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Posted: 12 years ago
#11
This is a really good start.
Hope you continue and when you do please pm me :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#12
Great start...continue soon and please pm me when you update 
Waiting for the next chap.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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pm me plzz!!! sounds good!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#14
whatta greeat ff loved itt :D
i saay you should continue
since you dont pm updates i will keep up with this post :)

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Chapter 1
"Aap karela kha ke paid hui thi kya?"

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"Di, kya aap sach mein iss rishte se Khushi hai?" Manvi asked her sister as soon as Jeevika went onto their room to get the gift for Vadhera family, that beeji had specially bought.

" Manvi sach kahun na, toh mujhe nahi lagta Virenji se achha jivan-sathi mujhe milega." Jeevika says looking outside the window, remembering the little moments she had sent with Viren. He was so mature and sweet. She saw the glimpse of her perfect man in him.

" Di! Aapko khushi mein hi toh meri khushi hai! Agar aapko lagta hai ki Virenji hi aapke liye ek ache jivan-sathi hai toh, mein aapke liye bahot khush hu!" Manvi said and gave Jeevika a hug.

"Accha ab chalo, beeji intezaar Kar rani hai." Jeevika said coming out of the hug. manvi nodded and they both went downstairs.

"I think hamein Jeevika aur Viren ko thodi der ke liye akele rehne dean chahye, akhir unki puri life ka sawal hai." Swamini hua said.

"Aap bilkul thik keh rahe ho. Ek kaam karo, aap sab bache ghum kar aao, tab tak mein aur Swaminiji batein karte hai. Thik hai?"

"Par mein kaise jaw sakta hu? Agar masterji ne mujhe dekh liya na, toh mujhe kal homework na karne ke liye bahot maar padegi." Dabbu said making sad face.

"Toh koi baat nahi Dabbu beta, chal mein tujhe Tera homework karwati hu!" Jeevika and Manvi's Chachi said.

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 "Di, aap Virenji ke saath bethiye, mein dusri cycle par aa jaongi." Manvi smiled at Jeevika.

"Mannu, koi baat nahi hai, tu hamare saath aaja." Jeevika said, but Manvi knew better. She shook her head and sat on another cycle. But to her dismay she saw Virat following her.

"Tum kyun yahan beth rahe ho?" she asked bewildered.

" Jahanpanah! Aap jitna apni di se pyar karti hai na, hum bhi apne bhai se bahot pyar karte hai!" Virat replied.

" Toh mein kya karu? Aap dusri cycle par aajaye, mere saath bethne mein kya khushi milegi aapko?"

"How sweet! Aap karela kha ke paid hui thi kya?"

" Ha! Hui thi! Toh?"

" Tabhi mein sochu, ke aap ke muh mein se kadvi smell kyun aa rahi hai!" Virat said smugly. In reply Manvi's hand fled to her mouth.

"What? Par meine toh aaj'" she saw Virat laughing and slapped his arm." Bade chep ho yaar! Koi aise baat karta hai ladki se?"

"Ladki? Kaun ladki? Mujhe toh yahan koi ladki nahi dikh rahi. Kaka kya aapko dikh rahi hai koi ladki?" Viren asked the uncle who was driving the cycle, just to get another slap on his arm.

"Beta ab yeh thodi na koi umar hai ladkiya dekhne ki! Waise apna bhi kabhi zamana tha! Ab kahan? Ab toh sirf ek hi aurat ko dekhta hu! Meri biwi ko." The uncle replied. Both Manvi and Virat starred at hi. And a heartbeat later, both burst into laughter.


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"Toh aap teacher hai?" Viren asked Jeevika as soon as the cycle started moving.

 

"Ji!" Manvi replied quietly, putting a strand of hair behind her ear.

 

"Toh Chandigarh aane mein aapko koi takleef'"

 

"Ji nahi. Mujhe pata hai ki ek na ek din toh mujhe yaha se jaana hi hai na?"

 

"Toh aapko hamare, I mean aapke aur mere rishte se koi problem nahi hai?"Viren asked trying to hide the smile forming on his lips.

 

"Nahi, par meri ek guzarish hai." Jeevika replied.

 

"Ji kahiye." Viren asked confused.

 

"Mere ma-bauji toh bachpan mein hi chal base the, aur tabse Manvi ka mein hi khayal rakhti hu. Mein chahti hu ki'"

 

"Ki Manvi ko hamare saath Chandigarh le jaaye, hai na?"Viren asked. Jeevika nodded. She was so happy that he could understand her thoughts, but at the same time wondered if he would say yes or no. " Humare yaha aane se pehle hi Beeji ne humse yeh kaha tha. Ki you and your sister are unbreakable. Aur hum samaj sakte hai. Mera aur Virat ka rishta bhi kuch aisa hi hai."

 

"Toh iska matlab Manvi hamare saath aa sakti hai?" Jeevika asked ecstatically.

 

"Only if aap iss rishte ke liye haan kare." Viren said looking at her.

 

"Aapne naa ke liye jagah hi kahan chhodi hai?" 



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Edited by Prach_VirMan - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#16
Just one word awesum plz pm me wen ya update
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Posted: 12 years ago
#17
i loved it! soo cute! thanks so much n pls update :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#18
Lovely... Please PM me once you have updated the next part😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#19
This was so sweet
Pls continue soon and PM me
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Posted: 12 years ago
#20
Awwh. This was so cute :)
Please pm me when you update