AR/ARSH OS#21:Chahyee Hai Tanhai-pg143/New Thrd link- pg148 - Page 88

Amazing os dear
the way u showed shilpa entry was nice
arman expression when he saw her was very well written
the pain they both go through due one misunderstanding was awesomely
written yar i love ananya description love the way shilpa express her feelings great work thanks for pm

Omg this story was sooo good! Made me keep going aww the whole reading time! Riddhima accepted Ananya! yayay and Armaan and Riddhima are together! I was soo happy teading this!

It was really adorable! <33 Write more soon!

the os was simply amazing. Emotions of either side were expressed so beautifully; i could actually picturize everything clearly. Loooved reading it. Simply amazing!

hey this was an amazing os...

it was just superb n superb creativity..

concept was different..

luved ur this story..

all the emotions u mentioned were very gr8..

the heart break..misunderstanding..his feelings..her feelings..

everything is just awesome..

just luved it.. 👏😊⭐️

Hey dear

Awesome os...

Awww sach a sweet story 
Edited by GurpreetKaSh16 - 10 years ago

So now you are in gussa mood :( toh hope ye dekh aapka gussee thandi ho jayegi :(

Everytime you come up with something new I start expecting so much from it & I swear on god it goes beyond my expectations :')..My heart swells with happiness<3 you are genius when it comes to honest sincere writing with so much of  simplicity and beauty in it..This one too touched my heart to the core ..Ermm actually what I loved about this one was that the flow of emotions ..right from the starting the silence between AR conveyed so much :') the depth of the love between them was heart warming ..Personally I love such separation wali painful stories HAHA..the reason of their separation was rather stupid but then even small misunderstandings can give worst punishment of your life :( Bu then all's well that ends well <3 Loved the terrace scene between them <3 I crave for such high emotional stories AAHH what a treat for me it is ..I am waiting for you to come up with another amazing idea and till then main nazerin bichaye intezaar karoongi aapka Cya soon !!

That was awesome

Os 19 - I loved the os especially the way Armaan opened up to Riddhima 
Edited by 1D_D3-Crazy - 10 years ago