Armaan se Jassi tak

Maybe this 12th poem of mine on Armaan and Jassi would be the last of the series, because if Armaan falls for Jessica, i think my invested emotions would just vapourise. I am crossing my fingers as still there is a chance for them to sublime too.

So here it is, from me, to all the forum friends...

AT TIMES I WANT TO LAUGH AT LOVE

 

 At times I want to laugh at life

When all else seem so small and trife

 

What tripped me wasn't a banana peel

Instead it was love's own heel

 

Over me it hung large and loom

But I was watching channel zoom

 

She pulled me while I'was hunching down

Tickling laughter out of a funny bone

 

And when I felt she was life's own light

She drew away so out of sight

 

I crawled and searched every corner of mine

And love was laughing out in shine

 

My face was smeared in dust and sand

Love was clapping with a musical band

 

Now the heart thuds in my ear

But to listen, you aren't here

Will wait my love, year after year

Come back once, and be my dear.

Edited by alien_visitor - 19 years ago

wow!! another great poem, alien_visitor!!👏👏 

i'm glad that this show provides so much inspiration to you to write your poems!!😃 keep up the good work!👍🏼 

Wow, Alien Visitor. That was most beautiful and really cute all at the
same time! God has truly blessed you with a beautiful talent! 😛

Thanx shiverz and JP..I doubt if i will continue to be inspired.

why??? I love reading your poems, they always strike a cord with me!

Wow!! that a beautiful poem alien.. plz continue writing ...

Ofcourse i would also want to go on writing...But as I said if Armaan falls for Jessica's looks, i dont know, i think I will fall down flat too!!!

wow it waz beautiful.....deep from the heart😳..absolutely loved it.. 👏👏

 Amazing !!!! U r talented 👏

As usual, Alien, wonderful!!👏

Jessica isn't going to get de-makeoverized anytime soon.. but since Armaan is already in love with Jassi, I doubt if her looks or the lack of them will change the way he feels about her.

In fact, I can just imagine Armaan realizing that the glam doll who has males hanging on her every word is his lil Jassi... and getting jealous like crrrrazzzzzzzzyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy... erupting like Mt. Vesuvius on Diwali........😳😳 ... will you write a poem about how Armaan felt laying his eyes on her again? That would be amazing😳