CID

MY FIRST STORY

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Posted: 12 years ago
hi guys i am gayatri this my first story dedicated to all my frnds

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First there are some apartments with A B C blocks i person named raju goes in to his home then after some time there is a long shout .sab log bahar aakar dekthe hain ke bahut sara khun hai raju ke ghar ke bahar sab log dar jatta hai aur CID ko bulathe hain
IN THE BEREAU 
freedy enters with anger  
when viivek asks he says thuhe kyun bolu main thum ne mera zindgi karab kiya main...
viivek : main ne kya kiya sir(wit a questioned face)
freddy: tumhe ne to kaha ki main house change karu 
viivek: toh
freedy: kitini assani se kaha raha hai toh uss ghar ne mere zindagi chin le
then DUO entres with acp 
kya ho raha hai yaha
viivek complaints abt freedy 
abhijeet: kyun kya hua daat kyun rahi hai viivek ko
freddy : dekeye ne sir viivek ne mujhe ghar change kar le ne ke liye kaha par lekin uss ghar mein sab kuch problem hi hai 
abhijeet : accha  viivek tume ne aisa kiya kyun😉 by winking
viivek: mujhe kya pata ke vahan par isa kuch hoga 
abhijeet : tik hai fredy ke liye ek accha ghar dund le ne samaj gaya
viivek : s sir
then a phone comes
daya: kya khun kaha ek apartment mein tik hai hum aatte hain
freedy : mujhe to sara shaak viivek par hi hai main kud aap na ghar dund tha hu
freedy acp calls then he runs
SCENE 2 
in the raju house 
acp : dondo acche tareh se doondo 
viivek kajal nikhil search f finger prints but they cant find it 
nikhil: pura ghar dek liya sir ek bhi saboot nahin mila 
acp: aisa kya ho sak ta hai 
abhijet : sir idhar dekhiye 
acp: ha abhijeet 
abhijeet: idar kuch nshan hai sir 
acp: kya 
abhijeet :kuch  sport shoe ka nishhan agta hain sir
sachin: sir main ne sab log se puch liya who log na kisi ko aandar aate hue dekha na kisi ko bahar jate hue dekha isa kaisa ho sakta hai sir
acp : matlab khooni andar isi kidi ki se aandar aya aur isi se bahar bhi gaya 
aur who bahut chalak hai usne sara sabut mita diya 
sachin : kaun aisa kar sakta hai sir 
acp : koi dost ya dushman 
abhijeet : par padosi ka kahna hai ki koi dost ise milta aata nahin aur y aanadh hai
acp : tik hai body ko foresenic  leke chalo
SCENE 3
in the bereau...
acp: pata nahin raju ko kis ne mara hai khooni itni saavdhani se saare sbbot kaise mita diya
abhijeet: hum phir se uss ghar ko check karna padega aur raju ke office main bhi kahana hai ki yo kisi se milta nahin 
acp haan wahin tho itni ajeeb aur moody aadmi ka khoon koi kaisa kar sakta hain
then a phone  comes saying tht in same apartment one more khoon
SCENE 4
daya: iska naam prem hai is ko bhi ues tarah se mara gaya bilkul raju ki tarah
viivek : sir ye dekye hain yaha par 
abhijeeet: ye photo main tho raju aur prem hai 
sachin : aise lag raha hai ki ye dono ek dusre ko acche tarah se jjante hain 
abhi: hai sachin par ye dusree log kaun hai 
viivek : sir ye log bhi isi apartment mai rahate hain
sachin kahin in dono ka jaan bhi katra main tho nahin 
kajal: sir is window me bhi aise bhi nishaan hai bilkil uss sport shoe tarah 
abhijeet : chalo is 2 log se bhi milte hain
SCENE 5 
kya aap nishant hai 
nishant ; ha boliye 
abhijeet : ky aap ise pahachan te hain 
nishant: no main ne ise pahale kabhi nahin dekha 
freedy : juth tum ne in dono ko jannte hain 
nishant: nahin ye photo kaha se mujhe ata nahin 
mera yakeen kijiye mera jaan kathre mein hain aur aap mere upaar sakh kar raha hain
sachin : tik hain 
all the people leaves frm there 
in the bereau...
kajal: ek badi baat pata chali sir raju prem nishant karan in sab log ko ek jayaddat hai pura 25 crore ka
freedy: good work kajal 
(to be continued)



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gayatri thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
sorry r the mistakes as it s my first story
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Posted: 12 years ago
Started off with 2 khoons. Typical NK style...please continue.😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
thank u i will continue it soon vi wt is nk style

Edited by gayatri - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow nice story plz continue it ... inti intresting
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice work so far, Gayatri. 😊 Looking forward to the next part.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice attempt Gayatri di :)
Looking forward for the next part.
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Posted: 12 years ago
looking forward for the next part dear...gr8 start!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
acctually i am busy i will post it on saturday
😊 plz be patient 
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Posted: 12 years ago
sure dear take your own time..no hurry😊