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Awesome update...
loved both d parts...
hope unki plan successful ho nd maan thik ho jaay aur maaneet 1 ho jaaye...
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Chapter 28
She might never hav expected her lif could take such turn.Lik every girl she had dremt about a prince of her dreams.She got…but codition in which she got Maan that was unexpected.
She might hav planned a great wedding ..not big fat..but a good one…in which she could take seven vows with her lif partner.But her wedding was totally different.Some where Maan had accepted her …as wife.But again her lif took turn…She lost Maan…
To regain her life her Maan back..She was ready to enter KM.her home where lik every newly wed bride she should b welcomed to b a part of family.But here nobody knew..who she was…nobody here to welcome her.
It was same evening when Nakul brought Rano n Geet to KM...A big hugh KM ..jst lik Royal Palace. But magic of this Royality couldn't affect Geet.Her eyes were jst searching Maan.
Geet n Rano entered sitting area.Where hugh picture of Maan,Dev n their second cousin Vicky was hanging.Maan was sitting lik a Royal Prince in between both.She never saw this Avtar of Maan.A beautiful handsom hunk She continuously stared at him ..a great smile came on her lips n visible in eyes.Daddi Maa was sitting reading book.
Nakul: Daddi Maa…?
A great elegant graceful lady looked at Nakul.
Geet: yeh Hai Maan ki Daddi Maa ...
Dadd Maa: Nakul to yeh hai aapki Chachi aur behan ?(lookin at too she estinated)
Rano n Geet wished her.What made Geet to mov forward n touch her feet …even she didn't understand.Rano got scared what Geet was doing.
Rano: Manji isko yehi aadat hai..jab bhi kissi bade(elderly) se milti hai paon(feet) jaroor shuti hia (Rano made this sudden excuse)
Daddi Maa: Khush Rahiya..sadda suhaagin rehiye…( these unexpected words shocked every body.)
Daddi Maa realsied what she said.She gav Kush Rahiye Ashirvaad…Sadda Suhaagin rahiye..lokin at Geet's Sindoor n Mangal sutra…But suddenly this think came in her mind what Nakul told her .His sister's husband was not wth her.Tears in Geet's eyes were visible to Daddi Maa.
Daddi Maa: Beta hamara matlab apka dil dukhana nahi tha..humme Nakul ne bataya..wht happened.Per beta ek suhaagin ko pehle dekh kar yahi dua nikli hamare mann se…(she tried to recorrect )
Rano: Nahi Manji..kai baar dil se nikli dua bahut kaam aati hai.kya pata apki dua k piche bhi koi bhagwaan ki margi ho.( she knew Daddi's wishes mattered for her daughter)
Daddi Maa gav a beautiful smile to them.Geet's tears were of happiness..She got Ashirvaad in first meeting wth that person whose importance was above all in Maan's life.
Daddi Maa: Hop so…hum bhi yahi chahte hai..apki beti ko unka jiwan sathi fir se mil jaaye.Waise apka naam to bataya nahi apne..aur na humne pusha.( she said politely )
Rano knew some where Pammi might hav aware of Geet's name even hers..But she hadn't seen them.
Rano:Manji mera Naam…Leela hai..aur yeh meri beti Siya…
Daddi: Bahut accha naam hai..Siya…(her eyes filled wth tears)
Nakul: Kya hua Daddi Maa.
Daddi Maa: Inka naam sun kar hamme..(no able to complete)
Rano: kya hua Manji ..kya yeh naam apko accha nahi lagta..
Daddi: Nahi nahi..Siya naam kissey acha nahi lagega..per inka naam sun kar humme hamare Ram ki haalat fir se yaad aa gayi…Hamare Ram..hamare Maan…Ram he to hai..hamare Maan…ek achay Betay..achay bhai aur achay sachay insaan.Per us uper wale ne hamare Maan k sath he aisa kyo kiya.(she was serious n about to cry)
Rano: To apko apke pote ki chinta sta rahi hai…Nakul ne humme bataya..per Manji ho sakta hai iske pichay bhi kush acha ho…jaise unki jaan bach gayi …bhagwaan unhe jaldi acha bhi kar dengay.
Daddi: Apki dua…bahut kaam aayegi ..( she tried to b in same condition as she was before )
Rano: Siya beta apna taila( beg) to de…
Geet gav her thaila to her.Rano took some thing out n placed it on Daddi's hand.
Daddi Maa: Yeh kya hai..?
Rano: Yeh taaveez meri Maa ka hai..unhone kaha tha yeh uske liye hai jisko iski sabse jayada jaroorat hai….mujhe lagga meri beti ko iski sabse jayada jaroorat hai jab yeh bachpaan main bahut bimmar pad gayi thi..tabse yeh iski hifaazat kar raha hai….per aab lagta hai iski zaroorat meri beti se jayada..apke pote ko hai..( she gav reason why she gav it to Daddi Maa)
Daddi: Hum samjhe nahi ..apne apni beti ka taveez hamare Maan k liye de diya..(she put her eyes on that black thread n taveez)
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Rano: Yeh unke liye hai jinko iski sabse jayada zaroorat hai…agar aap burra na maanay isko ja to unke neck main pehna dejiye ..ja unke takiye talle (pillow) rakh dejiye.
Daddi Maa: Kissi ki dua hamare bachchay ko lagay to usme galat kya hai..hum isko zaroor rakhe gay.( she said yes)
Nakul: Daddi Maa pehle inko inka kaam to bata dejiye….jiske liye yeh aayi hai ? ( he gav his emotionless expressions on his face expressive way 😆)
Daddi Maa: Leela aap Nakul k sath kitchen me kaam shurru kijiye…uske baad baaki kaam dheere dheere aap samjh jaayegi..aur Siya aap…bhi pehle aise he kaam shurru kijiye jaise…table arrange karna…guests ka khyal rakhna..hamari kush cheesain jo hum kai baar kar nahi paatay…uska aap dhyaan rakhiye…jaise hamari medicine…hamari almari arrange karna…( she made clear things in great n calm way )
Nakul: Daddi Maa..ek baat kaho agar aap burra na mane..(Nakul's face was really wonderful in every expression)
Daddi Maa: Kya?
Nakul: Daddi Maa apko aise kissi admi ki talaash thi na jo Maan Sir k pass har dam reh sakke ..aap apni health ki wajah se saara din unki dekh--bhal kar nahi paati..aur nurse per apko yakeen nahi..to aap yeh kaam Siya ko de dijiye…( he played his card)
Daddi: Per Nakul…Siya medicine..drip..injection..jo kaam nurse ka hai kaise kar paayegi..
Nakul: Daddi Maa..Doctor to roj aate hai na Maan Sir ko dekhne…drip to wahi lagga jaate hai…aur rahi medicine ki baat to wo main dheere dheere bata dunga isko…aur isse chaahe to saara din Maan Sir k paas baitha do..nurse ki tarah so nahi jaayegi….(he rubbed his fingers in his hair behind ear)
Daddi Maa:kissi hadd tak to Nakul sahi hi…per ek dum nahi..hum kush din Siya ko nurse k sath rakhe gay ..so that she can learn things …
Rano: Theek hai Manji
Daddi Maa: Nakul inka rehne ka intzaam outhouse main kar do…aur..Leela aap yeh Taveez laayi hai to aap he hamare bachchay ko dua de aayea…
She asked Nakul to show Maan's room to Rano/Leela n Siya/Geet.Daddi till now couldn't recoganise Geet was dumb.Nakul showed them Maan's room.
Nakul : Maan Sir yahan hai..Geet aap jaldi Maan Sir se mil lijiye…us Shroopnakha k aane se pehle..takki Maan Sir ko yakeen ho jaaye k unki Geet unke pass hai..main room k bahar he ho..
With mixed emotions Geet opened door.where first she got a sight of Maan's feet.then her lif ..laying again lik a lifeless creature on bed.Rano was also wth Geet.They had same taveez which Geet used to keep under Maan's pillow given by her Nanni
Rano first went near Maan's bed.
Rano : Maan beta dekho hum apke pass a he gaye…beta humse baat karo.(she rolled her hand on Maan's face n hair)
But no effect.Maan's eyes were closed n he was on drip.Rano called Geet.For Geet it was lik a dream.Rano jerked her.
Rano: Geet jaldi karo isse pehle Pammi aa jaye.
Geet came near to Maan n set on her bed.She placed Taveez under his pillow.n touched his face.Rano saw a door opening in balcony .so she asked Geet that she would wait there till she try to bring Maan back to his senses.
Geet again touched his cheeks n kissed him on forehead.After some time Geet noticed his fast breath n fast heat beat,She hugged Maan n took him in her arms wth a jerk.As usual his habit Maan rubbed his stubble on her neck…Geet smiled n placed Maan's head on pillow.She again kissed him on his cheeks…n then placed his hand on her belly.Maan's fingers start to react..n slowly he opened his eyes…Tears rolled down from corners of his eyes.Geet ran to Rano n pulled her inside.Maan looked at Geet n Rano.
Rano:Maan apko pata chal gaya hamare aane ka…app kis halat main hai yahan humme sabh patta hai..per aap fikar mat kijiye..aab apko apke parivaar se koi bhi alag nahi kar sakta.
Geet took out her slate n write on it n shoed to Rano
Geet: Maa Maan ko batayo hum kaise aaye yahan. Maan yahai soch rahhe hongay...
Rano: Maan mujhe patta tha..tum Geet k binna nahi reh sakte …aur Geet tumhare binna..hum to himmat har gaye thay..jo Pammi ne kiya uske baad.per Addi Pinky Rahul Aur Nakul ki wajah se hum yahan hai..n she narrated whole story.
Maan was looking at Rano wht calm face n he smiled looking at Geet.Before Rano n Geet could do some thing more.Nakul informed them arrival of Pammi..So they left room in hurry n ran toward kitchen.Where according to planned drama.Nakul started to tell them each n every thing to do in kithcn
When he saw Pammi coming toward Kitchen he started to command them in high pitch.
Nakul: To Leela chachi…jaisa main kahoo waisa he khaana banana hoga apko..jaab tak sabki pasand aur napasand ka patta nahi chall jaata..Daddi Maa morning mai without sugar coffee leti hai…Dev Sir ko brown bread k cheese sandwich milne chahea..aur Pammi Madam ko karele ka juice.Geet controlled her laughter..after hearing Karela…But Nakul had given signals to both about Pammi standing behind them.
Pammi: Oh to yeh hai tumhari Chachi aur behan? ( she gav wicked smile)
Nakul: Ji Madam..yeh hai ?
Pammi: Kya naam hai tumhara..?
Rano: Iska naam Siya hai..aur main Leela
Pammi:sawal maine tumse nahi tumhari beti se kiya tha..
Rano: Yeh bol nahi sakti ?
Pammi: wht ?
But after that Pammi gav a devil smile.: At least meri baat binna kissi intruption k sunegi to sahi..aur aisi ladki per control rakhna mushkil bhi nahi…mujhe se koi galti hogi to blame isko kar sakti hu...She ordered coffee n went back.
But she couldn't judge 'uper walle ki lathi main awaaz nahi hoti ( almighty's stick when beat some one it never gav voice...jst effects came in front ).N Almighty's this Lathi was Geet..a speechless creature who was ready to beat the hell out ..So this witch Pammi had to wait not more ...They all ready to attack her Lanka...No RamJi this time..But Siya...for RamJi
I think not too bad..only those dear ones who wanna read me...plz giv ur views ..wanna more plz tell me..wrong if I m...plz forgiv me...
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