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savvz
savvz @savvz Senior Member
Anniversary 17 Group Promotion 2
Posted: 12 years ago
wow... :)
hope this comes true in the serial as well... 
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Kritianya
kritika @Kritianya IF-Dazzler
Anniversary 13 Group Promotion 3 Networker 3
Posted: 12 years ago
BeautifulEdited by Kritianya - 12 years ago
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Escapist
Escapist @Escapist Goldie
Anniversary 14 Group Promotion 3 + 3
Posted: 12 years ago
It was that moment when tears slipped from my eyes unbridled...
It was that moment when I realized I love you so much that it hurts...
It was that moment when I knew I could love no one more than you...
And it was that moment when I came to know that we were not meant to be...

Loved it Lyraa...really...no more words :)

Cheers,
Fatima
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tina_1234
tina_1234 @tina_1234 IF-Rockerz
Anniversary 14 Visit Streak 90 0 + 3
Posted: 12 years ago
m happy for la..she has a happy endin sumwhr
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.Saraa.
.Saraa. @.Saraa. IF-Sizzlerz
Anniversary 14 Group Promotion 5 + 2
Posted: 12 years ago
yar i just loved it..it was really nice..awsome..my eyes welled up ..they way u have written.kudos to u
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Jasleen
Jasleen @Jasleen Goldie
Anniversary 19 Group Promotion 3
Posted: 12 years ago
That was amazing! Loved reading from Lavanya's perspective, I really hope something like this happens in the show.  Very well written⭐️
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mysterygirl123
mysterygirl123 @mysterygirl123 IF-Dazzler
Anniversary 13 Group Promotion 4 Fascinator 1
Posted: 12 years ago
awesome work...pls do continue and let me know too
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sparklystarstud
sharme @sparklystarstud IF-Dazzler
Anniversary 12 Group Promotion 4 + 3
Posted: 12 years ago
AMAZING OS!!!!!!!
lyraaa...loved it
it was like for real...
u described lavanya's emotions so beautifully
i had tears in my eyes while reading this...
bt sooo happy  that u gave her a happily ever after...
she deserves it...n u did justice to her character...
hope the cv's show sumthing like ur wonderful os for la...
thnx for the pm...

~sam 
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smileyhug7679
smileyhug7679 @smileyhug7679 IF-Dazzler Inactive
Anniversary 12 Group Promotion 4 Networker 1
Posted: 12 years ago
Very nice with la,s pov

Well written

Thanks for the pm


I feel very bad for la now
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littlemoi
littlemoi @littlemoi IF-Dazzler
Anniversary 12 Group Promotion 4 + 3
Posted: 12 years ago

OMG Lyraa this is beyond fantastic!! its soo amazing!! i loved loved loved loved loved loved the os!! the way you portrayed lavanya's emotions is just perfect!! thank you so much for the pm!!! had a blast reading!!

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