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Posted: 12 years ago
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promise me u wont cry after reading dis.. i hd sent dis to almost evry1 before d bad news.. but nxt day only all hell broke loose on us.. still u r i guess d only one who has nt read it.. nd i dont care who else reads it.. so m posting it here only..

ArSha in Macau – OS

 

After an almost 6 hour long flight, all he wanted to do was sleep.. His ears were buzzing, and the alien sounds at the airport speaking Chinese were not helping it… He had not been able to sleep for a minute on the flight.. Coz she was sleeping so blissfully next to him.. and he stared at her all night like a fool!!  And here she was..  chirping, as if she was in wonderland, not Macau Airport…

"Kunwar, ulte seedhe muuh banana band karo… kitni acchi jagah hai.. I can't wait to explore this city!!" She said happily..

Wow.. he thought to himself… Koi soch sakta hai ki Shakti Mohan the star dancer harr nayi jagah ko dekh kar 5th standard ke bacche ki tarah react karti hai!! He giggled internally.. And thanked God again for giving her in his life… She was important to him.. and he acknowledged that fact really well.. Although he didn't know whether he was as important in her life.. but that never really did matter.. She was the only thing that ever really mattered..

"Explore toh tab karogi naa jab apna baggage le logi.. Yahi uchalte rehna hai yaa fir Bags collect karne chalna hai??" He said, And realised that as usual, they had separated from the group.. What was with them?? Why did nobody else ever matter to them??

"Haan chalo.. Maine kab mana kia.." She giggled… She was so excited about this trip.. And performing on stage was something she loved to the core.. And after a very long tym she was performing with him.. She had missed those days terribly.. with all the pressure of a live performance.. and him always being by her side supporting her.. Not that he wasn't with her 24x7 on sets.. but DID days had their own charm.. and held a really special place in her heart.. He was a rock solid support through her thick and thin.. And She really did thank god for that.. She knew she was extremely lucky to have him in her life.. He was her lucky charm.. She just didn't know if he felt the same way…

They waited for a few minutes at the conveyer belts and he spotted their bags coming out… Two medium sized duffel bags, and two trolley bags.. All four matching in color.. He sighed thinking how even subconsciously they always seemed to settle for the same colors… As soon as he put the duffel bags over the trolley bags so that it was ready to stroll.. She started walking ahead..

"Airport par bhi mujhe hi coolie banna padega?? Tumhei zara si bhi daya nahi aati kya Shakti Mohan Sharma??" he asked.. A little irritated with the amount of luggage he was dragging with him.. and all the eyes that were giving him weird looks…

"Aati hai naa Kunwar Amarjeet Singh.. Par fir tumhaara chehra dekh kar chali jaati hai" She giggled..

"You know you two are annoying right??" A super irritated voice said.. " How many times do I have to tell you that aur log bhi hai duniya mei??"

"Sorry Dharmesh Bhai.. Ab help kar do plss.." Amar said.. Looking genuinely guilty.. while Shakti pranced about herself lost in the new city feel!!

"Seriously rey.. Tujhe koi bhi aur dhyaan nahi rehta.. Aisa toh kya hai tum dono ke beech?" Dharmesh asked.. Taking one Duffel bag from him and adjusting it on to his own luggage..

"Hum dono ke beech.. Kuch nahi.. Kuch bhi toh nahi.. V r just friends..!!" He fumbled.

"Yeh just friends wali goli kisi aur ko khilaana!! Chehre pe likha hota hai tere.. Poori duniya ko dikhta hai.. Pata nahi sirf ek use hi kyun nahi dikhta??" Dharmesh said..

"Plss yeh sab baatein rehne do bhai.. chale ab!!" Amar said.. 

They joined the rest of the DID gang.. everyone was super excited.. They reached the hotel.. Shakti took the luggage from Amar and went off with Falon.. Amar shared a room with Dharmesh.. And Shakti was in the adjacent room with Falon…

She opened her duffel bag to take out a change of clothes.. but as soon as she opened it, she knew she had the wrong bag.. but something in the bag caught her eye.. It was a bluish black and white chequered scarf.. and she immediately fell in love with it..

*Knock Knock* Just as she was admiring the scarf, there was a knock on their room's door..

"Ufffo.. Abhi kaun hai? Abhi abhi toh hum pahonche hai.." Falon cribbed.. Moving towards the door.. She opened the door to see Amar standing there with a bag in his hand..

"Ab kya Shakti ke bina 2 minute bhi nahi raha jaata?? Move in kar rahe ho iss room mei?? Joh luggage ke saath yahaan pahonch gaye Amar??" Falon teased the poor guy mercilessly..

"Kaun hai Falon??" Shakti asked..

"Aur kaun hoga?? Ek hi hai.. one and only.." Falon teased..

And just then Shakti saw him entering the room with her duffel bag..  He saw that she had already taken the liberty of sorting through his stuff.. And choosing whatever she liked.. As she already had his scarf around her neck..

 "Old habits die hard.. haan Shaku bai? Yeh chori karna kab band karegi??" He teased her..

"Kunwar… I love it.. Ab se yeh mera!!" Shakti said holding on to the scarf..

"Haan baba.. Joh chaahiye rakh le.. Sab kuch tera.. Khush??" He said lovingly.. It was impossible to deny her anything.. She looked the sweetest and the cutest girl in the whole world when she asked for something.. and he always felt the urge to complete every demand of hers..

"Ab rakh lo apna bag.. aur mujhe mera wapis kar do.. Yaa fir kuch aur lena baaki hai usme se..??" He asked her..

"Ek sec.." and she sifted through the whole bag.. "Yeh lo.. mujhe aur kuch nahi pasand aaya.."

"Uff.. mai bhi hu yahaan pe.. tum dono ko sach mei koi problem hai kya baaki ki duniya se??" Falon said..

"Isko hai!! poori duniya se!! Mai chalta hun.." Amar said.. Already he was feeling sleepy and tired.. he couldn't take the teasing much longer.. And the rehearsals started in a few hours.. he wanted to take as much rest as he could..

"Uth.. Uth.. UTH!!! Kitni sadiyon tak soyega??" Dharmesh yelled..

"Kya hua?? Kahin aag lagi kya?"Amar jolted up from the bed..

"Aag hi lagaani padhti hai tujhe uthaane ke liye.. Rehearsals ke liye nahi jaana kya?" Dharmesh nagged..

"Accha haan.. Shakti kahaan hai??" Amar blabbered.. still half asleep..

"Ek aur baar naam lia toh maarunga tujhe mai.. Neend mei bhi kab se usi ka naam liye ja raha hai!! Ab uth kar bhi chaalu.. Tu usse bata kyun nahi deta re??"

"Kya bataana hai?? Kyun sar dukha raha hai bhai??"

"Chodh.. bas ab uth jaa.. and get ready fast.. M going downstairs.." Dharmesh left.. Leaving Amar alone in the room.. Giving him some time to come to his senses.. he hadn't realised he was dreaming out aloud.. She almost had permanent residence in his dreams now.. She ruled over them.. yet he still didn't know why.. Had he fallen so badly for her?? He had gotten used to all the teasing now.. But still involuntarily blushed at her mention.. His heart did somersaults watching her smile.. She was the light of his life… *Sigh* yes.. He had fallen head over heels for her..

"Bas ab yehi sochne ki kami thi naa.." He slapped himself hard.. and went to get ready..

After a full day of rehearsals, everyone felt tired.. But all of them wanted to go sightseeing..  everyone returned to their rooms.. to get ready for their night out..

Amar just put on a black hooded full sleeves t-shirt with faded jeans and a pair of flipflops.. and got out of his room.. Just then she got out of her room as well.. She was wearing a black jacket over a blue t-shirt.. and his scarf.. *sigh* again they matched.. He thought to himself and prepared himself for the teasing that was going to follow due to this..

"Kunwar, hum Casino jaa rahe hai..!!" She said lively holding on to his arm..

"Kyun?? Casino kyun?? Tumhe aaj haarne ka mann ho raha hai kya??" He questioned her.. expecting another silly reply..

"Arre tum ho mere saath toh mai kaise haarungi?? You are my lucky charm!!" As soon as she blurted this out.. she realized what she had just said.. So she let go off his hand… And changed the topic of conversation.. "Baaki sab kahaan hai?? Koi dikh nahi raha!"

He was still in shock of what she had just said.. but sensed that she felt embarrassed at this.. So he put his arm around her neck.. and gave her a million dollar smile.. "Sab tumhare jitna time nahi lagaate naa ready hone mei.. Everyone is waiting downstairs.. Chalo.."

"Oi hero.. Tum bhi mere hi saath nikale naa apne room se bahar!! Yaani tum bhi utna hi tym lagaate ho!!" She laughed her heart out..

How typical of her.. She would never let one chance go by of pulling his leg.. How he loved it when she did that..

They reached downstairs and met up with everyone else.. She was as usual in her hyper avatar and he was busy adoring her.. They were on the escalators when Binny asked Shakti to hand over her phone for a pic.. Amar didn't even realize when the pic got taken as he was fully lost in his doll... and had a smile on his face coz she looked so happy...

They all enjoyed to the core in Casino.. Some rounds they won.. Some they lost.. But all in all they loved the experience... Afterwards they returned to their rooms as the next day also they had rigorous amount of rehearsals... As the awards were getting nearer and everybody had high expectations from the DID team… 

The whole day went by in a jiffy it seemed… At evening all the girls proposed to go see Gondola rides by the Venetian... As it was a really romantic location... And all the guys had to agree coz it was no use arguing with the girls as the outcome they all knew…  They all met downstairs in the hotel lobby.. And Amar's eyes as usual were searching for Shakti..

"Tumhari Princess time laga rahi hai khoob saara… Be a sweetheart and go fetch her... We will move on ahead..." Falon teased him again... Somehow he thought Falon was more sadistic than he gave her credit for…

He went to her room upstairs. And opened the door without knocking… What he saw froze him in his place… She was struggling with the back zipper of her orange dress… And as soon as she sensed someone come in... Without looking she said, "Falon, Thank god u r back… Help me out!! I can't get this zipper!!" She turned her head to see what was taking Falon so long to come and help… And she saw him.. He was staring at her with wild eyes... Ready to devour her…  She turned crimson at once… And her eyes found the floor.. "Kunwar... Help.." That's all she could get out of her mouth.. 

"Help you with what??" He started moving towards her… He wasn't even being able to think clearly… Her bare back towards him was making him go crazy… And it was impossible to keep track of his actions from there… 

"With the dress.." She softly uttered…  Her voice was a strange mix of shyness and seduction…. which wreaked havoc on him… He couldn't believe how aroused he was getting by her voice…

"And why do you think I would help??" He whispered softly in her ear… He had closed the distance between them... and now she was pressed against the wall… with barely a few inches of space between them… Her back against him… "Maybe I won't.."  his fingers started tracing the contours of her spine.. Leaving Goosebumps wherever they went.. And she shuddered at his touch…  "Maybe I don't like this dress at all" He slowly bit her ear... which made her moan in pleasure.. Enjoying her reaction.. He slightly took her dress off her shoulder with one hand.. And started planting kisses on her neck to her shoulder.. She tilted her head to give his lips more space to explore as she felt pure desire running in her veins… 
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Posted: 12 years ago
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ankita continue kab karraheho?
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Posted: 12 years ago
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@Anky: Sorry 😭😭😭😭 I hope they do become ArSha some day...Atleast this dreamof my has to be fulfilled...Wat a coincidence Anky sirf meine nahin padha ayr padha bhi kiss din????? But too gud Anky n plzzz continue...I really wanna read n sirf inn cheezon se mein apna guzaara kar loongi
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Pria - how do i continue rey?? d day i thot i would complete dis.. d news of her quitting came.. 
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Originally posted by: KriYansh_Pam

@Anky: Sorry 😭 I hope they do become ArSha some day...Atleast this dreamof my has to be fulfilled...Wat a coincidence Anky sirf meine nahin padha ayr padha bhi kiss din????? But too gud Anky n plzzz continue...I really wanna read n sirf inn cheezon se mein apna guzaara kar loongi


i told u not to cry naa!!! tu yeh soch meri haalat kya hui hogi.. wen i thot abt completing dis.. nd d news came.. it literally broke my heart to pieces thinking she is leaving kunwar..!! nd here wat all i was dreaming abt dem in d OS... uss din se i cudnt even write a word!! mera KriYaansh wala FF toh bhool hi jaa.. but as i always say.. m still hopeful about ArSha.. nd maybe in a few days.. wen i can get over all d pain nd hurt.. den may be.. i will complete dis.. coz for me.. ArSha BELONG together.. 
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Koii hai idhar ? Do we hav new stuff to discuss?
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Originally posted by: aria009hera

Pria - how do i continue rey?? d day i thot i would complete dis.. d news of her quitting came.. 

true..mei bhi toh same situation mei hoon!
but ab mujhe thori si hope milli hai ki shakti will return as kria after 3 months so im gona stop watching once kria's gone and will return to watch if she ever comes back.
but ab maine decide ki tht i will finish off my FF. but it'll probably take time since my heart isnt working to well these days to write..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: aria009hera


i told u not to cry naa!!! tu yeh soch meri haalat kya hui hogi.. wen i thot abt completing dis.. nd d news came.. it literally broke my heart to pieces thinking she is leaving kunwar..!! nd here wat all i was dreaming abt dem in d OS... uss din se i cudnt even write a word!! mera KriYaansh wala FF toh bhool hi jaa.. but as i always say.. m still hopeful about ArSha.. nd maybe in a few days.. wen i can get over all d pain nd hurt.. den may be.. i will complete dis.. coz for me.. ArSha BELONG together.. 

 
Anky plz continue ur OS if u can maybe through dat our ArSha dream will remain intact.and whc FF ur talking abt...give me the link na...I wanna read...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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sona - me here..

Pria - i soo want u to continue ur FF.. i loved it to d core.. nd u kno dat.. m a big believer in ArSha!! nd ur FF was my lifeline!! still i know very well.. its gonna take almost all of us some tym to write.. coz rite nw m soo emotional dat i cry at every kriyaansh scene i see.. 
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Originally posted by: KriaReyansh

true..mei bhi toh same situation mei hoon!
but ab mujhe thori si hope milli hai ki shakti will return as kria after 3 months so im gona stop watching once kria's gone and will return to watch if she ever comes back.
but ab maine decide ki tht i will finish off my FF. but it'll probably take time since my heart isnt working to well these days to write..

 
Hi I dnt knw ur name ..bt read ur ArSha FF...quite disheartened dat u stopped it..I gt ur PM abt it...totally understandable though...hope u can continue writing it near future ...