OS - "Unseen Dream" - Page 4

Wow..its really beautiful..mera like is nt pressing dear..the best part was the poems in between..brought out the feel really well yaar..story was fab written really well..congo on ur first os..pls write more..

Originally posted by: anshra

on your first OS!!!!!!

 

to celebrate for this new OS ...

 

Originally posted by: soniyasharma90

golu... for you first OS dear...

sending some flowers for you...

and this is for my golu...from bhootni...

  

here comes the sweet...

chalo chalo...mooh kholo...

Originally posted by: payalpari

       for u r new os dear 

       love u soo much 

Originally posted by: gcddfan

very nice OS
loved the poems especially...
beautiful piece of writing...
continue writing..
Sehar

Originally posted by: anshra

 

heyyy

takeee ur thanks back ritu

at once

and thanks (no thanks) to u

for posting it

and giving us all chance

to read it yaar

it was so aswesome

ii loved it totally

and the poems u have added

just added to the effect of whole

OS..

i cant belive its ur first attempt

u have way to go gal

 

 

 

 

 

 

keep writing

and dont stop here

u can write really well

and it is evident from

ur poems

loved it

fab

do write more

Originally posted by: soniyasharma90

wow!!!!!!!! golu...

that was really awesome dear...

kaha tak chupa ke rakah tha aaj tak iss talent ko...😉

keep writing dear...

n sply ur poems...

loved them...

dont finding appropriate words for describing it dear...

muhhhaaaz!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

keep writing honey...😛

Originally posted by: piya-

Hey Rituja

 

Brilliant OS so beautiful

The entire journey was explained by u so beautifully

Destiny took away the main support from Geet but blessed her with her soulmate at the right time

Dadi was so fast mauke pe chauka maar diya directly proposal saamne rakh diya so sweet

 

And ur poems they were like cherry on top of a cake

 

Amazing work darling

 

love-Piya

Originally posted by: coolkiwi

Big Big Congratulations frm My side on ur First OS 😊 Stupendous Work 👏