Abhiya FF-Criminal Vampire

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Posted: 12 years ago

Hey friends, This is my new Abhay-Pia Fan-Fiction. After posting Marriage part of my last FF-Dark Love, i felt i am not so good at writing love stories. So i started writing this new FF. This FF have Love, Crime, fight, suspense, friendship, hate, fright and all the type scenes😊Hope you like it.

Heres the Character Sketches-

Abhay Raichand-He is a chief investigator of Crime Investigation Squad. He is in love with Pia. He is the most busy and hard-working officer of his team.

Pia Dobriyal-She is a criminal psychologist and assistant investigator of CIS. She is planning to go to date with Abhay. But she always finds him busy in investigation. She is so lovely, sweet and innocent girl.

Misha Dobriyal-She is a most agressive investigator of her team. She is a sharp shooter and strong fighter. She is so attached to her investigation team. She is a younger sister of Pia.

Kabir Rathod-He is a most handsome guy of CIS. He is very cute and funny guy. He is a computer expert of CIS. Misha is his best buddy.

Panchi Khanna-She is a forensic expert of CIS. She is engaged with Danish. She is very understanding, sweet and caring girl.

Danish Rathod-He is crime scene investigator of CIS. He is engaged with Panchi. He is very attached to his work and team.

Siddharth Mehra-He is a Criminal Vampire. Nobody know his real identity. He is villan of this story so i will not say anything to continue suspence.

Chapter 1

New Strange Case

CIS Office- Cafeteria-
Misha-Damn yaar. Hum sab 3 weeks se din-raat kaam kar rahe hai. Hum old-new sab cases solve kar chuke hai but now i am extremely tired.
Kabir-Seriously yaar.
Panchi-Ya. I also need a break
Kabir-But guys Danish aur Abhay abhi bhi aur cases solve karna chahte hai.
Misha-They're best. But woh dono bahut workoholic hai yaar.
Danish-Hey baby, i miss you.
Panchi-I miss you darling.
Misha-Ek hi office mein hokar tumne ekdusre ko itna miss kiya?
Pia-Stop it misha. Yeh pyaar hai, 1 minute bhi ekdusre se alag ho jao to yaad aane lagti hai.
Misha-Ya sis? Jaise tumhe pyaar ka saalo se experience ho?
Pia-Stop it misha.
Kabir-dude, tum abhi tak kya kaam kar rahe the? I mean sabhi to cases solve ho chuke hai.
Danish-Ya kabir. But ek new case aaya hai, abhi main abhay ke cabin mein baithkar wehin case discuss kar raha tha.
Misha-Again new case? God...Help me.
Kabir-Say help us. Yaar i dont have enough strength to do the work.
Panchi-But we have kabir.
Pia-Abhay abhi kya kar raha hai?
Danish-Still woh cabin mein baithkar us case ko study kar raha hai?
Misha-Wow...Vampire hai kya woh? 24x7 itna kaam kaise kar leta hai? Na koi break, na koi nind?
Pia-Misha, shut up. Hey by the way case kya hai?
Danish-Lavasa mein kafi log gayab hai aur bahut logo ke khun bhi hue hai. You will not belive this guys, but cementeries mein se bahut sari bodies bhi gayab hai jo dafnane ke dusre din kisiko nahi dikhi.
Misha-dude its so serious.
Kabir-Ya. really. I think humein un sabhi crime scenes pe jana chahiye.
Pia-Ya guys. We have to move fast.

Day 2-
CIS Office-Abhay's cabin
Danish-Abhay humne sab crime scenes check kiye. Har jagah itni saaf ki gayi hai ki wehan pe ek bhi clue nahi mila.
Kabir-Ya abhay, kisi bhi crime scene pe ek bhi clue nahi.
Misha-Guys jo koi bhi yeh sab kar raha hai use in sab cheezo mein shayad bahut experience hoga. Because aaj tak maine aisa koi case nahi dekha jismein itni safai se har kaam kiya ho.
Pia-Logo ke kho jane ki aur murder ki baat to normal thi, but us killer ko cementeries mein se bodies nikal kar kya milega?
Panchi-Kahi yeh kisi sadhu-baba ka chakkar to nahi hai?
Danish-What?
Panchi-Ya. You know what i mean. Bali chadhana, murder karna etc.
Misha-Maybe.
Pia-Nahi guys. I think yeh case kuch alag hai.
Abhay-Pia, write all points on board.
Pia-Ya abhay.

Pia board pe sabhi points likhne lagti hai-
1.Sab incidents raat ko hue.
2.After 12AM
3.Usne sabhi clues mita diye.
4.Cementeries mein new dead-bodies missing hai.
5.Missing persons, frquent murders.
6.Supernatural or Paranormal activity

Abhay-Guys i have an idea. Cementeries mein se new dead-bodies missing hai aur aisa roz ho raha hai to agar hum wehan raat ko jakar dekhe to hum us killer ko red-hand pakad sakte hai.
Kabir-Nice idea Abhay. Main aaj raat camera lekar wehan jaunga, agar mujhe kuch hua to atleast camera mein proof rahega.
Danish-I will come with you kabir.
Kabir-No dude. This time please let me handle this.
Abhay-Ok. Aaj raat 12 baje ke baad.
Kabir-Yes.

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Posted: 12 years ago

Thanks a lot😊

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Originally posted by: piyabhay4ever

sounds really interesting!

Thanks a lot😳

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hey sounds interesting continue soon
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Originally posted by: pratiksha2009

hey sounds interesting continue soon


Hey Thanks a lot😊Ya i will update soon.

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Posted: 12 years ago
Great start...Rashmi...loved it..thnx for d pm
lookin frwrd...
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice start..liked it a lot...pm me when you update
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Posted: 12 years ago
Completely different concept nice update continue soon and please PM me. I hope nothing will happen Kabir
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Posted: 12 years ago
superb start dear. please pm me. and update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey awesome update.Not bad.I love its starting.Lke CID hahha.But isme I guess Abhiya itna nhi hoga😆