Ek nayi shuruwat [discontinued officially] - Page 3

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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow Ashi! too good start 👏 loved it.

do continue soon



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thnxxx swetha dear 🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
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haha lv d part. Radhi and aru.
Thnx dr.
N nyc charctr sketch
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hahaha kya character sketch hai...uff love my sid urf digu and kritika urf radha bhi hai yahan kya baat hai😊
and then tanvi in as negative sakshi...omg 😆...thank god crazy pankhas are not here warna teri band bajna pakka tha ashi🤣
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Super...Super...Super cool part ashi!!! now i'm really enjoying it!!!😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
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thanks for ur pms. i'm sorry main pehle nahi dekh payi. i ws busy. didn't come 2 if for a long time. really liked ur story n really appreciate it. go on. ur doing a fabulous job👏. love it to the core. ur doing jst awesome job. love u for pming me🤗. talk 2 u soon yaar. looking forward 2 read more. nice start👍🏼. really i can't wait till ur nxt post. jst great start😉
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Gud 1 Ashi👏
But I liked the character sketch...Brilliant👏
Keep goin
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Posted: 13 years ago
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thnxxx jayati,radhi,aru,rashi and ritu🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
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@ ashi... yaar mihika ki entry jaldi karana... 😉
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Chapter 2
EK NAYI ZINDAGI

At akshansh's school:

Meera and akshu sit together as they are best friends and after them sits aditya with kritika.The bell rings and manish sir is on his way to come in the class.

Meera: akshu kya tum ne homework kiya?

Akshu: shitzz mein to bhul gaya !!!!

Kritika: ab tum gaye

Aditya: chill akshu manish sir ka to tu fav hai voh tujhe kuch nahi kahenge

Akshu: thank god aaj main bach gaya.


Suddenly enters Manish sir. meera and kritika saw him and attempts to save adi and akshu from him but both of them were busy in their own talks.now both meera and kriti knew no one can save them manish sir.

Manish sir(pulling adi's ear): stand up aditya what are you thinking akshansh is my fav student so i will not punish him.
dont you know all students are same in my eyes.you know that i never discriminates between my students so how can you think he will escape from my punishment.

Adi: sir i was just kidding but

Manish sir: i dont want to listen anything get out of my class.

Adi: but sir

Manish: dont u listen go from here and akshansh plz u also get out of my class.

Akshu: ok sir and sorry sir.

both of them stand outside their and now adi and akshu both r fighting through words.

adi: agar tu homework kar leta to aaj class ke bahaar nahi khada hota main.

akshu: accha all mistake is done by u tum ne hi kaha ki sir tujhe kuch nahi bolenge dekh ab sir ne kya kya bol bhi diya aur kar bhi diya.teri vajhah se class ka no.one student aaj class ke bahaar khada hai.bahut mazza aa raha hoga tujhe.

adi: nahi yaar main yeh kaise soch sakta hoon tu to mera best friend hai teri khushi meri khushi hai aur tera dukh mera dukh.

akshu: main janta hoon yaar bas tere maaze le raha tha. main apne best friend se kabhi ladai nahi kar sakta.


In Akshat's place:

Akshat is going to get a job so he can earn their livelihood.
ashi is sitting on chair reding magazine and jayati is making breakfast.

ashi: di apne breakfast banaya? jaldi lao na di

jayati: hoga gaya dear ashi.

akshat: tum dono breakfast karo mein ja raha hoon

jayati: ruko pahale breakfast khao.

akshat: plz jayati force mat karo main ja raha hoon.

ashi: yeh akshat pagal ho gaya hai.agar yeh raste main behosh ho gaya to? agar voh mumbai mein kho gaya to kya hoga? agar usse kuch ho gaya to mera kya hoga? oh god main to jite ji mar jaongi.nahi akshat ke bina main mar jaongi.

jayati: ashi itna drama mt kar. ha tujhe uss par crush hai to itna bada drama kyun karti hai aur voh job dhondh ne gaya hai kuch nahi hoga chhoti si baat ka scene create kar deti hai.

ashi: di uski fikra mujhe nahi hogi to kise hogi tum ko to pata hai na main usse bachpan se kitna like karti hoon.

jayati: voh mujhe pata hai par abhi breakfast kar ke sooja kitni thaki hoi hai tu.

ashi: kkk di



Guys how was the part?
my next part will be on mihika and akshat's meeting.
but till enjoy this part !!!!!!

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