My random OS Scribblings!!! CREATIVE THRD Pt 8 p27 - Page 10

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Posted: 12 years ago
#91
Awesome part5
maan got memory back
loved it
poor baby missing parents
pls cont next
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Posted: 12 years ago
#92
oh no!!
i missd part 4 & 5
will comment later dear
after i finish reading
sorry
Edited by megh_piyashi - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#93
plz add me to ur pm list. Its a gr8 story. M dying to knw wht nxt.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#94
part 4 & 5 are just awesome dear...loved it very much...continue soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#95
Lovly updates dear...pls someone continue soon..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#96
A request to all the writers ...pls post the link once you give us the update in Maneet ff
It would be easy for the readers to know about the update...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#97
hey guys is it ok if I write the next part
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: mel420

hey guys is it ok if I write the next part


sure dear go ahead... Will b waiting 4 it
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Posted: 12 years ago
#99
There goes nothing.
Part 6
He remembered everything from seeing Geet for the first time to the car accident.
But his Geet was no more, she died leaving him alive without his soul. But he didn't shed tears no he wouldn't get weak. He will take revenge instead of crying, He will make the people that took his Geet away from him suffer.

Flashback:
Maneet went for 2 days to Goa to enjoy there selfs ,it was a gift from Geet's parents for there 3rd wedding anniversary. After having great time they went back to Simla to pick up Raijv who was a couple of months old. He was staying with Geet's parents for these two days.
While in the car they kept hearing some tick tick noise.
M: where is that irritating noise coming from. Before Geet could react Maan's phone rang.It was Vikram his best friend and he saw him as a brother he never had. Maan put the phone on speaker.
M: Hi Buddy
V(Vikram)Hi Maan had a great time. When are going back to Delhi.
M: Yes buddy it was great, just heading to Simla to pick up Raijv. Planning to leave Simla tonight and if everything goes according to plan I will see tomorrow night.
V:No you won't Maan you won't see me that soon buddy
M:What do you mean are you going out of town
V:No Maan I am not going anywhere you are not coming back to Delhi not tomorrow not ever.I booked a ticked to hell for you Maan
G(Geet): Vikram veerij why are you talking like that it's not funny. irritation was clearly evident in Geet's voice.
V: Oh I am not joking Geet. I have put a bomb in your car and it can explode anytime.
M: WHAT THE HELL ARE YOU TALKING ABOUT!!!anger was evident in Maan's voice.
V: Calm down Maan you don't have time to get angry. You've got precisely five minute's left. Why don't use that time in romantic talk with your wife instead on wasting it on me.
M:SHUT UP VIKRAM.
Before Maan could say anything more Vikram cut him off.
V: oh Maan that much anger oeff he gave a evil laugh. Well bye Maan see you soon in Hell about some 50 years haha. Good bye Maan and oh ya still 2 minute's left.
M:VIKRAM. But Vikram hung up. They start hearing that irritating noise again. But now they knew what the noise was.It was the sound that told them that it was the end of everything, even if they didn't want to admit.
G:Maan do you think Vikram was serious Geet asked terrified.
M: I don't now Geet but there is no time to think I Love you Misty. Maan leaned over Geet opened her door and pushed her out of the car. In the hope that she would survive. Geet hit the ground hard and lost her conscious.
After pushing Geet out of the car Maan also jumped out of the car he hit a tree rolled down hit a rock and fell in the water.
End of Flashback
I have got my memory back doctor Vikram but you don't know that. And I will make sure you don't find out either until I have let you suffer for taking my soul my Geet away from me and for separating me from my son. I am coming back Raijv papa is coming back.

Hope I did not ruin the story azz nisha and Aakriti if I did let me now I will delete it.

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Posted: 12 years ago
no dear u havent ruined it... its totally awesome... nw waiting for the next part eagerly
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