VirMan - FF - A Cindrella Story (Index & Imp Note) - Page 6

LOL this is soo funny...at first it was Virat who misunderstood and now it's gonna b Viren lol...and what next? her dad will discuss all sort of business with her thinking that she's Mansi... 😲🤣Please cont. soon and please PM me when you update 😃

Gud part Sana...har taraf confusion😆 lol  waiting 2 knw more

Originally posted by: SanaR1108

Chapter 4

Manvi : Matlab tum Driver nahi ho😔
Virat : Driver?😕...Driver!😲 Tumne mujhe Driver samjha...Kis angle se main tumhe Driver lagta hoon
Manvi : 😳 Woh Main..
Virat : Tum Dumb ho kya?
Manvi Starts Crying
Virat : Tum Ro Rahi Ho 😲?
Manvi : Ek toh main apni friend se alag ho gayi upar se tum mujhe dumb bula rahe ho...Tumhe toh meri help karni chahiye
Virat : Look I am Sorry 😳 Tum Plz rona Bandh Karo
Viren comes & sees Virat & Manvi.
Viren : Virat toh Mansi ko laane gaya tha, yeh kaun hai
He goes to Virat & Manvi and sees that Manvi is crying. He takes Virat to a corner.
Viren : Ab yeh kaunsi nayi ladki hai aur ab tune isse break up kyun kiya...Dekho na bechari kitna ro rahi, Achi ladki lagti hai
Virat : Bhai aisa kuch nahi hai
Virat tries to go back to Manvi but Viren stops him midway.
Viren : Acha tu toh Mansi ji ko laane wala tha na, uska kya hua?
Virat : Woh Bhai, main gaya tha laane (points at Manvi) aur yeh Mansi...
Viren : Acha toh yeh Mansi hai, (to Manvi) Welcome Mansi ji...

Sry could only Update a lil, had to watch EHMMBH😉

Originally posted by: Jhinkaroy

Why such a short update *pouts*
I know the reason though, read your explanation 😆

But I really jumped over the link once I'd gotten the PM, in hope of reading another chapter at least as long as ch. 3!😭
Will be waiting for ch.5...Keep writing! 👍🏼

LOL...Ya i'll update soon

 That was a sweet but small update 😊Thanxx for the om and continue soon !! 😃

I t was excellent.!👍🏼..So funny.🤣.Continue jaldi.!!

ur parts are always so cute :)

That was so cute 😳...whats this bit about Viren telling Virat, " yeh kaunsi nayi ladki "...do i sense a long history of GFs for Virat ??...Thanks for the PM, Sana 😊
Edited by madhu_sridhar - 12 years ago

Heyy. Just recently stared readin ur FF nd I'm amazed nd suprized that this is ur first time. If u hadn't told us that this is ur first time then we would have thought that u have been writin for ages. I'm really waiting for the update. Please do PM me when u do update.