Wish Upon A Star - ArSh FF (P16, pg 58) - Page 7

Originally posted by: awesome

awesome part
plz cont soon

Hey, thanks a lot! I'm pleased you liked it. 😳

Originally posted by: Blazed_Blazing

Beautiful FF..
Loved it..
Please add me in your pm list..
And do continue soon..😊

And wish you a very HAPPY NEW YEAR..

Happy New Year to you too!!!

Thank you so much for reading and commenting. It's so great to know that you have enjoyed it so far. 😳  I'll surely PM you when I next update. It should be some time later this week.

Originally posted by: twilightmystery

omg!!

m speechless

how could u stop it right there

omg!!

continue soon

Ahhh, because I'm evil. 😈  Lolz. 😆  I'm glad I managed to leave you in suspense. Will try not to prolong it too much and bring the next update to you soon.

Originally posted by: luv_kash

omg!!!!! this part was so exceptionally beautifull...the way u described thier inner turmoil n thier feelings left me speechless...the way in which armaan was tying to ease n soothe shilpa was so cute...

n what is this...shona met wiyh an accident ...cant' wait to read further..plzzz cont soon

 

Oh woww, thank you!!!😳 I'm thrilled that you felt I described their feelings well and that you enjoyed Armaan comforting Shilpa. I was really hoping to establish this connection between them and show Armaan feeling protective of Shilpa without really understanding why. It will be important to the story as a whole. Yes, she did, but I promise not to make you wait too long to find out what happens next.

unusual...interesting...really liking it...hope that girl would not be shilpa...continue soon...

Originally posted by: roshni_A

unusual...interesting...really liking it...hope that girl would not be shilpa...continue soon...

Thanks for taking the time to read and comment. I'm glad you liked it. 😳  It was Shilpa who was knocked down. How badly she got hurt will be revealed in the next part, which should be up within some days.

it was lovely...the way u expressed every thing was just so beautifull..cant wait to read the next part :D

the second part was also amazing.. !

Aww Tani, darling, thanks so much!!!! I'm glad you had a chance to read it. It's so good to know you liked it. Your comment really made my day. Thanks for reading it hun. 🤗

awesome part!!!!!