Virman: kya pyaar shuruwat se hi tha?Completed pg4

Dabbu:di main yeh kamrah tabtak chor ke nahi jaounga jabtak aap meri saat hospital nahi jaounge abhi issi waqt chaleyein(come on)
Maanvi:daaba dekh yaha se jaa mein kahi nahi jaarahe hoon
Maanvi began to cough incontrollably while slamming the door upon dabbu's face...
Dabbu: didi darwaza kolo di! Didi! DI!
Dabbu heard no response he kept on banging the door but still no response. No one was at home nor beeji nor chachu. When suddenly the door knocked dabbu ran towards the door and prayed it was beeji or chachu but instead it was...
Dabbu: virat bhaiya!
Virat: haan mein bhabhi ne yeh kuch samaan beeji ke liye beheja hai...
Dabbu: di woh aap jaldi maanvi didi
Dabbu frantically panted
Virat: kya hua tu itna kabhraya kyun hai aur bandariya dikahi nahi dehri
Dabbu: bhai woh manvi di boht bimaar hai mein unse pooch raha tha ke jeevika di unse baat kyun nahi karahe lekin di ne mujhe kamre se jaane ke liye bolo aur jab meine unka haath pakra unko bohat teez bukaar hai aur ab woh darwaza nahi khol nahi rahe mujhe bohat daar lagraha hai woh...
Before dabbu could continue virat ran towards maanvi's room and broke her door as soon as he entered he saw a elegant delicate figure on the floor innocently laying virat felt as if many glass pieces has tored his heart apart he walked towards her bent down and a soft gentle tear ran down his left cheeck dropping on his maanvi's beautiful eye.
He was brought back to reality by dabbu's voice
Dabbu: MANVI DIDI!
Virat: maanvi hosh mein aaon maanvi tum meri saat aisa nahi kar sakte tum meri ho uto!
Virat held maanvi tightly towards his chest and began to sob somberly it seemed as if his life was ending he was alone once again after his love betrayal turmoiled relationship he couldnt take it he had to save her
He hurriedly lifted her up and ran towards his car within no time he reached rhishikesh's top hospital and saw dr manan.
Precap:
Dr manan: mein maanvi ki tabhiyat ke baare mein pehle se jaanta hoon usse blood cancer hu hai woh bhi second stage par maanvi ne mujhe apni kasam di thi ke mein kisi ko kuch nahi batounga uske badaleme woh treatment leyegi
Virat: kasam baari hai ya zindagi? Bolo Dr Manan! God damnit speak dont jus sit there like a god damn BLOODY FOOL!

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Part 4 page 4Edited by hs7071 - 12 years ago

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Virat: Dr mana yeh dekhe ye meri maanvi ko kya hua hai jaldi dekh dr.. Dr manan
Virat stuttered uncontrollably trying to wipe his tears he couldnt think of anything except for his lov...love? Is this love that makes him attracted to maanvi no it cant be as virat choked on his thought letting loose a few tears dr manan finally spoke
Dr manan: nurse jaldi maanvi ko ward mein lekhe jao jaldi mr vadhera plsz calm down an sit down ill explain everything to u about maanvi's illness let me check her
As manan went inside maanvi's room to do her check up virat sat still did he jus hear maanvi's ILLNESS what was dr manan trying to say
Dr manan: virat mujhe tumse kuch baat karni hai
Virat: maanvi kesi hai woh
Dr manan: woh maanvi tum meri baat carefully se suna maanvi ko 3rd stage blood cancer hai
Virat: KYA?????
Virat exploded what was dr manan saying blood cancer nah hos bandariya could not have suffered frm a cancerous illness loke this no he couldnt believe it that the person who made him laugh, fought with him yet cared for him and helped him come out his box of hatred of music behind her laughter was hidden soo much pain
Virat: maanvi ko kya yeh paata hai??
Dr manan: haan lekin virat maanvi ki koi galti nahin hai woh nahi chaati thi ke-
Virat: aapne mujhe pehle kyun nahi baataya?
Virat cut off dr manan. Virat walked towards maanvi's room and saw her unconcious it stinged him to see maanvi in pain
Dr manan: mein maanvi ki tabhiyat ke baare mein pehle se jaanta hoon usse blood cancer hu hai woh bhi second stage par maanvi ne mujhe apni kasam di thi ke mein kisi ko kuch nahi batounga uske badaleme woh treatment leyegi
Virat: kasam baari hai ya zindagi? Bolo Dr Manan! God damnit speak dont jus sit there like a god damn BLOODY FOOL!
Virat explode slamming a glass vase down causing blood to flow from his hand and closed his eyes in regret and apologized to dr manan before dr manan could do a bandage on virats hand
Maanvi:VIRAT!
Virat heard his name and saw maanvi crying shouting his name as he approached her she hugged him.virat was confused why did maanvi hug him?
Maanvi:virat i dont know why but it felt as if something had happened to u i felt as if im feeling the pain i dont kno why par tum theek toh ho na?
Virat broke the hug and spoke
Virat: maanvi tumhe kese ahesas hua ke-
Maanvi:kya?
Virat:kich nahi lay down tum abhi bhi theek nahi ho aur tum ne mujhe kyun nahi baatay ke tumhe blood cancer hai? Tumhe pata he ke mujhe kya beeti thi jab mene tum piyosh hote dekhe main tum par bohat gusa hoon aur mein abhi issi waqt bhabhi ko baatake aya
Maanvi:nahi virat tum aisa nahi karoge di ko maine aur takleef nahi deheni hai wih mujhe paar bohat gusa hai main apne didi ko dukh nahi dehe sakti hoon
Virat: aur main? Tum mujhe kitna dukh deheri ho tumhe paata hai? Main nahi dekh sakta hoon tumhari takleef tumne soch hai mera kya hoga ded futiya tere bina
Maanvi:virat tum aise kyun bol rahe ho hum tumhare kya lagte hai sirf bhabhi ki behna?
Virat and maanvi just looked into each others eyes virat had no words why was he reacting like that? Is maanvi more than bhabhi ki behna? Was she always more than bhabhi ki behna from the start? Kaun hai woh?
Maanvi:virat tumhare haath se khoon

Precap:
Kya mein maanvi se pyaar karta hoon nahi yeh pyaar nahi ho sakta nahi lekin mujhe takleef kyun hua jab maine maanvi ko dekha is haalat mein virat closed his and eyes and holded maanvis hand and said i love you bandhariya

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