Pehla Nasha..Pehla Khumaar...!!! <3 <3 - Page 5

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Parvathi12 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
#41
hey radz...update karna pls...
luv_arsha thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
#42
hey it was superb loved your ff and specially no dezllers and weakling πŸ˜Š enjoyed allot
PLEASE PM ME for the next part please
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Posted: 12 years ago
#43
please pm me when u update
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Posted: 12 years ago
#44
hey...update fast...nd PM me...!!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#45
PART -2

SWAYAM after hearing kria's  voice leaves her 

SH:how dare u touch me..

SW :mai toh bus... [kria interupts..]

KR:hey dun shout haan isse bhi  koi souq nahi hai tumse takrane ka OK...

SH:ya ya isliye tumhara frnd mere raste mai aaya ryt??

KR:correction wo tumhare raste mai nahi balki tum uske raste mai aaie thi GET IT...

SH:haan mujhe bada shaow hai tumhare frnd ke raste mai aane ka hena????

KR:listen u tum mere frn ko...[swayam stops her]

SW:but kria galti srf uski nai hai main bhi dekhke nai chal raha tha..

SH:sunliye miss KRIPA watever!!

KR:swayam tum isse defend mat karo iski toh aadat hai apni galtiya kisi aur pe thopna hum iske liye apna mood kyu kharab kare Kitne dino baad mile hai N HUGZ πŸ€—him...



SHARON couldn't stand it dunno y but she dint feel good she was feeling lyk abhi jake Kria aur Swayam ka CHIPKOO MOVEMENT khatam karde 
sharon 2 her slf:mujhe kyu itna kharab lag raha hai Y DO I CARE???😳

SH [in really annoyed tone]😡: simmi rinni tum dono bus tamasha dekho we're geeting L8 letz go..

SHARON n KRIA shared a DISGUSTED look 🀒 πŸ€’n sharon leaves along wid rinni n simmi 

SW:kya yaar kria wo kitni upset lag rahi thi tumhe usse bewajah dant diya..πŸ˜’ 

KR:uske ka rozz ka kaam mai WO ATTENTION FREAK hai is liye... eerrgghh leave her na chalo mai tumhe apni team se milati hun...😊 

SW:k letz go
*[but still he couldn't get off sharon's that innocent look wen he holded her]*😍


P.S:srry for d l8 updates [actually kuch jyada l8 ho gya ]
:P hope u guyz lyk it...!!! [NXT PART 2 BE UPDATED SOON PROMISE :p]
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Posted: 12 years ago
#46
superb radz..beautifully written. 
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Posted: 12 years ago
#47

Originally posted by: AmritaluvSwaRon

superb radz..beautifully written. 


THNq...!! <3
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Posted: 12 years ago
#48
it was superb, mind blowing , excellent, outstanding what else can i say loved it. its awesome
thanks for the pm and please continue soon eagerly waiting for the next part please😍
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Posted: 12 years ago
#49

Originally posted by: cherrysood

it was superb, mind blowing , excellent, outstanding what else can i say loved it. its awesome
thanks for the pm and please continue soon eagerly waiting for the next part please😍

 <3
thnx it meanz a lott!!!! πŸ˜Š
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Posted: 12 years ago
#50
its was awesum.. And brilliantly written... Iluv u for writing this... Now even ur added to my luving list...!