The Udayveer Chronicles| NEW UPDATE|PART 26 PAGE 137 - Page 22

Cytherea

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Posted: 12 years ago

#211

Hey!! That was such a sweet part..I would like to see Moniya falling for him..Maybe showing more concern..I absolutely adore your portrayal of Uday

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Reeha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#212

Originally posted by: shiv-gauri4eva
Hey!! That was such a sweet part..I would like to see Moniya falling for him..Maybe showing more concern..I absolutely adore your portrayal of Uday

Trust me! I'll get it there😉

...but first I need to get rid of Akash😡

...I've already thought of how as well 😃

Thank you so much for reading dear (I'm sorry I don't know your name, please be sure to tell me! Since you always comment and give me your feedback, I'd like to atleast call you by your name😆)

I'll keep your suggestion in mind, and maybe speed it up😳

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Aradhna

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Posted: 12 years ago

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I am in LOVE with this Udayveer and Manyata, and how she's softening towards him, and how confused he is around her. Gah. He gave her Tom back right? (Have her remember a bit please? At least enough to stop needling him with the intention to hurt.)

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Nakita19

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Posted: 12 years ago

#214

That...was the BEST ff update I've EVER read!!!!!!!!!!!! I honestly don't think I have the words to express how I'm feeling at this moment... I sat here giggling and smiling to myself I was literally left Speechless, no exaggeration what so ever!!!! I get super excited when I see that there's an update...I..I..I'm rambaling lol! I sincerely hope you publish a novel one day! 👏 😍 Previous update and current Udayveer = 😳 😆 😍 ❤️

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Reeha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#215

Originally posted by: Anhdara13
I am in LOVE with this Udayveer and Manyata, and how she's softening towards him, and how confused he is around her. Gah. He gave her Tom back right? (Have her remember a bit please? At least enough to stop needling him with the intention to hurt.)

Well, you're correct, he did give her Tom; as for her remembering or not, you'll find out in the next one 😉
PS: I will consider your request 😛

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Reeha

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: Nakita19
That...was the BEST ff update I've EVER read!!!!!!!!!!!! I honestly don't think I have the words to express how I'm feeling at this moment... I sat here giggling and smiling to myself I was literally left Speechless, no exaggeration what so ever!!!! I get super excited when I see that there's an update...I..I..I'm rambaling lol! I sincerely hope you publish a novel one day! 👏 😍 Previous update and current Udayveer = 😳 😆 😍 ❤️

I'm glad you enjoyed it! It's only worth writing if someone else enjoys it! Thank you for reading, and I hope it keeps on being super exciting! 😊

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Pari

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Posted: 12 years ago

#217

Loved it Reeha...❤️

It was such a nice part dear...😃

do cotinue soon and please write some more passionate parts😳

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Reeha

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: -Paradise-
Loved it Reeha...❤️
It was such a nice part dear...😃
do cotinue soon and please write some more passionate parts😳

hahaa! Will do, by passionate, which scene from a past installment are you referring to (just so I have a reference point!😆) And I'll do my best to oblige; which scene did you think was the most romantic, and I'll write something with the same feel, different instance in the upcoming parts.😊

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