Originally posted by: Anhdara13
oohh this was so cute. I love the idea of Uday wooing her with roses, and the significance of a single red rose! *swoon* So romantic. And the date? Perfect.
I feel a little bad for Jai though. She deserves a happy ending.
Anhdara- this is something you will enjoy. And SERIOUSLY, no joke, right after I read your comment, that night I have the dream which sets this all into place:
Originally posted by: manveerlover
reeha it was amazingo it wa so well written loved it so much best prt uptil now n my fav plx plx plx update soon is baar mat tarsana late update de kar;)
Originally posted by: shrarrti
Reeha! Maar dala yaar! I don't know how you can say people won't like this update. They kiss,which will never in a million years happen on the show, so this update definitely stands out.
I don't even think you need to edit it at all. It's a masterpiece as is!The single red rose, the chest full of gifts, the romantic dinner on the yacht, and THE KISS!I'm still fanning myself to cool down and still smiling the goofy smile I got when Manyata started looking around for Udhay. It didn't go away for the rest of the update. Woman you are something else! π€ Tons of flying kisses for you!
Aw! Thanks! <3 I'm glad you enjoyed it. It was definatley slower and less action packed then the last, and I felt as if I could have written it better, but I had a deadline!π this is why I should be allowed to take my sweet time people!π- and yes, a kiss would never happen onscreen, so this is where I can make things happenπ³
Originally posted by: Eternized_Blues
Reeha...Amazing part. Loved the whole concept of wooing with red roses. Love the way Brijraj and M are bonding. Its so endearing. I really liked the outfits. Its amazing how you make it so lavish and still simple.
Great Part
OMG REEHA!!!!!
I soo LOVED it!!
the whole valentine thing was just so cute!!
i mean i just couldn't help smiling in the entire update, be it brijraj teasing manyata or Udayveer giving a rose to manyata daily or the whole evening they spent together!
it was so beautiful! and who said the updte wasn't good?! it was great!
AND they finally kissed!!ππ³
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hahahaha!! but in the end after it rained SHE kissed him!π
i sooo sooo loved the update!
thank you for such a beautiful update! π€
love
Navpreet
Navpreet! π€ I'm glad you've liked it- I'm sure that part was everyone's favouriteππ. I firmly believe sometimes a girl just has to do things herself, and after being interrupted so many times (I think there were about 5 almost kiss moments) M decides to do it herself.π
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