@ bidzie :
i was away from IF for quite a while owing to my exams, but this OS urged me to login and post a comment, i dont know what to say or how to praise you enough👏..this is actually the climax to the Amar Vyas case and i wish from the core of my heart that the cv 's show it exactly the way you have depicted it.. it would have a tremendous impact on the overall episode then, specially considering the feel you have put into it...way to go, write a sequel to it and please continue the story, specially how megha reopens the case with mohan's help and the entire court proceedings till truth wins over evil !!😊
ps : i would suggest a small change... instead of mohan wiping megha's tears let him charge her up -
" aansu poch lijiye mrs. vyas, aur jaake adalat mein yeh case dobara open karvaiye.. aage ki zimmedari meri, meri report ki wajah se adalat ne amar vyas ko doshi kaha tha, aaj mauka mila hai..jo bigada tha woh wapas thik karne ka, aap jaiye ."
megha looks on to him, still in a daze and unable to believe her ears.
mohan - " aur ha mrs.vyas, main utna bhi bura nahi hu jitna ki aap sab mujhe samajhte hai !!"
and mohan takes back the file and walks away to his home.
Edited by polly_03 - 12 years ago
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