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698135

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Posted: 12 years ago

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GUYS THIS IS MY FIRST FF PLZZ DO COMMENT

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AFTER HAYE RAMA [WHICH WOULD NOT BE A DREAM] KRIYA WOULD REGRET AND WOULD TRY TO IGNORE HIM BUT COULDN'T

IN THE COLLEGE

KRIYA - mujhe rey ko ignore karna hai par jo hamare beech mien hua asne kisi ko bata diya toh mujhe unse baat karni hogi

rey - he was very happy kriya hum dono ki love story ki train chal padi bas tum kahan ho tumahara chehra dekhna hai

suddenly kriya comes

kriya - mujhe apse baat karni hai fire escape 5 min [very rudely]

rey was shocked wid her behaviour

he came to fire escape and kriya was already there he came infront of her put his hand on his shoulder kria turned away

rey- kriya kya hua

kriya -mujhe apse kuch baat karni hai

rey han bolo [tried to comfor

prerecap -kriya hurts rey

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luv_arsha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#2

it was awesome

please continue

and please pm me when you will update👍🏼

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Aabhi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#3

DO PM ME WHEN YOU UPDATE NEXT...

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Monica

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Posted: 12 years ago

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nice 1..pls updt soon

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Sanjana

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Awesome! Can you plzzz add me to the pm list?? 😃

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aashima.jindal

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Posted: 12 years ago

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WOOW IT WAS AWESOME YAAR PLS UPDATE IT SOON AND PM ME WHEN U

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Shivs

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Posted: 12 years ago

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amazing add me to the pm list please i want to read on

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698135

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Posted: 12 years ago

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GUYS THANKS FOR UR SUCH A LOVELY COMMENTS

HERE'S THE NEXT

KRIYA-JO KUCH KAL HAMARE BEECH HUA VO AP REY-VO AP KYA KRIYA KRIYA-BHUL JAIYE REY -SHOCKED YEH TUM KYA KEH RAHI HO KRIYA -AP NE NAHI SUNA OR MUJHE APSE KOI FARAK NAHI PARTA

REY -KOI FARAK NAHI PARTA [COMING CLOSER TO HER] KRIYA -MERE PAS AP MAT AIYE REY TUMHE KOI FARAK NAHI PARTA NA KRIYA -NAHI REY PUTS HIS HAND ON HIS CHEEK WAS TRYING KISS HER KRIYA TOOK OUT HER HAND AND WAS GOING TO SLAP REY PAR REY NE USKA HAATH PAKAD LIYA AR APNE HAATH SE USKI WAIST PAKAD KEUSE PAAS LE AYA KRIYA NE USE PUSH KIYA AR REY GIR GAYA KRIYA ROTE ROTE BHAGNE LAGI

PRERECAP KRIYA KI ZINDAGI MIEN AYA EK LADKA OR REY USPAR BHADKA

Edited by SELENASACHDEVA - 12 years ago

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698135

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: SELENASACHDEVA
GUYS THANKS FOR UR SUCH A LOVELY COMMENTS
HERE'S THE NEXT
KRIYA-JO KUCH KAL HAMARE BEECH HUA VO AP REY-VO AP KYA KRIYA KRIYA-BHUL JAIYE REY -SHOCKED YEH TUM KYA KEH RAHI HO KRIYA -AP NE NAHI SUNA OR MUJHE APSE KOI FARAK NAHI PARTA
REY -KOI FARAK NAHI PARTA [COMING CLOSER TO HER] KRIYA -MERE PAS AP MAT AIYE REY TUMHE KOI FARAK NAHI PARTA NA KRIYA -NAHI REY PUTS HIS HAND ON HIS CHEEK WAS TRYING KISS HER KRIYA TOOK OUT HER HAND AND WAS GOING TO SLAP REY PAR REY NE USKA HAATH PAKAD LIYA AR APNE HAATH SE USKI WAIST PAKAD KEUSE PAAS LE AYA KRIYA NE USE PUSH KIYA AR REY GIR GAYA KRIYA ROTE ROTE BHAGNE LAGI
GUYS ITS VERY SHORT SORRY
PRERECAP - KRIYA KI ZINDAGI MIEN EK LADKA OR REY US PAR BHADKA

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678042

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Posted: 12 years ago

#10

liked it...

update soon and pm me...!

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