OS: Misguided Truths - Page 2

Originally posted by: arjuhi4

loved ur writing skill...loved the concept...do write more...thanks for pm dear...

So just finished reading all of it! This is such a brilliant piece of writing. I like how you've delved deep into his inner thoughts and how he's fighting with his demons, wanting believe her, not trusting her, it's a game of back n forth. I also like how it's not a sudden a-ha moment of oh no i was wrong! But a very gradual understanding of, perhaps I was wrong. He still doesn't believe she is innocent completely, even when he's clearly heard the fear in her voice. 

Tht was amazinggg..u descibed Arnav's feelings soo well.

arnavs emotions were just brilliant here!
i loveD how he made shyam sPeechlesS with the payal thng :P
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please continue, you kind of leFt us hangIng . i want to see arnav finding the truTh and smacking that creepwa ;)
amazing OS!
loveD it :)

hei...asma...🤗
haven't talk to u in ages...hw r u...??? what an update ya...superb...no words to say... well-done my girl...keep rocking...👏👏👏

loved it dear and thanks for the pm...update soon pls..u got me hooked😊

Originally posted by: YPNHK_kiFANno.1

So just finished reading all of it! This is such a brilliant piece of writing. I like how you've delved deep into his inner thoughts and how he's fighting with his demons, wanting believe her, not trusting her, it's a game of back n forth. I also like how it's not a sudden a-ha moment of oh no i was wrong! But a very gradual understanding of, perhaps I was wrong. He still doesn't believe she is innocent completely, even when he's clearly heard the fear in her voice. 

I hope in the show as well it's a gradual understanding of how he was wrong, seems more natural! 👏

Originally posted by: SK1991

hei...asma...🤗
haven't talk to u in ages...hw r u...??? what an update ya...superb...no words to say... well-done my girl...keep rocking...👏👏👏

Amazing !!!! Loved it 😊

Waiting eagerly for the next part!

Beautiful!