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Posted: 12 years ago
#81
I really liked it. Please continue. I loved how Arnav started to feel for Khushi. He is helping her out, letting her stay with him. I think that this story is fantastic. :D nice work
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Posted: 12 years ago
#82
good to read Part III,  i was looking forward for it over the week end..
 so nicely done..
 i think LA will definitley create soen problems once she senced ASR-Khushi proximity..
the bonding between Arnav & haya is so cute..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#83
wowowowwoowwwo...very very niceee...loved it...u always write different...keep it up
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Posted: 12 years ago
#84
Happy & sad... That is the best way to describe this wonderful OS, that u have written. Can't wait to read the next update, I would love it if u could pm me with it :) :) :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#85
Nice update !!!
how they r feeling comfortable wid each other ...n arnav so understanding...loved it
continue soon

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Posted: 12 years ago
#86
arnav is very helpful and caring...its a great update...continue soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#87
nice dear..continue soon..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#88
great ff...pls cont soon n do pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Arnav : just looked from the glass wall she was going in her cabin smiling , with afresh face , he grab his cell and called lawyer " i want to fill a case of  A of  R  against Shyam Jha and i want an adoption form " he just had tears in his eyes as last night she was in a very bad condition she was hitting him not listening to him at all . she was just taking Shyam name ,which she could not tell in her senses she had told it in her night mare ... his intercom rang

Khushi : that was for not scolding

Arnav: just took a deep breath ."my pleasure sweet heart "

Khushi: giggled and cut

Arnav: was not getting what to say ..there was a knock on his door he looked back and saw LA

LA: have seen him wiping his tears and composing him self ."sorry if you are buys"

Arnav: no say

LA: meeting

Arnav: call them here

LA: ok

Arnav: just called the DR he just turn his back towards the door ,he was looking at khushi from up ." i want to meet you"

DR: what happened?

Arnav: i will come and tell , i will bring her too with me

DR: ok

Arnav just felt someone was at his back he turn back , but there was no one . he just run his hand in his hairs and walk down with the files , he walked to her cabin . cleared his throat "start typing " his eyes was smiling

Khushi: hmmm

Arnav:  i want  to invite you for a lunch he just walk close to her chair placed his hand on table as if he was telling her some thing. La passed by she saw he was busy in typing some thing

LA: he will sort her now she smiled

Arnav: kissed her head" keep smiling you look so cute "

Khushi: looked at him

Arnav: i want you to be valentine to night if you dont mind , just this year as next year i will have my Haya with me

Khushi: looked at him

Arnav: dont say no if you will say no my heart will be broken

Khushi: with teary eyes look away

Arnav: come on now dont cry .

Khushi: aap baat asie karta ha

Arnav: dekho only for this year

LA Knocked "clients "

Arnav:coming

Khushi: go

Arnav: no you too come and sit there i will be relaxed . hold her hand to get up

Khushi: why dont you asked Haya to come ?

Arnav: she cannot come tonight

Khushi: we can

Arnav: shut up ok he said bit loud

Khushi: uff yeh ghusa

LA pam and Sam look at them

Arnav: i will tell you later 

Khushi: call your Haya

Arnav: thek ha  then you will be jealous trust me

Khushi:  i will not be

Arnav: lets see he try to open door

Khushi: let me

Arnav: smiled and let her open the corridor door

Khushi: kya as she felt his hand around her waist

Arnav: kissed her cheek "thanks for trusting in me " hug her tight in his arms for few second "lets go"

Khushi: just look at him. he just open the door for her and walked behind her .



Arnav just pull chair for her next to him "you sit no need to get up"

the client came from the other door .

the meeting started

LA noticed he was writing some thing on paper and passing it to Khushi

Khushi: use to write some thing and passed him back .

LA: what are they doing? she poke pam

Khushi was sitting next to him as he hand pull her chair away from the table next to his main seat . so no one could see .

Pam: Pata nahi ASR is smiling

LA: he said Shut up

Pam: ASR is a salamander he change his colors in seconds.


the meeting was over

LA: go and get the page

Pam: ASR kept it in his jacket.

LA:ASR is too fast , she has some relation with him i am sure .


Arnav:LA i have an appointment i am going ?Aman call in in the evening

Aman: ok Sir

Arnav: Khushi you too come with me .

Khushi just kept her face straight .

Arnav: aman please send my bag and her's in car .

Aman: sure sir , sir you have to sign on the voucher .

Arnav: sign pay this from my personal account 

Aman: got it 

Arnav: chalo 

Khushi way you are making everyone so curious 

Arnav: who?

Khushi: your staff

Arnav: stop carrying about world, just reply my question

Khushi: NO 

Arnav: soch lo i will take Haya ..as they reached to the car

Khushi take her...she i all yours

Arnav: looked at her while fixing her belt.


there was a silence in the car they reached the hospital 

Khushi: here 

Arnav: yes i have to change this bandaged

Khushi: oh 

Arnav; you sit in car i will come in few mins

Khushi: i am too coming

Arnav: ok come..


they walked to the dr room

DR: hi mr and mrs arnav

hi both said together 

DR:asked nurse to take khushi and check her BP .

Khushi walked in  the next room

Nurse : you look fresh today

Khushi: smiled 

Nurse : i hope you are taking care of your husband he lost blood in his wound and then he gave you .

Khushi; me

Nurse : yes 


DR: do you love her?

Arnav: what

DR: beta direct question?

Arnav: yes 

DR: then marry her and take her out of this stress .

Arnav:but if she dont agree 

DR: you can at least propose her tonight ?show her how much you love her ,as that is the only way out to bring her from her past.

Arnav: thanks 

DR: yes Mrs Arnav how are you feeling today?

Khushi: i am fine

DR: that is good 

nurse came her BP is high

DR: and your feet

Khushi: what happen

DR: your feet are  swollen

Arnav: looked at dr

DR: you are careless  she shouted at them 

Arnav:  what to do now

DR: dont make her sit simple

Arnav: hmm sorry my fault ,he just walked out 

DR: go and soak in warm water 

Khushi: it is not his fault it is my fault 

DR: ok 

Khushi:was just silent

Arnav: ab kya huwa as they walked out 

Khushi: you gave me blood

Arnav: looked at her

Khushi: why you are doing this?

Arnav: Haya is mine i am doing that for her .

Khushi: now i got why she plays with you?

Arnav: smiled  i have a surprised for you tonight

Khushi: kya 

Arnav: i will tell you tonight.

Khushi: dekha raat tak hum sabar kaise kara ga

Arnav: smiled pata nahi

Khushi: where are you going?

Arnav: coming  you just relax and sit properly ,,he just caress her cheek and walk to the mall 

Khushi: just started looking out."will my this dream will break ?he hda found me in worst condition if he is with me in this he can be with me in any condition" she was having Flash back from their first meeting how he got up from his chair gave her his seat .

time flies

Arnav; sorry sorry  he just kept many shopping bags at the back seat.

Khushi: no problem.

Arnav: i try to be fast but 

Khushi: i said it is ok .

Arnav: madam what for lunch ?

Khushi: anything

Arnav: what Haya want to eat ?

Khushi: looked at him

Arnav: sorry but i have seen and heard ladies have curving for something

Khushi: just hug  him and cried 

Arnav: kya huwa 

Khushi:  why you care for me so much

Arnav: i dont know myself dear i dont know myself, i am just feeling my dull life has a hope has a aim now . hug her tight. 

Khushi: ghar chala

Arnav: you just stop crying,wipe her tears "have icecream"

Khushi: chala na

Arnav: wait i order pizza

Khushi: where is your?

Arnav:it is sweet i cannot take it 

Khushi:looked at him

Arnav: i am diabetic.

Khushi: just drop the spoon back in cup

Arnav;i can have one spoon . he took one 

Khushi:dont eat 

Arnav: now you finish it ? 


they are not getting words to express each other feeling ,just looked at each other off and on .they reached home , 

Arnav: have lunch and then you rest

Khushi: dr scold you because of me

Arnav it ok i shouldn't taken you office .. he just made her rest on bed.

Khushi: it will be fine.

Arnav: no more office from today 

Khushi: then how will i pay

Arnav: i will sort that matter tonight once in for all . kissed her forehead now you sleep i am in the room i will not go anywhere 

Khushi: just lay down . she could not say no to him ."Arnav "

Arnav: hmmm

Khushi: " i will be your Valentine tonight book haya for next year "

Arnav looked at her , her eyes was closed 

to be cont ...long comments 

Edited by naddiya26 - 12 years ago
Posted: 12 years ago
#90
alright im gonna b nyc so... lemme give u a long comment
first of all i loved it i jus red all 4 parts n i found it very unique n nice 
i love arnav n khushi charecters there so nyc lyk arnav is so caring n khushi is so innocent
u know what u hve 2 hve 2 continue or else i will  b very ANGRY so plzzz continue
oh yea when u update another part plzzz send me a pm since i really wanna read other parts
alright lemme end ma comment by sayin LOVED IT
xxx


Edited by Fafu77 - 12 years ago