismat ko dosh dun i hav to do somfing
KASH- as in like i wanna know that something sujal barish hone waali hai
SUJAL - i know wait kahin kuch toh hogaa
    har jagah sirf jungle hi tha it was looking as if the road was made in b/w the forest.......kashish had a horror look on her face and sujal was with a tensed look........in fear kashish crawls close to sujal who didnt notice it
KASH- sujal mujhe darr lag raha hai
   suddenly thunder strikes.........as if it is raging black and white.......
and kashish screams and hides her face in sujal's jacket and hugs him tightly
sujal was completly taken aback
SUJAL- arre tum itna darti ho badalon ki awaaz se c'mon kuch nahin hoga
   kashish slowly leaves sujal
KASH- tum toh kehe jaa rahe ho kuch nahin hoga kuch nahin hoga kuch hogaya toh ?
SUJAL- is situation mein sirf ek cheez possible hai.......pyaar
kashish who was close to him after listening this she suddenly looks into his eyes and their eyes get locked......after a while sujal bursts into laughterr
SUJAL- gr88 tum ladkiyaan bhi naa maine toh aise hi kaha ki mausam bada romantic hai
KASH- ha haa very funny
SUJAL- ok jokes apart ek kaam karte hain jis direction se hum aaye hain usi direction mein chalte hain shayad koi mil jaaye
KASH- ok chalo
    they takes a 100 steps and rain starts pouring down at a lightening speed
KASH- nooooo isi ki kami thi ek toh sunsaan raasta upar se jungle aur ab baarish
SUJAL- gr88 me like rains
KASH- well woh toh mujhe bhi pasand hai lekin not here ab hum kya karienge.......theres no shelter nothing and sujal badalon ki wajah se andhera bhi ho raha hai
SUJAL- yaar itni tension mat do main tumhe dekh paa raha hoon tum mujhe dekh paa rahi ho..........andhera not a prob
kashish juzz looks at him and his logic and tries to figure it out but gets nothing

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Posted: 17 years ago
KYA PYAAR KAROGE MUJHSE
VROOM- damit barish ho rahi hai ab kya faida viz lets go bac
   and stops the bike for turning
KRISH- kya hua ??
VIZ- yaar its raining.........kisi aur din chalenge abhi lets go bac yeh barish rukne waali nahin
KASAK- but bhai and kashish woh ???
vroom now gets angry
VROOM- sujal toh hai hi pagal aur kashish bhi uske saath chali gayi ab kya karen pata nahin kahan hain dono lets hope ki woh ghar pahunch jaaye aur kyaa
KRISH- toh kyaa aise hi bagar unke wapas chalene
VIZ- krish stop worrying soo much they are grown-ups they will come bac woh apna bhala jaante hain
vroom laughs
VROOM- u bet sujal nahin jaanta
they turn and go bac leaving the duo on their destiny
meanwhile
KASH- baarish ruk nahin rahi hai aur ab mujhe thand lag rahi hai tum kisi kaam ke nahin ho sujal
SUJAL- arre main ek singer koi sadak pe ghoomta begger nahin jise shelter ki jagah pata ho i know baarish tej ho rahi hai aur we are helpless
   sujal sees kashish shivering and goes up to her
SUJAL- kashish chill itni tension mat lo
KASH- chill hi toh ho rahi hoon tumhe kya lagta hai i am boiling....plzz kuch karo naaa (she holds his jacket's collor)
SUJAL-(holds her hands) ooo miss kashish meri wajah se nahin ho rahi yeh baarish.....ek min(looks around towards teh forest and then to his watch) yaar 4 baj rahe hain aur aisa lag raha hai ki 7 baj gaye hain......lets do one thing thoda sa jungle mein chalte hain yahan se toh better hoga kahin shelter le lenge
leaves him
KASH- watt tum pagal toh nahin ho gaye ho andhere mein jungle mein no wayzz
SUJAL- arre is jungle mein koi janwar thode hi honge
KASH- kyu tumhe pata hota hai ki tumare vansh kis jungle mein hote hain
SUJAL- ohh shut up(holds her hand pulls her towards the rite hand side of the road and towards the jungle)
KASH- ok fine i am coming now dont pull me
after a while.......
KASH- sujal kitna chalenge har jagah ek saa hi hai...aur mujhe bahut darr lag raha its soo horrible
SUJAL- tum fikar mat karo jab tak main hoon nothing wud happen
though kashish remained confused on this statement too but a sense of security was born in her and she moved more close to sujal
SUJAL- hmmm lets see maine yahan aake bewakoofi toh nahin ki
kashish moves far from him
KASH- duffer wat do u mean
SUJAL- arre mujhe laga ki kahin toh kuch milega joh hamare kaam aayega but yahan toh
    kashish with a disappointment kinda look.........looks back and about a 100 yards sees a extremely large banyan tree
KASH- sujall i fink it wud help us
SUJAL-(turns)yippee yes yaar it wud help uss kyaa bada piedh hai
they both hurry towrds the tree......its branches and its body was spread over a huggeee hugee area and its bark was undoubtely very thick........uski teheniyaan uske patte......paani zyada toh nahin rok rahe the lekin it was surely a blessing in disguise for the duo.....they came under it
SUJAL- fab kuch toh baat bani its cool kyu kashish
KASH- yeah for sure but dekho naa kitnaa puraana hoga yeh peidh it must be 100 yrs old...........wow i havnt seen such a thing in my life
   sujal sits taking the support of the branch..........and out streches his hand
SUJAl- come sit ab bhi khade hi rehna hai
KASH-(smiles) beith rahi hoon
kashish sits keeping a good distance from sujal who was juzz not bale to sit
KASH- hav u got ants in your pants why arent u sitting
SUJAL- not ants in my pants but surely outside
KASH- watt ????
    both get up
KASH- ab yeh jungle hai yahan tumhe apna sofa toh nahin milega naa
SUJAL- but tab bhi
KASH- waise bhi baarish ki wajah se koi bada insect nahin aayega ab yahin baithna toh padega naa wat can we do abhi sirf 7 hi baje hai raat hai abhi toh aur jiska mujhe darr lag raha hai
SUJAl- mujhe dar lag raha hai mujhe darr lag raha hai........darr ke alwa koi feeling lao naa
KASH- as in like......chup karo aur beitho
dono phir se baith jaate hain this time sujal comfortable lagta hai and he lies down streching his body........and starts humming a song
kashish looks at him and song which was without music without proper sur makes her as comfortable as the song of a niteangel makes comfortable the tired refugeees..........she smiless.....and finally after enjoying the song for 10 mins she speaks
KASH- sooo sujal music is your passion your love
SUJAL- nahin its my job........passion mera(pauses) well yes u can say ki woh mera passion hai lekin pyaar nahin leh sakta kyuki i dont know the meaning of this overhyped word LOVE
   kashish laughs
KASH- hmmm woh toh mujhe bhi nahin pata i hav never fallen in love....tumara toh kitno ke saath affair rahe honge....tumhe kabhi nahin laga ki yes this is the girl for me
SUJAL- naaaaa (with a carefree look) woh affairs toh bas aise hi ki kabhi kabhi dare hota tha toh kabhi kabhi i wanted that gal to be on my side......pyaar toh kisi se nahin hua saari hello hii tata bye bye waali hi thi...main kabhi bhi unke baare mein nahin sochta tha naa tab jab main unke saath hota aur naa hi tab jab main akela hota tha toh aisi koi feeling aayi hi nahin u say tumare kitne affairs...and dont tell me ki london mein rehte hue u didnt hav ne affairs and relationships
kashish laughs....and picks the leaf which juzz came down due to the force of the water coming from the heavens above
KASH- hmmm main deny nahin karungi ki mere affairs nahin hue but those all were passing affairs me never serious plus i maintained that distance whcih u never maintain
sujal gets up and laughs
SUJAL- kaafi achi tarah se pehchaan liyaa mujhe
   again the duo's eyes get locked.........and a thunder did the job of a devil..........it disturbed them and like alwayz kashish got scared
KASH- sujall mujhe bahut................(sujal interupts)
SUJAL- darr lag raha hai yehi kehna cha rahi ho naa
KASH- nahinnn mujhe bahut bhook lag rahi hai i am damn hungry
SUJAL- yaaaar ab main kyaa karun juzz shut up aur sone ki koshish karoo plzzzzz
KASH- how dumb mujhe bhook lag rahi hai toh main soo kaise sakti hoon
SUJAL- yaaar toh madam main kya karoon...mujhe itni bhook nahin lag rahi
KASH- haan haan kaise lagegi ek haathi ki tarah breakfast joh khakar aaye ho
sujal searches down his 7 pockets and gets something
SUJAL- yeh loo kuch toh mila kha lo
it was a medium     a     ; aAZX packet of temptations (chocolate)
KASH- fab isse kya hogaa
SUJAL- arre kuch toh hoga khalo plzz raat kat jaane do phir kuch dekh khoonga kya karoon tumhare liye now eat it
   kash takes that chocolate and unwraps it and starts eating
SUJAL- good girl atleast maani toh and again starts singing a song
tu hi meri shab hai subhah hai
tu hi din hai meraa
tu hi mera rab hai jahan hai
tu hi meri duniyaa
tu waqt mere liyeee main hoon tera lamhaa
kaise rehega bhalaaa hoke tu mujhse judaa
o0oo0o0ooo0o0o0o0o0o0o0o0o0o0o0o0o0oooo
KASH- wanna eat this
opens his mouth....and kashish feeds him..but then suddenly realizez and slowly removes her hand...and sujal without noticing that enjoys the chocolate and singss

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Posted: 17 years ago
KYA PYAAR KAROGE MUJHSE
raat ke 9 baj rahe the aur sujal and kashish wahin us peidh ke neeche beithe hue the.........barish kam ho gayi thi par ruki nahin thi.......charoon taraf sirf aur sirf andhera tha ab toh sujal ka logic bhi nahin nazar aa raha tha naa hi woh kash ko dekh paa raha thaa aur naa hi kashish use.......sujal was lying down and singing a 100 songs and kashish was juzz sitting besides him and enjoying the songs sung by sujal but she was really very scared........she had a fear that an animal might come.............when ever thunder striked she screamed disturbing the sweet envirnonment made by sujal's voice........
SUJAL- kashish mera andaazaa hai ki tum abhi bhi beithi hui ho arre sougi kab jab subhah ho jaayegi aur waise bhi hume neend ki zaroorat hai naazane kal kya ho
KASH- lekin sujal mujhe seriously bahut darr lag raha hai.....
SUJAL- ohh thank god darr lag raha normal hai warna agar nahin lag raha hotaa toh mujhe shak hota ki tum kashish hi ho yaa nahin
kash hits sujal with her hand quite nicely....
SUJAL- aap so jaayengii plzzzzz i beg u
KASH- fine lemme try.......
kashish lies down....again maintaining a quite nice distance from sujal and soon slept.........on the really uncomfortable bed of rotten leaves.....fresh leaves small small branches.......stones....and not to forget it was all wet......par tab bhi dono ko neend aagayi...
meanwhilee vroom,viz,krish,kasak reach sujal's home
they enter with their helmets and all wet and see prerna and anurag
PRERNA- yehh kyaa !!!! hmmm jao change karlo
VROOM- aunty woh toh hum kar lenge but sujal and kashish hain
ANURAG- woh yahan kaise honge woh toh tumahre saath hi gaye the naa toh tumhe pata hogaa
KRISH- watttttttttttttt woh yahan nahin paunchee damnn ab kyaa karein
PRERNA- kyu kyaa baat ho gayii
VIZ- auntyy darsal wohh baat kuch aisi hai naa.........and he explains the wholeee thing without missing a single thing
ANU- yek kyaa bachpana hai......tumhe uske saath hi rehna chahiye
VIZ- uncle actually woh aise hi ek doosre se aage rehne ki koshish.........aur woh dono bhi toh bade hai we thought woh apna bhala bura jaante honge ab hume kya pata tha ki woh shortcut lenge
prem enters laughing
PREM- u bet sujal bhai nahin jaante
VIZ- gr888 ab toh me also betting woh nahin jaanta
    krish sees anurag and prerna getting very tensed
KRISH- arre aap log itni tension mat lee we will wait till morning aur agar nahin kuch pata chala toh we will inform police
VROOM- hmmm shayad yeh hi theek hogaa
NEXT MORNING
it was a beautiful morning..a beautiful morning in true sense..B for beautiful E for exciting A for addorable U for unique T for tender I for irresistible F for fresh U for unusual and L for lively...............
sujal was sleeping with both arms outstretched and on one of the arms was lying kashish's head which was finding good comfort on that arm............a sparrow came and sat on one of the lower branches of that tree and sung the waking tune for sujal
he opened his eyes and tried to strech both his hands but then saw kashish soo close to him........and unintentionally his hand moves and kashish opens her eyes...
KASH- ahhh............oh gud morning
SUJAL- hmmmm i thought tum chillaogi.........
KASH- kyuu ?? kya ho gaya
SUJAL- nahin kuch nahin gud morning
   both get up and stretch their bodies and see the fantastic surroundingss
SUJAL- omgg it is indeed beautiful
KASH- yeahh and ab kya karna hai
SUJAL- karna kya hai chalo wapas chalte hain subahh ke........7 baj rahe hain woww subhah ke 7 aur sujal grewal's eyes open gudd
KASH- arre tumhe pata hai kya ki kis raaste se jaana hai
SUJAL- haan tumari tarah nahin hoon chaloo
   they both start walking....with sujal leading and kashish following........waise sahi kaha tha sujal ne he knew the way and they reached the place where the forest was cut by that road...............
SUJAL- aahhh wat a relief i am able to see my bikee fasttt
   he holds kashish's hand and runs towards his bike but he gets close he sees abt 3-4 men roaming around his bike........as if they all are searching somebody
KASH-(kashish stops sujal) sujal wait dekho woh itne saare aadmi kaun hain aur woh tumari bike ke aas paas is tarah kyu ghoom rahe hain
SUJAL- kashish ek min chalo toh sahi lemme ask them these peeps are making me angry
    sujal and kashish dono jungle se nikal ke bahar aaye aur sujal leaving kashish goes up to those guyss
SUJAL- aye aise kya dekh rahe ho kabhi koi bike nahin dekhi kya
1 MAN- oyee shaane zyada uchal mat tu hi hai naa sujal
SUJAL- haan koi shak
another very strong and muscular voice came from behind sujal
VOICE- sujaal !!! lagta hai ki tu kuch bhool gaya hai
kashish in confusion looks at that man who said this and sujal listening these words turned........and was shocked to see that man who was sitting in a toyota corrolla wearing a black dress with goggles.........and sujal seeing him moved closer to him
SUJAL- ishaan bhai toh yeh aapke aadmi hai........
   he gets up from the car and looks at sujal with utter hatred
ISHAAN- dekhh boss ne kaha hai ki jab tu saara paisa nahin chukayega tab tak hum tujhe nahin chondge aur yaad kar tune kaha tha ki tu 17 tak saara paisa luata dega aur aaj hai 18........toh aaj yaa toh tu paise de de yaa apni zindagi ko alwida keh de
   the anger on sujal's face soon changed into worry and fear.........
SUJAL- dekho abhi main itni badi rakam kaise dun aur aapko bhi pata hai ki dad ko mujh pe shak ho gaya tha....toh isiliye mujhe paise nikaalne mein problems ho rahi hain lekin is baari mujhe bas ghar pahunchne do phir main aapke saare paise lauta dunga.......plzz meri bhi toh position samjho naa....(pauses) ek min aapko kaise pata chala ki main aapko yahan milunga
ISHAAN(smiles)- sujall tere har ek kadam pe nazar hai hamari samjhaa aur haan ab tera koi bahana nahin chalne waala tujhe paise dene hi hongee
   kashish wasnt able to understand nething.......she cautiously walks towards sujal looking at the men who were staring at her...she gives them a disgusting look....and reaches close to sujal...and holds his arm
ISHAAN- hmmmm yeh kaun hai ???ohh ohh main bhi kitna bewakoof hoon kaisa sawal hai apne gayak sahab ke saath toh ladkiyaan hi milengii
after hearing this kashish leaves his arm in a jerk and moves a little far
ISHAAN- chal ek kaam karte hain hum ise le jaate hain tu hume paise de diyo aur ise wapas le liyo fair enough aur jab tak tu paise nahin dega yeh ladki hamare saath rahegi...akhir koi naa koi security toh honi chahiye naa
   kashish again came close to sujal.....and sujal holds her arm very firmly
SUJAL- dekho ishaan bhai......main aapke paise lauta dungaa lekin ismein kashish ko involve karne ki koi zaroorat nahin hai
ISHAAN- zyada bolne ki zaroorat nahin hai.....
   and pulls kashish by holding her hand
KASH- sujal..........ahh chodo mujhe
but sujal stops him by holding his hand
SUJAL- plzz dont involve her
ISHAAN- bete aaj tune mera haath pakda hai ab samjhle ki teri life ne problems ka haath pakad liya hai
    sujal pushes ishaan and holds kashish's hand runs towards the straight direction
SUJAL- run kashish no alternative is there run for your life
ISHAAN- aye tum sab kya khare khare dekh rahe ho pakdo unhe.....chalo gaadi mein beitho
IHSAAN(smiles)- woh car ki keys le gaya.....sujal tu nahin bachega.....chalo bhago
    sujal and kashish were running at gud speed.......and ishaan and his men were far behind them but the prob was that they were able to see s-k
SUJAL- kashish yeh raasta hume is shortcut se nikaal ke main road pe le aayegaa bas thodi door aur wahan kuch toh milega hi juzz run
KASH- haan kuch toh milega hi and then i wanna clearify something
   bhaagte bhaagte woh dono usi mod par aagaye jahan se sujal ne shortcut ke liye turn liya tha...........
SUJAL- c'mon fast they are rite behind us
KASH- yeaah i am running now i cant run faster than this already i am very tired
   they were juzz looking for something called lift......but the worst happened kashish tripped and fell and felt enormous pain in leg and cudnt able to get up
SUJAL- kashish uthoo plzz woh pass aaye jaa rahe hain
KASH- ahh let me try (she gets up and feels a little pain but manages to move her legs swiftly but those seconds were enough for ishaan and his men to reach very close to them)
sujal sees them and stops kashish and pulls her behind himself
SUJAL- bahut ho gaya sujal grewal kabhi kisi se darke nahin bhagta u all wanna fight..........(shouts) c'mon ishaan lets settle the scores cum
ISHAAN-(smiles) lagta hai ki pagal ho gaya......koi beech mein nahin aayega its one on one......aaa sujal
   so both started fighting like dogs.........however the upper hand remained with ishaan.......his one hand was enough for sujal to fall and sujal's 10 hands were also not enough for a gaint like ishaan.........that road wasnt soo busy like other roads and 3-4 vehicles were coming and seeing the scenario and passing by......1/2 an hr passed by and the two were still fighting..........and sujal looked really exhausted...and he was badly injured but still he was managing.....ishaaan was abt to punch him but sujal holds his hand and then his neck.......and pushes him to a tree's bark and ishaan was abt to breathe his last few breathes but......one of the men hit a hockey on sujal's head and sujal left ishaan in an instant
KASH(shouts)- sujaaaallllllllllllllll.........
..and ishaan tries to breathe from his chocked neck and then grabs a hockey and hits sujal in his stomach and head again and throws the hockey and sujal goes straight down and looses conciousous.....ishaan makes his breathes normal.........
ISHAAN- aye ladki jab ise hosh aajaye toh bata diyo ki....mujhse bidne se kuch nahin milega.......paise lutade
   and they all go from there leaving a behosh sujal and a confused kashish......tears werent stoping from her eyes........and ran towards sujal and keeps his head on her lap.....and continously tries to make him concious
KASH- sujaall gett up....sujal kuch toh bolo plzz sujall
   and then takes her scarf which was tied on her neck.....and ties it around sujal's head........and rubs her tears....and gets up.....for finding a lift

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