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Chapter 1, part 1
Okay so i posted a bit of the story on general fan-fic. Thanx for the positive feedback and i've posted the story seperate for u guys
Here the 1st part
Okay so since everyone is starting a fan fiction I thought I do my own one, I liked the idea of amnesia that someone mentioned so of my characters will definitely get amnesia at the moment I'm thinkin kunal will get amnesia, that is just a precap for u guys but now from the beginning , . Okay so the the charcters are all the same and the story continues after kunal and nimmos wedding, we start at the suhag raat:
Nimmo is in the room wiv her sister in laws, shrada and varsha. Her sister in laws tease her about her and kunals pyaar and shaadi,
varsha says:"okay, okay, ab to nimmo ko chor do ab kal apnay bhabi sai baat kar lahni.
All the sis-in-laws and varsha leave. Now there is only shraada and nimmo in the room".
Shraada:" Nimmo mujhe bhi maloom hai kai apna ghaar chor kar aur prayah ghaar jaana kaisa lagta hai. Legin nimmo mai tumhai yeh gahna chahti hoi kai mujhe maalum hai kai iss ghaar mai tuha koi log pasand nai kartai hai legin is ghar me mein aur dadaji humisha tumhare saat hai. Ab sai tum meri beti jasi hoi. Aur meh tumhe yeh gangan tehna chati hoi. Jub mai is ghar me ayi ti to mujhe yeh gangan dadaji nai diah tah, aur mai tumhe dah rahi hoi, kunal aur is ghaar ka kiyaal rakna.". With that shraada leaves the room.
Nimmo feels really guilty and looks up out of the window and talks to God " yeh tum mujse kyah kar rahai ho, mein ek nahin do parivaaroh ko joohte bolrahi hoin, pata nahin tum mujse aur kai karaho kai
Nimmo looks around the room and says to herself ab mein kya karoh, mujhe bhi isse kamrah mein pehna parihga.
Wen kunal comes into the room, its very late and the lights are off, kunal thinking looking around the room, finding his posters gone, the nimmos shaadi ka jora on the table and the room looking more messed around and thinkin ' yeh sub kya hai, nimmo kahah hai' and says to Ocsar who has come into the room wiv him "aab merah kya hoga".
"Jo bhi hoga manzorah kuda hoga" Kantaben says, Huh, kunal thinks and looks around the room and locates the noise to the balcony. Nimmo and kantaben are sat outside with KK and are drinking orange juice.
" Ab kya hua, yeh meeting kis lehaa hai"kunal says sitting on one of the deck chairs outside
KK: "sir, humai apna agla move plan karma hai"
Kantaben confused: " Hai jo bhi us nai kaha,aur yeh kya hai, tum lokoh ko itnai barai kamrah mil rahah hai aur mujhe to murgai kai huda jaisa chota sai kamrah milah hai, aur who bhi mujai doh aur nokranioh kai saat rahna pareh ga, mai jub boli ti kai mein yah bhi rahogi mujhe kya maloom ta kai tumhare itna barah ghaar me mujhe tumhare kudi ke bhi thodi jaga milahgi"
KK getting exasperated: "Kantaben"
K: "hudai kya hota hai"
N: " dekha masi apnai kunal ko to pehle si bi aur confused kardi ah" looks at kunal and says " huda meaning"
KB:"meaning teriβ¦"
KK interrupts: "meaning a birds house, sir"
KB: "Ha, ha wohi to mah kahnai ja rahi ti, parkai aya bhaar si aur tumhai to apni subhan bhi nahi aati, mujhe ek barah kamra chahi aye, ayi to meh hoon nimmo kay saat magar contract tumhara nimmo kai saat haiβ¦
KK: "Thank god"
KB: "kyai kaha tumne"
KK:"kuch bhi to nahi"
KB:" To meh karihi ti hai mujhe barah kamrah chahiai varna meh to..."
K: "Tek hai, tek hai. Tumhe kal hi naya kamrah dengay. Bus Kantaben"
KK: " Sir muhe yeh lagta hai kah kal sahi humai nimmo aur dadi ki difference of opinion ghaar key doosrah logo kah samnai lahnihi chahi ah"
K: "hai, hai KK, kitni bhi jaldi ho mujhe divorce chahi ai"
KK: "teek hai, teek hai, ab mujhai sonai bhi dogai. Is jhoote mhoote ki shaadi me mujhe such much ki neende ar rahi hai, meh chali. Aur yaad rakna mujhai kaal ek baraa karma dehna, varnaβ¦"
K: " teek hai, teekhai" getting irritated
KB: "Ub KK woh, meh kaha jah rahi ti" forgetting which way to go
KK takes kantaben down to her room and as kantaben exits the room you can hear her with more curses.
All alone K and N still on the balcony looking at each other
Okay that was my 1st attempt, hope u guys like it.
Okay so i posted a bit of the story on general fan-fic. Thanx for the positive feedback and i've posted the story seperate for u guys
Here the 1st part
Okay so since everyone is starting a fan fiction I thought I do my own one, I liked the idea of amnesia that someone mentioned so of my characters will definitely get amnesia at the moment I'm thinkin kunal will get amnesia, that is just a precap for u guys but now from the beginning , . Okay so the the charcters are all the same and the story continues after kunal and nimmos wedding, we start at the suhag raat:
Nimmo is in the room wiv her sister in laws, shrada and varsha. Her sister in laws tease her about her and kunals pyaar and shaadi,
varsha says:"okay, okay, ab to nimmo ko chor do ab kal apnay bhabi sai baat kar lahni.
All the sis-in-laws and varsha leave. Now there is only shraada and nimmo in the room".
Shraada:" Nimmo mujhe bhi maloom hai kai apna ghaar chor kar aur prayah ghaar jaana kaisa lagta hai. Legin nimmo mai tumhai yeh gahna chahti hoi kai mujhe maalum hai kai iss ghaar mai tuha koi log pasand nai kartai hai legin is ghar me mein aur dadaji humisha tumhare saat hai. Ab sai tum meri beti jasi hoi. Aur meh tumhe yeh gangan tehna chati hoi. Jub mai is ghar me ayi ti to mujhe yeh gangan dadaji nai diah tah, aur mai tumhe dah rahi hoi, kunal aur is ghaar ka kiyaal rakna.". With that shraada leaves the room.
Nimmo feels really guilty and looks up out of the window and talks to God " yeh tum mujse kyah kar rahai ho, mein ek nahin do parivaaroh ko joohte bolrahi hoin, pata nahin tum mujse aur kai karaho kai
Nimmo looks around the room and says to herself ab mein kya karoh, mujhe bhi isse kamrah mein pehna parihga.
Wen kunal comes into the room, its very late and the lights are off, kunal thinking looking around the room, finding his posters gone, the nimmos shaadi ka jora on the table and the room looking more messed around and thinkin ' yeh sub kya hai, nimmo kahah hai' and says to Ocsar who has come into the room wiv him "aab merah kya hoga".
"Jo bhi hoga manzorah kuda hoga" Kantaben says, Huh, kunal thinks and looks around the room and locates the noise to the balcony. Nimmo and kantaben are sat outside with KK and are drinking orange juice.
" Ab kya hua, yeh meeting kis lehaa hai"kunal says sitting on one of the deck chairs outside
KK: "sir, humai apna agla move plan karma hai"
Kantaben confused: " Hai jo bhi us nai kaha,aur yeh kya hai, tum lokoh ko itnai barai kamrah mil rahah hai aur mujhe to murgai kai huda jaisa chota sai kamrah milah hai, aur who bhi mujai doh aur nokranioh kai saat rahna pareh ga, mai jub boli ti kai mein yah bhi rahogi mujhe kya maloom ta kai tumhare itna barah ghaar me mujhe tumhare kudi ke bhi thodi jaga milahgi"
KK getting exasperated: "Kantaben"
K: "hudai kya hota hai"
N: " dekha masi apnai kunal ko to pehle si bi aur confused kardi ah" looks at kunal and says " huda meaning"
KB:"meaning teriβ¦"
KK interrupts: "meaning a birds house, sir"
KB: "Ha, ha wohi to mah kahnai ja rahi ti, parkai aya bhaar si aur tumhai to apni subhan bhi nahi aati, mujhe ek barah kamra chahi aye, ayi to meh hoon nimmo kay saat magar contract tumhara nimmo kai saat haiβ¦
KK: "Thank god"
KB: "kyai kaha tumne"
KK:"kuch bhi to nahi"
KB:" To meh karihi ti hai mujhe barah kamrah chahiai varna meh to..."
K: "Tek hai, tek hai. Tumhe kal hi naya kamrah dengay. Bus Kantaben"
KK: " Sir muhe yeh lagta hai kah kal sahi humai nimmo aur dadi ki difference of opinion ghaar key doosrah logo kah samnai lahnihi chahi ah"
K: "hai, hai KK, kitni bhi jaldi ho mujhe divorce chahi ai"
KK: "teek hai, teek hai, ab mujhai sonai bhi dogai. Is jhoote mhoote ki shaadi me mujhe such much ki neende ar rahi hai, meh chali. Aur yaad rakna mujhai kaal ek baraa karma dehna, varnaβ¦"
K: " teek hai, teekhai" getting irritated
KB: "Ub KK woh, meh kaha jah rahi ti" forgetting which way to go
KK takes kantaben down to her room and as kantaben exits the room you can hear her with more curses.
All alone K and N still on the balcony looking at each other
Okay that was my 1st attempt, hope u guys like it.
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