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Posted: 12 years ago
#71
nice update 👏
bechara rey kria kitne nakhre dikha rahi hai😆
loved this part❤️
and please continue as your ff is really very good
and waiting eagerly for kriyansh first date😍
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Posted: 12 years ago
#72
wow awsum part thnkx alot 4pm 
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Posted: 12 years ago
#73
i just read the story and i think its brilliant please can you pm me when you update the story :D
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Posted: 12 years ago
#74
just read the whole thing and i must say tht its great!
do continue soon and make sure to pm me :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#75
Awesome and pm me when u update
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Posted: 12 years ago
#76
hey its was an awesome update KriYaansh choo cute!!!
thnx for d PM!!! continue soon!!! 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#77
read the whole story beautfully wrrttien can u pm me ...😊,... KRISHA THAT WAS TOO GUD ... KRIYAANSH SO SWEET AS ALWAYSSS😊😊😊💔💔LUV THEM Edited by sujucoolstar - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#78
just read ur ff.
awesome.
plz pm me next time u update
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Posted: 12 years ago
#79

Recap: Kria and reyansh on first date…

(Reyansh left but kria still lost in rey's thoughts…Kria wore beautiful white dress)

K:Rey…

Reyansh(lost in kria as she was looking like a angle in white dress)

K:Rey…chalna nahi he kya…

R:Haa…

(In car kria saw pav-bhaji stall and water came in her mouth)

K:rey chaliye na waha..mujhe pav-bhaji khani he…

R: anything for u…but kria.. pav-bhaji…it's unhygienic…hum kisi restaurant me chalte he…

K(murmuring):ekdum Sharon ke bichde hue dost lag rahe he…

R:tumne kuch kaha…

K(make a baby face):nahi…mene to kuch bhi nahi kaha…

Rey realized that her batcutter is upset so he decided to give a big smile on her face.

R:Agar tum chahti ho ki kal hum college me sick-leave le to hum pav-bhaji hi nahi pani-puri bhi kha sakte he…

Kria (hugging Reyansh): Thank u so much…

R: and?

K: and…thank u for pav-bhaji…

R: and?(reyansh was waiting for 3 words)

(and kria get off from car)

R: aaj to me ms.dehradun se three words boolvakar rahunga…

Kria and rey goes towards stall and ordered pav bhaji.

Kria was enjoying her pav-bhaji and reyansh was just looking towards her…

K:Chale…

R: Kahan?

K:Dehradun…

R:Kya?

K(Giggling): Ghar Chalen???

R : ya…

Kria and Rey in Car

R: so kaisi lagi aaj ki date…

K: bahot achi…

Rey:aur pav-bhaji…

K: bahot achi

R:aur me..

K:bahot ache…

(B.G. music "Jab Mila Tu" and look-look hawa-hawa)

K(breaking eye lock):rey..mera ghar aa gaya..

Rey was holding kria's hand.

K:rey..mera hath…

R:jab tak tum mujse 3 words nahi kahogi tab tak me tumhara hath nahi chodunga…

K:rey…mujhe jane dijiye…bahot late ho chuka he…

R: me zindgi bhar ye sunne k liye wait kar sakta hu…

K:I..I..Love..

R:I love what?

K:I Love pav-bhaji…(and managed to get rid from rey)

R: bahot cute he meri bat-cutter…

Next Day in class-room

Nil: Ye professor kitna paka raha he..

Rinni: Acha to ye cook bhi he…

(imagine nil's amazing expression with eyes)

Everyone was laughing …

RDX sir enters in class-room

RDX:I know it's late…but I want to congratulate all louisans for their great contribution in college fest and I want to invite u for the party at my place…so be their and enjoy…

Everyone was excited for party so were Kriyansh…

Rey messaged kria to be ready to come with him for party…

In Kria's home

Kria was searching a best dress to wear in party and

S:beta…kya kar rahi ho… ye sare kapde kyun fela kar rakhe he?

K:ma wo me aaj party me ja rahi hu…RDX sir ne invite kia he..

S:wo thik he…(suddenly she founds her pic with Gautam Raiprakash on kria's study table)

S(in her mind):Kria ko ye photo kaha se mili..kahi kria ko uske dad ke bare me to pata nahi chal gaya…

 

Guys, Sorry for late update but next update will be very soon…

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Edited by sapna_gada - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#80
gud one the photo nice she will get to know aa i mean kria  thnx for the pm nd do pm me abut ur nxt update