Virman OS: You're the color of my life - Page 4

Originally posted by: daminipatel12

You left me speechless once again with your OS!!!!😊 Ur an awesome writer!! Please pm me when you write more OSs!!😊

Aww gal, thank you so much. Will PM you when I write.😊

Originally posted by: priasweet

👏
no words to describe

So sweet of you😊

Originally posted by: tina_1234

amazin os

Thank you tina😊

Originally posted by: nikki028

revaaa...ahhh SUPERB CLASSIC os yaara... i sooo sooo want virat be d 1st one to put color on manvi n vice versa...pata nahi show mein aisa hoga ki nahi...bt thnx for fulfilling my wish in ur this os atleast...it ws trulyyy FANTASTICCC...😍

Nikki, your comments never fail to make me smile. Glad I manage to fulfill ur wish. 😊

aww revaa..d pleasure is all mine..coz u r one of those writers whose work i GENUINELY love n adore from d bottom of my heart.. :) thank u for alwz alwz writing such xtremely beautiful stories on virman..plz continue to do so.. :)

Originally posted by: Fafu77

really really really loved the os
tnxx a lot 4 the pm :)
virman rock 😃

Thank you so much dearie😊

Originally posted by: Shivrajput52

awesome...👍🏼 loved it...😊 and u knw dat

Aww Shiv, your such a sweetheart as usual. 😊

Originally posted by: TUK...NYC

it was awsome..thankz for the pm

Thank you so much yaar😊

Originally posted by: Jafrina_luvs_KM

OMG this was superbly written fantastic fabulous OS i'm running out of words to praise but in simple terms this was great and i really loved reading it.

It was so realistic and merged with the show. Aww mannu is to cute just love her character poor her i remember her diwali reaction thank god her holi wasnt gonna be the same

even though u included maya in the os which i probably wudhve hated but the way u presented it i liked it virat leaving her for manvi love the idea shame on the evil witch

i thouroughly enjoyed this man how do you write so beautifully ur a fab writer hun one of the best

my favourite was the end "I will always be here Bandariya, waiting for you to color my life" this diologue is to cute i wish hed say that in the show

Jaf, thank you so much for the lovely words. 😊

I was watching the VirMan scenes and the Diwali scene really caught me, how her expression faded as she was refrain from enjoying the crackers.

Phew... Glad you didn't hate me or the OS coz of Maya. I have really high expectation on the character Virat, even I hope to see something similar in the show.

That dialogue is also my fav as well😉

Originally posted by: snehamaanvirman

wow reva

u just made my day with ths

ths was superabbb ayr

he was mesmirezed by her beauty i can imagine the whole scene she cmng downstairs in white and virat drooling

she playing wth kida an virat wth his usual smile cmng toward her

then garden part 😉

👏 👏

Thank you dearie... Your comments are always so sweet and the pic dedicated for me made my day gal. Thank you once again and I promise to update my FF soon as well dear😊

Originally posted by: Aisha202

Absolutely loved this Rev! 😃

Wonderfully written piece! ❤️

Loved the ending! Hope a similar kind of scenario happens in the Holi episodes!

Really loved this part:

His closeness sent out different vibes which Manvi failed to decode but it clearly made her uncomfortable yet she couldn't resist the fact that she was enjoying it. Virat leaned closer to her, colored her cheeks with colors on his palm while whispering "Happy Holi Meri Bandariya" in her ears in his husky voice. 😍 😳

Awesome OS! Loved it sooo much! 🤗🤗

Aisha, than you so much dearie. Loved your comment very much🤗🤗🤗🤗

Originally posted by: isha.raj_98

awww...thats sooo cute!!

Thank you so much😊

Originally posted by: hs7071

OMG this was so great i loved how virat completely ignored maya thank u soo mich for this wonderful os too good after long i got to read a os of yours...it was fabulous...
Hey can u plsz update ur ff almost heaven soon cant wait to read the next part...remember to pm me when u update or write anymore os/ff/ss

Thank you so much dearie. Glad you liked it... I will update my FF soon, sorry for keeping u wait for long. Will definitely PM whenever I write😊😊

Btw I m also waiting for your updates as well. Loved all your creative ideas as well😊

Originally posted by: JULIEL

WOW!!! Loved it!!!

Thank you dearie😊

Originally posted by: coolchick

👏MIND BLOWING IT ROCKED plsss continue would love to read ur awesome thoughts sooo creative 😃

Thank you yaar. There is no update for this OS yaar. Will definitely PM you when I write in future😊

Originally posted by: Jhinka_Roy

Revs, I'm completely bowled over after reading your 'Almost Heaven' at one go last night! I was actually imagining them in the scenes you described! Although to imagine Maanvi as seriously sick n admitted in hospital for a long term is so not possible! Waiting for your updates will be really hard! Meanwhile, you are here with a short but very cute VirMan holi celebration!😃

Thank you dear. Glad you took your time to read my FF and also this OS. I m so happy that you liked it. Sorry my updates are pretty slow but will try to update the next part soon.

Thank you so much again😊

Originally posted by: bhavnah

Loved it dr :)

Thank you Bhavnah😊