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anupm04 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awasome update
Pls don't create misunderstanding betn them
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he get up from there and enter his room and close the door and sit in the floor whole day.
Here whole day geet is waiting for maan to come there , she is worried now for maan, , one side her own insecurity another side her tension for maan.

Part 55

It was evening now, Geet waited for Maan to come. She was worried and scared, the same feared gripped her when she was at the airport after their first night. She can't loose Maan again...she doesn't have the strength to fight again...he is part of her...and she needs him...She sat on the bed hugging her knees...what if Dadima don't accept me? Will she see the love I have for him? He has for me? 

Geet looked at the door and saw Dadima standing there. She immediately gets up and looks down knotting her dupatta. Dadima comes and stands in front of her looking at her from top to bottom. Geet bends down to touch her feet but she moves back. 

Dadima: Look, I don't know your name nor want to. I don't know what intention you have come here with but let me make it clear it won't work over here. Maan is naive...he can't see the true colors behind some people like I can. (Geet looks at her with tears) 

Geet: Dadima I have no intention..I love Maan...we..both...

Dadima: ENOUGH! (Geet looks down) you can stop this acting of showing this "love". You love his money..you saw him weak..so you decided to trap him...

Geet (shakes her head no) No Dadima..its not like that..I fell in love with Maan not his money. I fell in love with his care, his concern, his love that I see in his eyes for me and our baby. (She touches her stomach..Dadima looks at it)

Dadima: ohh I see...(she takes out a check book) here is a blank check..fill out the amount you want that you think will be sufficient enough for you and your baby. This marriage news has already brought Khruana name down the drain. I want to save whatever we have left.

Geet (takes the check and rips it in front of her leaving her shocked) if I wanted money...I would've demanded that long time back when I found out I was pregnant with Maan's child. I was ready to leave this town without him ever knowing about the kid but fate had other plans. (She holds Dadima's hands) Please, trust me..I don't want money, property or anything from Maan...only his love and your love. If you want me to leave..I will BUT only if Maan tells me to.

Dadima (lets go of her hands and begins to leave) I will see how Maan lets you stay here...

Geet drops on the floor crying...why does she have to prove her love all the time? why can't she get the happiness that she deserves? That her baby deserves? How many more tests will she go through? She looks at Maan's photo with a smile and hugs the picture...

Maan closes his eyes blocking out the past memories...he could still hear his father yelling at him to me more responsible...he was just a kid...his childhood had spent in being locked up and when he was ready to explore spread his wings to see the world that he so wished he had from the beginning..the burden of growing up was laid on him. Even though the world fears him as Maan Singh Khruana...there is still a little kid hidden inside his heart too afraid to come out...

Dadima opened the door and saw him on the floor spaced out. She sits next to him and touches his shoulder..Maan looks at her...hoping that she changed her mind.

Dadima; I want you to tell that girl to leave by tomorrow morning. (She gets up to leave..but Maan stops her)
Edited by mrs.msk - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
@ bhanu_rekhag
thanks dear
@zaara2212 thanks dear
@anupm04 thanks dear
 don't worry when there is love then there is no mu
but yes there will be difference of opinion
but as I said whatever happen it'll be best for maaneet
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome dear...

hmm now thts interesting wht will maan do!!!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
@PrithviSanyo1 must say dear... u laid an amazing twist...

now its getting much more interesting


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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome. I just hope Maan refuses dadi.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey pps remember we gotta finish the story here..i mean this thread
 so make ur twists fast hehe
woha simi and rakhi nice ones..
whos next..
where i afsha and sammy 
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Posted: 12 years ago
@  mrs.msk awesome part
 feel sad for geet
how much she will suffer
feel sad for maan
the little lonely , insecure kid is coming again
both maaneet r suffering
let's see who will win maaneet's love or dadi's zidd
 continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Simi urs is part 55 i just updated the index so i counted..hehe
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Posted: 12 years ago
Simi as always loved the update
hate this dadi, hope maan is able to stop geet