Ek nayi shuruwat [discontinued officially] - Page 2

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Posted: 12 years ago
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@Ashi! first of all Congo on ur first FF! and the character sketch and all is superb. ๐Ÿ‘ keep up with u work. 


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Posted: 12 years ago
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kal se update karongi!!!!!
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hmm new ff...chalo new ff s dekh ke purane ffs bandh hone k dukh to kam hua...great casting and siggi dear...but please ise bich mein mat chodna...please jitni der lage but finish zaroor karna
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice characters 
start soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: jhum_86

hmm new ff...chalo new ff s dekh ke purane ffs bandh hone k dukh to kam hua...great casting and siggi dear...but please ise bich mein mat chodna...please jitni der lage but finish zaroor karna

 
 
aru dear isse pakka pura karongi ๐Ÿ˜†
 
thnxxx khushi,swetha n radhi 2
 
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Posted: 12 years ago
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diwali ke pawan awsar par maa lakshmi ka naam leke mein meri story start karane ja rahi hoon.


Chapter 1
EK NAYI SUBHAH

At 10:30 am a cool and handsome boy comes out from rajdhani train at VT station with him was to sweet and lovely girls who came mumbai to study.

Akshat: yaar tume lagta hai ki mein mumbai jaisi huge city            mein apne bhai ko dhondh paonga?

Ashi: i dont think so

Jayati: chup kar ashi !!!!! uska confidence low mat kar plz.
         itni mushkil se usse orphanage ki uss hitler matron
         se bhaga kar laye hain.usse sorry maango.

Ashi: KKK di sorry my dear akshat.

Akshat: its kkk dear.jayati tumne revathi auntyka address          dhondha kya?

Jayati: sorry akshat mein nahi dhondh payi.par haan ek              baat mujhe pata hai.mihika phir se mumbai aa rahi
         hai.mein 7 yrs baad phir se usse milne ja rahi                hoon.

Ashi: really di? cnt believe it,m so happy mihika vapas aa 
       rahi hai yipps!!!!!

Jayati: yes uska msg aaya tha.

Akshat: yeh dono behene kabhi nahi badalengi.inke samne            ek topic ched do usske 100 sub topics bana dengi.
         ab kya arjun bhaiya ke bataye huye address par
         jana hai ki nahi.

Jayati n Ashi: chalo ji chalo.

Akshat (in his mind): mihika vapas aa rahi hai yeh to acchi
                        baat hein par mujhe kyun yeh samajh
                        nahi aa raha usska naam lete hi                               mera dil itni zoor se kyun dhadkata 
                        hai?


At akshansh"s place:

Revathi: akshu beta jaldi karo meera aur aditya aate hi               honge.

Akshansh: mom breakfast to chein se karne do!!!!!!

Raktim: akshu beta tum to aaram se breakfast karo,
         tumhari mom to bolti hi rehti hein.
 
Revathi: Aru,Radhi jaldi aao breakfast ready hai.

Aru n Radhi: coming mausi !!!!!

Aru n radhi lives with their mausi to study in mumbai.
Both of them enters.

Aru: mausi aaj breakfast mein kya hai?

Revathi: tumhara fav sandwich.

Aru n radhi (in their mind):shit mausi ne phir se gisse                                     pitte sandwich banadiye.

Radhi: mausi aaj hame bhuk nahi lag rahi hai.sirf juice se
        kaam chal jayega.yes na aru di?

Aru: yes mausi radhi is saying correct,juice se kaam chal 
      jayega.

Raktim to akshu: Kisi ko bhi yahan sandwich nahi pasand 
                   except ur mom.

Reva: beta jaldi karo vo aate hi honge.

Meera n Aditya: aunty hum aagaye !!!!

Revathi: meine kaha tha na par yahan koi meri baat hi nahi           sunta.

Meera: aunty koi sune ya na sune mein to hamesha sunti              hoon naa

Revathi: sikho tum sab meera se kitni pyaari bacchi hai aur
          sabka kaha bhi manti hai.

Akshu: mom ab mein jao ya nahi?

Aru n Radhi: mausi hum bhi collage jate hai

Revathi: bye beta.

Revathi to raktim: mein to ishwar se ek hi dua karti hoon.
                     mera beta hamesha thik rahe aur kabhi                      bhi voh uss akshat se na mil sake.nahi
                     to voh hamesha ke liye humse humara
                     beta chhin lega.

Raktim: reva tum chinta mat karo mujhe mere bete par              pura vishwas hai voh hume kabhi nahi chhod ke              jayega.

Revathi: vishwas to mujhe bhi hai par do bhaiyo ko alag               karana bahut mushkil hai.


Guys part 1 kaisa laga?
Edited by ashiach14 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome starting...and yahan bhi hum sath sath hai chal raha hai ๐Ÿ˜†..but itni choti si update q??๐Ÿ˜ญ...its so interesting yar๐Ÿ˜ณ...but give more character pics...relate karne mein asani hoga๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 12 years ago
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thnxxx aru

hum sabh mere har ff mein sath sath chalenge๐Ÿ˜†

character sketch 2 update karne wali hoon aur part one abhi continue hoga, aaj raat part 1 will be completed.๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 12 years ago
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aqwesome start 
continue soon
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  ~~~~~Character Sketch~~~~~
         part 2



Mr.Manish Sharma

Class teacher of Akshansh.a very intelligent and nice personality holder.the one who helped the two brothers to
unite once again.




Mrs Revathi Kaushal

mom of Akshu.loves him a lotz.mausi of Aru and Radhi.
she is a perfect mom who never behaves with akshu as an adopted son of her.

Mohnish Behl as Dr. Ashutosh in Kuch Toh Log Kahenge


Mr.Raktim Kaushal

father of Akshu.loves him so very much.always a supportive dad.a big business man.one who make everyone to laugh in his house and in his office.



Aditya Ojha

Son of ias of mumbai but never feel proud on his father's 
post.best friend of akshu.a motherless boy.



Kritika 

niece of mr. manish sharma.best friend of meera.the 4th 
in akshu's gang.lovely and lovable girl.



Saakshi 

one who comes in mihika and akshat's life to destroy mihika's happiness but in end becomes one who joins akshat and mihika once again.




Edited by ashiach14 - 12 years ago