OS~~ VIRMAN ~~ THE ELEVATOR~~ part 6 pg 23 - Page 5

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Posted: 12 years ago
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PART 2
 

RECAP: Viren and Jeevika together say their brother and sister's name: MAANVI/ VIRAT

Virat and Maanvi let go and look at their siblings with a shocked faces!

Jeevika goes and takes Maanvi out of the elevator as does Viren with Virat

Jeevika: yeh apka bhai hai

Viren: aur yeh apki behan hai?

Maanvi: di you know him

Jeevika: yea Maanu he is the guy

Virat: WHAT bhai you like this jungle bili's sister

Maanvi: you, stay out of it, and di how can you like this cheps brother

Virat: bhai you see she called chep

Maanvi: di I won't let you marry him

Virat: and bhai you can't marry her

Maanvi: di jasey bhai hai na I bet dosra bhai bhi vasey hi hogay

Virat: bhai jasaey yeh hai na I bet iski sister bhi vasey hi hogi

Maanvi: come di lets leave

Virat: no we will leave first

Virka together: ek minute

Virka go and stand together

Jeevi: Viren g apka bhai ni meri Maanu ko kiss kiya

Viren: nhai jeevika g mera bhai asey nhai hai

Jeevi: toh phir do you mean my sister…

Viren: bikul nhai I mean… Virat tell me what happened…?

Virat: bhai she kissed me

Jeevika: chi chi chi Maanvi yeh kya kah raha hai?

Maanvi looks down

Jeevika: is ka mutlub yeh sach kah raha hai

Maanvi: but di he kissed me first

Viren: main aur Jeevika g ek dusrey ko pechlay 6 mahina(months) se jaanta hai but we have not kissed and you too don't even know one another and have kissed two times already

Virat: not too mention she even hugged me

Jeevika: KYA KYUN?

Maanvi: di you know I am scared of the dark and the lights went out in the elevator aur I got scared, but di he force-ly kissed me I did not want it and

Virat: and bhai you know her for the past 6 months and have not kissed her yet. .. tsk tsk tsk that is a disgrace of being my brother

Maanvi: dekha di is ka khayalat kasey hain iska bhai ka bhi asey hi hoon gay  

 Viren: look Maanvi main apna bhai jasey nhai hoon

Virat: oye bandriya directly mujhse baat karo

Maanvi: haan haan mein na tori tumse daar thi hoon direct baat karoon gi you chep

Virat: shut up you bandriya

Before Maanvi and Virat realize they both are standing again infornt of one another with their fingers pointed

Maanvi: oye mr. chep don't call me bandriya

Virat: and you don't call me chep

Maanvi: I will call you chep

Virat: and I will call you bandriya

This time the closeness in them had increased and they were standing just few inches away from lips and can hear their breathe

Jeevika: Maanvi

Viren: Virat

Maanvi didn't hear her sister nor did Virat hear his brother and their agurments went on and on just like tom and jerry!

Virka both scream on top of their lungs: SHUT UP

Which finally brings virmaan back to their sense and Maanvi backs away

Maanvi: di idher se cholu

Jeevika gets teary eyes: but maanu I like viren g

There is one thing Maanvi can't stand which is tears in her dear sister's eyes but before Maanvi tell her sister not to cry viren comes

Viren: jeevika please don't cry I love you and I will not listen to my idiot brother of what he thinks of you or your sister

Virat: BHAI how could you larki milli toh bhai ko bhool gay…? Tik hai mein jaa raha hoon you enjoy with your new relatives

This time the tear in Jeevika's eyes fall down: nhai Virat g please maat jao

Since jeevika is so cute when she has tears in her eyes no one can refuse her

Virat: tik hai jeevika mein ek shart pe rokoon gay eh bandriya mujhai sorry keh gi

Maanvi: mein kab se chup hoon iska yeh mutlub nhai ka mein kisse ko bhi sorry kahoon gi

Virat: see bro I can't stay here

Another tear drops from her eye

Maanvi: come here

Maanvi grabs Virat's hand and takes her to a corner where virka can't hear or see them

Virat: oye miss bandriya why you bring me here do you want another kiss

Maanvi can't take his nonsense any more and slaps him across the face

Virat: what the

Maanvi grabs him by the collar and says: listen you chep I love my sister and now she has tears in her eyes and somewhere that reason is me so I won't you to forget the last one hour and act like you don't know me nor do I know you, you are just my sisters maybe hona wala devar that's all got it

Virat who was stunned by the smack didn't know what to say or do so he just nodded his head

Maanvi: good that is nice to know and come and act like none of this happened

Maanvi is about to leave when Virat holds her hand and makes her stand between him and the wall

Virat: tik ms. Maanvi I will act like the last hour did not exist in my life, but can you forget your first kiss with a complete stranger in a elevator?

Maanvi: that's my problem not your and now leave me

Virat: ek sharat pe

Maanvi: kya

Virat: I need another a kiss…?!

Maanvi: another kiss haan… EK TARPAR LAGOON?

Maanvi pushes Virat away from her and goes to Virka smiling, with Virat following

Viren: is everything fine?

Maanvi: offcourse apka bhai bhoot acha hai

Virat: aur jeevika apki behaan bhoot achi hai

Virmaan both smile at one another and Virka lok confused at one another

Jeevika: really thank god now that both of your problems are solved

Viren: yea come lets all go for a lunch and get to know one another better

Maanvi: yea I am very hungry  

Virka walk together towards the elevator followed by Virmaan  

Maanvi: kahin left phirse na karab ho jaya

Jeevika: arey nai maanu the left can't stop two times in a day

Viren: yea guyz come lets goo vasey bhi who will walk 25 floor down?

VIrka and Virmaan stand close to one another because the left was small for two people so you guyz can imagine four people standing in a small left

Viren presses the M button and the left starts going down and then makes noises again and comes a harsh stop with lights truning on and off on and off!

Viren quickly warps his hands around jeevika where Virat holds Maanvi tightly in his embrace

Gosh guyz I hope you enjoyed! And the next part will be quite crazy! So stay tunned and do hit the like button and comment please! And you guyz need pm's send me a friend request! Thanks for the pervious comments, they really mean a lot to me! <3

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Posted: 12 years ago
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AHh!!! u alwayz keep de suspense alive.. ðŸ˜² gr8 update waiting for ur nxt update...plzzz update soon!! ðŸ˜Š
Posted: 12 years ago
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Gosh two co-incidents in one day!! Seems lyk all four of dem are destinied to be together.Continue soon.Thanx for the PM.😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome and funny!! cont please n don't forget to PM me!!! ;DD
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Posted: 12 years ago
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sooo we'll get double treat huh..😃
haha loved der tom n jerry fights..dey r too cute n Virat's too naughty..😈
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awww again!!! :)) LOLOL I'm so excited! Continue soon..:)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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great update. I loved it  thanks for send me the PM, please continue to PM me when u upadate part 3.
 
 
 
 
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey!!! pls continue and pm me!! it was really nice!! ðŸ˜ŠEdited by zanonymous - 12 years ago