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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey friends just thought of writing an OS..so wrote it down πŸ˜† It isn't a sad os ...not a lovey-dovey!! even I don't know what's thisπŸ˜†

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He looked out through the window of his car ,he adjusted himself on the backseat of the car ,they were now on a highway ,usually he used to sit in the front  seat besides the driver but after his marriage he started to sit with her on the back seat

She looked at her ,even she was looking outside ,moving with the wind

He is going back to his place...after a long time

The roads and the routes were  still the same but he is not at all the same.

He was an innocent sweet boy when he left the place ,started his journey having no clue about the destination believing that these roads will take him somewhere or the other.

He remembered that day

He was peeping in from the entrance door of a small house well It had one room and a kitchen.

He saw his grandfather persuading his mother for his higher studies

You must let him study ,If he will study he will lead a better life and he deserves a better life

And where will we get the money from ???

We don't have any tree that gives money , and  I even have the responsibility of my two daughters on me!! Their marriage and all so how can I spend all the money on him by sending him to the city.

And somehow his grandfather got succeeded and he was sent to Delhi.

That was the start of a new life for him ,feeling completely alienated , scared to talk ,trying to come in terms with the city life...how different were those days.

All the money of his family was spent on him

But only he knew how hard it was , every day being a new challenge in the city ,didn't know where to start ,where to stop ,no-one to guide

One side if he was scared of moving ahead the other side he was scared to stop ,it hit him hard ...but never stopped trying , he still tried his best and started a business which was a huge blow ,after that he had to face a lot of ups and down .

Maan he was interrupted  by a call

He received a call ,he picked it and wished the other person with a huge smile on his face ,she took her eyes away from the trees and looked at him while adjusting her hair strands behind her ear

He smiled at her while talking and handed the mobile to her.

She took and replied with excitement.

Geet

They recently got married ,He tied the knot exactly before four months.

During these months ,they shared a good rapport ,a friendly relation.

The hardly know each other.

They know each other's hobbies and may be their living style , there education and few more things Works in a very famous and successful ad agency ,a fun-loving girl ,enjoys life as it comes.

Haan  mama...we'll be there till this evening

She wore a very simple peach coloured  chiffon sari .

She gave the mobile and again looked out.

Maan mujhe bahut bhook lagi hain!! Kuch khaaye??

Accha sampath ,gaadi kahi acche restaurant ke pass rokna

Restaurant nahi dhaba!!

Highway pe dhaba ka khaana bahut tasty hota hai..uska koi jawaab nahi

Yeh lijiye saahab ,yeh bahut accha dhaaba hai!

Geet and Maan went to the dhaaba

Bhaiya 4 paranthe aur ek paneer masala aur ek Dal makhani laana bhaiya

Maan aapne kabhi dhabe pe khaana khaaya hai??

Haan Geet par bahut pehle !!

You know what Maan ,winters mein woh bhi raat ko dhaabe pe baithke garma garam khaana khaana ka mazaa hi kuch aur hai!!

Accha tumhe aur kya kya pasand hai!!

Uski list toh bahut lambi hai...I'm a foodie...!!

I love eating food ,I loce walking in the rain ek baar school se aate aate na bahut tez bearish ho rahi thi aur roads saare khaali the aur main paidal paidal road pe chal rahi thi

Akele akele

Nahi nahi mere saath ek ladks bhi tha...main use nahi jaanti par poore road mein hum donon hi the and mujhe na bilkul 80's ki filmon ki feel a rahi thi

Woh waha bearish mein ...main yaha barish mein!!!

And she laughed!!

She kept looking at her ,she kept on speaking about all her favourite things and there was an incident  linked to all those which Geet narrated with changing her expressions in every few seconds.

She had a bank of expressions.

Maan just kept looking at her and listened to her .

She even lent him  few of her expressions and soon he too changed his expressions at regular intervals.

He always loved her attitude ,lively attitude not scared of anyone ,speaks up for herself with a charming personality.

They soon reached Geet's house.

All the kids of Geet's house ran towards Maan ..they all hugged Maan ,all of them loved to spend time with him, he pampered all of them ,hugged them ,gave chocolates to them , he soon got busy with those children while Geet went inside with  her mother.

They all showered all their love upon her ,they made all her favourite dishes.

And they all met during the lunch again

Maan bte so kaam kaisa chal raha hai aapka

Bilkul thik mama ,sab kuch thik chal raha hai.

Waise Maan aj Geet ke school ka annual day hai...iski saari puraani dost aane wali hai yah ape ,toh aap aur Geet chale jaana bte

Ji main?? Geet waha pe apni puraani doston se milegi toh ...

Toh kya hua?? Aap bhi chaliye ,she said while smiling

Maan agreed to her

Thik hai phir main bhi chalta hoon,kab nikalna hai??

They both were  ready ,She was looking gorgeous in an off-white saree ,with minimal jewellery .

He went near her ...you are looking beautiful.

He gave a peck on her cheek making her blush

They soon went to the annual day

As soon as they entered the school premised one of her friends saw Geet and ran towards her!!!

GEET!!!! She almost shouted

Geet tu aa gayi?? Aunty bata rahi thi kit u aaj aa rahi hai...finally tu aa hi gayi!!

Main bahut khush hoon.

Hello jija ji kaise ho aap

Ji main bilkul theek

Pehchaana aapne??

Main ...

Jahnavi ,Maan completed

Aapko yaad hai??

Haan bilkul!! Hum shaadi mein mile the

Geet ki best friend.

Jija ji ,main aapki Geet ko thodi der ke liye le jaaun baaki doston se milwane

Haan haan bilkul

Jahnavi took Geet to meet with other friends.

Maan stood there watching all the friends meeting after a long time ,he sat on a small bench located in the corner watching the excitement on all the faces.

Just then he noticed a group of friends staring at him.

Woh Maan Singh Khurana hai na

Haan ...I recently read on article in Outlook

He is one of the youngest and very successful CEO's ...yeah he is a brilliant ,you know what one of my friends stays in Delhi ,and her husband works in the same company and he even worked under him and she told me once that he is a brilliant person ,damn intelligent.

But what is he doing here??

Yeah that's what I'm thinking

Maan tried to ignore the people staring at him ,he still sat there looking here and there

Geet looked at him ,he was sitting alone.

She wasn't able to enjoy while he was sitting alone

Jahnavi ek minute

Maan chaliye na...

Geet par ...

Maan chalo na ...main aapko apne saare doston se milwati hun.

Chalo

Oh look don't tell me that she is his wife

Ohh.. I can't believe this!!

Geet introduced Maan to all of them.

Wow Geet tum toh bahut badal gayi ho?? I still remember  the way you used to sit in a corner and cry for each and every small thing

Tum toh dhang se baat bhi nahi kar paati thi!!

Waise Geet do you remember your first stage performance ..jahaan tum kaamp rahi thi ,one of them tried to make fun of her

She went on...but Geet heard it from one ear and left it from other.

Geet what's all that asked Maan while walking with her

Truth Maan...

What?? Maan stopped while walking .

Yeah truth ,I was like that Maan...when I was a child I was scared of many things, a nervous child.

But soon I realised that being so innocent and sensitive will not work .

I had to change myself... rather everything around me changed me.

When I was new to Mumbai ,I had no friends , many laughed at me ,

I understood that I had to stand on my own feet...then a lot of incidents which I can never forget ...that totally broke me down but now I don't cry looking at them. Instead I feel happy that I went through them and overcame them ...and now I'm happy and I don't expect myself to keep thinking about those things that happened ages ago and cry upon them.

I better think about my future ,she talked while tying up her hair into a ponytail!!

Ahhh..sometimes this open hair gets so irritating!!

 They both were walking on the road and Maan looked at her

 I never knew that behind this smile are a lot of tears ...behind this boldness are a lot of sorrows

Behind this charm and attitude are many  incidents that made you week.

. I thought that I'm the only one!!

 Don't know how many things are still to be uncovered in our lives Geet

Waiting for many more new things to be uncovered in this journey ,OUR JOURNEY

 

He went to her  ...ab toh mujhe bhi baarish me chalne ka mann kar raha hai.

She signalled him to come nearer ,is baar toh rain dance bhi karenge she winked

Oh wow...baarish ji ab toh taras khayiye is insaan par...ise ek mauka dijiye na apne is pyaari se biwi ke saath rain dance karna ka...jaldi baras jayiye.

and I thought I'm the only one said Geet

What??

"Dramebaaz" ,she smiled and walked

Even I thought I'm the only one ,he murmered

What??

You'll get to know ,he winked.

They both continued their walk till their house

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Posted: 12 years ago
#2
awesome os
lovely
awww both hv faced much in life.
loved their comfort level btwn maaneet
loved maans monologue
thnx 4 d pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
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i loved this os... their feelings has been so beautifully described
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Love it graphics...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow... it was amazing... they suffered a lot in life but both are strong enough to handle things in their own way... do write more...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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  lovely..
  dreamy..
   awesome..
   tears hidden back in smile..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Amazing OS...loved it...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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this was awesome...
i really loved it...very nice os...
how maan strived in his life and has become what he is...

and then geet...even she has experienced a lot in her life...they are so perfect for each other...i loved when both said i though that i was the only one...this was just awesome...

loved it...
thnxxx for the pm... :)))
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: sakshi.ekansh

wow... it was amazing... they suffered a lot in life but both are strong enough to handle things in their own way... do write more...

Awww...thanks a lot dear..I'm glad you liked it πŸ€—
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: aditi_2010

i loved this os... their feelings has been so beautifully described

Thanks a lot dear!!! πŸ˜ƒ