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Posted: 12 years ago
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congratulation:)
update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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 wow... so sooon
 
               
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Edited by tintinu - 12 years ago
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wow congrats dear for new thread update soon sweetyy🤗
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Congrats on the new thread Di

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congratulation...plz update soon...
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Dhundlae aks

PART 133
 

Rano heard it all.. softly caressing her forehead ..patting her... Holding back her own tears, for she know it will only hurt her baby more.
 
 
 
Mean while Maan spend the whole night & the day out in the farm house. He sat there all by himself next to the pool.. watching the sunlight fad...into the calm moon shine.. hrs had flown by but he felt no where at peace. He didn't like losing control, wat happens around her!! why he feels so much ease around her..may it be knowing it is Geet...or not knowing.. the happiness, the warmth, the bliss he felt around her was just pure especially with misitimia..& he couldn't see her like this. He couldn't see her running away from him like this. ok.. they went too far with all their closeness, but he didn't feel a bit guilty..
 
 
so much he tried to think otherwise but it made him feel happy & a strange feeling that it can't be wrong.. its all right.. though he knows this doesn't happen between any two people.. but if it has, then they r special.. there is some thing very different between them than the usual. She is his mistimia..
 
he closed his eyes... she doesn't approve of him calling that anymore. Why does it hurt so much..
did it hurt her when he stopped her from calling him her puchki.. in the mid of all the stupid misconception of his    
tear rested in the corner of his eye.. kya ussen bhi itna bura laga hoga??
does she know how much it hurts ..
this..
between  them..
he dropped flat on the floor... looking at the clear sky.. letting the tear roll down.. slidding his ear.. to the floor... only sound in that silent night
 
 
 
Geet almost dossed off .. then suddenly woke up. She looked at the time, she looked at mom.. she had dossed off while patting her in the lap. She slowly took her hand off her head, giving mama a loving look, feeling so much more lighter & relaxed. She sighed ..slowly tip toeing out of the room to the hall, she slowly went out checking again looking behind couple of times. .. she opened the door.. & he was right there.. she closed the door behind nervously..
like he understood instantly she was worried abt something.. he searched her eyes for an answer
wo..she pointed at the door..
wo mama aayen hain
he nodded & turned to leave without saying anything
she sighed kind of feeling sad she couldn't stop him, but why his eyes seemed different today.
 
He stopped few steps away & reluctantly took the flower to give it to her. He looked at it couple of times unsure if it was a good idea, wat will she tell her mom.. he sighed stepping forward.
 
 
She felt a wild emotion running down.. melting her.. she went in & closed the door ...sunk down..cuddling up dipping her head in her knees..suddenly something she just opened the door only to see him.. bending down the flower next to the door.
wo..
wo...mujhe..
phool..
he looked so baffled by her sudden appearance. He didn't know whether to give to her in her hand or leave it down..
she won't take it from him..
all the time he had forceably slipped it in her bag. 
He fluttered his eyes .. looked into hers.. his hand raised to give it to her... an unfelt anxiety ran down him..
like a feel of tension..  proposing types.. her reaction only made even more cute..blushing looking down pushing her curls behind.. her toes cutely curling.. her fingers contemplating.. still an expression of denial
both of them almost jumped mid way through with their flower exchange.. when they heard rano..shouting from the bed room.. kaun hain beta?
geet looked at him & inside..
Ji
ji ..
ji mama..
she began to breath heavily not able to lie..
he looked at her in awe, she looked like a small kid being caught doing naughty naughty..
he smiled.. & backed away.. hitting himself with the flower & keeping it in his ear. Wat kind of a jerk is he even thinking abt her challo.. when her feelings r so clear in her face. He definitely is an asshole to have thought anything wrong abt her, at the first place. Wat was he thinking.. then.. he cutely blamed it all on her.. ussne harkaten aisen thi..
mujhe kaisen pata chalta itni cute hain.

By then rano came out getting worried.. kaun hain beta?
Ji kuch nahi..
wo
wo watch man tha
Geet went in wondering wat was she doing.
 
 
Next couple of week Maan couldn't knock at the door but he silently left the flower at the door step & she took it without her mom noticing it.
 
 
Geet felt so much better with her mom being around taking care of her pampering her like always.. all the 3 frds spending time with mama & getting pampared & full of fun time.
Finally taking out her car too with all the clouds cleared between her & mom.
Technically she didn't even have to work anymore..
rano ' bahut hogaya abhi aur job karni ki koi zarori nahi hain, concentrate on ur studies
but how could she quit she was doing this for her puchki.
Geet ' nahi mama  she almost pounced
then relaxed nahi mama .. I like this job
rano ' I know but beta, don't stress urself
Geet ' ji mama
rano kissed her  - sach kahoon beta..
we r really proud of u that ur doing this job & doing well in ur studies
Geet hugged her back.. love u mama
there was a definite change in Geet she looked happier & her bindas self. She spent a lot of time with armaan & prachi.
 
But still she was very angry with him. & he knew it... & tried every thing to make to up to her.
Finally it was event day. Every one was dam excited with all the revealing costume vidya balan was going to wear.
Geet teased all the guys putting a bucket infront of karan, visal, armaan & raj.. holding one bucket for maan not sure whether to keep it or not
prachi ' yeh kya kar rahi hain
Geet ' aab dehkne..in sab ki kitni la tapoke gi
every laughed.. while the guys were totally embarrassed
raj teased iska kanha hain pointing at maan
prachi very defensively ' he is not like that
raj  laughed mockingly & gave a high 5 to maan
Geet got up & went away, she didn't want to feel anything different..
especially unsure herself why she didn't want to keep the bucket infront of him. 
 
She laughed.. as the music began.. & the walked back of the stage.. took a dupata & put it around her neck..over her t-shirt..
Haa'aanh
'Ssh Chutki jo tune kaati hai
Chori Se kaati hai, yahaan-wahaan
 
she made a cute twisting lips & looked away

Roothi hoon main tujh se roothi hoon
Mujhe mana le na O jaan-e-jaan
 
he came from back & tapped her shoulder left & right...
Chhedenge hum tujhko
Ladki tu hai badi bumbak

she looked here & there... kind of bliss knowing it was him.. & more than that.. he didn't watch the dance..
Ooh la la ooh la la
Ooh la la ooh la la
Tu Hai Meri Fantasy ee ...

she smiled.. & flickered her finger.. running away..
 
Choona na choona na
Choona na choona na
Ab main jawaan ho gayi
 
he ran behind.. trying to tickle her..
arey arey arey...
Ooh la la ooh la la
Ooh la la ooh la la
Tu Hai Meri Fantasy ee ee...
 
she tried to dodge away.. 
Choona na choona na
Choona na choona na
Ab main jawaan ho gayi
 
he managed to catch her.. from the waist.. & turned her around.. she panted looking down.. leaning down
Haan'aah...
Haan'aah...
Haan'aah...
Haaye Chhuaa jo tune jo Dil ne maari seeti

he immediately.. held her cheek.. & kissed..
De de inn gaalo pe ik pappi meethi meethi

her eyes widen in shock..
Haaye Chhuaa jo tune jo Dil ne maari seeti
he turned her cheek.. & cutely patted her other cheek.
De de inn gaalo pe ik pappi meethi meethi
she looked down .. turning away..
he sat on his knees.. & got up tracing his finger along her side
Yovan tera saawan bhara
Bheeg gaya dil ye meraa
 
 
she realized he was just doing the dance step.. she followed.. exactly.. wat the main leads were doing for al these days..
Haaye! tune hi barsaat karayi
Kya kare ye yovan bechara
Bechara
Bechara.
 
Ooh la la ooh la la
Ooh la la ooh la la
Tu Hai Meri Fantasy
Na na naa
Choona na choona na
Choona na choona na
Ab main jawaan ho gayi
Ooh la la ooh la la
Ooh la la ooh la la
Tu Hai Meri Fantasy
Choona na choona na
Choona na choona na
Ab main jawaan ho gayi
Tu Hai Meri Fantasy
Aaan'haa..
both of laughed a loud.. when he pulled the duputta she had wrapped around.. with the lyrics.. & rested.. their heads together... panting & giggling
can we be friends
.. he said looking at her.. catching for his breath
 
 
 
 
Precap
wonder wat will Geet say??
-NEXT PART 134-
thanks for the lovely comments & likes
love
muskan
Edited by muskanp - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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m 1st 

i loved d update...majnu "maan" babu is getting some sense after all...she is not chaalu...she wasnt any way...it was u idiot...bt feeling bad for him too...

dont knw abt her answer bt m happy dat he took 1st step...geet wont say yes i feel bt u cant predict geet when is maan concerned...

geet gave bucket to everyone ðŸ˜†

prachi ðŸ˜¡ who asked u for ur opinion...

i thought raj would say lets b friends and den try to help bt it was maan...

i hope rano meets him when he is at her door...😊 ...for daily flower giving ceremony 


Edited by maanmeet1 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Peaking in to see if by any Chance Muski is updating???
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome update...

Dance seq is just amazing...
Loved the way maan continued his flower session...I wanted Maan meeting rano...

can we be friends...lols...ye to pura reverse gear me chal rahe hai...they hav done everything and now they are gonna name it as friendship...i guess they are slow as well as fast...

Continue soon...Edited by farie1209 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome update
so i was right in guessing that maan would want to becoeme friend with geet😉