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Posted: 12 years ago
#21
superb!!! plz continue it...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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it was 2 when he started coughing badly

Khushi: just woke up" kya huwa"

Arnav:was trying to close the window but he was not able to and as he has dust allergy he was coughing.she run his chest

Khushi; aap ko tou allergy ha she just try to close but could not "roka pani "she just taken out bottle from her bag "yeh la" to conductor" bhai iss ko band kara yeh dosri seat da mera  pati kai tabiyat kharb horahi ha "

Conductor " pati aap tou iss waqat "

Khushi: just caress his face "dekha please bus roka next  stop per"

Conductor : acha

Khushi: hum chala jata na aap kyun aai aap ki tabiyat dekha kharab horahi ha

Arnav: sneezed she just caress his cheek

Khushi: hum bhi ghusa mein sochta nahi haan .aap kai medicine bhi nahi ha aap kya hoga ,she was just almost hugging him ,he was trying to keep his face straight ,wipe his face "iss dust ko kaise roka hum"wet he sari pullo and wipe his face "iss ko raka ,aap ka hanky kaha ha"

Arnav: i forgot

Khushi: yeh lana aap ko yaad raha aur ..pointed at kangan

Arnav: khushi if you dont mind Drive is coming behind bus in my car we can ,only if you dont mind

Khushi: aap bhi na jab Drive ha tou aap .

Arnav made puppy face you said you dont want to sit in car

Khushi  "bhai bus roka yeh jar raha haan"

Arnav;what the

Khushi: aap car mein jai

Arnav: jee nahi if you will go only then i will go other wise i am fine here

Khushi: ziddi

a passenger :"if you both husband and wife have fight can we sleep"

Khushi:" dekha aap ki wajhe se" ,he started coughing badly "please bhai roka "

Driver stop the bus and they both step down driver stop the car

conductor" ajeeb log ha itni bari gadi "

Arnav:ask driver to take their seat and go back home from next station

Khushi: aap drive kaise kara ga

Arnav: i can managed

Khushi was hunting the first aid box  " hum aap ko chora ga nahi agar aap ko kuch huwa "medicine was not there

Arnav: was breathing heavily

Khushi aap ko ho kya raha ha stop car please ,he parked at highway she was just rubbing his chest

Arnav: sneezed in a row

Khushi was about to start crying as she was nit getting how to help him

High way police stopped next to them

Khushi quickly told them & ask them to help them they tow their car, she was just looking at him "all because of me"

Arnav:" i am fine he said with difficulty".she just hug him

Khushi" i am sorry i am really sorry ,i should have accepted your help, aap kai tabiyat tou kharb na hoti, i will do pooja at home ,we will go back home"

Arnav: look at her face he was not getting she was hating him few hours back so much & now she is loving him like anything, preferring him over her parents anniversary "i will take medicine i will be fine & you can do pooja where you have thought of "

they reach the hotel on highway ,there she found the anti allergy tablet .she force him to stay night there as the anti allergy will make him sleepy.he just give up as she was really in tension. they walk to room

Khushi: aap sojai

Arnav look at a double bed without any sofa "khushi "

Khushi: look at him

Arnav it is not my bed room so we can share

Khushi:just sat on bed as he was requesting her "aap sojai "

Arnav: you just stay next to me no need to go out or anywhere as the place is he sneezed badly again

Khushi: just lay next to him "aap ka paas "

Arnav placed his hand on her "dont  go out ?"

Khushi just look at his closed eyes"khoona se daarta bhi ha aur bolta ha pyar nahi" placed her hand on him to show she is there he pull her close to him

Arnav wake me at once if you feel something fishy .

Khushi i will ..he slept as the medicine made him drowsy she didnot move a inch away from him . night passed 


He woke up and look at her she was still sleeping in same way smiled appear on his lips she didnot moved a little."Khushi"whisper in her ear she just open her eyes

Khushi: aap thek ha

Arnav: hmmm get ready i will take you

Khushi: dekha humko nahi jana ,aur wasie bhi hamara wahan jana se kon se hum anaat nahi raha ga .

Arnav: we are half way

Khushi koi baat nahi next year take me there aap sari raat khasta raha haan

Arnav: khushi

Khushi: amma babuji wapis to nahi aaiga na jana se per aap ki tabiyat aur kharab hojai ga aur woh hum ko bilkul acha nahi laga ga .please hum aap se khud bol raha ha

Arnav: look in her eyes she was requesting him she has selected him over her parents .

Khushi: waise bhi amma ko acha nahi laga ga ka un ki wajhe se in ka daamd bemar ho seek out quickly 

Arnav was just lost in her words 

she was ready in few mins and asking him to start the journey back.

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Posted: 12 years ago
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awww this is such a sweet sweet part!!! Loved it a lottt   
Edited by poojawal_Pooja_ - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#24
awww..tht was shooo aweet
lovely os 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#25
it was amazing. khushi was so caring
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Posted: 12 years ago
#26
loved it alot..it was really fab ..loved both part..loved how they care for each other..loved how she preferred him
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Posted: 12 years ago
#27
Wow thi's verry nice i just luv  it bravo  GOOD WORK 👏👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
#28

Thank you for sharing the story withe us i just luv it thi's sooo romantic & lovely & it gesture sensuel withe passion make me want more and more for you'r words but can you help me because  but I do not understand the Indian language can you translate sentences hindi to english 

and you have completely a good talent great job continued bravooo 👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
#29
nice update y u end it ?😭 i wish u can continue
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Posted: 12 years ago
#30
wonderful i loved it di