Originally posted by: prernasinghking
ayesha maar dala yaar aapni ise damake daar update😆 😆 se superb yaar hats off to you 👏.👏.i want abhay will be come to mathli 😳coz for the sometime i am only reading those abiya couple ff now , i want some metz and abhyendra ...rocking shocking update ke liye thanks yaar ...
It's the maybes' that bug me. What could have been and should have beens but then we'd never have ABHIYA's love story but poor Abhay gets bajaoed by Pia as well so jaye to bechara kaha jaye?👏 wowww I felt this was needed...
Methz n Abhay scene... I wish she was not turned that *****..
I wished Sid had not poisoned her..
But, this one reminds of the old past history scenes..
Defiantly,T face Methz has potential but, Methz n her Abhiyandar did rock onces upon a time.. U're o.s was like tuning the time- sand back..
Ditto my point exactly. Meri baat tumne cheen liOriginally posted by: pratiksha2009
well awesome update, i always have soft corner for metz, because what happend in her life is not her fault and feel bad about her, its hard to give up someting that very special for you, i think spicial word is nothing to compaire what maithliy lost, she cant give up abhay because he is last hope for her , because of him she enter a dark world, that;s why she is not moving on him and cant let him go, but at the last its only abhiya
Glad U liked itOriginally posted by: .-.LonelySoul.-
Its a very Nice Oneshot and you have expressed Maithili very well done. This is the Justice She deserves from her role , I guess. Keep writing More wonderful Stuff.
xoxoPriyal
She has suffered too in Luv na. I can now start work on my Sid mets shotOriginally posted by: sunflower52
Really good OS, you have explained the pain of Maithli so well, so sad that the man she loves no more loves her but loves a women who looks like her.
Its the emotional angle we never get to see. The unspoken tears of Maithali's that haunts me. I feel so sorry for her.Originally posted by: Dikshi92
Wow awesome OS. U expressed ametz romance very beautifully. When i was reading ur os i forgot for a moment that metz is evil. I really felt pity for her. Btw thanx 4 PM.
hey aysha!! lovely meeting you... yeah please PM me about ur other OS whenever you write...Originally posted by: matwamango
This is the emotional side i wanted to see of Maithali's a side she keeps locked away but only comes out when she is all alone.
I'm Aysha By the WayIf U want i'll send U more of My work. I have loads where these OS came from.
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