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Nimra

@Dazzling_Smile

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Posted: 12 years ago

Guyz This is my 1st FF...

Character Sketch..

Dazzlers.

Sharon - in actual sharon rai prakash. A dazzler and is proud of it... rude, arrogant and all the qualities a rich brat has.. The diva of college. Spoiled and pampered, she is very egoistic, something that shows up even in her dance. But even her dance justifies her attitude. She was the best dancer in college... that is until Kria arrived... she loves swayam but is not satisfied cuz swayam is a weakling..

Rey - Reyaansh Singhania.. The hunk of St Louis... He is the leader of the dazzling team and the star dancer of the school.. the hottese dude.. he is vry nice and has a soft heart.. loves kriya to the core.. sharon's bst frnd.. he is the richest guy of St. Louis and the heart throb of the all the girls..

Vicky- an awesome dancer and a dazller but he never show it off becuz of neha ( her g.f ) he loves neha very much .. bst frnd of rey..

Simmi - the hot babe of dazzler team and sharon's bst frnd.. loves nil.

Rinni- the cute girl of dazzlers team and a little dumb.. but the sweetest girl.. loves Amar.

Nil- nilesh.. a cool raper... and awesome dancer ... in heart loves simmi but in front of everyone doesnt show it..

Weaklings.

Kriya- Kriya Ghai.. the girl bron for dance... awsmest dancer and leader of team weaklings... love her frndz to the core and can do anything for them...she loves rey but say that they are JUST GOOD FRNDZ... huh... her mom doesnt allow her to dance but she dances secretly...

Swayam... the cutest boy of St Louis .. loves sharon to much and is called as MAJNU ... he is the sweetest hunk of the college... kriya's bst frnd ... and an awsm dancer.. loves his fndz like kriya..bst frnd of kriya

Neha.. knwn as dewaani of dewana ( vicky ) loves her b.f to the core and is full on filmy..loves kriya and is her bst frnd..

Amar- our totla boy... so cute and adorable.. loves rinni and is a really very good dancer..

Bharat... short tempered boy.. he is really good dancer and loves vishaka ..but doesnt show it..

Vishaka- a tom boy.. she is too shor tempered... loves bharat but doesnt show it...and a really good dancer..

Ok Guyz these were dazzlers and weakling ... and now other characters..

Smriti Ghai - Kriya's Mom... vry strict... but loves her daughter very much.. against fdance cuz of her past life.. and sharon mom too but she didnt knw it..

Gautam Rai prakash - sharon and kriya's dad but kriya didnt knw abt it... vry rich and have a lovely heart but leaves smriti years ago when there children were born and after that she searches for smriti but cant find her.. he still have faith that destiny will do anything to meet them..

Some One - kriya's bst frnd and loves her to the core ... first rude and arrogant but now sweet and caring...

Another- kriya's bst frnd and loves her like a bro.. caring and sweet .. and a big nautanki...

These two are bst frndz of kriya and loves her ... both are big nautanki... and kriya too loves them...

Part 1

As Kriya entered the college.. she murmured to herself stupidly."Oh Shit!!!! I m late...Universji plz bacha lena (as she says always)

she was running in the corridor as mistakenly she hits sharon...

K:(not knowing that she hit sharon) Sorry Sorry Sorry wo galti se...(in between she looked up to sharon)..

Sh:tum to har cheez galti se karti ho Ms.Kripa Behenji...

K:(angirly) bola na galti se hoa..ap har cheez ko ulta kyun leti hen?

Sharon was about to say something but she stoped as she sees swayam running towards kriya..

K:Oh Hello!!! (she wave her hand infront of sharon's face)

Sh: k kya? she says in a cold voice..

Swayam sees this and before the fight goes further he interupts in between them.

Sw:Tum dono phir se shoru ho gaye...

K:Shuru sharon ne kiya tha..

Sh:(Turning swayam towards her)Me ne kab shuru kiya.. dahka to us kripa ne mujhe diya tha...

Then an eyelook of swaron...hayeee look look hawa hawa scene...

Kriya was frustuated as she was already late and stares at them...then swayam and swaron comes back in their senses...swayam sees kriya in a very angry mood and tries to clam her...

Sw:ah kriya hum log class k liye bohat late ho rhe hen..lets go...

K:(Tries to calm down ) Chalo

Next part in comments ...

Sorry Guyz i knw its not good but its my 1st so i try my bst n that;s a starting...plz guyz if u wanna help me getting better plz Pm me...

Guyz hit the like button who liked it ..and plz add me for PM,s

Parts

part 1 on page 1

part 2 on page 1

promo on page 2

part 3 on page 3

Part 4 on page 4

Part 5 on page 5

Part 6 on page 8

part 7 on page 10

part 8 on page 12

part 9 on page 14

part 10 on page 16

part 11 on page 18

part 12 on page 21

part 13 (1) on page 23

part 13 (2) on page 25

part 14 on page 28

Promo on page 31

part 15 on page 33

Part 16 on page 38

part 17 on page 42

Note on page 45

part 18 on page 47

part 19 on page 52

part 20 on page 55

part 21 on page 59

part 22 on page 65

part 23 on page 69

part 24 on page 72

next parts on thread 2

Thread 2

Edited by Dazzling_Smile - 12 years ago

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Bakhtawar

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Posted: 12 years ago

arey..nice try yrr... keep posting... 😊

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553993

Posted: 12 years ago

wow owwo nice nice OMG nice yar do con soon :) waiting for d next Part !

add me in ur PM list =)

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Posted: 12 years ago

nice man...update soon...n pls add me to ur pm list

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Nimra

@Dazzling_Smile

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Posted: 12 years ago

Continuing...

Kriya and Swayam reaches the class and took a long breath as they dont see professor in class..

Sw:(climbing to door as if he will faint) Huh!! Thnks God bachgaye...

K:(in the same situation) han bach gaye (cant breath as they ran and ran and ran)

Vishaka who was sitting beside Bharat sees them and says

V:Tum dono ko kya hoa dude?
Amar: Tum tono to tya hoa?
N:(in her broking english) Kriya and swayam happening what?
K:(wobbles towards her chair )Huh nthing...

Kriya was about to fall but swayam catches her at tym,,,,,

Sw: Watch out kriya...

At that tym rey reachers there and stares at both of them...as he cant understand what was happening...swayam catches rey stares at them in jealousy at got embarrased and he mistakenly droped kriya

K: (scremed)..Ouchhh!!!

Sw: sorry wo...

Rey raised his one eyebrow at swayam ..

Sw:(murmured to himself) Mar gaya..

K:Kya??

Rey dont want to loose this chance and suddelny runs toward kriya..

Rey:ah!! let me help u..

K: no thank u...i will manage..

Rey holds kriya's hand and get her straighten..

K:ah! tahnk u..(she said quickly and got to her chair)..

Swayam was abt to sit beside kriya but rey stoped him and sat near kriya..kriya stares at swayam at rey...

K:ye kya ho rha he?

Sw:kya ho rha he?
R: han kya ho rha he? kyun kuch ho rha he kya??
Kriya..ufff ...huh

Sw:(said slowly to rey)yahan kyun beth rhe ho ? marna he kya?

Rey(staring at her baatcutter lovingly) isi bhi koi marna kehte hen...waise han..

Sw: or me kahan bethun ga?

R:sharon he na...teri sharon siren..

Sw: wo or mere sath bethi ge ... joke mat mar be ...wo mere sath bethna to kya baat karna bhi nhi pasand karti...so let me sit here..

R: No...tum jao apni sharon k pass...us ka mood aj acha he...

Sw: Ohk ...(he smiles ansd says acha chance he)

then he sits besides the seat of sharon...he began to look at the door, waiting for sharonbut there was no sign of sharon..he began to stare angirly on rey who was just staring at his lovely baatcutter,,,,

Sw: (to himself) rey me tujhe chorun ga nhi..ye sab to ne hi kiya he kya keh rha tha to k sharon aj bare ache mood me he...

Next epi coming soon...
hope u guyz lyked it...

Edited by Dazzling_Smile - 12 years ago

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668747

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Posted: 12 years ago

nice one...!!!!

rey jealous...n' swayam ne kria ko gira diya...hehehehe

update soon...and PM me please..!!!😊

-Saumya

Edited by dildostiidancee - 12 years ago

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Nimra

@Dazzling_Smile

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Posted: 12 years ago

i was nt expecting a good reponse but its so sweet of u all...

i will try to update soon...

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553993

Posted: 12 years ago

wow what an update ! OMG Rey jealous awww very nice start honey update fasttt as can as Possible :)

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@Parvathi12

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Posted: 12 years ago

nice 1...though i wish sharon had come in tym to see kriya in swayams arms

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Nimra

@Dazzling_Smile

IF-Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

Coming Up Promo..

Rey running in the corridors and finding kriya...

he sees vishaka and neha in front of class..

R: hey guyz...

tum logon ne kriya ko dekha???

Vish : no

Neha:nhi

then he sees bharat and amar in canteen...

R:tum logon ne kriya ho kahin dekha?

Bh/amar: ( at the same tym) han..

R:Thnks God kisi ne to dekkha...

well kahan dekha???

amar: wo to abhi abhi swayam te sath bahil gae he...
Bharat ; wo kya kehten he ... wo amr use kya kehte hen...

amar: dinnel

Bharat : han wo do aj dinner pe ja rhe hen...

Rey: WHAT???

Edited by Dazzling_Smile - 12 years ago

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