Arhi FF |Mohabat Door Jaane Na De| *Complete!* #1 - Page 32

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Posted: 13 years ago

awesome update loved how khushi and her father relationship was defined and describe the purity of the bond was beautiful loved it she still trying to come to terms with arnav guilt and understanding his pain but she remember how many times he hurt her before she does not trust him loved how you described her feeling well done that was beautiful loved it thanks for the pm

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gogo9895

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Posted: 13 years ago

That was really good. nice update.👏

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N0306

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Posted: 13 years ago

so beautifully written.. Khushi thoughts expressed very well.

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Simran

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Posted: 13 years ago

Fabulous update...you are very good at writing down the emotions that the characters feel. I especially like the last two questions that Khushi was asking herself. I hope she will slowly change the answers though!

I cannot wait to see what Arnav's next steps are.

Good luck on your exams...and please update when possible!

Keep up the great work

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Cytherea

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Posted: 13 years ago

Insight into Khushi's feelings!!..I understand her hesitance to put her heart on the line again..Can't wait to see how Arnav wins he love

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-Alika-

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Posted: 13 years ago

Just read ur three awesome updates, there are fabulous can't wait for more. Loved the way how Arnav is trying hard to win back Kushi.

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rockinggirl5

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Posted: 13 years ago

Loved it, it's good to know how khushi feels. Please continue soon.

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Zania

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Posted: 13 years ago

Wow! tht was amazing

u described khushi's inner turmoil soo beautifully

fabulous piece of writing👏👏

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varshapan

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Posted: 13 years ago

beautifully written... and all the best for your exams..

waiting to read the next chapters...

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JV21

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Posted: 13 years ago

so beautifully have u portrayed the train of thoughts Khushi is having in her mind... Super duper like this one!!

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