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very nice hitler didi bhi aa gayi!!!!!!! and wow anusha's crush hunh????
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Chapter 5
PAST CAME BACK

Everything is going well in radio station...as akshat and mihika's show is at 7pm so both arrived there no one is there except a watchman who has gone to a tea stall...


mihika: hey rishi!!!!! howz u? show ke liye ready ho?
akshat: kanchi m fi9 aur show shuru hone mein abhi 1 hr hai na dont worry tumhare is sweet face par tension nhi banti hai...
mihika: aww so sweet of urs well tumhe pta hai main kal maasuri ja rhi hoon 
akshat: kyun?
mihika: vahan mere childhood frndz rhte hai...ab toh voh bhi kitne bade hogaye honge voh kaise dikhte honge kya main unhe pahchan paogi?
akshat: kyun nhi voh tumhare frndz hai tum unhe zaroor pahchan logi aur mere childhood frndz bhi maasuri mein hi rhte hai.
mihika: toh chalo hum dono saath chalte hai na
akshat: nhi main nhi aa paonga

suddenly akshat's mobile rings as jaya calls him...

akshat: hello jaya bolo kya hoya?
jaya: akshat good news mihika maasuri aa rhi hai tum bhi jao usse mil aao main aur ashi nhi aa payenge q ki hum camp mein gaye hai na
akshat: thik hai i'll ask boss abt it bye!!!
mihika: what happened rishi?
akshat: kuch nhi kanchi main bhi tumhare saath masuuri aaonga voh meri ek bahut purani frnd US se vapas aa rhi hai bas saakshi ma'am allow kar de 
mihika: voh yes kar dengi main hona ab tum mujhe batao tum plane se jaoge mere saath ya train se 
akshat: main train se hi jaonga 
mihika: fir main bhi tumhare saath train se chalungi main tickets book kar leti hoon
suddenly RJ ashutosh enters 
ashutosh: kahan jane ki baate chal rhi hai aur kanchi tum iss rishi ke saath jaogi itne romantic place mein tumhe mere saath jana chahiye vahan...
mihika: plz ashutosh tum chup rho aur rishi tum se zyada accha hai listen it carefully

RJ riya also came and hear whatever ashutosh said and tears start rolling down her red cheeks as she luvs ashutosh very much but cannot express her feeling for him... no one knew she was crying and no one would stopped her unless and until RJ ira entered...as both of them are best friend so ira cannot see tears in riya eyes...

ira: are yeh kya hoa riya tumhe kyun ro rhi hoon tum
riya: kuch bhi nhi ira bas yunhi aankho mein aansuu aa gye 
ira; mujhe pata hai kyun uss kanchi ki vajah se jab se voh aayi hai sabhka jina usne mushkil kar diya hai na rishi ko chodh ti hai aur ab ashutosh ko bhi tum se alag kar rhi hai 
riya: chodo ira agar ashutosh uss ke saath khush hai toh koi baat nhi main ashutosh ki khushi se khush hoon...
ira: par usne rishi ko bhi aapni taraf kar diya hai na
riya: koi baat nhi abhi chalo 8pm se tumhara show start ho jayega
ira: chalo
both leaves...

In akshansh's school

akshansh: guys plz listen to me would u all cum with me to massuri we will do many fun there and of course will enjoy also...

 






Edited by ashiach14 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Ye kya update aa gaya aur ek Pm alert bhi nahin diya?????
Not fare!!!!!!!!!!

BTW coming to the point... Awesome part!!! achchi seeting kar di dono ko milani ki!!! 
Update soon dear!!!

and ye main kya dekh rahi hoon???
Mera naam jayati se Jaya kaise ban gaya behna????
chal koi gal nai... pyaar se jo bhi bulaogi chalega!!!! infact daudega!!! :)
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: justjayati

Ye kya update aa gaya aur ek Pm alert bhi nahin diya?????

Not fare!!!!!!!!!!

BTW coming to the point... Awesome part!!! achchi seeting kar di dono ko milani ki!!! 
Update soon dear!!!

and ye main kya dekh rahi hoon???
Mera naam jayati se Jaya kaise ban gaya behna????
chal koi gal nai... pyaar se jo bhi bulaogi chalega!!!! infact daudega!!! :)


jaya calling u with this name feels more nyc aur pt pura nh hoa isliye pm nhi kiya...


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Nice update waitin 4 akshat n mihika to fall in love 😳 Edited by pallo2504 - 12 years ago
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hey update a gaya aur pm nhi???...awesome part btw..waiting for akshat mihika moments...aur mere rushika aur manishji kahan hai???and wow massuri???...aham aham mujhe kuch kuch yad a rahi hai😉

ashutosh riya great han...ye sab log a rahe hai kya😛
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wow what a lovely update. too good. update fast now. ðŸ˜›



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Originally posted by: jhum_86

hey update a gaya aur pm nhi???...awesome part btw..waiting for akshat mihika moments...aur mere rushika aur manishji kahan hai???and wow massuri???...aham aham mujhe kuch kuch yad a rahi hai😉

ashutosh riya great han...ye sab log a rahe hai kya😛


srry pm nhi kar ski ...
next pt mein rushika scenes ayege aur masuri is my fav place its in uttranchal near dehradun sorry sirf akshat mihika hi aayege aur rushika bhi ðŸ˜‰
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Are behna!!!! Ek updt toh banta hai!!!
updt soon na!!
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Chapter7 
THE BONDING 

In akshansh's class room...

Meera: akshu what happened to u yaar aaj kuch zyaada sad nazar aa rhe ho?????
Akshansh: nhi meera mein sad kahan ho voh toh mujhe iss baat ki tension ho rhi hai ki mom dad mujhe tum logo ke saath mussoorie jaane denge ya nhi q ki aru di aur radhi di bhi nhi hai yahan...
Meera: ab na mat karna plz...aur uncle aunty se mein baat kar lungi par hamara jana cancel nhi hoga aur han bag pack zaroor kar lena revathi aunty meri baat zaroor maan lengi
Akshansh: hopes she will...my fingrs r crssed...
Meera: mine too...

da school bell rings and rush of stdnts run as they r getting freedom frm a jail...da four frndz akshansh,meera,aditya,kritika
r walking sadly in da lowest speed...

Kritika: meera humara mussourie jaane ka plan cancel ho jaye ga kya?
Meera: nhi guys hum revati aunty se baat karne ja rhe hain na
Aditya: oh itne dhire jayenge toh ek saal baadh akshu ke ghar pahuchege...
Akshu: adi sahi kah rha hai guys jaldi chalo nhi toh mom shopping ke liye chali jaye toh...jaldi chalo guys...

soon they arrive akshu's home...his mom revati is cutting veges for lunch...meera comes closer to her and keeps her hand on raveti's shoulder...

Meera: aunty mein aapki hlp kar do kya...
Reva: nhi bache mein kar lungi khud se tum q pareshan ho aur apni mummy ko phone karke bol do ki aaj tum sabh yahan par luch karoge thikh hai na...aaa

revati gets her fingers cut by da knife...

Meera: aunty yeh kya ho gya mein bandage laga deti hoon aur aunty ab yeh kaam mein kar rhi hoon aap aaram se baithiye...
Reva:(in her mind)meera kitni hlpful hai aur mera beta ohooo!!!!!
ek no.ka slfish hai usse kisi ki koi parwa hi nhi baas khud se matlab hai mere ungli mein chot lagi hai aur voh radio par sirf RJ rishi ka show sune mein laga hai...meera hi hai jo usse sudhar sakti hai
Meera: aunty meine veges cut kar li ab aapki lunch ready karne mein help kar deti hoon...
Reva: iss ki kya zaroorat beta tum sabh baith kar khelo na
Kritika: aunty zaroorat hai hai na meera(she looks at meera and forces her by her eyes to say yes)
Meera: ha haan aunty zaroorat hai kriti sahi kah rhi hai...
Revati: accha jabmein yeh veges lekar jati hoon tum dono bhi aajayo aur akshu adi ko bolo ki FM sunana band kare aur homewrk kare...

revati goes and meera kritika comes aftr her chatting with each other...

Kritika: meera suno abhi aunty ka mood accha lag rha hai tum unse mussourie jane wali baat kar lo yaar nhi toh humara saari mahnat par paani phir jayega...
Meera: yupp chalo jaldi...

both enters da kitchen

Meera: aunty hame aap se kuch baat karni thi hai na kriti
Kritika: yes aunty bahut zaroori baat hai iss time par karna bahut zaroori hai 
Meera: kriti rahne do mat batao aunty nhi manengi mujhe pta hai
Reva: are bacho baat kya hai mujhe bata toh do?????
Meera: kriti mein soch rhi hoon aunty ko bata hi doon,,,,aunty baat yeh hai ki aaj raat mein,kriti aur aditya mussourie ja rhe hai par aunty agar humara bst frnd akshu humare saath nhi aayega toh humara wahan jane ka kya matlab.hum wahan pics click karvaenge bina akshu ke accha kahan lagega hum vahan ghumenge bina akshu accha kahan lagega hum vahan ki snowfall njoy karenge bina akshu ke accha kahan lagega...aunty aap humare liye nhi toh aapke laadle bete akshu ke liye hi uska jana cancel mat karvahiyeh plz aunty plzplzplz...
Kritika:(in meera's ears)bas bhi kar meera itni ovracting mat kar nhi toh aunty samajh jayengi 
Meera:(in kriti's ears) sahi kah rhi ho tum (to revati)aunty ab toh haan kar dijiye na...
Revati: par beta aru aur radhi bhi nhi hai yahan akele kaise bhej do usse kahin use us ka bada bhai mil gya toh 
Meera: aunty akshu ka bada bhai bhi hai kya????
Reva: nhi nhi uska koi bada bhai nhi hai voh toh mere muh se spill ho gya tha
Meera: (in her mind)aunty jhut kah rhi hai akshu ka koi bada bhai zaroor hai unka chahera dekh kar hi pta chal gya ki voh jhut bol rhi hai par uska bhai hai kaun kher chado iss baat ko agar abhi aunty se yeh pujha toh shayad voh akshu ka jana cancel kar de
(to revati)aunty koi baat nhi par mujhe lagta ki aap nhi chahti ki hum mussourie jaye thik hai hum abhi apna plan cancel kar dete hai
Kritika: (in her mind) yeh kya bol rhi hai kahin yeh pagal toh nhi ho gyi hai (near meera's ear) what r u saying pagal toh nhi ho gyi hai tu
Meera: (near kriti's ear) arey tu chup kar jo mein kar rhi hoon usse dekh baas aunty emotionally black male ho rhi hai ab voh haa zaroor karengi apne akshu ke liye samjhi na...kya yaar tu bhi mere saath rah rah ke itna bhi nhi sikha tune
Revati: beta agar akshu aur tum sabh ki khushi iss mein hai toh phir jao mussourie jao beta aur haan apna dhyan rkhna tum sabh
Meera and Kritika: thnxxx aunty thanx u very very much 

Revati hugs both da girls...

Reva: ab jao khelo mein lunch prepare karti hoon
Meera: thnxx aunty chal kriti...

Both gets out frm da kitchen...

Meera: dekha mera brain kitna shrp hai ki mujhe aise aise ideas deta hai 
Kritika: maan liya yaar tere brain ko
Meera: akshu aunty ne mussourie jaane ke liye
Akshu: mussourie jaane ke liye kya vahan jaane ke liye kya kaha
Meera: vahan jaane ke liye haan kar diya
Akshu: sach mein yippeee!!!!!!
Aditya: three cheers for meera
All four: hiphip hoore~~~hiphip hoore~~~hiphip hooreee


In radio station

Akshat:kanchi yeh lo saakshi ma'am ne kuch files bheji hai inhe check kar lo
Mihika: rishi do mein check karti hoon aur tum saakshi ma'am se jaake mussuorie jaane ki baat karo 
Akshat:thik hai

he enters saakshi's cabin

Akshat: ma'am voh mujh ko kuch dino ki leave chahiye thi
Saakshi:meine tumhe kitni baar kahan hai mujhe ma'am mat bola karo we r frndz aur leave ke liye sorry voh mein tumhe nhi de sakti q ki tumhare shows super duper hit jaa rhe hain 
Akshat: saakshi jaana zaroori hai mein vahan apne bhai se milunga Saakshi:kya voh tumhare saath...
Akshat: ha voh mere saath nhi rahta baat bahut saal purani hai jab voh paida hoya tha tabh meri maa mujhe aur use chod kar hamesha ke liye chali gyi thi papa toh humare upar kabhi dhyan hi nhi dete the aur ek din voh bhi hume chod kar kahin chale gye jab mera akshu 4 saal ka ho gya tha meine usse kbhi maa papa ki kami mahsoos nhi hone di 
Saakshi: phir tumhare papa ke baad tum dono kahan gye????
Akshat: kahan jaate orphanage gaye the jahan ki matron hum sabh se kaam karati thi mein humesha unke against gaya par kya hota..phir ek din humare orphanage ki owner USA se vapas aayi aur unke aate ke saath hi humara hell heaven ban gya aur mujhe meri bst frnd bhi mil gyi MIHIKA...
Saakshi: (in her mind) mihika yeh naam suna hoa lag rha hai...kahan suna hai yeh naam meine ha yeh naam mihika ma'am ka hai jo humare radio station ki owner hai par yeh akshat unhe kaise janta????
Akshat: ma'am what happened???
Saakshi: kuch nhi...a.a.ab..ab ha tum mujhe batao ki tum apne bhai se alag kaise hoye??
Akshat: haan toh suno...hum sabh frndz mein,mihika,jayati,ashi aur humare baaki orphange ke frndz bahut mazze karte the...
jayati aur ashi humare aanadhalay ke saamne rhti thi hum subah se lekar raat tak khelte the par phir ek din aisa aaya jab mera bhai mujhse alag hone wala tha...uss din mihika ke ghar ek party thi vahan Mrs Revati Kaushal and Mr Raktim Kaushal bhi aaye the unko mera bhai itna accha laga ki revati aunty mere bhai ke bina rah bhi nhi pati thi voh roj mere bhai se orphanage milne aati thi...phir ek din mera bhai terrace par kites udhane ke liye gya tha aur ...(he starts crying)
Saakshi: phir kya hoya ro q rhe hoon tum??
Akshat: kaise batao ki mei laparvahi ki vajah se mera bhai terrace se gir gaya 
Saakshi: kya Sach mein omg phir kya hoa usse??kya voh bach gya?
Akshat: hum sabh ne ambulance bulvai aur hum sabh jaldi se hospital pahuche aur vahan toh mere paas uske operation ke liye paise bhi nhi thi mein hospital walo ko kya deta par tabhi revati aunty vahan aayi aur akshu ke treatment ke liye paise bhi diye 
Saakshi: thnk god voh vahan pahuch gyi...phir kya hoya akshat??
Akshat: doctor ne bola ki kya kisi ka blood grp AB+ hai par yeh blood grp vahan par kisi ka bhi nhi tha sivah revati aunty ke unhone mere bhai ko bacha liya mere liye tabh voh kisi bhagwan se kaam nhi hai par tabhi humari orphanage ki matron ne mujhe kaha ki mujhe apne bhai ko hamesha ke liye chodna padega aur use yeh show karna padhega ki mein us se nafrat karta hoon  
Saakshi: kya tum aisa kuch kar paye the kya?
Akshat: haan mujhe mere bhai ke acche future ke liye yah sabh karna padha par meine yeh sabh kaise kiya voh toh mein hi janta hoon...mere akshu ko lagne laga ki mein use pyaar nhi karta mein use nafrat karta hoon par yeh sach nhi hai mein toh use apni jaan se bhi zyaada pyaar karta hoon
Saakshi: mein tumhara dard smjh sakti hoon...
Akshat: phir agle din revati aunty mere akshu ko adopt kar ke le gayi mein unki car ke picche akshu se baat karne ke liye bhaaga par akshu ne mujh se baat karna nhi chaaha mein bhagte bhagte road par gir bhi gya phir bhi usne ek baar bhi picche mod kar nhi dekha (he starts crying)



Guys part 7 is done...Did u like da brothers story...plz hit da button like and comment maro yaarooo...😉

Edited by ashiach14 - 12 years ago