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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome upadte
who is next?
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Posted: 12 years ago
@afsha
u gave it actually a simple touch..
especially msk ki line "U U U"..like sum child fighting for chocolate..

@mishty..
u gave maan a diff touch frm obsessive lover to maanu jaanu..😆

both did awesum part..
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Posted: 12 years ago
@ part 8
liked the way geet stood up against Maan
 
@ part 9
geet used her brain and got out of the situation, i think maan will find out that she was playing with his anger
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: princess163

She started struggling to free herself from his grip, while he tightened his hold on her.


As she continued to struggle, his anger, his  craziness reached an all new level. He was getting more and more furious at her constant refusal.
What was her problem? Why couldn't she accept him? When she was so comfortable in the company of those b****** friends of hers, why did she have a problem with him?
He had done so much for her. His persistent efforts were all going in vain. Why?
And now? He brought her to this exotic place, to this house that he got designed specially for her-according to her taste.
Even if she did have a problem, it didn't matter,because he would make her his,at any cost!

That was Maan Singh Khurana's decision, and the world knows, Maan Singh Khurana gets what he wishes, he thought with a roguish glint in his eyes.
As she continued with her struggle, he turned her in a jerk, and started moving backwards.
pure fear was visible in her eyes. He chuckled.
"Why are you scared Geet? I can not hurt you. You are my life", he said in the same devilish tone that he had been using, the one that was engraved within her, the one that scared her out of her wits.

the two pairs of feel kept on moving towards the wall and then Geet was trapped against the wall.
Geet thought that he would hurt her as the pressure from his hands was increasing, but she was soon proved wrong.
As she gasped in pain, he took advantage of the little gap that formed between those lips that had been tempting him since the time he first laid his eyes on her and slammed his mouth on hers.
He had tried a lot not to hurt her, but her constant revolt had left him mad. When he couldn't control any longer, he did what he wanted to.
As his hungry lips thrashed her untouched ones, she felt disgusted.
He had pushed his tongue into her mouth and was tasting every crevice, making her sick to the core.
Her first kiss had been forced upon her.
She felt violated.
She made desperate attempts to push him away, but like his heart, his body was also made of stone, it seemed to her.

He a pair of weak hands hitting against his chest and back, but he was lost, lost in the sweet nectar that she was. As she continued to attempt to push him away, he pushed deeper and deeper inside her mouth, somewhere hoping that she would respond.
A fire was now raging within him-more ferocious than ever, threatening to engulf him if he left her lips.

While one of his hands held her firmly, the other was now roaming lustfully on her waist and back.
Just then he yelped in pain as she took advantage of his dazed state and hit him where it hurt the most, pushed him away, and the next thing he knew was that a slap had been planted on his cheek.

Okay!
I tried to bring in the besharmi element.
I know attempt futile tha😆 I have always written the sweet innocent type of things, so this was my first of this type.
Sorry, if you don't like it! My bad!
Swati
P.S.-The STALKER MSK(more deathly) has been slapped. someone please tell me ab kya hoga!😆

😲stalker MSK slapped👏👏very good😆lovely update yaar😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -afsha-

It was gng all too serious

I made it lil easy
Hop ull like it
If nt plz let me knw
 
Part 8
Just then he yelped in pain as she took advantage of his dazed state and hit him where it hurt the most, pushed him away, and the next thing he knew was that a slap had been planted on his cheek.

He culdnt react n digest the fact that a gal jus a mere gal had slaped The Maan Singh Khurana
Infrnt of whom evn his family didnt raise a voice here a mere gal slaped him
That slap was not on his cheek but on his ego
How dare she does that
Its true that he is obssed by her but she didnt have any ryt to do that
Anger took over his thnking n he himself didnt knew what he will do with her
He looked at her who was glaring at him with same intensity of anger
She was sumone Maan hav to agree evn in that anger state, after slaping him also she was standing there seeing him in anger
Maan walked toward her but she didnt inched back but stood there now her hands crossed over her chest
M: U U U U
G: Is ur tape recorder stuck on U or will it go ahead she said with the attitude that Maan never knew she had
M: U lil chick u slaped me The Maan Singh Khurana n now u have the audacity  to talk with me lik nthg happened u did big mistake
G: Yup I The Geet Handa slaped The Maan Singh Khurana who had the audacity to Kiss me without my premission
Maan was liking this now
His obsession was taking turn to liking But stil the slap cant be forgotten
He put his hand in her hair n jerked her face toward him but Geet didnt move
Jus saw him with the same anger
M:Ull pay for that very badly Miss Geet Handa he said through his clenched jaw n picked her up on his shouder n took her towards the stairs n strted climbing
Geet didnt knew this wuld happen she thought after her slaping him he wuld jus leave her n go away as she still remembers that he cant hurt her n see her in pain
What is he gonna do now
Some vague inages came to her mind n she jerked herself thnking how in the world was she thnking lik that abt her that too with him
 
 
Now whoevr wants can describe the vague images hehehehe😉

👏👏👏loved it a lot yaar👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
😃

Originally posted by: mishty..sakii


part 9

how can she think about him like that .she cursed her self but her thought again went to her vague images.the flashback of their kiss came in front of her eyes .she drown in her thought.she instantly feel like he was leaning against her and took her lips in his.kissing her with more intensity.his hand roaming all the forbidden part of her body making her insane with need.she felt like his tongue slipped in her mouth and taste her sweetness carnally.she felt like she is in trance.

maan now getting confused seeing her calm in his arm.is she thinking something or became numb after his act.he couldn't understand her act.what that girl is...?she reacted in a weird way with his every act.he is now getting more interested in her.

geet came from her thought when he throw her in the bed gently.what was she thinking.
i think i m gonna mad..itni saare shock k wajaise main pagal ho gayi hu...main iss akru ko lekar aise kaise soch sakti hu..she thought in her mind.

maan was looking at her like he is seeing a alien.he just don't able to read her.she is sitting in the bed like waiting for him to do whatever he want.he smiled in his mind.then got back again his stern self.

how dare u hit me...?now i will show u what else i can do..and it's your punishment to mess with me.

geet became more frightened.she inched backward.maan took a step towards her.she try to look confident.she don't want to show him her fear.geet is now thinking how can she stop him.then an idea click in her mind.she gave him a evil smile.

she came down from the bed and came in front of him.now he got confused.she didn't afraid of him.what was happening...he took a step backward.

i know u can do anything...jaab apne maan bana hi lia hai kuch karne ka to khamkha fight karke kya faida...chalo we can do it mutually...she winked.

maan just gaped at her not understanding her word.what the hell is happening.what was she upto...

kya hua aap chup kyu hao gaye...?she asked with attitude.


maan looked at her with disbelief.then manage to say,

what are u saying?u have no problem..?he asked with irritation.

problem kyu hogi...iske ilawa mere pass aur koi rasta bhi nahi..so why make it taff...?she said hidding her smile.

she is enjoying his confused state.her idea is working.

matlab..?he raised his voice.

main aap ke lie ek kaat putli ki tarha hi to hu jisse aap jaab chahe apni marzi se nachate rehte ho..so i have to do what u want...she said with sadness.

maan became more furious listening her word.he never thought her like that.he loved her.alwas want to make her his but not that way.he always want her to accept him,love him.now she is taking everything wrong.

stop ur nonsense talkinng.main ne tumhe kabhi aise nahi pana chaha.if i wish then i can do it earlier.but i don't want it.why don't u understand dam it i love u.i just wanted u to be mine.

it's not the way u could win anyone...she said with anger.

okey i will prove u that i was not wrong...i can win u that way...ekdin tum meri hogi...tum mujhse pyar karogi,jarur karogi...he said with determination and walk away from the room leaving geet
numb.


...i think i am addicted to this thread...😆😆😆

😲story main twist wowww👏loved it a lot😃
18mypride thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
its fabulous... very very very nice!
very keen to know about next part!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Ek dam Jhakaas update, continue soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: princess163

like it! My bad!

Swati
 

😡😡😡😡
 
*aashu kicking  swatis ass real hard..and going to complain to all*😡😡
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Posted: 12 years ago
first of all the oath :

"We the besharam maneetians, promise to remain besharam and uphold the values of besharmi with all our heart and soul until the end of this thread."😆😆

will surely read & comment right now
great to see new works