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Hi Guys!
I've been wanting to post this scene from a long time
I wanted to keep the essence so
Didn't make it too intense or cheesy
So here it is:
Scene: khirad is talking to her freind on the phone telling her about how things have changed and how she has fallen for ashar
Khirad: afsheen mera dil karta hai main ashar ke pasand ke saanche mein dhal jaon jaisa woh chahte hai waisa karoon.
Ashar kehte hain apne saare shoq poore karne, sach bataoon to main unke liye aage padhna chaahti hoon, woh mujhe se mohabat to karte hain lekin ab dil chahta hai ke woh mujhe pe fakhar bhi karen. Woh itne padhe likhe hain to unki biwi ko bhi padha likha hona chahiye na.
After she concludes her chat she notices ashar standing on the doorway staring at her
"Ashar.. Kia hua?" Asks khirad "aise kyon dekh rahe hain?"
"Hayeee mere biwi kitni saadi hai na" says ashar lovingly
"Kia?? ... ashar aap meri baatein sun rahe the na!" Khirad says pretending to get mad
"Shayad " says ashar placing his hand on the wall near khirad
"Ashar aap bhi na" says khirad blushing as she feels ashar close to her
" Tum itni cute lagti ho jab aise sharmati ho"
Khirad just blushes like she normally does in Ashars presence
Ashar just smiles and moves his eyes around in response to Khirads cherry red face
"Acha coffee piyo gi?" Ashar asks
"Aap bana rahe hain?" Khirad asks playfuly
"Ab itne bure din nahi aye mere" ashar replies with equal enjoyment
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This was my first try at extended scenes
Hope you all like it, I will post more if time allows and you all like it
Thank You!
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