New OS~Mend my broken Heart(part3*pg16*Oct17) - Page 16

Originally posted by: -srija-

Superb tanzie. Thanks Srija 😊
Haseena doing yoga classes he he he 
piya got the idea from TVD ha ha ha.bcoz I got it form tht scene I wrote so I mentioned it in a tricky way 😉
Liked the part where haseena tried hard 2 control her thirst n control herself frm attacking piya.
Aww...abhay sang 4 piya,so sweet.he surely knows how to mend piya's heart He always knows what to do...infact he is the only character in the show who does 😆. just sooner or later 😛

Originally posted by: Sivaranjani

Tanzie.. It was a very beautiful ending.. I've no words..!! You are such a wonderful writer and You are proving it each and every time!! 🤗 Awww thank you soo much dear.. you guys always keep my inspiration high 🤗

What an ending it was.. So smooth yet so powerful in terms of love.. The conversation between Abhay and Pia with love but still with anger made me mesmerized in their love.. The conversation was my fav part bcoz its needed in the show ...they need to clear things up 😆

Pia is very brave in this OS.. She drank the herb just in case if anything happens to her.. All because she got to see Vampire dairies.. She's crazy!! And Abhay's reaction to it..😆 I loved each bits..  thanks.. TVD part was to add some humor into it... otherwise this OS was way too serious 😆

Thanks for the PM Tanzie!!

Originally posted by: heena_mehta

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hey tanz seriously u should go n put some ideas in cvs brain , they r badly in need of it!! Lolz.. 😛 😆

i reli enjoyed reading ur version of this track!! glad u did 😊

ur os was dedicated to pia n u took out best frm her character, bt it doesn't mean, u didn't do justice to abhay's part, u did dat also very well!! Thanks dear.. you always go overboard in case of praising me 😆

i reli loved d way u av written abt haseena's n alina's fight wid their inner self, dat was something reli appreciable!!!👏👏👏 thanks I don wan Alina neg so made her grey and Haseena is my alltime fav u knw tht 😳

abhaiya part was beautifully written!!

n best part was pia's xplanation of  her reckless act to abhay!!👏, u av defined it well dat love is all abt trust!! this convo is so much needed...seriously 😕

dat vampire diaries part solved two purposes,dat my confusion regarding dat herbal potion gt cleared n it added some humour to d story also! hahah... i got the idea from tht scene and i included it with a trick and humour offcourse 😆

dat was a lovely os n seriously it didn;t bother me much dat u left alina's part open ended, like i was feeling when we were dicussing it!! Ohh..i wanted to write more but thot its better to leave it like this... i will write another OS once this hooded figure will be disclosed in the show 😊

 

luv u loadss hun😳 luv u too 🤗

Originally posted by: strawberryrashu

Tanzie u didnt reply to my comment sob

Originally posted by: strawberryrashu

I read it btw banner result is declared raisa won and sano is runner up

Originally posted by: shivanirajput

i m extremely sorry
i don't know how i forgot to comment on the first 2 chapters
bloody exams are really messing up my head big time No worries sweetz... im glad you are finally here 🤗
anyways the os was fab Thank you 😊
i wish cv's will steal ur idea no offences meant😆 I wish that too 😛
but seriously i also wanted it to be alina in this way we can get rid of many of the problems all at once I don want to get rid of Alina but I don wan to see her as neg either.. everyone is using her..thats bad 
the best part was abhiya reunion in the end it was so emotional and so romantic thanks 😳
but abhay sang for pia😲 this is not fair yaar i m planning this for an upcoming update of my mini ff haila 😲 I also planned that Abhay will give a ring to Piya but u already wrote in ur SS 😛 so we are nor fair and square.. u read my mind b4 and now I did yours 🤣
anyways u are far more smarter than me and has written it quite well may be i will postpone that idea for a while now
thanks for pm and keep writing again embarrassing me.. 😳 will write another OS when this 24 hours will be gone 😛