Kuch to hua hai 4 A-K - Page 5

its great I think Kripa will get saved by Angad 😊

awe......Angad's gonna become a hero 😳 😆

hehe....u forgot to change some of the names 😛...(kumud to kripa, kkusum to parvati) 😆

good job! 👍🏼

yur fan-fic was gr8 as always..... please continue it soon.....

PART-15....Angad beats them & they run away.Kripa's
                          eyes r full of tears.
                          A:get inside my car.its not safe 2 b here.
                          K:why do u care 4 me?leave me alone.
                          A:kripa plz..
                          A forcefully pushes into is car & drives 2 another
                          place. K:what r u doing?where r u going ?
                          They reach another place where no 1 is there.K:I want 2
                          go home.how can I sit with u alone in this evening?its
                          already dark.
                          A:I can understand ur feelings.everygirl gets scared in
                          this situation.but bwlieve me kripa.i've no bad
                          intention.i want 2 marry with our parents' permission.b4
                          that I won't behave badly with u.bcoz I luv u that much.

                          K was surprised.A:I no that u believe what u saw in the
                          disco club.Simon is crazy about me.i tried 2 make her
                          understand that I don'y luv her.but still she is after
                          me.nothing else kripa.i luv u.
                          K:I'm sorry angad.    
                          K looks at A' eyes. A' fingers go thru her face.
                          Song:kuch to {kal ho na ho}

                          Parvati is tensed:its so late.kripa has'nt cum yet.
                          Om:don't worry parvati.kripa wil cum soon.she's smart.
                          P:however smart she is,certain circumstances can do
                          anything 2 her.
                          O:what r u tensed about?
                          K:I hid a secret from u 4 not making u upset.kripa is
                          working in Mr.Bajaj's office.
                          O was shocked:so u new it.
                          P:u new it?
                          O:2day I realised that truth.
                          P:I'm scared whether he'll snatch her away.
                          O thinks about rishi telling that he'll send kripa 2
                          another world.A becomes upset.
                          Angad drops K 2 her house. P goes near her:kripa,r u
                          ok?
                          K:ya mama,I'm alright.why r u this much tensed?I'd lot
                          of work 2day.that's why I became late.
                          K thinks:no need of telling mama the truth.she'l b
                          upset.
                          OM becomes happy 2 see K.O:how did u cum?by taxi?
                          K was speechless. P:Mr.Bajaj dropped u?
                          O was shocked. P:how many times did I tell u not 2 b
                          close 2 him?
                          K:I came by taxi.
                          O-P r relived.
                          K thinks:how can I tell that angad dropped me.
                          K goes. P:Om..that bajaj is so cruel..
                          O:we can't blame him,bcoz he's trying 2 get his daughter
                          no?
                          P is stunned;no,kripa's dad is u Om.only u..

Part-16… Om's eyes r full of tears:parvati,why did'nt kripa take
                             b'th as my daughter?
                             P:but kripa is ur daughter om.
                             P hugs O & comforts.

                             Kripa gets x'mas uncle's message:Kripa,b careful while u
                             fall in luv.its dangerous.
                             K mails back:don't worry uncle.i was misunderstading my
                             luver.he's very nice.

                             Apo*na talks on oh:what?u did'nt kill kripa?dammed!
                             She turns back & is shocked 2 see Bajaj there.B slaps
                             her:how dare u try 2 harm my daughter?u can't do
                             anything 2 her while I'm alive.
                             O:ya,I did so,otherwise I'll lose u.
                             B:u'll lose me only if u harm kripa.why don't u
                             understand my feelings?
                             A:ok,I understand ur sentiments 2wards kumud.but why
                             did'nt u marry parvati & had kripa with u?why did u marry
                             me?do u hav any affair with parvati now?
                             B:I've no connection with parvati.
                             B goes.

                             P :Om,we shud'nt allow Mr.Bajaj 2 hav kripa.so we
                             shud get her married soon.
                             O:yes.

                             P & O show k sum guys' photos. P:whom do u
                             like more?
                             K becomes upset.O notices it:what happened kripa?u
                             did'nt like any1?
                             K :no papa.i don't want 2 marry
                             P :it's the correct time 2 marry.u finished ur
                             studies & got job also.
                             O:do u luv any1?
                             K & P r shocked. O:I'm like ur friend no.tell me.
                             K :yes.
                             They r shocked. P:who is he?
                             K :Dr.Angad .
                             O:r u gous serious about it?
                             K :yes papa.

                             Angad cums there.kripa is shocked. K introdces him 2
                             her parents:this is angad.
                             A:nice 2 meet u.
                             O:kripa told me everything.
                             A:that's true.i luv her very much.i want 2 marry
                             her .i'll bring my parents soon.i'll tell them 2day.
                             O-P-K smile.

                             A tells his parents Dilip-Naina:I luv a girl.
                             D:simon?she's mad about u.
                             A :not simon.kripaplz papa..i luv her.
                             They smile. D:We won't stand against ur wish.
                             A becomes happy. N:we want 2 see kripa.
                             A :I'll bring her soon.

                             K gets up from the bed.O-P with a smiling
                             face:Happy b'day kripa.
                             K smiles:thanku papa…mama…
                             O gives a family packet of chocolate:ur fav 4 u
                             K :thanku papa.u r the most wonderful father in this
                             world.
                             P :my present 4 u is in the evening.i've prepared a
                             sweet cake 4 the bday party.K:I'm waiting 4 it.

                             A phones:happy b'day kripa.
                             K :thanku..in the evening there is a party.i hope u'll
                             cum.
                             A :sure.

                             K gets ready 2 go 2 the office.P:2day u don't go
                             2 the office.
                             P thinks:Mr.Bajaj on kripa's b'day…Oh!he'll do
                             sumthing.he can't 4get this day.
                             K :mama,I'll go & cum now.i've 2 invite Bajaj sir.
                             P :what?why ?no need.he is an outsider.
                             K :he's not an outsider 4 me.
                             O -P r stunned. K:he's my boss & I respect
                             him.so…bye..
                             K goes.P & O r mood-out. P:Om,whats happening?
                             O :cool down parvati.
                             P :how can I?sum1 is trying 2 snatch our daughter.
                             O :believe me,we won't lose kripa.
                             It was a sharp voice.

Edited by jasminerahul - 18 years ago

awesome parts! cont sonn! plz!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Part-17:Kripa goes 2 the office. K tells bajaj:sir,plz I
                          want leave.
                          B:ya.happy b'day kripa.
                          K was surprised:how did u no that 2day is my b'day?
                          B thinks:how can I 4get my daughter's b'day?
                          B:it was written in the record.
                          K:sir,plz cum 4 2day's b'day party.
                          B:sure,I wud've cum even If I was not invited.
                          K smiles.

                          Party.Kripa is in a grand choli.Angad cums with a
                          ring:this is my present 4 u.
                          K smiles. Then cums Bajaj.OM-parvati r shocked. B
                          smiles at them.He notices A there & becomes
                          dull:who is that kripa?
                          K:he's ….
                          K becomes shy.B doubts & leaves the topic:ok.
                          He gives a earring set 4 k:this is my gift.
                          K was surprised:u r giving valuable gifts 4 an ordinary
                          worker of ur office?
                          B:u r nort ordinary,u r very special.
                          K smiles.P gets irritated.K cuts cake.
                          Om goes out.Bajaj goes near him:u were shocked 2 see
                          me after a long while?
                          O:plz bajaj,plz leave us.
                          B:ok,but I need kripa;my daughter.
                          O was shocked. B:u've 2 tell her that I'm her real
                          dad.otherwise I've 2 tell her the truth.
                          O was shocked.B goes inside. Bajaj cums near
                          K:Kripa,I've 2 go now.so bye..
                          K:thanks 4 cuming.
                          B goes staring at O-P.K's friend Harshini
                          tells:Angad,what song wud u sing 4 ur beloved kripa?
                          A sings:pretty woman…
                          Every1 smiles.all dance with their gfs.A dances with K.
                          Finally O goes near P:hey pretty woman,will u dance
                          with me?
                          P:4 the song pretty woman?this is 4 youngsters.
                          O:ya,we r also young.
                          P laughs & dances with O.O's cell rings:I'm Rishab
                          Bajaj.i called u 2 remind u 2 tell kripa the truth.
                          O sweats. B:who is that guy standing with kripa?I've
                          seen him with kripa many times.
                          O:Dr.Angad Khanna.
                          B:he was taking so much of freedom 2 kripa.
                          O:we r fixing their marriage.
                          B was shocked:what?without her father's knowledge u r
                          fixing her wedding?how dare u?
                          O becomes upset.

kahani mein twist hai !! anywes it was nice part 👏 👏

PART-18..Bajaj :don't think that u can conduct kripa's
                          wedding without my knowledge.
                          Om's eyes r full of tears.O goes 2 his room. Parvati
                          thinks:what happened 2 Om after this ph call ?
                          P goes 2 O:who called u Om?
                          O:that was…that..
                          P:don't try 2 hide from me thinking that I'll b sad.i'm
                          ur wife & I've 2 share everything with u.
                          O:Mr.Bajaj.
                          P:why did he call?he's not satisfied with coming here?
                          O:bajaj tells that we don't tell kripa the truth he'l
                          tell her.
                          P is shocked:what?
                          O:he won't allow us 2 conduct kripa's wedding without
                          his consent.i think he's no so happy about angad.
                          P weeps:what a fate!
                          O hugs & consoles P.

                          Angad goes back.Dilip:how was ur girl's b'day party?

                          A:it was cool. Naina:when wil I see kripa?
                          A shows them b'day photos on mobile.   N:she looks so
                          pretty.she'l b a gud bahu.
                          D:very nice.how was her parents' reaction?
                          A Mr & mrs.Sharma r very nice.
                          D:she belongs 2 a sharma family?
                          A:ya,she's the daughter of Om Sharma &
                          Parvati.
                          D is shocked:what?r u sure?
                          A laughs:what a question papa?I met them 2day also.
                          A goes inside. D:naina,u remember the truth about
                          kripa ?
                          N:ya. A:so I don't want angad2 marry that illegal
                          child of Bajaj & …
                          N:but our son's happiness is more imp.
                          D:no,I won't allow my poor son 2 marry kripa.
                          A who was near the door is shocked a:papa!why did u
                          change ur mind suddenly?
                          D:bcoz I want my son 2 get a girl from a gud family.
                          A:kripa is from a gud family.she's the daughter of the
                          famous business man Om Sharma
                          D:no.kripa is not the daughter of Om sharma.
                          A:what nonsense?
                          D:it'l b a shock 4 u.but this is the truth.her real dad
                          is Rishab Bajaj.
                          A was shocked:he's kripa's boss
                          D-N r shocked. D:kripa's boss?
                          A:2day he had cum 4 the party.
                          D-N r shocked. D:that means Mr.bajaj found out
                          everything.he came there 2 see his daughter.he works
                          with kripa 2 see her always.
A:I won't believe this.Parvati having an illegal
                          child in Bajaj?
                          D:no 1 can think like that about Parvati as she's a very
                          nice lady.she has'nt given b'th 2 any illegal child.

hey! i just read the whole thing and its really good!
i had this thought tho when u introduced dilip and naina and that was wat if u introduce kartik as Angad's bro? then Bajaj has more to be worried abt 😆 .........ur ff is just brilliant, continue soon! 👏