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Posted: 12 years ago
#31
reaaaly nyc vm n os... gr8 work !!
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#32
oh this would be awesome if it happens i loved it...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#33
Really just loved the os as well as pm.plz do countinue with the os. Thanx for pm.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#34
nce one.. emtinal yer.. wrte mre !
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Posted: 12 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: arooshee

lovely

dono ko last mein mila dete to aur bhi acha hota
u know thoda sa pyar karna bhi tha na

story abhi baqi ha jee ... i was not planning to write next part  but as every one liked it  i will write the final part... hum mila da ga 
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wonderful update...if possible pl continue di...its very interesting to see a changed arnav
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Posted: 12 years ago
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It was so touchy & emotional.i duno what 2 say actually.It made me very sad.Arnav & Khushi made me upset.Arnav apologized.He feels pain now.I wish Khushi would talk softly to him now
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Anjali: chota kya huwa ha she just caress his face

Arnav: "Di some body said to me we cannot buy everything from money"

Anjali: chota i think you are not feeling well , i will call Askah he will take you home i will saty with Khushi

Arnav: no we will go home together ..he just look at her 

Anjali: chot waise bhi hum ko khushi ji ko un ka ghar drop karna higa.

Arnav: no di 

Anjali: why

Arnav : di his fiance lives there what will he think of her she fainted as i...he paused .

Anjali: ha hum na to socha nahi 

Arnav just stared at khushi who was looking at him .

Anjali: phir kya kara .

Arnav she can stay with us till engagement.

Anjali: thek ha chota ..Khushi aap ko koi problem tou nahi 

Khushi: was just lost in his words she was looking in his eyes , she nodded her head.

Anjali: hum abhi baat karta ha , or i will go with akash and bring your things, her phone started ringing."your jiju" she received call 

Shyam: where are you RS ?

Anjali: i am in hospital 

Shyam: why?

Anjali: chota aur khushi ji ka accident hogaya both are admit here.

Shyam: khushi ji

Anjali: just felt strange. 

Shyam: how is he ?he corrected him self

Anjali: both are lying down , i will take them home .

Shyam: acha

Anjali: wait aap chota se baat kara .. she put the phone on speaker.bola hum na speaker per kardiya..

Shyam: just cut the call.

Anjali: just look at the phone ..

Arnav: di charging khatam hogai ho gai.

Anjali: hmmm .

LA: enter with Akash " how are you both?"

Khushi : give her a weak smile

LA: chamkile i didnot knew you miss ASR scolding so much that you fainted after hearing his accident news .

Anjali: LA ji ho daar gai thi 

Arnav: why iss ko kya friq parta ha

Anjali: chota parta ha , you love your vase  when it was broken you were sad as you were use to of it ,,,same way she is use to of you . waise bhi yeh dil walo kai feelings ha jo pyar per yakeen rakhta ha  aap nahi samjhe ga"

Arnav: pyar he just look at Khushi who just avoided his eye locks

LA aur kya ASR.

nurse came in "please let her rest as she got 5 stitches if you all will talk here she will have head ache"

Anajli how much more time her drip will take ?

nurse : hour or so.

Anjali: LA lets go to Khushi ji home and get her things 

LA: why di ?

Anjali: chota na bola ha she will stay with us till she is fine 

LA: really she said bit loud

Arnav: LA

LA; sorry sorry 

Anjali: akash aap chala ga 

Akash : why not Di ?

Anjali: smiled and they left . Khushi pretended she is asleep .

Arnav: look at her face she was silently crying ."Khushi"

Khushi didnt reply or open her eyes

Arnav: ha mein itna bura hoon ka tum meri taraf bhi nahi dekho... he just got up and walk out  

Khushi: just felt bad  why she is behaving like this , he is himself not feeling well.

Nurse : walk in   " you husband really love you allot "

Khushi: he  Arnav came in 

Nurse: cute couple  ...

Arnav : heard but he ignore. 

Nurse make sure she doesn't move her head in sleep  as the stitches at her back 

Arnav: I will

Khushi: just look at him .as he hold her arm to help nurse to give her an injection.


time passed 

Anjali came back with LA and Akash 

La: we got permission from your family .

Arnav: Shhh she is sleeping 

Anajli kya huwa 

Arnav: they have given her injection .

Anjali: can we go home now

Arnav yes ..

La but she is 

Arnav: no prob he just picked her up  without anyone could say any thing.

LA just looked at him he was totally changed ,

Anjali and Akash look at each other as everyone felt there is something between Arnav and Khushi.some heart link..they way she fainted the way he is behaving all is leading into a mysterious story.


they reached home Arnav just picked her up ,he was acting over possessive .Anjali just asked him to stop at the door as she wanted to take off nazar as she was scared that 2 important people of her life met accident today 

Nani: how is Khushi betiya?

Arnav: so rahi ha she is under medicine .

Nani: take her to your room beta as over her it is allot of noise.

everyone look at Nani she herself said 

Anjali: nani she will stay with us till she is fine chota na bola ha

Nani: she can stay for ever here 

Anjali: nani aap kya bol rahi ha 

Nani: anjali beta jo aap ko nazar nahi aarha ... 

Anjali: kya 

Nani: beta ja kar dekha..

Anjali just walk towards Arnav room

Arnav: was make her lay on bed Akash and La was helping him . 

Akash: bhai we all will look after her 

Arnav: nodded 

LA: ASR are you ok she look at his face which was all red .

Arnav: ya ... 

Anjali: LA chala aap humara saath hum dono ka leya dinner banata ha ...chota aap bhi change kara see your clothes it had few blood stains 

Arnav: look at her she was sleeping peacefully . he just wanted to touch her he just  walk to her,and  covered her properly with blanket .

Anjali walk in she placed on his shoulder" aaj aap ki saas rokgai thi chota jaise Khushi ki rokai thi"

Arnav: look at her 

Anjali: hum ko pata chalgaya ha ,khushi kahan rahti ha placed her hand on his heart 

Arnav; smiled at Di "but she hate me"

Anjali: woh bhi aap ki tarah jhoot bolti ha ,haalta dekha un ki 

Arnav: Di La 

Anjali: chota take this and placed in her hands , i am sure Amma this will help you. waise bhi LA na abhi nahi dekha ha , Khushi ko pata ha ...

Arnav: looked at Anjali hand she was giving him her mother kangan , he just took it and very carefully placed it on her wrist.. 

Anjali: they are looking perfect ,go and change ,aur rona na start kara...  Arnav walk to washroom.


it was 9 when khushi woke up her head was heavy because of sleeping and pain. she was moving in sleep ,Arnav who was sitting on his couch looked at her he just quickly walk to her and hold her head .."daard ho raha ha"

Khushi: just open her eyes ass he heard his voice so close to her. he was just placing his hand on he forehead and with on hand holding her head."aap"

Arnav: kya 

Khushi: how i am in your room ? she look around 

Arnav: you need rest and this is the most calm place in home.

Khushi: try to move the blanket and try to push him ,she saw her hand "yeh"

Arnav: "jis ko khona ka daar se saas rok jai iss kaleya  maa na diya tha "

Khushi: look at him

Arnav: i know i have hurt you allot and there is no forgiveness for  me ,you can punish me ,for what i have done with you, but i love you .

Khushi: looked at him " i cannot punish you as i love you more "

Arnav: then you forgive me.

Khushi: no i will think upon it .

Arnav: how much time will it take.

Khushi: cannot say may be 1 sec may be life 

Arnav:hold his ears "now

Khushi: just hide her self in his arms

Arnav: kissed her forehead ...


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on request i wrote this i hope i did justice with the OS ...mostly in English as a reader asked 

Edited by naddiya26 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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love the os thanking you for your consideration we the non hindi readers thank you very much loved reading you os from  beginning to end 
Barun Sobti as Arnav Singh RaizadaBarun Sobti and Sanaya Irani as Arnav and Khusi in Iss Pyaar Ko Kya Naam DoonStill from the show 'Iss Pyaar Ko Kya Naam Doon'Sananya Irani and Deepali Pansare in Iss Pyaar Ko Kya Naam Doon?Sanaya Irani as Khusi in Iss Pyaar Ko Kya Naam Doon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: dumas

love the os thanking you for your consideration we the non hindi readers thank you very much loved reading you os from  beginning to end 

Barun Sobti as Arnav Singh RaizadaBarun Sobti and Sanaya Irani as Arnav and Khusi in Iss Pyaar Ko Kya Naam DoonStill from the show 'Iss Pyaar Ko Kya Naam Doon'Sananya Irani and Deepali Pansare in Iss Pyaar Ko Kya Naam Doon?Sanaya Irani as Khusi in Iss Pyaar Ko Kya Naam Doon

i try my level best but some time while writing in flow i forget or i feel hindi is going will ..i will make sure i mostly write in english ...ignore if i add some time update in hindi as at that time i am not getting words ðŸ˜³ silly me