Woh Pehli Baar...Tia Ranveer FanFic - END - Page 73

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Posted: 19 years ago
phew,

finished reading 5 parts together at a stretch,

really nice Lamina 👏

continue sooon 😳

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
wow.!!!!!!!!.tia"s bitrhday.....waiting eagerly for your next part....
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Posted: 19 years ago

Tia and Ranveer wanted to spend the whole week together…but with exams coming up…they saw each other only at breakfast, lunch and dinner during that week …as well as the next week which was the exam week…

On Thursday, after exams, Ranveer dropped Tia off at her home before heading back to his place…

T: Ranveer…

R: ha Tia..

T: tumhe yaad hai na..ki Tia wants ki sabse pehle Tia ke birthday pe tumhi Tia ko wish karo..

R: (smiles) ha Tia..hum kaise bhool sakte hai….Tia humne aapse waada kiya hai na…aapki birthday pe sabse pehle hum hi aapko wish karenge….

Tia smiles and hugs Ranveer…

R: Tia…baas hug…

T: Ranveer….tum bhool gaye papa aur uncle ne kya kaha hai….

R: ha Tia..paar… (comes close to Tia)

T: Ranveer…papa ghar mein hai…

R: Tia…. (runs his hand through Tia's hair)

T: Ranveer…..papa ne hume dekh liya…toh hum dono bohot problem mein aa jayenge…..aab jaldi jao….Suman aunty bhi wait kar rahi hongi…

R: Tia…(makes a sad face)

T: Ranveer….tum bhi na….

Tia comes close to Ranveer and quickly gives him a peck on his cheek..

T: aab jaldi jao……papa aa jaenge…

R: thik hai…aab aap chahti hi nahi hai ki hum aapke paas rahe toh..

T: Ranveer….(hits him mischeviously)

R: ok Tia….hum chalte hai…aapse baadmein baat karenge..bye..

T: bye

Ranveer drives away from there….

In the night….at around 11.50 Pm…Tia is lying in her bed..thinking about Ranveer…waiting for if to be 12…..so that he would call….just then her phone rings…Tia picks up the phone…

T: hello

R: (softly) hi princess…..

T: (softly and shyly) Hi….

R: Tia….jaldi bahar aa jayiye..

T: bahar??? Kaha??

R: Tia…hum aapke ghar ke bahar khade hai…jaldi neeche aa jayiye…

T: KYA!! Ranveer tum…tum yahan kya kar rahe ho…

R: Tia…jaldi bahar aa jayiye..agar uncle ne dekha toh….

T: huh….ha..ha Tia abhi aa rahi hai…

Tia slowly tip toes and comes down stairs…trying not to make even slightest bit of sound on her way down….and then opens the door....and peep out…

T: (looking around)….Ranveer??

Ranveer pulls Tia out…

T: Ranveer…..

R: Tia….jaldi andar chaliye…

T: andar??

Ranveer grabs Tia's hand…and takes her inside the house…

T: Ranveer..yeh …yeh tum kya kar rahe ho…??

R: (whispers) sshhh Tia….dheere se baat kijiye..

T: ha paar..

R: (whispers) Tia…uncle jaag jayenge…aur phir hum problem mein aa jayenge

T: lekin Tia ke kuch samjh mein….

Ranveer is worried that Sumeet might hear them….so he gives a quick kiss to Tia on her lips to quieten her….

R: (Whispers) Tia….kuch maat kahiye…baas hamare saath chaliye…

Tia was already in a bit of a daze after the kiss…so she blankly followed Ranveer….who took her to the garden….near the fountain….

R: Ha Tia…aab kahiye jo aapko kehna hai..

T:huh??

R: Tia… (kisses Tia on the cheek)

T: huh…ha…woh…woh Tia yeh pooch rahi thi ki tum yahan kya kar rahe ho?

R: Tia…aaphi ne toh humse kaha tha ki aap chahti hai ki aapki birthday pe hum saabse pehle aapko wish kare…baas wohi karne chale aaye…

T:paar…Tia ko toh laga tha ki tum Tia ko phone karke wish karoge…

R: Tia…agar hum aapko sirf phone karke wish karte….toh hum aapke chehre ki woh muskurahat kaise dekh paate jo humare birthday wish karne pe aapke ke chehre pe aati…

Tia smiled and hugged Ranveer tightly….

T: Ranveer…Tia loves you so much…..

R: Tia…hum bhi aapse bohot pyaar karte hai…tabhi toh yahan hai…

Just then Tia saw a bag in Ranveer's hand…

T: Ranveer…yeh kya hai??

Ranveer opened that bag …..it had a box in it…Ranveer opened the box and took out a small slice of cake that was in it….

R: Tia….cake ke bina birthday kaise hota…

T: This is so sweet Ranveer..

R: woh actually Tia…humne try kiya low fat cake laneka…paar mili nahi..

T: its ok Ranveer….Tia ke liye yeh low fat cake se better hai….

Tia smiled…Ranveer put a candle on the cake….

Meanwhile…it was almost 12 and Sumeet went to Tia's room to wish her…Sumeet entered the room and couldn't find Tia anywhere….he then went into the balcony and saw Tia with Ranveer in the garden…Ranveer was lighting the candle on the cake…

Sumeet smiled to himself…

Sumeet: Yeh dono bachche bhi na…bilkul pagal hai….mein aab Tia ko kaal subah wish kar lunga…..

Sumeet goes away ….back to his room…

Meanwhile, Ranveer lites the candle…and looks at his watch…

R: Tia…Happy Birthday!!

T: (sweetly) Thanks Ranveer

R: Tia…abhi 12 baaj rahe hai…aur dekhiye…humne aapna waada nibhaya…aab chaliye…jaldi se cake katiye….

Tia closes her eyes and makes a wish and then blows the candles and cuts the cake..Ranveer takes a small bit of the cake and feeds it to Tia….Tia too feeds a small bit to Ranveer….

T: Ranveer….this is the best birthday gift Tia has received….

R: Tia..yeh aapka bday gift nahi hai….

T: Toh??

Ranveer took out a small box from his jeans pocket and opened it…in it was a wonderful set of earnings…small diamond earing with a delicate pearl at the end…dropping from it…

T:aaaah…Ranveer yeh….yeh toh bohot expensive hoga na…tumne Tia pe itne paise kyu waste kiya..

R: Tia…aap hamare liye sabse precious hai…aapke saamne inn sabka ya paise ka koi importance nahi hai…

T: par Ranveer…itna paise…

R: Tia…hume jo paise aaj tak hamare bday pe mile…humne woh kabhi spend nahi kiye the….baas unhise aapke liye yeh leke aaye hai..aur fikar mat kijiye…hamare bday fund mein abhi bohot paise hai….humne unmein se baas chota sa bit iss gift pe kharch kiya hai…

T: Ranveer…these are soooooo beautiful…

Ranveer removes the earnings from the box….and moves Tia's hair away from her neck…and puts the earnings in Tia's ears….and then kisses Tia gently before holding her in his arms…

R: Tia…

T: ha Ranveer….

R: hum aapse kuch pooche

T: ha…

R: Tia….abhi cake kaate waqt aapne kya wish kiya tha..

T: Ranveer….wish ki hui baat kissi ko nahi baatate….

Ranveer gently starts kissing Tia on her neck..

R: paar Tia…hum "koi" nahi hai…

T: woh…..

R: hmmm….(still kissing Tia's neck)

T: (trying to recollect what she wished for…she was feeling a bit lost) woh Tia ne…yeh…wish kiya…ki aise hi…tum hamesha Tia ko bday pe wish karo…..

R:…aise…. (gently kissing Tia on her neck)

T:Ranveer….!!

Tia is about to move away but Ranveer pulls back her towards him and holds her in his arms…

R: Tia….hum hamesha aaj ki tarah aapko sabse pehle bday wish karenge…

T: Ranveer….thanks…(smiles)

R: Tia….woh…aab hume jaana hoga…

T: hmmmm ?

R: agar hum aab nahi gaye…..toh kahi uncle hume…

T: ha Ranveer….(with a sad face)

R: toh….chale Tia…

T: hmmm…(nods)

Edited by lamina - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
cho cute 👏

im sure Tia might hv had a blast on her b'day 😉 😳 😆

continue soon

Divya
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Posted: 19 years ago
this part is terrific ,words like gr8,nice awesome are not enough , this is much much more than that....
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Posted: 19 years ago
OMG!!!!!!
this is one of the bestest parts till now!
toooooooooooooooooooooooooo cuteeeee 😳 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: divya_92

cho cute 👏

im sure Tia might hv had a blast on her b'day 😉 😳 😆

continue soon

Divya



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