SS:Lost myself & I found you-Chap 3 Pg 17 - Page 6

Created

Last reply

Replies

148

Views

14345

Users

67

Likes

205

Frequent Posters

arunsunita_gm thumbnail
Anniversary 12 Thumbnail Group Promotion 4 Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 12 years ago
#51
updateee
updatteee
updateee
updatteee
updateee
updatteee
updateee
updatteee
updateee
updatteee
updateee
updatteee
updateee
updatteee

updateee
updatteee
SheDevil thumbnail
Anniversary 13 Thumbnail Group Promotion 6 Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 12 years ago
#52

Chap 2

 
When I reached home I was caught red handed.God "whts wid these mom?ah always get 2 know abt their children"I asked myself.Mom jst pulled my ears & yelled"How many times I have told u Abhay not 2 party in club wid ur jungli frnds at night.But no u never listen 2 me"Oops sorry mom take a chill pill.It was kabir's achievement part"I replied innocently.(By the way she is my mom.Haseena Raichand.She is superb & simply a grt woman.She took my care after dad's death & sacrifice everything 4 my happiness so I love her the most)  "Oh really Abhay & can u plz enlighten me wht extra ordinary thing Kabir has achieved in such a young age?" she asked wid her tilted eyes. "Yep mom u wont believe he completed his century in such a young age" I rplied patting my eye lashes cutely. "Century in wht?" she asked wi curosity."Mom century in having GF's.I mean yesterday only Kabir patao his 100th GF.So wasn't it an achievement & moment 2 celebrate.I mean having 100 GFs in jst 18 years is a big deal" I said proudly but as soon as I completed my sentense she pulled my ears more tightly & starated yelling "U shameless man.U were celebrating kabir's achievement 4 having 100 GFs.God u & ur all frnds r jst 2 much.All r jungli.And luk at u instead of feeling shame u r telling me this so proudly.How many century have u completed my son .I m sure none.Kabir have 100 GFs while jeh have 2 GF & u my handsome son is left wid none.Kabhi toh mujhe yeh bhi suna ki mom I have find a suitable bahu 4 u & a hot wife 4 me" ."Mom plz na chup bhi karo.I can bet u r the 1st mom who actually ask his son 2 flirt around.I have not found my suitable mate yet" I said annoyingly."Whn will u find thn?" she said throwing her arms in frustration. "Waise today I saw a girl & I really found her divine:" I said shyly. "Oh ho so finally my son found a girl.Whts her name?Where she live?Wht she do?How she looks?blah blah...she keep on aksing excitedy "Stop it mom"I yelled. "I dont know who she is.wht she is.whts her name.I know nothing abt her but  only 1 thing tht I'll make her mine sooner or later" I said firmly. ".U dont know anything abt her?😲Le main aise hi sapne saja rhi thi.Ok now go 2 sleep.U have 2 attend college also".
 
I went 2 my room.Threw myself in bed.Was trying hard 2 sleep but all in vain.Listened 2 music,tried meditation & evn read my course book"Yep I even READ my  BOOKS" but still no sign of sleep.Through out the night I was tossing in my bed lke a top.The only thing tht was playing in my mind was tht beautiful angel wid milky skin & dark curly hair, sparkling eyes & angelatic smile.The more I try 2 forget thm the more  I was drowning in thm.She was driving me crazy."Wht she would b doing right now?"I thought
 
Pia's side
 On other side the dream gal of Abhay was jumping in glory.She was feeling happy 2 meet her mother after so long."muma I missed u so much"She shouted happily. "Oh I missed u too beta.There was not a single day whn I not missed my angel" she said wid lump in her throat."Thn y u send me 2 london muma?I never wnted 2 go" she said sadly."Bcoz I never wnted u to indulge in same life which I lived" she said wid pain."Oh God no melodrama plz.Stop this hindi TV serial drama"yelled Misha.Listening 2 her sugand gave a warm hug 2 Pia & Pia wiped her tears."Chalo gud.Come on aunty its Pia's b'day lets celebrate. "Ya,ya misha I know its my angel's b'day thts y I have planned a surprise party 4 my lil princess" she said happily.
Pia saw her whole house was decorated wid flowers,balloons & red-white curtains.It was written in bold"Welcome Home Pia & HAPPY B'day". "Do u lke it Pia?Its all 4 u"sugand said lovingly.Pia was so touched by her mom cute gesture"Lke it. I loved it mom" she said hugging her mom
"If ur love-love is over thn can v plz cut the cake.I m hungry" misha yelled.Both Pia-sugand laughed & thn proceed 2 cut the cake.
 
The party was in its full glory.All seems merry & were lost in their own world.Guys were glaring at Pia lke she was some cake & all wnted a piece of her.This evil desire of thm not went unnoticed by sugand.She felt a tinge of pain.She never wnted this 4 Pia.She wnts a peaceful, happy life 4 her baby gal so she asked Pia 2 leave & sent misha 2 escort her 2 room.
Mr.Rajput saw all this frm far & went 2 Sugand.Kissed her hands lke a gentleman & said"U r luking gorgeous sugand & I must say ur daughter is even more gorgeous" hearing this Sugand lost her temper"Dont u,dont u dare 2 put ur evil eyes on my daughter.Never. She will live a happy life.She wont have 2 face a fate lke me". "We will c tht.Only time will tell" said Mr. Rajput wid evil smile & left sugand devasted
 
On other side this sudden change in her mom not went unnoticed by Pia.She knew wht her mom has gone through & somewhere she was afraid tht her fate might play the same game.She had tears in her eyes thinking tht.Misha saw this & said"Dont worry Pia.Nothing will happen 2 u.Aunty loves u & she wont let anything happen 2 u.C how big party she has thrown 4 u" . "I dont wnt big party or money misha.I jst wnt 2 live a happy life wid my family.I wnt 2 live a normal life wid my prince charming.A normal respectful life" she said wid tears." Oh so who said u wont get a life lke tht.U will meet ur prince charming soon.I m blessing u na the grt misha hahah" she said wid a laugh. Pia glared at her."Ok Ok I know it really dont suit me but see "Toota tara" I have heard whtever u wish frm toota tara it fulfill ur wish.So Y dont u ask 4 ur prince charming after all its ur 18th b'day" misha said wid a smile.Pia closed her eyes & wished"God my mom have faced so much still she tried her level bst 2 give me gud life & I know she wnts a happy & respectful life 4 me so I only wish tht soon u sent an angel 4 me who can take away all my sorrow,all my pain & take me away frm this miserable life.Plz God Plz.I wnt 2 meet my Prince charming soon" she signed hoping God will listen 2 her wish
 
On the same time same taara came across Abhay's eyes & Abhay couldn't stop but wished 2 meet tht angel agn
and scene fades wid this song in background
 
I'm a long way from home and so all alone
Homesick like I never thought I'd be
I'm a long way from home, everything is wrong
Someone please watch over me.

I'm not acustomed to this feeling
Loneliness is burning in my soul
Sometimes the mind is so mistreating
I wish I'd stayed at home like I was told.

--- Instrumental ---

I wish I knew the force within me
That keeps my mind out of control
What makes me reach for things that I can't see
I wish I'd stayed at home like I was told.

I'm a long way from home and so all alone
Homesick like I never thought I'd be
I'm a long way from home, everything is wrong
Someone please watch over me...

 
"Wht desting have planned 4 thm evn they were not aware but the whole galaxy knew tht an epic love story was bound 2 take place leaving everybody in horror,shock.Nobody knows wht might b the end but screams,scratches of this love story will leave ppl wid goosebumps.It was a story unsaid,unheard but whn it will b completed it will leave ppl speechless.They wnted 2 say,shout abt their true love 2 the world but nobody allowed thm 2 defend themselves & whn they were allowed it was already too late.I hope nothing lke this happens.I hope ppl give thm chance 2 speak.I can only hope & hope..."
 
NOTE: Uff finally I have updated my SS also.This SS is quite special 4 me evn more thn my FF as this was the 1st story which I wnted 2 share wid u all but never give it a try.It was a task 4 me 2 present it the way I imagined it.So sorry 4 late update & thnx 4 ur warm comments.It means a lot 2 me.Love u all😳
 
Edited by cuteshrishti - 12 years ago
Paint.It.BlacK. thumbnail
Anniversary 12 Thumbnail Group Promotion 5 Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 12 years ago
#53
ress----
---edited---
wow!! The concept is lovely shrish though a bit painful! Nd i lovd the update..its awesum!! πŸ‘
Lykd abhay's charactr here..he's cute,naughty bt a nice boy!! 😳 omg!!kabir hd 100gfs??!! Haha..

Hm..so abhay hs already fallen 4 pia!! Bt it seems pia hvnt met hm yet!!
Hm..i gues sugandh is forcd to live a lyf of disgrace!! bt she wants pia to b safe!!.. Hope soon abhay taks pia away frm dis cursd lyf!
Nd the last part..who's sayng dis? I didnt undrstnd!! Is sum1 predictng their future?
A/w..i loved the way u wrote it!! 😳
Plzz..cntinue soon...awaitng d nxt part..n thnx 4 pm..😊

--InduEdited by lost_in_love - 12 years ago
TeDylove thumbnail
Anniversary 12 Thumbnail Group Promotion 5 Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 12 years ago
#54
shirish is it a sad story?😭😭

pls dont end it sad..
 i love your update this is good story..and your writing make it more perfect..pls pm me next time when u will update..
SheDevil thumbnail
Anniversary 13 Thumbnail Group Promotion 6 Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 12 years ago
#55

Originally posted by: cccppp

shirish is it a sad story?😭😭

pls dont end it sad..
 i love your update this is good story..and your writing make it more perfect..pls pm me next time when u will update..

haha it depends dear.I mean I said na I can only hope u never know.I will write this story exactly the way I wnt.Spo chillax & thnx & if u wnt PM thn add me in ur buddy list😳
bubble_ thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#56
Hi Shrishti...😊 πŸ˜Š
abhay is really adorable in your story...😊
and pia seems to be in quite a lot of pain...
I just cant wait for their meeting...😍
 
I hope abhay is able to bring happiness in pia's life...
continue soon...
bookworm-ALS-- thumbnail
Anniversary 12 Thumbnail Group Promotion 7 Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 12 years ago
#57
Shrish your Abhay is too cute!
Feel sorry for Sugandh though... What does she want to hide Pia from...

Jaldi continue karogi nahi so i won't tell you to continue soon πŸ˜†
.Chashmish. thumbnail
Anniversary 13 Thumbnail Group Promotion 6 Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 12 years ago
#58
Such a cute update shirshti , I loved it yaar , abhay &haseena convo was really adorable , and piya misses her family soo much but she seemed in pain , really looking forward tat how abhay will get piya as a  a suitable bahu for haseena and a hot wife for him :) update soon 
Rashu1505 thumbnail
Anniversary 13 Thumbnail Group Promotion 7 Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 12 years ago
#59
Shrish r u k i mean tune tere dono story update ki hehe...this update was lovely huh...
..tora.tangled. thumbnail
Anniversary 13 Thumbnail Group Promotion 5 Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 12 years ago
#60
lovely update shrish!!abhay is really adorable and m luving him...lets c nw hw pia nd her prince charming meet:-)cntnu sooon!!