Kahe Toh Se Sajna / Thread #2 /MG / FF - Page 39

Originally posted by: Jass.KN

i hav updat ll post tomorrow..its late ...

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hope maan refuses to leave without geet somehow

                Chapter 20                                       

Addi looked at Geet ..she came in front of him.Addi melted wth Wetness n Redness in Geet's eyes .. realized in which condition she was.But upto which extent ,he could not understand…coz he new nothing about bonding Maan n Geet had.

Addi: Geet ji to kya socha apne…aap Maan Sir se milne dengi na…(he knew Geet's decision was final)

Geet nodded her head n signaled him to follow her.He follwed Geet to their room.She opened door.Where Maan was laying on bed lik statue without any single movement..Maan's face was in front of Addi.But before he could go near to him..he was about to faint.When he controlled himself holding door handle.Tears rolled  down to his cheeks.He put off his spects n wiped of tears.

He reached near to  Maan's bed.A man who knew nothing about rest….hardly had time for bed.Who ran lif on his own terms.Same man was on a bed for four months wth a lif given to him by others..Living on their terms.

Addi : Maan Sir….dekhiya maine apko dhund he liya….( he tried to smile)

But Maan gav no response.ever after so many attempts no response to Addi.

Addi: Maan Sir boliye chup kyo hai…main bolle ja rahha hu…kyo nahi kehte ' Shut up Addi' boliye na …plz boliye…( Addi was shouting n  tried to take Maan in his arms..He was much hurt shoked lookin at Maan)

Rano : Yeh aap kya kar rahhe hai..Maan ko aise kyo utha rahhe hai…chodiye unhe…( she shouted at door)

Addi: Manji Maan Sir bol kyo nahi rahhe …inse kahiye na Addi se baat karre..apki to jaroor sunte hongay (he folded his hands)

Rano: Dekhiy Addi ji Maan k saamne…itna jor jor se na boliye…doctor ne manna kiya hai…Baad k baat baad main..apke liye chaye banayi hai..aayea..

Addi: Per Manji Maan Sir kush bolte kyo nahi…dekhte bhi nahi…

Rano:Apko sabh batta chukke hai..na uska asar hai…aap baar baar baat mat repeat kijiye…..patta nahi Maan ka BP baad jaaye.Aur Geet Maan k liye Khichdi banna de hai…tum khilla do .(after talking to Addi she asked Geet to bring food for Maan)

Addi: Khichdi…Maan Sir ko to yeh sabh bilkul pasand nahi..jaab bimaar ho jaate kabhi …Daddi Maa kehti …Maan betay aaj apko kichdi khaani padegi…Maan Sir apne apko room main lock kar lette 

Addi was recollecting old memories of Maan.But Geet noticed tears at corners of Maan's eyes..She held Addi from hand n took him near to his bed n wiped Maan's tears.Rano realized what Geet wanna say.

Addi : Geet ji aap mujhe aise kyo keech rahi hai..aur Maan Sir ki aankon main aasoo…iska matlan Maan Sir ko patta hai main unke pass hu..

Rano: Ha Maan ko patta chalta hai.k unke aas pass koi hai…per kitna hume nahi patta…unki anskon k aaso kush to keh rahhe hai…plz aap aur kush mat kahiye…

Geet came in front of Addi n folded both hands .He was surprised why she was doing so..

Addi: Geet ji yeh aap kya kar rahi hai…

Geet again looked at Maan ..folded her hands nodded her head.She was begging not to create scene in front of Maan..which was not good for him.

Addi was surprised at her behavior..Why she was doing so…But no words from herself.

Addi: Geet ji aap kya kehna chahti hai..plz khul k kahiye..(frustrated Addi said)

Rano: Wo kahegi to tab na jab wo bol sakegi…Geet bol nahi sakti...(saying this tears were visible in her eyes)

Addi became a statue….looking at Geet…tears were rolling down from her eyes.

Rano: Aap bahar aaye wahi baat karte hai..aur Geet tum Maan ko khilla do..baad main davaa(medicine) ka time bhi ho jayega

Addi: Ji..chliye...(he looked back at Maan n left )

Three of them went out.But Geet after taking food for Maan..again left.

Rano gave cup of tea to Addi.n set next to him on stool.How Geet was feeding Maan, lil by lil ,wiping his mouth…Addi noticed every thing...Even when Geet  put on wollen cap on Maan's head.As day was going n  temperature  was dropping 

Addi:Apki beti Maan Sir k liye kya hai yeh kehne ki jaroorat nahi..dikhta hai….( he broke silence looking in same side)

Rano: Meri Geet ne koi ehsaan nahi kiya Maan per…unhone nahi kaha tha meri madad karo..jo uper walla chahta hai wahi hota hai…meri Geet aur Maan ka naam aise hi judna tha shayad...(she also looked at Geer caring Maan)

Addi:Maan Sir ki zindgi main bahut up n downs aaye….Pahle Maa ko kho diya…Dadd Maa n Sir ki nanny Pammi Ji  ko Maan Sir ki Maa banna diya..per  Pammi ji Maa kabhi nahi bann payi..Maa ka pyar nahi diya kabhi unhone.

Rano: Aur Maan k pitaji wo kush nahi kehte inki maa se ? ( she gav sudden reaction )

Addi: Wo bhi is duniya main nahi..Pammi se shaddi unki mazboori thi…Daddi Maa k aagay kush nahi kar paaye….Daddi Maa forced Ranvir ji to get married.But when she realized which kind of women Pammi was..uske baad bahu kabhi nahi manna unko…Maan Sir ki Maa kya banti...she never became mother to Dev n Annie...(so Maan's family background was clear to Rano )

Rano: Dev... Annie ?

Addi: Maan Sir k step brother n sister…per unke liye unko Maa ka koi matlaab nahi..parvrish Daddi Maa ki he hai….aur asool Maan Sir k …Maan Sir unke bhai he nahi pita bhi hai. .aur jo haal Dev Sir ka hai koi nahi jaan sakta…(Addi had tears thinking about how whole family was suffering )

Rano: If We hav hop that our dear one ll never come back...if we hav seen our dear one leaving us forever from this world is  ..we can console our mind n heart.Per agar hummko yeh patta he na ho..k woh hamara apna...kahan hai..is jahan (world) main ya uper aasmaan main..lif becomes a burden..Yahi haal hoga ..Maan k parivaar ka ...jaise apne bataya unke bhai ka 

Addi : Ji Manji Dev Ghur Business akele he dekh .rahhe hai..Bharat hai wo Maan Sir k….aaj bhi Maan Sir ki chair per unki photo rakh kar unka intzaar kar rahe hai.Aur agar Dev Sir se bhi kahi jayada kissi ko dukh hai to who hai Daddi Maa…jinhone apna Raam kho diya..aaj bhi intzaar kar rahi hai…Daddi Maa k liye Maan Sir unki puri duniya hai

Rano noticed Geet standing behind them .She was listening every thing

Rano: Dekha Geet maine kaha than a Maan Ka apna parivaar hoga..jo unka intzaar kar raahha hoga..itna mat apna maan ..Maan ko k sambhlna mushkil ho jaaye..Wahi hua na…Maan ko hum kaise rokk payegay….unke parivaar ko unki zaroorat hai…Daddi..Maa Bhai behan aur shayad patni bachchay….tum hari shaddi ki kya hasiyat…

Addi: Manji plz calm down..Its true Maa sir ka parivaar unka intzaar kar raha hai..per patni aur bachachay..Maan Sir ki zindgi main koi nahi….aga yeh kahu..unko ladkiyon se sakhat nafrat thi..to yeh galat nahi..becoz for girlz Maan Singh Khuraana means ek chalta firta bank..jst money aur Maan Sir issi baat se nafrat kete thay...per shyad unko Geet ka intzaar tha..per is tarah..bhagwaan aise nahi...in donno ka sath khushiyo se bhar do

Rano: Per kya Maan ka parivaar Geet ko apnayga..aur Maan unka kya…

Addi: Itna pyar aur samarpan dekh k to patthar bhi pighle jaye…wo to insaan hai…aur yahan tak rahi Dadd Maa ki baat jaise unka naam Savitri Devi hai..waise he woh sach main devi hai...unke liye Maan sir ki khushi sabhse uper hai..(Addi smiled)

Rano n Geet felt lil relief that Maan was alone.But what about his family.This was question to think at 

Sudden change of weather..it was snowing …Addi was not able to go back.So Rano asked him to stay wth them.Within one day Addi realized what Geet was for Maan.He always responded to Geet only.n she twenty four sever (24 ><7) ready for Maan.Even here Geet pregnancy was not hidden to him..when Rano was talking to Geet about her check up coming days..Addi heard.

Addi: Rano ji woh aap Geet ji se baat ( he stopped..But Rano got)

Rano: Ya she is pregnant ...wth Maan's baby...Geet meri beti hai..aur Maan jaise bhi hai...Geet ki shaddi hui hai unki..Pati Patni ka rishta ha unka...n unka rishta Maan ki family k liye koi mayne (nothin matter ) na rakhe per yahan sabh ne maana hai...

Addi: Manji mujhe galat mat samjhiye ..mera apko hurt karne ka koi matlab nahi tha...

Rano: Beta yeh baat aaj tumko patta challi kal Maan ka parivaar bhi pushey-ga...to tumko bataane main koi harz nahi. Doctor ne kaha tha Geet ko Maan se Pati Patni ka rishta rakhne ko...thanki Maan ki body react karre..Meri Geet kis daur se gujri hai aur aagay kya hoga ki soch kitna dukh detti hai wahi janti hai...

Addi: Manji aap mujh per barosa rakhiye...sabh theek ho jayega.

Addi was happy to hav a chance to know more about the conditions in which Maan was there.Even in this weather Geet every day changed Maan's cloths.Food medicine at time dealing wht his everyday needs single handedly.Even he observed Maan to follow her every where.

Third day

Addi went to Maan's room wht bowl of cooked meshed vegetables.As he requested Geet to do this job.He tried to put lil bit in his mouth.But Maan not refused

Addi: Maan Sir wais eek baat to hai..ziddi aap waise he ho….mujhe patta hai aap sirf Geet k hath se he khate ho…per agar aap ko is baat ka bhi patta hai k main apka idiot Addi ho to aap jaroor khayogay..( he said his signature donkey smile)

Addi looked at him n put a bite in his mouth with he ate..Addi noticed lil bit wetness in Maan's eyes.

Addi: Iska matlaab Maan Sir aap sach main theek hai….mujhe yakeen hai aap fir se pehle ki tarah theek ho jayogay ..yeh sirf Geet ki wajah se hai….aur mujhe yeh bhi patta hai aap Geet se pyar karte hai...

Geet was listening his conversation from behind.When Addi realized he got up from bed.

Addi: Geet ji aap.

Geet asked him to sit.She held her slate n wrote some words.

Geet: Addi ji mujhe nahi patta Maan mujhese pyar karte hai ya nahi..aur main unko mazboor nahi karogi...unka apna faisla hai.

Addi: Per Maan Sir apse pyar karte hai...rukiye gar mujhe per yakeen nahi...

Geet was surprised what he gonna do.Addi took bowl in his hand.

Addi: Geet Ji Maan Sir apke samne hai..aur sun rahhe hai...agar Maan Sir apse pyar karte hai woh apke hath se nahi khayegay..mere hath se khaygay..

Geet looked at him..what he was saying..

Addi: Mujhe patta hai...it is strange...per kabhi kabhi aise ideas kaam karte hai..isse hum sir k maan ki baat jaan sakte hai..hai na sir

First he asked Geet to feed Maan..she was scared ..what gonna b Maan's reaction.But yes Maan rejected to eat.n when Addi feed him..he ate.

Geet was standing lik a statue..It was reality or dream .

Addi: Dekha Geet ji..Maan sir sirf physically weak hai..per unke aas pass jo ho rahha hai unko sabh patta hai...aab to apko yakeen aa gaya woh apse pyar kate hai...

Geet took her slate n wrote

Geet: Aap to Maan se push latte hai...bol kar ..Maan react karte hai..per main kaise pusho..kaise kahu...apne dil ki baat.

Addi: Agar Maan Sir humko sun sakte hai..woh apka likha pad bhi sakte hai..jaise aapmere sath baat kar rahi hai likh kar..aap try kejiye...Waise main chalta hu..kabaab main haddi nahi banna mujhe.( Addi left)

Geet was thinking about Addi..He was not bad.What gonna next... Even she was worried..But Addi gav her a way to talk to Maan..Its Addi who conveyed Maan's feelings to Geet.

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Jass

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I JUST WROTE ON YOUR SCRAP THAT WHERE IS THE UPDATE AND 😆 ITS HERE... LET ME READ IT FIRST AND LATER I WILL COMMENT

Originally posted by: maansee

I JUST WROTE ON YOUR SCRAP THAT WHERE IS THE UPDATE AND 😆 ITS HERE... LET ME READ IT FIRST AND LATER I WILL COMMENT

 

 

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