Creative Thrd2:U can only be Mine,Just mine 145/6

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Posted: 2011-11-24T07:26:34Z
Hey pps congrats on reaching the second thread..
Thnks to all the wonderful readers and writers who gave the immense help in making the previous thread a success
Here is the link to the previous works:
Links to the previous fun threads: The fun begins 1

                                               The fun begins 2

 
and this is the link to the previous thread..


Edited by mchopra - 2011-12-24T08:25:19Z
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Posted: 2011-11-24T07:27:28Z

She hugged her and promised to be here always with suhana. The little girl's happiness was out of this world and she kissed her upteem no of times'.

Part 39:

Maan came into the room to see suhana sitting on Geet's lap and geet holding her firmly.

He cleared his throat to gather their attention. Geet became conscious of his presence immediately and tried to move but suhana sat their comfortably. Bade papa'she shouted and motioned him to come near them. He knew geet wont like it so he looked at her.

She nodded her head and he came and stood near them.

Kya bade papa..baitho na..and she pulled him down. He sat on the edge of the bed knowing Geet wouldn't be liking it.

Bade papa aapko pata hai aunty aaj ke baad humesha yahin rahingi..acchi baat hai na..

He looked at her for a moment..

Haan gudiya bahut acchi baat hai..aapko aunty mil jaayengi'.aur mujhe mera pyaar..he said softly..

Bade papa aap aunty se baat karo main ek minute mein aayi..

Gudiya..before he could stop her she had ran out of the room leaving the two of them alone.

Geet..she looked up at him..

Kya tum..

Mr. Khurana maine jo kaha us mason ke liye kaha..jis din yeh baccha is duniya mein aa jayega main yahaan si chalo jaoongi..

Geet pls..aisa mat kaho..

Kyun Mr. Khurana aap ko bura lag raha hai..aapne socha hai mujhe us din kaisa laga hoga jab aap mujhe airport pe..

Ouch..

Geet..she bent down holding her stomach.

Geet..he held her hand and she grasped his hand tightly..

Geet..he made her lie down and called the doctor.

He sat down next to her..and tried soothing her..

Geet kya ho raha hai..batao toh sahi..

Mujhe nahi..ahhh..

Geet..he kept rubbing her forehead and her hand.

Geet was frantically moving around on the bed beating her arms..he held her in place rubbing her forehead and belly.

He didn't know what else to do..

She again screamed'AHHH..bahut..

Shhh shhh geet dr aa rahe hain..

Baby ko..

Geet main duniya hila doonga par tum dono mein se kisi ko kuch nahi hone doonga..waada raha..

Aapne pehle..and her eyes welled with tears.

He kissed her tears away..Ek baar waaada toda hai geet dubara nahi..he said looking into her eyes.

Even in her pain she could see the truth in them. Her heart wanted to embrace him but her mind wouldn't allow her. She had seen the change in him in last few days.

He would be always there for her. He took care of her without saying a word. He gave her everything and never raised his voice even when she talked rudely to him. He would even schedule her appointemnts with the doctor weekly. The doctor had said it can be once in a month for the first tri mester but he never listened and he would always accompany her no matter how busy he was.she might have forgotten her medicines but he would make her have them on time no matter what happened.

Not only that he never registered her as Geet..but his wife..she couldn't say no coz she knew the allegations she would have subdued to had people come to know that she was going to be an unwed mother.

Before she could take any decision Dr walked in and she saw suhana standing at the door looking at her with fear.

She called her in but she shook her head and ran away.

Maan..suhana aap use dekhiye..

Par tumhe..

Main theek hoon..she tried to smile but he could see the pain she was in.

He nodded and kissed her forehead before walking away.

The doctor began to check her and she screamed again when the doctor touched her. She was beginning to sweat profusely.

Mrs. Khurana..aap..

Yes dr..ask me..Maan said looking at her.

Maan..

Suahan theek hai..main use baad mein dekh loonga..there was a tone of authority in his voice and she nodded.

Mr. Khurana inhone kuch khaya hai..

Nahi..kyun..

The dr. gave her an injection immediately. She closed her eyes looking at the injection. Maan knew she was scared of them and held her hand while the dr gave her a shot.

Mr. Khurana aisi galti dubara nahi honi chaihiye..Yeh pata nahi kitne ghanto se bhooki hain..aur is condition mein..dono ko kuch bhi ho sakta tha..

Inka body glucose bahut low ho gaya tha aur isliye the baby was restless and that's why she was in pain. Just make sure she eats something every 3-4 hrs so that her glucose is back..baaki she is perfectly alright. She just needs rest and no reading too he said looking at the books. She can sit but no walking atleast for today.

He nodded his head and bade the dr bye.

When the dr had left she tried getting up but he reached her and helped her up supporting her on the cushions behind.

Tum theek ho..she nodded her head. SHe could see the worry in his eyes. She placed his hand on her tummy..dekhiye main theek hoon.

He smiled at her. Thanku..

Maan..suhana..

Who dari hui hai..she looked at him confused

Use laga tumhe kuch..and he looked away..

Main theek hoon..sacchi..

Aap use le aaye..

Par..

Maan..he nodded and brought suhana to her room.

Kya hua gudiya ko..she said holding suhana in her arms.

Who aap..

Mujhe kuch nahi hua dekho main theek hoon..

Sacchi..

Mucchi..

Phir aap..

Who..woh..haan tumhare bade papa mujse lad rahe the..isliye..

Kya..

Haan..

Bade papa aapne aisa kiya..aap meri aunty se lade..she looked at him furiously.

He stared at geet..she mumbled..sorry.

He smiled at her..haan suhana who'

Aapko punishment milni chahiye..haina aunty..

Geet looked at her perplexed..but she could do nothing except nodding her head.


INDEX:

Part 40 Pg 5..by mchopra

Part 41 pG 12 Tanaie
Part 42 Pg 14 Tanaie
Part 43a) Pg 16 Tanaie
Part 43 b)Pg 17 Samnalyse
Part 44 Pg 19 Samnalyse
Part 45 pg 27 Samanalyse
Part 46 Pg 32 Tanei
Part 47 Pg 35 By Samanalyse
Part 48 pg 42 by mchopra
Part 49 pg 45 by mchopra
part 50 pg 49 by mchopra
Part 51 pg 51 by tanei
part 52 pg 62 by tanei
Part 53 pg 65 by Samnalyse
Part 54 pg 71 Prithvisanyo
part 55 by 74 by Mrs. Msk
part 56 pg 81 by samanalyse
Part 57 pg 85 By Tanei
Part 58 pg 89 By Tanei
Part 59 pg 96 by Tanei
Part 60 pg 102 by mchopra
part 61 pg 104 by Mrs. Msk
Part 62 pg 110 by Mchopra
Part 63 pg 113 by mchopra
Part 64 pg 118 by mrs.msk
Part 65 pg 126 by mchopra
Part 66 pg 129 by Mrs.Msk
part 67 pg 137 by mchopra
Part 68 pg 145 by mchopra
Part 69 pg 146 by  mchopra

Edited by mchopra - 2011-12-23T13:51:36Z
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Posted: 2011-11-24T07:27:46Z
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congrats every1FOR INDEX SCROLL DOWN OTHERWISE SHREYA WILL KILL MEFOR INDEX SCROLL DOWN OTHERWISE SHREYA WILL KILL MEEdited by 111priyan - 2011-11-27T06:42:33Z
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Posted: 2011-11-24T07:28:51Z
W8ng 4 d updateINDEX BELOW REVA'S POSTINDEX BELOW REVA'S POST KINDLY SCROLL DOWN SHREYA IS AFTER MY LIFE KHABARDAR JO KISI NE INDEX KO LE KAR KOI COMPLAINT KI I WILL KILL HER/HIM AB TO MERI JAAN BAKSH DE SHREYAEdited by 111priyan - 2011-11-27T06:46:48Z
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Posted: 2011-11-24T07:29:01Z
congo shongo lovelies
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Posted: 2011-11-24T07:30:06Z
Part 40 Pg 5..by mchopra
Part 41 pG 12 Tanaie
Part 42 Pg 14 Tanaie
Part 43a) Pg 16 Tanaie
Part 43 b)Pg 17 Samnalyse
Part 44 Pg 19 Samnalyse
Part 45 pg 27 Samanalyse
Part 46 Pg 32 Tanei
Part 47 Pg 35 By Samanalyse
Edited by mchopra - 2011-11-26T12:49:14Z
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Posted: 2011-11-24T07:31:53Z
hai o rabba index ki jagah bhi uda di..babaji..

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Posted: 2011-11-24T07:32:25Z
congrats everyone... new thread ...all creative queens waiting for new update...
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