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rockinggirl5

@rockinggirl5

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#461

I lovers it. Beautiful!!! Please continue soon.

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hills

@hills

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#462

Wow this get better with every chapter...you truely are a great writer...I was in tears at the end...love that he remebers the star night... love the way he doesn't her to be in the dark too long...

I love how you descirbe him as being jealous... wow what a true emotion that is... him fight with his inner being is awesome... the emotion that you write about are so true... I can't tell you all the emotion that this chaper stir in the reader... briliant... I got googe bumps... reading it for sure... can't wait for the next update...

PS sorry gutter thoughts as they are in the bedroon under the stars... lol

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hilly

@hilly

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#463

awh last part was magical ! can't wait to know what happens next !

Lovin' your not too late, yet quick updates ! :D

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Dee (Daisy)

@drdee142

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#464

Loved it especially the way you described Arnav's emotions. I can believe that Arnav has done something so beautiful for Khushi, I just can't wait to see Khushi's reaction to this

Please do update soon

Dee

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JV21

@JV21

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#465

Wow...absolutely amazing...the inner turmoil of Arnav is so very well explained...!!

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medha

@medha16

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#466

wow wow wow!that was beautiful...ur so articulate...its always nice to read ur work!n i loved d fairy lights part!

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ItsPearl

@ItsPearl

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#467

I'm speechless at the transparent innocence of this update.. I seriously don't have words to describe how well you have put everything in this.. if I said I found this update beautiful, amazing, awesom etc etc etc - I would be lying.. because this is much much much more than that..

Hands down brilliant..! I take a bow to you!

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varshapan

@varshapan

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#468

yay!! starry nights... loved it.

and now i want to know what arnav saw on khushi's face... :)

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lively-piia

@lively-piia

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#469

arnav gesture was too sweet...

cont soon

i wanna see khushi reaction to it..

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Navin

@napstermonster

Voyager

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#470

beautiful.Im reserving this so i can go back, reread the update which made me actually tear ip, and tell you, in pore appropriate prose,how meaningful and lovely I found this chapter. Just...beautiful..